I'll start.
I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.
I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.
Here's one I came up with years ago, while on the way from the arcade. I'm sure there were more aspects of it that I've forgotten.
Title: none.
Type: A DDR manga/comic.
Genre: Shounen, action(?), comedy(?).
Summary: You've noticed how the Japanese can make a manga about anything, right? Tennis, Go, Shogi, work, music, racing, fighting... it's all been done a few times over. In the same vein as all of those, this manga is about DDR.
The protagonist is sort of a normal high school student, the kind that doesn't really know much about things that are usually attributed to geeks (only decent computer skills, doesn't play video games, thinks anime and manga is for kids, etc). However, one day his friend, a semi-geek, drags him along to the arcade. Seeing people playing DDR, he ridicules them, and so his geek friend challenges him to do better, or at least decent. He tries, and falls down, only to be laughed at by a group of girls from their school who happen to be walking by. He then storms off, shouting about how only otaku would play these games, anyway.
Afterwards, at home, he decides to show his friend that if geeks can be good can games like that, anyone can. However, this turns out harder than he imagines it to be. He sneaks off to an arcade in another district over the weekend to try a few times, does badly, and assumes that the other people around arcade are laughing at him. He ends up buying a PS2 and DDR games (after getting ripped off a few times) and ends up having to get his younger brother set it up for him. All of this takes place over two or so weeks.
After practicing for a few days he finally passes a few songs... in beginner mode! He wants to do better than this though, so he continues on. But before he can do so, he has to go buy new pads, as the (cheap) ones he had broke. About a month later, he's able to pass a song on light mode, and brings his friend back to the arcade to show off to him. His friend congratulates him on getting good so fast, but he thinks his friend is just mocking him and thinks light isn't anything. Thus he decides to get good at least on standard.
As this manga goes along, he'll slowly notice the difference between the pads at the arcade and the ones soft ones at home, he'll come up with a few techniques on his own to reach steps that would otherwise be hard for him, start skipping scam school to practice at the arcade, and (in the future) buy an actual hard pad to get more of an arcade feel at home. Also, he'll always find some sort of motivation to try to get to the next level.
Eventually, his friend would notice his interest (and potential) in DDR and start bringing him to competitions to watch more experienced players (or course this will also lead to him trying to figure out techniques that they use). He'll end up making friends with other players in the arcades he visits and eventually start entering in competitions himself, starting with small local ones.
Once he starts competing he'll start to notice the many different styles that people play, and the various different preferences they have, such as song speed type of music, etc. He'll eventually start a team with a few different (and interesting, maybe a black or Mexican, or white guy?) people that he has met, and becomes the best of them.
Possible events: Getting shot? Breaking his leg? Getting in trouble due to dropping grades? (and having to stop to study) Traveling to America? (or to Japan, if he's from America.) Running out of money and having to find a way to make more?
This manga will take itself seriously, and that's where most of the comedy will lie. In the fact that exaggerating a lot of aspects of DDR, much like other Shounen manga do with their respective subjects.
I think that was enough material so far to knock off a few volumes. :p
This one is even older, at least 5 or so years old. At one point I had even started on the designs for it... back when I could draw. :p They're long gone now, and I've forgotten most of the plot.
Title: Black Rose. (I think that was it)
Type: Mecha meets magical girl.
Genre: Mecha, Shounen, action(?), Magical Girl, Shoujo, love comedy(?).
Summary: A mobile suit's pilot successfully completes his mission and returns to headquarters for organizationXX1. Once he arrives he is given the information and details for his next mission.
Elsewhere, a magical girl successfully completes her mission, and returns to headquarters for organizationXX2. There, she is also given the details of her next assignment.
Later, in a third location, GirlXX1 and BoyXX1 transfers into prestigious school AcademyXX at around the same time. They both end up at the top of the class grade-wise, popular, and are voted as the class representatives. They consider each other rivals.
Next, we see the mecha pilot (in his mecha) on his way to where his assigned enemy was spotted. He arrives there... only to see the magical girl finishing it. He assumes that she must also be one of his enemeies, and tries to go after her. Of course, in a mecha he's not so succesful...
Fast foward to another day in school with GirlXX and BoyXX both asleep in class... and they're both top students, too!
Then, we see the magical girl on her way to the area in which an enemy was sighted. When she gets there she only sees the giant mecha (the same one that was after her last time!) and assumes that's her new enemy. She tries to fight it, but it turns out stronger than any mecha she's fought before, and she barely escapes.
Eventually, the magical girl and mecha pilot will realize that they have a common enemy and decide to fight together. They also learn that there two organizations both worked under a third one. Even later, they fall in love, without even knowing each other's true identities.
Somewhere after that, we introduce another prestigious school, AcademyXX2. In this school we have two students, GirlXX2 and BoyXX2, who lead similiar lives to GirlXX1 and BoyXX1, also being rivals of each other and at the top of their classes.
Are GirlXX1 and BoyXX1 the magical Girl and mecha Pilot? Are their enemies really there enemies? Who knows.
Also, comments on anything in this thread, please. :p
Alright, fine, here's my idea. I've had it for a little while. I'm still not surte entirely regarding the title.... but
anyway, it's a very dark sci-fi manga.
Title: Reapers
Type: Military sci-fi manga, somewhat of a space opera (non-mecha)
Genre: Sci-fi, war, political, post-apocalyptic
Many years in the future, humanity has suffered a massive nuclear war which decimated the population and ruined the biosphere, but
did not entirely drive humanity extinct. In the aftermath, mankind has united around a disturbing ideology of destruction. The theory
is as follows:
; Therefore, all sentient species will fight nuclear wars
3. Nuclear wars will result in extreme suffering on a species-wide level
;; Therefore, all sentient species will undergo extreme suffering on a species-wide level
4. Any life-form may through evolution give rise to a future sentient species
;;; Therefore, any species may be destined to undergo extreme suffering on a species-wide level
5. It is better to die then to experience extreme suffering
6. It is the duty of a moral being to affect others for the better
; Therefore, it is the duty of a moral being to kill those who are experiencing or will experience extreme suffering
Given that:
;;; Any species may be destined to undergo extreme suffering on a species-wide level
and
; It is the duty of a moral being to kill those who are experiencing or will experience extreme suffering
It can be concluded that it is the duty of a moral species to exterminate all species, including themselves.
Mankind has thus set out to discover all non-terran species in the universe, down to the last bacterium. Once this task is complete,
they intend to wipe themselves out.
>>5
Continuing... The manga begins with a prologue, shown over scenes of the devastating nuclear war which led to this scenario. It
is narrated by a space pilot who's adventures the manga will follow.
Note that I have not definitively decided upon a date for the war, hence the use of <date>.
"<date.>
That is the day that we lost our innocence.
Mastering the atom had made us gods,
But as gods, no other deity would protect us.
When we made the mistake of turning our most powerful weapons upon oursevles
no amount of prayer would save us.
We were irreversibly commited to destruction.
And so our dark journey began.
All life is suffering, and all life-forms shall suffer
None shall repeat our mistakes.
We seek new life,
and we eliminate it.
Many planets we have burned.
And when, the universe is barren,
we shall once more turn our weapons upon ourselves
and at last, our long suffering shall come to an end.
We are the Gods who cleanse the world."
At the time the manga picks up, a number of star systems have been explored and several
fertile planets discovered and attacked, including one bearing a sentient species that possessed a far inferior level of technology.
Mankind has just made contact with aliens who are roughly equal in technological development, and an all-out war has begun.
It seems inevitable that one species must die in order for the other to survive, as it appears humanity will fight until they themselves
are extinct in order to wipe out the other species... unless the seeds of doubt can somehow be planted within the human population
who seem so commited to this course.
Essentially, this is a cautionary tale of a mankind gone utterly batshit fucking insane.
Once I had an idea for a manga and I wrote it down but then Alan Moore read my secret journal and used his time machine to go back to 1980 and make V for Vendetta. I don't write down my manga ideas anymore. Sorry.
Quick, someone make a manga about Shii's tragic loss! Hitler can have a cameo role.
I love that DDR manga idea. If I could draw, I would make something of it. I can create RPGs, but that's almost useless in this situation. But then again, maybe not. Believe it or not, someone has created a DDR version for Rm2k, it's called Jump! and it's damn good. Oh well.
goes back to fapping
>>2
You may be interested in http://10kcommotion.com/ .
A sports/romance manga about skydiving college students.
>>10
Interesting, so there is already a DDR comic (of sorts).
My idea is at least a bit different though, from what I've just read. :p
>>2
Remember Hikaru no Go? It wasn't really about Go... I mean, not much of the game has been explained. The manga was interesting because of the rivalry between Hikaru and Akira (and because of the games when he let Sai play and everyone was amazed by his skill). However, HnG helped enormously in raising popularity of Go in Japan (and among otaku like me all over the world :) )
And Yakitate! Japan wasn't all about bread. The thing that mattered was the characters, competition, the bad guys, and weird reactions (like bread good enough to send you to heaven).
