Is it the same girl you describe in the first part and the second part of the story? Am I the only one to see some inconsistency here? First she's portrayed as a victim, scared and unable to defend herself, needing the assistance of a strong man. Later, the girl is described as a "gossiping bitch", hard boiled, care less heartbreaker type?
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