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sup neil

Might read it if I ever have nothing to do.

But a grammar mistake on the first page scares me a bit.

>>3
what there's a grammar mistake and on the first page!? I'm not gonna touch it.

wow that sitelayout is so 90's.

Mmm, if there's a grammar mistake please point it out to me!

This book's been proofread by about thirty people, and the first part has been critiqued by more than that, so I'm a little bit surprised that an obvious error slipped through.

>>6
"He blocking another lunge, lamenting once again the impulse to do a little exploring on his own, away from the safety of his fellow adventurers".

Unless there's a subtlety here I don't get (I'm fairly good at english but not a native speaker), didn't you mean "blocked" ? I believe it's just a mistake due to inattention, but still. On the first page. After proofreading? It's not a good sign to me.