You need something external to DDR to make your plot really interesting.
there should be an ero manga about ddr.
I'm not posting my ideas because I don't want them stolen.
I really like the DDR idea. However I frequently go to the arcade almost everyday after school, and I think the same plot but with a fictional game would be better. Maybe along the lines of a driving game similiar to initial D or wangan midnight. The DDR scene is huge with teams, and tournaments everywhere, but Initial D is just crazy.
I had this idea for a manga once... A romantic manga.
The main character's a male Japanese high school student.
The main female character is a childhood friend and classmate who lives next door to him. But she happens to be a robot and a maid as well. In addition to that, she and the male lead were lovers from a previous life. On top of that, she's very feeble and dependent on the protagonist.
She also sacrificed herself for his sake, sustaining injuries that required a year to heal! But, in reality, she's an apparition. And an alien! But her true identity is...
A reincarnation of a fox that came from the future!
I've had an idea for a while, but due to my crappy storytelling and drawing skills it will probably never be done.
Basically, it's historic fantasy set Bohuslän (an area of the westcoast of Sweden, dominated by bare, naturally rounded cliffs) in the 19th century. It was a pretty interesting time, especially with the transformation of an area of poor fishermen into an industrial society. That and a rich folklore full of trolls, ghosts, werewolves, dragons and mermaids.
It would be called Ranrike, and the main characters were a bastard vagabond, a servant-girl turned witch and a troll. Yeah, it wouldn't have much appeal to the readers. And I'm terrible at writing plots as well.
i like the seting please tell me more, or post a draft or something?
i don't like the plot at all
it's boring
please don't post any more.
>>20
please tell me more i really like this idea
A manga about korean musas (warrior), chinese musas, and samurais unite for once to fight against the foreigners to defend the asia. XD XD XD
A shut-in wakes up one sunny morning, switches on his computer, heads downstairs for breakfast. Suddenly, BANG! police bust in through the windows. Our protagonist is tackled and held down on the floor. The police move through all the rooms of the house, opening cupboard doors, draws, boxes. They enter the guy's bedroom, and open the closet. Out falls a 10 year old girl, tied up, blind-folded, and gagged.
Spoilers: prison rape
I always get a lot of ideas for mangas, rangign from shonen to slic-of-life stuff. Don't want to get into many of them since they're somewhat underwritten but I'm trying to do a romantic comedy, and I need name for the characters. Mostly centers around a love triangle and I WOULD START but I need names for both girls.
i was looking for a site where u can actually submit manga as a comic. canaybody tell me where i can find a site where u can do that plzz
>>29
imageshack?
I've had these three ideas for a long time. Maybe I'll get to actually making them someday.
Musa doesn't mean warrior in Chinese, you dong.
Hitori, Kata is in a boarding school for girls, after a bus crash killed her three sister's and her best friend's. leaveing only a scare across her face, Hitori has too find out, why nobody wants too talk too her, and what happend when she was 12 years old, Hitori meet's four five people who might share the same problems as her, yangu, neesan (young, girl) kyasuto, Auto (cast, out) kuria, yoru (clear, night)sai, chi (cut, blood) juugatsu, kuchi (october, mouth) will all discover the horrible past that still haunts her dreams.
konpaku, is about akuma, washa (demon, speaker), who's father look's down on HIM (pissed at his mother for giveing her life for such a weak boy) Akuma has only on dream, wich is too find his mother, and free her from liveing hell. but now even Akuma's best friend has seen throw, his owen lie.
Akuma's father trun's deadly ill, and blam's akuma for such a act(think's he posined him) akuma wacth's his father suffer throw his sickness, mouth's latter, akuma's father passed away, now akuma is by himself in a new apartment with no one too talk too. Akuma walk's around for hour's lost in thinking about how he was going too save his mother when he came across an old bridge. just in view of the new bridge across the bay.
Akuma saw a girl about his age, on the side of the bridge waiting too jump into the water. (it's a river that you can see a bay from) something was diffrent, the girl was laughing at something. so like eney person, Akuma walked up too her. the girl looked at him then jumped. (it was a trick) Akuma jumped in after her, konpaku knocked him out then begain too take his hart out. Akuma woke in saver pain, she gave him a deal, "you will be the liveing dead, and you shall work for me, or i'll kill you vary painfully. Akuma exapted and his hart was placed in a jar next too two othere's. now Akuma is closer too saveing his mom, with the help of his new friend's or partner's Akuma is so close too getting his dream, he can almost tast it.
Title: PALADIN - Tristan and the Empire
Genre: Mecha
Backstory: Rotating space colonies (Stanford Torus) are constructed in Earth orbit with the aid of humanlike machines called L.A.U.s (Locomotive Armor Units). A young visionary, Tristan Young, wishes true freedom for the people of the colonies. To achieve this, he makes a demand of sovereignty to the Earth. This results in the militarization and mass-production of the Armor Unit, and begins the Angel Wars, so called for the mecha of the colonies and their allies, which bare a resemblance.
Nearly four years have passed since the dawn of the Angel Wars. The PALADINs of the space colonies and their allies engaged the SENTINELs of the United World Council on fronts both in space and on Earth. When the colonies unveiled three vastly superior PALADINs, dubbed Archangels, victory was inevitable... But no victory lasts forever... As colony leader Tristan Young was busy fighting the Earth, a new threat spread silently in those colonies that chose neutrality. Enter the Cygnus Foundation: a pacifist organization wisshing to achieve universal peace and democracy, even at the cost of innocent life. Far from the highly efficient, benign dictatorship that Tristan created. With Cygnus' superweapons threatening the lives of his people, Tristan is forced to step down from his position. Also, in order to insure peace, the Cygnus Foundation has demanded the transfer of all PALADINs and SENTINELs to itself. Seeking revenge, Tristan flees to Earth and finds an old Russian ally, high in the government's ranks. Promising to help free Russia from the threat of Cyngus, Tristan requests funding to construct new PALADINS, those whose specific talents may rival that of the Archangel Unit. His first four new suits are:
1.)PALADIN Blitz, a lightning fast sniper unit, capable of transforming into a fighter-like craft, and armed with a massive rail gun and twin-bladed sword.
2.)PALADIN Rouge, a PALADIN capable of space travel like Blitz, equipped with a small arsenal and large "scissor" on its left arm.
3.)PALADIN Cannonade, a literal walking tank; treads built into its lower legs help support its weight, in addition to a second set of legs to balance its weight when attacking with all of its weapons. Cannonade's flight apparatus can also detach and be used as a drone, tracking enemies and surveying the battlefield. Its armaments include double gatling guns on each arm, "battleship" guns on its shoulders, a complex array of missiles, rockets, and machine guns, a pair of laser tonfa, and two large buster cannons that rest on its back.
4.)PALADIN Aconite, an Armor Unit whose mobility is its true strong point. Its main weapons are two large leaf-shaped spikes attached to cable, which can be shot at high velocities to pierce and cut through opponents. It also has the ability to deploy/launch into space by means of an artichoke-like pod. When fully deployed in space, the pod becomes a superweapon similar to those found on the Cygnus colonies.
Additional information by request
©Kreg Smith, 2007-2008
Honestly, I could post mine. I have many ideas that I feel(Without sounding too full of myself) are excellent. Some that would be better suited for anime and some better as manga. But I don't want to share them because I am afraid they will be stolen(Again, the pride thing) And I can't draw worth a фьк.
>>37
Ideas are a dime a dozen and most people are only interested in their own. If anyone stole my ideas I'd be flattered, personally.
It's a lot more irritating when, like >>7, you find it's been done before - I had a sweet idea for an epic manga about government project to create powerful psychics when I was 12, then found out Katsuhiro Otomo already drew it and it's called AKIRA.
I actually feel that some of mine could make it very far. I told someone once about 2 of my ideas and he disagreed with a plot idea here and there and talked about stealing/changing/selling them the way he wanted. I'm sure that if he does it I'll incapacitate him.
oh god sage
I have an idea. Set in an east Asian country- however, I strive to not give away what location. A fairly average country boy voluntarily moves to the city to pursue opportunities in university life. There is free lodge avaliable- the property of his family, lived in by his ancestors before the family moved away from the city. For reasons unknown, his grandma, which is suffering from illness and will obviously not live for much longer, insists on accompanying him on the stressful journey to the city.
Once they get to the city, it is gradually revealed that grandma has once lived in the ancestral home, and was witness to a very dehibilitating war for the country. She is annoyed that the original house has been demolished and a block of flats built in its place. "All my memories of this place are gone, and the family has lost alot of its history." Meanwhile, the boy is obliged to try his best to fulfill the expectations of his peers, which misleadingly think he is "some super smart country boy". His impressive results, at the cost of much effort and time, earns him a certain respect within the school.
