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Midterm Break - Breakdancing short film (3)

1 Name: Vladimir : 2008-02-26 10:31 ID:76RLDjrZ

Please check out my short film I made for a film festival! Tell me what you think!

Midterm Break

2 Name: Couch Potato : 2008-02-27 18:51 ID:b0jq297x

The opening credits were a little too long for such a short film.

During the dance sequence, there was an extreme overuse of slow motion, worse than in 300. Also, poor lighting, but that can't really be helped. I felt the dance sequence could have been much more effective without all the slowmo, because instead of a fast paced, breakdancing feel, it just felt slow. The ending was amusing, though predictable.

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3 Name: Couch Potato : 2008-02-27 20:06 ID:yxbsOkpc

Not bad at all. I would have used camera tricks or doubles to improve the contest, if I personally knew anything about cinematography.

I'm not easily impressed, but it did manage to keep my attention when I close most streaming videos after ten or twenty seconds of play.