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1 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-26 07:25 ID:JRdnZ18q

Well this is not actually a problem or anything, but there's no where else to put it.
I'm kinda writing this short stories. Its about a girl who have to choose between 2 guys. I don't know who to choose between the 2 guys, so please help me.

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2 Name: Ryuuchi : 2009-05-26 08:52 ID:FMttpYEw

Wait a minute....Are you seeking help on your short story writing or what?

Because I just simply don't understand what you are asking help for. Either you post in the wrong section and it should be Culture, in literature. Not under personal - romance?

3 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-26 10:27 ID:JRdnZ18q

right
sorry

4 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-26 15:36 ID:Heaven

Cliche ending would see the girl choosing the bad guy.

It sounds like a cliche story anyway.

5 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-26 21:40 ID:KCxJ+Ro1

>>4 most stories are clich├ęs, anyway. What matters is how vividly it is told, and the richness of the characters.

6 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-28 06:01 ID:Ey/CjRss

Buck the trend. Make her go for the prince charming, but make sure it's clear that he isn't clearly better for her than the bad boy.

7 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-28 08:25 ID:Heaven

>>5
You're right..but come on, Dark Knight and Prince Charming?

8 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-28 11:02 ID:JRdnZ18q

>>6
I might go with what you said, but I'm gonna wait a bit more and read what people are saying...
>>7
Sorry about the Dark Knight and Prince Charming. Kinda in the mood for that..

9 Name: Secret Admirer : 2009-05-31 14:11 ID:Heaven

She should tell them both to fuck off and just dyke out. Now that's a story.