One day he catches a pretty girl entering his apartment, and seeing this as his only opportunity to actually get a girl, introduces himself to her. He learns that shes the same age, grade and is a foreign exchange student who lives in the apartment. How convenient. Anyway, they become friends, and he takes her to his room for some reason. At the same moment, grandma digs in the courtyard of the flats, and retreives a jar. Hurrying back to the flats, she is eager to talk to her grandson about the jar and its contents. Surprised to see him together with a young girl, she smirks, and proceeds to talk to him about the jar. Grandma reveals that inside the jar is a letter, that she personally buried in the courtyard during the war days. The letter is in a foreign language, and it has some military significance. Conveniently, the pretty girl comes from the country which invaded this one, and agrees to try translating the letter.
But the letter is extremely old and fragile, and the handwriting is difficult to read. It'll take several months to complete the translation. And, worse thing is, the sole reason grandma came with the boy to the ancestral home is to know the contents of that letter. Unfortunately, grandma is dying. The boy must race aginst the clock to finish the translation before his grandma dies, but also must keep the status quo with his newfound lover, who is the first person in many years to learn of the military conspiracies contained within that letter. Somehow, he must balance protecting his grandma, keeping his gf happy and keepng up with his new school reputation.
This ..this guy he has the power to KILL PEOPLE! yeah like eeuhm with a Note..let's call it KILLNOTE! lmao..hahaha,sorry i'm drunk
>>42
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Horrible grammar is grammar.
>>42
killnote...I actually kind of like that. I could imagine a "what if a South Dakota redneck got his hands on the Death Note instead" retelling.
Or you could have a South Park where Kenny finds the Death Note and ultimately writes his own name.
Yechiel Darke is a theology student with great aspects, but is unsatisfied with this miserable world of sin and violence. One day he finds the Life Note, a notebook held by a seraphim (arch angel). With the Life Note in hand, Darke decides to create the Lord's world on earth. A world without death, or the unfaithful. However when the recently dead start awakening one by one, the authorities send legendary detective D to investigate the strange occurrences. Things are far more complicated then they initially seem.
xD
wow that idea is totally original!
hmm i thought of this awhile ago
i'll try to remember my best
A baby appears on the front steps of a family's home who cannot have a baby.
They find a single black feather on the baby, and they said that it was as if the baby fell from the heavens.
after 14 years, everything is fine.
The girl is named Mika, and on the night of the new moon on her 14th year, her birthday, she is visited by a shinigami.
just before this on that same day, she and her father(her mother died 5 years before) had moved from kyoto to tokyo because of his work and their house is huge.
anyway, she is visited by this shinigami, telling her to come with her, the shinigami in this story would look like humans only could fly and such btw, and the girl is frightened to see a 'flying person'.
The shinigami explains to the girl how she got there and everything, the shinigami is her mother (looks very young and beautiful), and every baby shinigami born(which doesn't happen very often) is given to a human family for 14 years until they are fully developed.
But she never became aware of her powers like others did and can't use them. Her birth mother leaves her and says that she'll be back in a year.
and so over the next year the girl is shocked that she's adopted and starts experiencing a lot of changes.
but she also falls in love with two boys from her class, Aki Hoshi who is the really popular guy in class and really cute. He's 15 and gets straight A's. The other boy is Ichiro Honbashi. Who is 15, an average student, kind of popular and the first one to talk to mika on the first day of school. Also at school there is the leader of the 'mean girls' who run the Aki Hoshi fan club that hate Mika because she hangs around him all the time.
hmm, anyway thats all i can remember c:
lol
The Japanese Letter.
A country hick and his grandma come to the city because he needs o study for his matriculation exam at a respectable school. They lodge in their ancestral home, which has since been converted into a low-rent block of flats. After the boy befriends a beautiful Japanese exchange student, and his grandma reveals a historical memoir of a Japanese soldier, the three work on decoding the fragile and illegible script. As the years progress, the boy and the girl's relationship becomes stronger, until the climax of the story- where the final pages of the memoir are translated.
One night, when the boy fucks the chick, the chick tells him about the final pages. Then he finds he was fucking his cousin all along. The story ends with an uncertain conclusion- does the boy tell her about this, or does he continue to develop their sexual relationship?
The story would contain many philosophical undertones. For example, the events of Japan's invasion of the un-named area would be recounted from two perspectives, the grandma's and the soldier's. These perspectives would present differing views, and there is much moral ambiguity as to which is righteous.
Another instance of these undertones, would be the group-mentality aspect. The boy in his country school felt insulted by the stupidity of his classmates. Then when he changed to this prestigous city school, he felt even more offended at his classmate's praise. He felt that those people were merely praising him not for being intelligent, but because he overcame their expectations of a typical country hick. Such reactions led to his intense pursuit of scholarly excellence, where once he reached the zenith of the school could finally feel respected by the students, which now fear his intelligence.
wow you guys have good, complex ideas
mine isn't really an original idea i think. it is about a club for the people that dont fit in any where else. I call it "outcast guild". the characters are a nerd, a 1337 h4x0r, two free-runners, an otaku, and a girl that I haven't really chosen what she will be. the high school they are in is in california, none of these guys fit in with the gangsters. and I am making it a comedy. right now I have written down 4 chapters of it. do you think it is a good idea?
mine isn't really an original idea i think. it is about a club for the people that dont fit in any where else. I call it "outcast guild". the characters are a nerd, a 1337 h4x0r, two free-runners, an otaku, and a girl that I haven't really chosen what she will be. the high school they are in is in california, none of these guys fit in with the gangsters. and I am making it a comedy. right now I have written down 4 chapters of it. do you think it is a good idea?
sorry my computer didn't show that I posted 3 times
My idea I am just making while I type
The year is 5089 the world is on the verge of collapsing and only a few million people survived the rage of God. Some have banded together and formed colonies while others are outcast for being considered "inhuman". Each colony has their own set of rules they must follow but the one rule every colony has is that if you have ever killed anyone you are not human therefore outcast from your colony and every colony on earth. These outcasts suffer great pain and misery even if they are falsely accused. But this rule is cherished and will never be changed....or so they thought. a cop is walking past an alley when he sees a mysterious creature when he comes back the creature is shouting and cursing like a man finally it turns around towards the cop and is completely human. The cop reports this finding to his colony leader they have a meeting with the other colonies and decide that everyone will be quarantined to their house until this creature is found and dealt with. Eventually they discover every colony is being diseased with these monsters. As the monsters begin to get out of control the outcast attack the colonies.
This is a Sci-fi, gore, suspense, and religious manga but I can’t draw so idk it’s just an idea.
a bored teenager found racing in America and he brought a car and learn to drive and race other car in non-FnF style.
Oh, this thread sounds fun! I'll do a one-shot plot right now...~
There was once a girl(let's give her the name... Masami) who was very introverted and never had a crush before. She had only one best friend, and they weren't even THAT close. On the first day of 11th grade, due to schedule mishaps, her class was switched with another's and she ended up in the classroom next door (bye bye, class with best friend...).
The teacher placed her in a seat next to a guy with bleached orange hair. He had a beanie cap on with earphones sticking out of his school uniform's coat. He looked experienced in secretly listening to music during a class lecture. This was just some other guy who looked like everyone else, following the same bleached hair style and the rebel earphone hiding... he probably smoked too. Masami glanced at him for a second, and their eyes met, but she took no heart to it and sat down unabashed. "The type of guy I hate the most... He looks like a flunker, he's just another groupie." but she couldn't help but blush at his rather good looks. "damn him! I don't like him!"
aaand well it's getting long but ill stop here :3
this is one ive been thinking about starting but idk...
ok. its the year 5060, in a mecha region called 'Aurulious'. Aurulious is one of the world's most complex machine creaters. Anyway, the main character is named Aia, and she's the daughter of the deceased detective Baer(who's a very well-known detective). 9 yrs b4 the story starts, it talks about the defective machine that was originally built to protect aurulious, when instead it malfunctioned and turned against aurulious, killing thousands of people. Because the aurulion's didnt want any outside forces to destroy the machine, they used the most complex technology, making the machine near invincible. It took 5 years, but soon the amchine was defeated and stored in a chronic time chamber.
Now, back to the present day, the government, also called the Aurulion Senate, has thought about reviving the defective machine for use in a upcoming war with Rega, another region, but mostly dependant on the elements and nature. They soon nix the idea, because they don't want the machine to malfunction again and take anymore lives. Anyway one of the senate members, a male named Sarsia(also Aia's fiance) has a fight with the rest of the senate members to revive the machine, and kills them.
Now that Sarsia is the only senate member, no one but Aia can stop him from releasing hell again...and if Sarsia makes the machine 10xs as strong as he plans, then who can stop the machine from not only annhialating Aurulious, but also the world?
