Love Letter help plz... (20)

10 Name: Secret Admirer : 2008-02-20 02:54 ID:bt6lap6M

Ok revised

Dear A,

Do you remember when I said “Freedom or Death!”? Sure it was merely a jest, but at that time I really did feel like single life is too precious to give up. I thought romance is more trouble then it’s worth. But you have changed me, your elegance, wit, beauty have smitten me and opened my eyes to another side of love.

You are always precious to me as a friend and I don’t really remember when I started to see you as something more than a friend. All I know now is that a week without seeing you feel like an eternity to me, and the thought of not having you around tears me up inside.

Though I can’t promise endless days of rainbows and flowers, I believe one must take chances when presented with an opportunity for something so wonderful. So by your permission I would like the chance to get to know you better, take you out on a date, take a step further then friendship and see where fate leads us.

Your Secret Admirer

um a couple stuff i need help with

any fancy alternative for single life? i consider bachelorhood but it's not exactly the same meaning

is it allright to use love or is it too strong? (last sentence of first paragraph)

how stupid is the secret admirer thing? i'm gonna give her the letter in person so she'll know its from me. its just that she once said how nice would it be is she have a secret admirer confessing on white day (which i took as a hint, but i might be wrong coz i'm kinda thick)

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