Good or bad? (9)

1 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-26 07:25 ID:JRdnZ18q

Well this is not actually a problem or anything, but there's no where else to put it.
I'm kinda writing this short stories. Its about a girl who have to choose between 2 guys. I don't know who to choose between the 2 guys, so please help me.
The first is the kind of guy that's smart, handsome, sporty and well mannered and stuff. Kinda like the perfect Prince Charming.
The 2nd guy even though is smart, handsome and sporty but a real bad boy. Like that guy in your school that you know you should avoid, but you (and the rest of the girls in your school) still have a crush on him. He's kinda like the Dark Knight.
Both of this guys are caring and loving towards the girl.
Please help me...
Thank you
and please don't be annoyed.

2 Name: Ryuuchi : 2009-05-26 08:52 ID:FMttpYEw

Wait a minute....Are you seeking help on your short story writing or what?

Because I just simply don't understand what you are asking help for. Either you post in the wrong section and it should be Culture, in literature. Not under personal - romance?

3 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-26 10:27 ID:JRdnZ18q

right
sorry

4 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-26 15:36 ID:Heaven

Cliche ending would see the girl choosing the bad guy.

It sounds like a cliche story anyway.

5 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-26 21:40 ID:KCxJ+Ro1

>>4 most stories are clichés, anyway. What matters is how vividly it is told, and the richness of the characters.

6 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-28 06:01 ID:Ey/CjRss

Buck the trend. Make her go for the prince charming, but make sure it's clear that he isn't clearly better for her than the bad boy.

7 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-28 08:25 ID:Heaven

>>5
You're right..but come on, Dark Knight and Prince Charming?

8 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-28 11:02 ID:JRdnZ18q

>>6
I might go with what you said, but I'm gonna wait a bit more and read what people are saying...
>>7
Sorry about the Dark Knight and Prince Charming. Kinda in the mood for that..

9 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-31 14:11 ID:Heaven

She should tell them both to fuck off and just dyke out. Now that's a story.

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