I've been thinking of writing this story because i like the complex nature of it. Well what do you think it seems worth writing to me. :D
I'm actually writing my own manga at the moment i'm still trying to find a name for it though, I'm thinking along the lines of Neon Tokyo or Rainbow Night Wand: Perfect Harmony.
It's about a girl who was at school one day and encountered a somewhat mythical creature called a Midnight Samari Slayer (I don't think i spelt that write lol. But you get the idea). They are much like little minature vampire goblin things. Anyway The MSS (Midnight Samari Slayer) Get's the girl and and knocks her in the head with a dream slayer wand. She wakes up to find herself in the school's sickbay where she sees her best friend staring at her as if something was wrong. Something was wrong. The girls best friend explained to her that she had an MSS pendant on the neck and was holding Rainbow night wand. The MSS must have given her mystical powers. Her bestfriend later admits to her that she also got slayed by an MSS a few years ago and has now possessed supernatural powers, she holds the dragon of the moon wand and is always out on mystical journeys. The MSS's are not actually evil! They just are out finding the 6 girls that will help them save the world from the mythical darkness dream eaters. They try to take away all of the worlds nightmares and rule the world and make those nightmares all become true for the whole world. What people have not realized is that their nightmares are only in their heads and they keep the world going strong. But if those nightmares are ever released everyone is doomed. They have to find the other 3 girls that will help conquer the MDE's(mythical dream eaters).
They will each have a wand and a pendant which holds in it a little pet that alerts them of missions and is just an all round friend. The girls also have MDE nets which will help get the smaller MDE's that cause less harm. The girls each get stuck with problems affecting their lives and their loved ones.
The girls get motivated by a shocking video of what the year 2015 could look like if they don't stop the madness and if they stop it. One of the girls feels that she has to reveal who she is to her whole school in order to gain more popularity although she is very pretty no one seems to care about her at her school. The main character doesn't even realise this girl goes to her school untill she joins the midnight perfect harmony team. The main character helps the girl to fit in and lets her join her frendship group but that still doesn't satisfy her, she want's so much more popularity! Will she or won't she spill her little secret!
If everyone knows who she really is will they even believe her? She is risking the whole group1 If people find out then there powers shrivel. Not their supernatural powers though! the powers that everyone possesses from birth!
It could get so bad they could go into one big nightmare for several months. It wouldn't happen to a normal person. Whatever happens in those dreams, they get affected by in real life. If they get a scratch in the dream in will appear when they wake up! That affect would get caused by the MDE's.
Well I think that's enought for now ^_^
(c)R.M.N 2008->
This plot is in fact copyright and you could be sued if you copy this plot. I am actually not kidding. You could get into BIG trouble with the law
I'm sorry for not providing names with the characters yet i'm still thinking up names ^_^
eh em..
Continueing on..It god damn cut me off GRR
The MDE nets are released when they wave their wands in a circle and say: MDE NET PERFECT HARMONY...RELEASE!
(c) R.M.N. copyright 2008--->.
My plot is actually copyrighted so if you do happen to steal my plot serious coniquenses will be put in place so be carfull!
If i do find that my idea has been taken i will take serious action and the law may even be involved if you do not cooporate and delete MY plot from all of your internet sites/blogs and computer files.
Oh and another thing i'm sorry for being so very serious about
the copyright thing :(
I'm just one of those people that hates coppyers..
>>66-67
How cute.
i'm actually going to turn this into a manga so pls...no stealing the idea. :)
Hiide Izawa is a normal,17 year-old girl, that just so happens to be the shy, soft spoken, smart girl in class. but beneath all that lies something more. little does anyone know that Hiide is also the famous "Dr. Cupid" the blunt,and in-your-face, love advice giver that sees her love-sappy patients on a regular basis and occassionally does a radio chat or a t.v interview. you'd think that would all be well and good getting people the love of their lives to fall for them...except...poor Hiide's been single for her whole 17 years, simply for the fact that she lacks the courage to say what she wants (though her mind speaks quite often) and tends to lack the common sense to realize when a boy likes her.
and thats just the half of it. apparently picking the name "Dr. cupid" wasn't the best because a Gwageth anoon (welsh water fairy that occassionally take humans for husbands) which just so happens to be the queen of her realm realizes one of her kind would not be good for her halfling son, so she sets him out to the human world where he stupidly sets his sights on the most popular girl in Hiide's school and just so happens to see a billboard of "dr. cupid". thinking this will help him he sets off to find the so called "cupid". now its up to Hiide to both babysit, and work her magic on the stubborn self-centered fairy prince that knows nothing of the human world and is completely hopless in love.
remember what i've said about stealing the idea. its already been copyrited anyway and its in the process to becoming a great manga. so please no stealing of the plot or i'll have your head and the law will have your butt. thank you :)
how bout a guy who got sick of the world he's living in then one day decided to hire a moving house truck went to akiba and mowed people off the pavement, alighted from his truck and cut the remaining civilians in site. he got jailed awaiting his judgment.. and.. andd, andd.. .....AND... AND!.. in his prison cell, lo and behold, the LIFE NOTE! he summoned from the dead all the people he slaughtered that very day with the help of crows as guardians. then here they come wearing clown-like scribblings on their face to the rescue our protagonist from the long hand of the law. he came out clean with the help of the note. then he started yelling out "rise from your grave!" ala-alter beast cameo performance. then all the victims killed by his cellmates one by one arose from death.. then they did a carmel-san dance and we're happy..
based on true story.. this is copyrighted as well, dare if you dare..
Oh and another thing i'm sorry for being so very serious about
the copyright thing :(
I'm just one of those people that hates coppyers..
Well I think that...nvm its stupid.
This something I made up!
Okay, the story starts out with this girl(Her name is Mami) she is very smart and has a bright future ahead of her. Except the only thing is she has NO SOCIAL LIFE whatsoever. Mami is very shy and timid and most people refer to her as "that girl". Mami got so fed up over it that she decides to change herself, and ends up going to this run-down salon. There she meets the self-proclaimed "Matthew" a genius hairstylist from America, unfortunately though Matthew hasn't made it BIG in Japan yet.So she goes to Matt's hair salon and gets her hair, nails, make-up everything done. And ends up befriending Matt, but basically the whole plot line and conflict is that since Mami got herself "fixed-up" she falls between the two love rivals that want her Genius-sama Matthew and Cute-hot-headed "Soriu". Who will she decide to love???Try some line breaks, gaylord.
This is a manga I made myself after years of different briliently failed ideas. This manga whent through a few major revisions and this is what I got.
Title: Arashi
Story:
(Background) There once lived three great races of beings, the Oni, the Kisai, and the greatest of them all the Oniyajuu. They lived together in harmony until a group of Kisai formed a group called the Akuoni and took power. They had grown jealous of the Oniyajuu’s powers. The Akuoni recruited any army of Kisai and Oni and waged war upon the Oniyajju. However the Onijayuu also recruited the Oni and fought back ferociously. The war waged on for countless years until the Oniyajuu were no more. Even though the Oniyajuu were powerful but the Akuoni had numbers to their advantage. Now a time of uneasy peace rules over the land, but nothing can last forever.
(Pilot) Arashi is a young orphanded Oniyajju traveling whith a livly Oni named Zeke. They arrive in a town that seems ordinary enough, until they end up rescuing a young girl named Hinata from a gang of thungs. Hinata joins the group and it doesn't take them long to meet up with Suzuki, an Oniyajju bounty hunter, and Arashi is his next target.
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it seem hard to me make a plot...x_x;
have u noticed in manga they fail to have differend "cultures" like i dont mean this offesivly but black people its always baby white skin gosh
a high school boy that sounds all sweet and innocent, but is very sexcist against girls. When he pushes down one of the girls from his school a like womens' rights chick was watching and goes to the principal of Sakura Sakura: Academy for Girls and tells of what she sees.
Later on, the principal from the girl school ((Sakura Mitsami)) sends a transfer letter to the boy's school sending him to the all girls school. and yeah that's all i got. ^_^ o and the boy's name is hana
i also have another one.
it's called Gunned Over in Tokyo.
It's about this girl (Harumi Usagi) who is visiting a criminal that is in one of the top prisons in Japan. they have been scheming for a while and put their escape plan into action and suceed. btw the boy's name is (Tsurugi Matsurama) and after suceeding all prison officers are out to find them.
Harumi goes back home and keeps the prisoner in her house giving him a different name and w/e. she finds out later that he is part of a mob and since most of the mob ppl don't trust is put in the group and trialed to be an official mob person. she later falls in love with tsurugi and ya i don't feel like typing it all though.
spoiler: the whole mob dies at the end from their rival mob Shyomi Shyo.
I got bored. lol. ^^
here an idea i am currently about to start what do you think
黒川 Kurokawa (black river) 海斗 Kaito (big dipper of the ocean) is a normal 15 year student that didn’t really succeed in anything he did. But on his way home from school one day he’s sees what looked like someone mugging another person, the man easily gets away from the mugger and runs in the direction of Kaito. The mugger quickly stands up and runs after him, while the man’s running Kaito sees the mugger’s skin dissolve and form into a monster. The monster was fast approaching when a man by the name of 山口 Yamaguchi (mouth of the mountain) 紅葉 Momiji (crimson blade) steps in the way. He pulls out a katana and makes quick work of the beast, Kaito after seeing these events suddenly realizes that he never wants to see that happen to another person again. Kaito is introduced into the world of monsters and the Masato organization that is the only force that can fight against this world of evil. He alos learns that not all monsters just eat or kill humans, they also can turn them into another monster. Will Kaito be able to stop the chaos or will he become one of the many victims to be engulfed by the evil that is the world of the monsters.
A Bunch of ronin attack a village and start killing the people. Among them, the fearless \"leader\" watches as the village burns down...closeup eyes and we go back to the past telling the hows & whys. First scene is him having sex with a seasoned samurai, his mentor....
.... \"What is it you want?\" said the Beast. I want nothing, i want everything, i want the world..followed by hot sexscene between a lion and the samurai.
...\"You..you have freed me from life, from its ugliness. No longer ronin, no longer no purpose, thank you\"
The End. (sample chapters, if you wan the whole story, please send 30 dollars and your adress to Happy Dude, Saint Polis 40, Brooklyn.
Have a nice day
well i finished the first chp of my idea so i'll upload it to one of my sites so you guys can check it out, i'll give you the site when i'm done
A guy who generally sucks at talking to girls winds up surrounded by them, and hilarity ensues.
>>87 Maybe he could start with "I killed your uncle on the night of the festival", a sure-fire girl pleaser.
Fresh Prince of Bel-Air manga!
Well, I'm working on a manga idea right now, I have the plot, characters and first 3 pages done.
It's called "Guardian Demon", its going to be a BL type story. The main character Akihito has had a near death experience and meets his guardian demon, Voltaire. After this he can see ghosts and people's guardian. (He's not any type of monster fighter of anything like that, he just can see spirits now.)
Akihito is very clumsy and unlucky but always looks on the bright side of things. Voltaire is ver knowledagle, but is sort of a grouch. Megumi, Akihito's friend, is the shrine maiden to her family's shrine, but is into being Gotic Lolita when not on the job and is pesimistic. Megui's guardian, Antoine, is just a fruitloop and very flamboyant.
Yay.
>>91 ...
hey Random Manga Otaku i like your ddr idea and i can see it working. if u have a story written out with it, or more of a detailed out line with an ending let me know. i'm looking for new ideas in order to improve my art and a new story would be A good thing for me. GOTTA GET MORE VIEWERS! lol not everyone likes fma or knows of it but everyone knows of ddr! you can contact me on deviantart.com. shinobi-dreamiest is the name. heres a sample of my work.http://shinobi-dreamiest.deviantart.com/art/ch-4-pg-3-101728840
i'm just a starter to the world of making mangas but i got potential and a photoshop!
so if you got a finished story or something i dont have to work with too much before i draw it let me know!
WAR OF DREAMS is my manga.
you have any idea how brilliant that is?
I meant as for a story thing, not as an actual pick up line XDDDDDDDDD
there once was a boy that had the head of a fish
my idea is that well if your interested please reply
meh
he comes to the city. everythings different: although hes a country lad, somehow hes still perceived as 'smart' rather than 'a bogan'. expectations fail to materialise. he decides to turn a new leaf and try to be the best man he can. first day in his old flat. sees a girl from his new school, converses with her, pleasantly surprised at how different ciuty girls are to coountry girls. more intelligent. thery beocme mates. he decides to bury his porno magazine collection in the bakyard, and stumbles upon a jar of old japanese war memoir under the tree. he gets the girl (an exchange student) to translate it, but the script is cursive and difficult to translate. as the girl comes to his apartment everyday after school to translate more of the memoirs, they start to bond. as the passages reveal the past, they must make difficult decisions: reveal to public or no? stay loyal to a country or no?
pretty good set up, but there should be more of a point to why they are translating it, or rather, more of a personal connection between the translating and them, like it is documenting some love during the war.
that, and your spelling sucks XD
Nero selene (のソフトウェア セレネ) may look like you'r average sixteen year old, but underneath the apathetic and serious surface lies a dangerous force.Armed with the ability to summon up swords from thin air and a sadistic,yet phsychotic, personality.Nero has taken it upon himself to destroy everything mythical, from the most harmless pixie to the most bloodthirsty demon. To completely fullfill this, he has to find the four shards of the Akuma (あくま) and the blood of its protector.
Standing in his way are, the lord of the underworld kurayami (暗闇) and his demonic minions,enzeru (エンゼル) and his angelic warriors, werewolves, vampires, a pistol-wielding fifteen year old girl called Tenshi (天使), and EVEN the shinigami. With all these factions standing in the way of his dark vendetta, will he succeed or fall?
1 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-11 23:11 ID:OoTDdlRR
I'll start.
I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.
I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.
95 Name: hiiragi001948 : 2008-11-03 23:59 ID:SUP5UBtD
WAR OF DREAMS is my manga.
96 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-09 03:07 ID:N5MOwFkj
you have any idea how brilliant that is?
97 Name: 88 : 2008-11-09 11:11 ID:Heaven
>>96
No?
98 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-10 03:45 ID:eXjmDGSa
I meant as for a story thing, not as an actual pick up line XDDDDDDDDD
99 Name: poa : 2008-11-17 06:23 ID:58sAY0y9
there once was a boy that had the head of a fish
100 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-18 07:51 ID:/f+9zF6y
ACK! Merman mutant!!!
101 Name: ? : 2008-11-19 06:06 ID:btLdRnvA
my idea is that well if your interested please reply
102 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-23 09:22 ID:9Eqdj0au
meh
he comes to the city. everythings different: although hes a country lad, somehow hes still perceived as 'smart' rather than 'a bogan'. expectations fail to materialise. he decides to turn a new leaf and try to be the best man he can. first day in his old flat. sees a girl from his new school, converses with her, pleasantly surprised at how different ciuty girls are to coountry girls. more intelligent. thery beocme mates. he decides to bury his porno magazine collection in the bakyard, and stumbles upon a jar of old japanese war memoir under the tree. he gets the girl (an exchange student) to translate it, but the script is cursive and difficult to translate. as the girl comes to his apartment everyday after school to translate more of the memoirs, they start to bond. as the passages reveal the past, they must make difficult decisions: reveal to public or no? stay loyal to a country or no?
103 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-26 10:40 ID:/f+9zF6y
pretty good set up, but there should be more of a point to why they are translating it, or rather, more of a personal connection between the translating and them, like it is documenting some love during the war.
that, and your spelling sucks XD
104 Name: Flameinfernus : 2008-11-30 09:17 ID:1lBmjJMt
Nero selene (のソフトウェア セレネ) may look like you'r average sixteen year old, but underneath the apathetic and serious surface lies a dangerous force.Armed with the ability to summon up swords from thin air and a sadistic,yet phsychotic, personality.Nero has taken it upon himself to destroy everything mythical, from the most harmless pixie to the most bloodthirsty demon. To completely fullfill this, he has to find the four shards of the Akuma (あくま) and the blood of its protector.
Standing in his way are, the lord of the underworld kurayami (暗闇) and his demonic minions,enzeru (エンゼル) and his angelic warriors, werewolves, vampires, a pistol-wielding fifteen year old girl called Tenshi (天使), and EVEN the shinigami. With all these factions standing in the way of his dark vendetta, will he succeed or fall?
u guys have awesome stories o.o i heart them all the DDR one made me lmao omgz i have an idea but im not sure its good enough yet xb do u thnk u can help me out
Xb
Cute2 (The "2" will be above the "Cute" like in an exponent!)
A disillusioned teenage girl(I'm thinkin' Katsumi or Amaterasu...) wishes upon a star that she would be "cute" in the eyes of her classmates(She's got glasses, short hair, ect.) When she wakes up the next morning, she's cute after all, but not in the way she imagined, when she gets emotional her appearance changes and cat ears appear on her head and she gets a tail! What can she do? Also, she starts to see weird things that no one else can see. Who did this?
I plan to sketch the characters soon, tell me how it is! Thanks!!
Well if anyone cares i draw some manga. I work on miniature pages and drawing technuiqes but my story telling skills are really lacking. Anyone who wants can give me an idea and my brother can help with the writing...and on the very far off chance something comes of it I'll mention your help...if u want -_-
super cool idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a dark shadow comes out of hiding every night at 11:59 killing people who commit crimes in a vigalanty way but leaves no evidence or reason of death the only way people know "it" exists is from witnesses. The wierd thing is that it kills multiple people in multiple areas all in one minute. at first youd think that its not strange but he kills a man in england, a woman in brazil, and another man in india all in one minute.
the story revolves around a criminal who also works in the same way that the "shadower" does(as the media calls it). anyway he tries to find out what the shadowers about and where he came from the plot line goes something like this
1.introduction chapter: shows murders and introduces main protaganist
2.protaganist tries to find out more about shadower and meets a reporter that finds out he's a criminal so he kidnaps her and she helps him out.
3. they lure the shadower out and find out he's a man and talk to him for a small while and the man fades away
4. they go to the news station where the reporter turns on the protaganist getting him arrested.
5. the shadower breaks the protaganist out of prison and they get the reporter and leave to some building with blacked out windows and no clue as to where it is
6.they realize the shadower has a time machine that lets him go back in time for one minute which shows how he can be in different places at one time.
7. the shadower reveals himself and as a shock is a police man who's family was killed by a home invasion. so he decides to keep it from happening to anyone else but along the way becomes corrupted and goes mad.
8.he descrides to the protaganist and reporter about how he kills people with no trace. he uses a super powerful radiation
gun thing that sends thousands of radioactive waves through the body that kills the person almost instantly with no trace.
thats all i got so far and any suggestions would be nice I'd also like some comments to (^=^)
QwQ awesome ideas here guys!
i've always been the kina person to think up a story/manga that i could really get into yet... never finish it^^;
demo...i just wanna post some ideas myself now
see what anyone thinks
Title: Rainbow Girls {R.G}
Genre: Harem, ecchi, romance, comedy
Summary:
Hey there, i guess your wondering whos that poor guy carrying all those heavy yet colourful bags. Well, believe it or not, thats me. Handsome devil arent i?
And just so you know those bags arent mine. They belong to my employers, or should i say my OMEGA HAWT MODEL employers.
Lucky Bastard arent i?
-plonk-
"Oops, hehe my bad Shu-shu!!tehe!!!"
Well most of the time anyway.
Now you see that dark skinned devil girl? yea the one with the orange dress. That's Mikan, my personal tormentor and youngest member of the 'Rainbow Girls', a group of gor-g-e-o-u-s cover girls for my Uncle's big top secret company thing, which i am now working for. My most generous uncle -tch yea right- gave me a spot as the Rainbow Girls play thing...sorry assistant.
Please note i am being VERY sarcastic.
And for the record my name is Niji Shu! not Shu-shu!!...
Note to self: Murder Mikan when we get home.
"Gomen Shu-san are you ok?"
Ah, Ki Himawari-chan~ always so thoughtful! Honestly i swear this girl is the only sane member of the group. She's young and beautiful, with her soft silver locks and a sunny yellow dress, ahhh~ she always brightens my day.
"Mush-mush lazy bones! i wanna be at the Hot springs oh by, sometime this WEEK! JEEZ any SLOWER and the turtles will beat us there!!!"
That blonde loud-mouth in blue? That's Ao Sora, my personal pain in the ass, a bossy blonde with one massive mouth.
"ugh, can someone shut miss-whats-er-face up?!! some of us need some sleeep!"
The lazy moaner is Ai Kon, or Rainbow Indigo. But to me, she's my best friends girlfriend, her real name being Tsuyukusa Kohana. My boy Gin doesnt even know she's a famous model! Course i swore i wouldnt tell him. Kona would beat me crapless if i did!!
"Maybe if you werent such a party animal, you wouldnt be so tired"
Did Aka Bara just speak!? That chicks one hot ass lady in red but with a killer persona. Rarely speaks, rarely cares. Though her and Kona were two of the first rainbow girls so they have some history. Bara doesnt tolerate the rest as must as she does Kona.
"Oh Bara-saaaaan~ always so dominating!!! ehehe!!"
Midori Kusa, resident Rainbow Green and proud lesbian. Or Bi. Its real confusing sometimes. I tell you red's are very confusing. Well this one is anyway.
"Cock a foot in'it Kusa!"
"Go get drunk bitch!"
"Bite me"
"...mmmm now there's a thou-"
"Dont even Whore-face!"
"Eh c'mon girls! dont fight be happy! we're on HOL-E-DAYZ!!!!!"
Second Blonde rainbow girl and Dopey Violet as i refer to her, Sumire Ayame. How that girls always so happi i'll never know. Nothing phases her. 'Cept tying shoe laces. Then she needs my help.
"Yeah and poor me never gets a break"
"You arent being paid to take breaks, REMEMBER!!!"
"tch, i hardly get paid as it is"
"Feh, count yourself LUCKY you even have a job working for us!"
Actually i do, Cause my days are always more colourful with these girls.
And their about to get even worse.
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So yea ^^; thats it a lil intro, oh and as for the names, i wrote them in traditional japanes, you know last name first.
Each girl represents a colour of the rainbow.
And each is NAMED after that colour
Ao Sora = Blue Sky
Aka Bara = Red Rose
Ki Himawari = Yellow Sunflower
Midori Kusa = Green Grass
Sumire Ayame = Violet Iris
Ai Kon = no full translation but it stands for Indigo
Mikan = is like orange i guess
and thats it
do you like?
Girl meets guy. Girl kills guy. Girl finds out guy is girl. Girl weeps at failed yuri potential.
my manga is soon to be transformed into an anime heh well here it goes ... i guess =/. My story takes place in modern day no setting yet and is about a 45 year old war veteran serving in the military as a general.Time passes and he sees that war is changing so rapidly and quickly that he starts to question his motives for war and thus escapes from a military base where he is currently living under the watchful eye of the government. All is not right in this world because as soon as he escapes the base everything goes crazy and the dawn of a new war is emerging. The government searches for the general as he tries to escape but he is eventually captured and held against his will. They force him into war and he leads his army into a war he hasn't even imagined... consisting of the typical Japanese mech suit robots but with a twist of betrayal among high powered government officials and secret assassination. He is now trying to escape his life of war and his efforts are futile until he gets ambushed and he and his men are claimed dead but he just barely escapes with wounds everywhere and wakes up in the base of a secret underground band of terrorists which are here to bring down the corrupt government and bring freedom to their country. but what do you have when a war veteran once loyal to the military has his doubts and questions his own morals and beliefs? There is more than meets the eye to this story as secret experiments and biological warfare are taking place... human experiments, lies, deception, FREEDOM! What will we have to pay to stop this war and why it rages on with more force than ever!. I REALLY WANNA WRITE THE STORY FOR THIS AND IF ANYONE HAS FEEDBACK CONTACT ME VIA AIM EMAIL OR MYSPACE: AIM-> XxrottingdeathxX. Email: XxrottingdeathxX@gmail.com Myspace:-> myspace.com/gabegrantsyoudeath
ehh srry myspace is wrong in my last post its actually myspace.com/deathisyouronlychoice
this guy and his friends smoke weed and get into a bunch of crazy shit based on my life experiences
how bout this
title : none yet
genre: sf, romance, drama
earth year 22xx, nothing has changed much except for the fact that all the world's digital devices are run by a single super-computer.
the world is thrown into chaos when the computer's "consciousness" goes missing
as it materializes in the body of a 15yr old girl as a result of it's creator's final command..
what happens when this runaway super-computer encounters a popular high-school idol who hates technology?
There's this boy who wants to be Gourmant King and he sails the sevens seas beating the Cook warlords one after one. After defeating Cocozal, the first cook warlord..he presented the boy a Angel donut. After eating it, he gained the hidden recipy of Coconut a la chand. SKip. Ending: he dies.
Ok, Im relly thinking of turning this into a real Manga, so no stealing! Kurenai is a normal 19 year old vet intern/collage student. Until she moves to Tokyo. There, she mets a boy named Ginta. Her and her new dormmate, Natura (i came up with the name at the last minute!) are curiuos about this "strange boy," and follow him one night. They accendently get sucked into another era, with no way out! There, they met a hot-temperd hottie named Dan. They quickley learn that they have "specail powers," and have to save the world! They meet, "Kimmiko, Kilala, Shika, Tamika and Tamiko twins, Hakku, Sabrina and Hakudoshi (hakudoshi is Sabrina's dog) and Kiba Kurenai's dog" Its kinnda lame. Im thinking of immproving it. Sorry if u think its a little stupid. (its not the best..)
Ok, Im relly thinking of turning this into a real Manga, so no stealing! Kurenai is a normal 19 year old vet intern/collage student. Until she moves to Tokyo. There, she mets a boy named Ginta. Her and her new dormmate, Natura (i came up with the name at the last minute!) are curiuos about this "strange boy," and follow him one night. They accendently get sucked into another era, with no way out! There, they met a hot-temperd hottie named Dan. They quickley learn that they have "specail powers," and have to save the world! They meet, "Kimmiko, Kilala, Shika, Tamika and Tamiko twins, Hakku, Sabrina and Hakudoshi (hakudoshi is Sabrina's dog) and Kiba Kurenai's dog" Its kinnda lame. Im thinking of immproving it. Sorry if u think its a little stupid. (its not the best..)
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Umm mines a shounen manga soz but its sort of generic, opens with a new exchange student whos split down the middle, black and white, actually hes white but hair and eyes you know. First chapters from the view pooint of a girl whos in a different class from him at first, divided by a wall. one day shes thinking about him when he comes flying through the wall followed by another student from he class. it cuts to black then she wakes up somewhere seinic and he tells her about himself, i'll revise the school issue later. hes half angel half demon, but demons and angels aren't good or evil, angels can heal demons can fight, the bad guys are angels or demons who have become tainted with one of the seven deadly sins they have to fight the bad guys, for the first few chapters. the first major arc would be where he meets a reverse-demon (last minute name, i'll revise it later) who is of the rarest kind, not sure which sin this'll be mind and at the end they have a grudging respect for each other
if you want to know more about characters plot etc. please contact me through my bebo...
soz this is the link http://www.bebo.com/jamesc07004
Those thinking about a DDR manga should just google the awesomeness that is The 10k Commotion. Featuring a cool story, and awesome art, not shitty devianTART fake-manga.
sit around to smoking weed and drink then pass out doesn't sound like a good idea
So far all of the ideas in this thread have made me cringe.
zomg i have an anime idea to its genre is -shonan ai,comedy
a boy named haruko, whos awesome at taking pics and stuff but has no other talents ect wants to go to this special magnet school to exspand his career in photography but harukos dad accidentally sends his application to an all boys modeling program instead. so he totally freaks out but he soon realizes the benifits in his dads dumbfoundary -(a great oppertunity to become a famousy hotty ,a phtographer who takes pics of the hotties or have a hot new bf with one of the other benifits before this one )any way on his stay at the school he meets a show offy male model named jakuri who totally mocks harukos abilities and makes him feel like crap. so they become rivals and what not and he also meets another guy named sota who befriends him in a way just so he can get into his pants(thinking out side the box) so throughout the whole anime haruko must over come these obsticals and survive the critacism just to accomplish his gooals to fame which wont be easy.
plz tell me what u think because im making the anime for my friends and i want random opinions too not just friendly ones tank u
oh n if u have ny questions or whatever just send me a message on my myspace -sierra mabry-night_rose_atone
>>128
I don't like it, and you spell like a year-old crap pile.
well sorry u didnt like it besides i was just thinking off the top of my head ^^ but u didnt half to insult me i know how to spell its just a website u dont half to spell propper or any thing
well sorry u didnt like it just thinking off the top of my head but i can spell and you didnt half to insult me you could've just pointed out that you found it distasteful or something minus the insults^^ not to be mean or any thing
well sorry u didnt like it just thinking off the top of my head but i can spell and you didnt half to insult me you could've just pointed out that you found it distasteful or something minus the insults^^ not to be mean or any thing
Meh, this'll be a one-shot.
Dystopic future where people can't die.
Someone beats the odds and manages to kick he bucket.
Seriously, what's with the hyper-elaborate, epic, sweeping, yet kitschy, overblown and clichéd plots? And bad names...
wow it posted it three times o.o
Ive had a couple manga ideas but im not very good at drawing yet so im goin to wait a little while, and im not entirly sure that they are very good.
Maybe you guys should check out the manga Bakuman.
It's basically about two kids that want to make a popular manga and achieve there dreams. Not only is the manga interesting but it's also got some interesting manga ideas in it.
Check it out.
I love the idea of rainbow girls...that can work well!
Once, I made a 54 episode manga but then I got totally bored and now I have 4 other amazing ideas I hid my old manga away...I can't seem to find them...oh well I'll manage! I'll share ideas latr.Oyasumi!!!
Helpers:
Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Helpers”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called the “Sacred Powers” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Helpers were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Helpers and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Helpers to reside called “Cronos” they were to stay in Cronos until they were called upon by the heavens. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble, this caused the people to believe the Helpers had gone. After the people gave up on the Helpers whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Helpers keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Cronos and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Cronos throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Cronos, later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Helpers are said to lose their powers once on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Helper for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Helper sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Helper named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Cronos to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Helpers to stop her, but in the fight with the helpers Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four sacred powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.>>133
You should read Moorcock's End of Time sequence.
Ok...
In the near future, Mecha fight tournaments are the most popular entertainment sport. Usually the teams with the most resources dominate the game, but a group of underdogs managed to shine... by cheating. Sabotage, bribing, illegal tactics, anything you can name. And they are loved by the crowds because of that.
>>141
Antiheros? I like that.
Alright...
This is my first time and i'm trying to blend both american and japanese tradition. hope ya like it!
Title:Dreamt
Time:Both modern and ancient
The Main char(workin on some names)is a 15 yr old mercenary living a normal life that only he knows about and completing missions and such. what he doesn't know about was that when he was little a crazed scientist melded his body with one of the 8 scattered parts of a legendary demon inside him to see what the effects would be. Unfortunately, he is killed in the rage of the main char. He was told that his parents died in a mission to liberate a local town.However, they died fusing with one of the eight parts and ultimately destroying their own bodies. Time has passed and the town looks to the main character as someone who needs to be protected. Other enemies are looking to obtain the power within this child. For should they be able to obtain even one of the missing parts, they would have unbelievable power. In this manga, bounty hunters, killers , organizations and even allied towns will do whatever it takes to obtain the strongest part of the demon which lies in the main char, the Demon's soul. However the main char looks for peaceful solutions and can be persuaded each way. Who's idea of peace is right? Will peace be an opportunity to wage war, to live in happiness or perhaps.... the rebirth of the planet? Ultimately the fate of the world lies within him. It will be up to him to establish the true idea of peace.
BTW plz don't copy. i took a lot of time into this. hope you all liked it. thx!
>15 yr old mercenary
...yyyeah.
Other than that, sounds a bit (too much?) like Naruto.
>BTW plz don't copy
People who want to copy will. If you don't want to be copied, don't post stuff on the internet. Seriously. It's stupid.
You don't have to worry about people copying your manga idea because only you, you alone can make your manga because if someone were to steal, the people who read this already would know right now away that the person who will not try this cause it won’t work, didn't make it on his own and then you would find out about that, your fans of your idea, then you would re-claim your idea if anyone stole your manga idea, I hope this helps anyone, if anyone wants to contact me for anything like emailing my manga story to you that I been sending to over three-thousand people on internet which they all said was very good this month, so if I email my story, you try to steal it but the people who I send it to will know you didn't make it yourself and how would you make it yourself in more chapters of it if you didn't make it because I only and me alone can make more chapters of it today, tomorrow and any other day when I have time make it.
>>145
You have no idea how the real world works, do you?
My manga idea is about a female detective who works to bring down prostitution rings. She finds Johns by posting on CraigsList, upon meeting she decides wether or not to fuck them before busting them. When she brings them in for questioning she uses many perverse interrogation methods. Because she is screwing around with all of the chiefs of police and her captain she never get reprimanded for her actions. In the course of her work she finds her long lost sister, the killer of her parents, and the pedophile uncle that kidnaped her when she was 4. Who also molested her and made her the nympho that she is today.
Please don't steel my idea, :3
I'm working on a book series and a major motion picture which I'm pitching to Skinimax in the fall.
Here's my idea: A junior in highschool loves to jerk off. He does it about 3 to 4 times a day. One day his mom walks in to find him angrily masturbating to fat black chicks on the computer. He's astonished that his mom caught him. For a while things get really awkward around the 2 of them. He decides to run away and live the life of a squirrel, and just so happens to become a prostitute/ninja/detective/giant robot. During his journey of fucking old fat guys, killing japanese daimyos, solving crimes, and defeating other giant robots, he comes across Rob Schnieder(who just so happens to be a stapler). Rob influences him so much that he decides to become a stapler as well. Our protagonits sets off on another journey to become the best stapler ever. But little did he know........that bein a stapler........is harder than it looks. This manga will be called Derp dee Der. Tell me what you think plz :)
>>149
YOU FORGOT TO SAY DO NOT STEAL PLZ!
I AM SO GONNA STEAL THIS!
MUHOHAHAHAHAHAHA!
anyone want team up with me and make a comic book, BE mY WRITTER im a pertty good drawer
If u wanta team up with me e-mail me at
sakodi@yahoo.com
Heres my Story
The main character is a 16 old highschool student and is the son of a mastermind criminal that died for some reason (hes body wasnt found). The main character is a genius like his father but he is totaly different- he wants to do something grand with his life. The story starts when the main character is returning home he notices a creepy dude with tatoos on his face, a coat and a long magician hat geting out of his apartmant. When he calles out to him the guy ignores him... he runs after him and suddenly the guy stops and does something wierd with his hands and the main character fades. He wakes up in a room with the wierd guy and the guy tells him that he wants him to play chess with him (witch is the main characters strongest game) and the conditions are if the main character looses the wierd guy gives him his long living curse -> He has to kill a man every 12 hours. He looses the match and realises that hes pride has ruined him into his downfall... Now he ends up doing the same thing his father was and he geniusly figures how to kill them being unoticed and the police are after him(ofcoarse they dont know that its him). The main character becomes desperate and thats the first chapter :D
I alredy made this manga and copyrighted it but am looking for a publisher.
(c)Johnsonrights 2009
what do you think?
Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Helpers”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called the “Sacred Powers” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Helpers were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Helpers and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Helpers to reside called “Cronos” they were to stay in Cronos until they were called upon by the heavens. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble, this caused the people to believe the Helpers had gone. After the people gave up on the Helpers whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Helpers keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Cronos and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Cronos throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Cronos, later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Helpers are said to lose their powers once on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Helper for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Helper sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Helper named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Cronos to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Helpers to stop her, but in the fight with the helpers Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four sacred powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.
Summary:
Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Helpers”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called the “Sacred Powers” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Helpers were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Helpers and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Helpers to reside called “Cronos” they were to stay in Cronos until they were called upon by the heavens. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble, this caused the people to believe the Helpers had gone. After the people gave up on the Helpers whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Helpers keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Cronos and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Cronos throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Cronos, later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Helpers are said to lose their powers once on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Helper for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Helper sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Helper named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Cronos to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Helpers to stop her, but in the fight with the helpers Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four sacred powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.Ok it's just an idea but here you go.
People all over the world are dissapearing, not just any people, high class people, ones who have big names and are famous for their wealth and "Hospitality". A young boy, one day, actually happens to see someone vanish, shocked and overwhelmed, he calls the police. Nothing... No traces, no leads, no clues. Five days later the boy see another vanishment. This time he knows he's not just at the wrong place at the right time. Someone, whoever's doing this, wants him to see. Or so he thinks. At last the boy himself vanishes, when he reappears no one can see, hear, or touch him, because he isn't really there. He is now in the "dream world". As the story progresses we come to find that the mastermind behind it all is a 15 year-old boy. The main character's ancester. the ancester tells our hero that people were so cruel, as they still are, when he was alive. The ancester was famous, and held with high honor. but everyone around him planned to use him and dispose of him. He was sad and lonely, desperate to have someone, anyone, care about him. in his washed out state of mind he accidently created this dream like place, where time stood still, and the ancestor could never die. he then tells that he decided to use this "other world" to take the people who were planning on using him, and then he decided to take ALL the people he declared "Wrong for the world" Here. The main character finally understands what's been going on. He comes to the sad conclusion that his ancestor must die. because he has been passing judgement on the world. so at the end of the tale the main character lures his ancestor out of the Dream world, and with tears flowing he kills his ancestor. broken and ashamed our hero leaves his home (since everyone thinks him dead now) and sets off to a sweeter gentler life
The EndErm, well, I guess I can try my hand on the manga plot I was developing since 2007. Well hope I do well. Here I go.
Name: Zakuyaga Kai: A Triganian Epic (Zakuyaga Kai or ZK for short)
Type: Like a average manga? shrugs
Genre: Shonen, Action/Spiritual/Fantasy, Romance, Comedy
On the planet Trigan, which is approximately 753 light years away from Earth, a fierce war has engulfed the planet. Over 142.4 million Triganians have lost their lives during the bloody war. The war has been dragging on with continuous violence for more than 30 years. The war has been waged for many reasons, but the main reason is a Triganian by the name of Xetsu Yagami. Xetsu is a Zakuyaga or Triganian for 'Warrior of the enhanced soul'. He is known as the strongest Zakuyaga alive and is the leader of the powerful nation which is tearing the world apart in war. His nation is very powerful and very persuasive. This war has spawned many smaller civil wars all over Trigan. So far, only three nations are powerful enough to take the threat of Xetsu: the kingdom-republic of Satoriharu, the republic of the Independent States of Uzaki, and the warrior kingdom of Galla. Though these 3 nations are capable of fighting Xetsu, they are bitter enemies with one another, relying on quick-written treaties to have a shaky peace. Also, at the tremendous battle-win ratio of Xetsu's army, few are even certain that all three nations combined can defeat Xetsu. Hope is dying and there is nothing to keep it from doing so...
Meanwhile, on Earth, a Japanese boy named Kai Inoue is in the same state as Trigan. Known as the 'Great Loser of Karisawa High', Kai's reputation is based on his dark and pugnacious attitude, low test scores despite a high I.Q., and having the guts to take on a powerful school clique. Kai's life gets worse day by day, but he has a reason why his life is going to hell.
As Kai walks through a city park one regular afternoon, Kai ponders about his hellish life so far. Then, he is forced to fight again, but this time, not for himself. This sets off a chain reaction of events which soon turns Kai's life around. Kai is soon forced to become something he isn't in order to keep a world he doesn't care about, and himself, from ending. And as he fights against many foes, Kai eventually pieces together a puzzle that ties his, Earth's, and Trigan's past together....
So, eh, pretty okay huh? ^^ Thanks for reading. You can check out this project on Ariko-Syrus.deviantart.com and zengoraentertainment.deviantart.com.
Also, if you want to help with art and story planning, head to the links above. It will be well appreciated. ^^
Zakuyaga Kai (c)2009 Zengora Entertainment
Story by Marcus Zengora, Christopher Paige
All rights reserved
Name- Forest Child
Genre- Fantasy (maybe im not sure)
If your wondering about the name of the manga the main characters name is Moriko which means forset child.
This story is about 14 year old Moriko who lives out in the country. There is a forest near her home where she spends most of her time. Everything is great until a fire burns down the forest, destroys her house, and kills both of her parents. She is then sent to live with her aunt (who doesn’t live very far away so she can still walk back to where her house was), but is so upset about losing everything that she won’t to talk to anyone and stays locked in her room. When Moriko finally summons the courage to go back to her old home she meets a kitsune (Japanese fox spirit) in the ruined woods. It asks her to help rebuild the forest. She also meets other forest spirits that ask the same thing. At first she refuses saying that she has suffered from the fire too and has no reason to help them. Then she meets the spirit of a boy who died in the forest and he finally convinces her to agree with the kitsune’s request. She is then given the power to bring things to life. The rest of the story will be about how they rebuid the forest. They might also have to deal with other evil spirits left from the fire that want the woods to remain as a pile of ashes.
Im still working out the details. Sorry if is sucked. But if you did like it please don’t steal my idea.
DUDE OMG THAT IS SO WEIRD!!!! okay my name is Madison and I live in the country right next to a forest where I spend most of my time....
112: that sounds really cute! i would totally watch that!! ^^
Name - None
Genre - Shonen, Action, Comedy
Plot
An american, college professor, Evan Wilson, spends most of his spare time working on a project that has been ridiculed by many of his colleagues. Wilson believes that everyone in the world has a spiritual counterpart that shares a similar frequency of life. Unfortunately for him, no one else agrees. After researching and developing a machine used to measure the frequency of a person's soul he finally succeeds and measure's the frequency of his own soul's energy, 245.6733458. Now all he has to do is find the person that shares his spiritual energy. Using his spirit radar, he hones the frequency to a man in Hiroshima, Japan, named Takahashi Kodama.
Here's where the adventure begins...
After finally arriving in Japan, he uses the portable radar to locate the man, Takahasi. He enters the room, only to find that his soul partner is about to be murdered by a gang of thugs. Fearing that if his partner who shares his soul frequency is killed, he would die as a result, he panics, giving Takahashi the opportunity to attack and kill all of the thugs. Much to Wilson's dismay, Takahashi is a resident tough-guy and national spy, wanted by the Yakuza and many Japanese officials. Wilson explains the situation and an odd partnership is born.
The rest of the manga follows the adventures of Evan Wilson and Takahashi Kodama as Wilson feels pressured to tag along on Takahashi's criminal activities and tries to change his outlook on life.
Thanks for reading!!
man, that sounds like a funny read wakai
you should get someone to draw it up for you.
Im an ok drawer and i dont mind drawing one of these i just cant choose which one to draw cause i like a couple of them like the DDR, Blake rose, and rainbow girls. OH and reaper but yea so people vite and i will draw
ok here is mine. iam not that confident in it so pls tell me what you think of it. and if you can pls give a suggestion for the title
Name: havent thought of it yet
genre: somewhere along Adventure, Action, Shounen,
There was a high school kid named Daichi who was a very bright man
with a great future he liked to study and dident care that much of
fighting and all that stuff but that all changed when his older sister was killed. He wanted revenge but dident know where to find him but since he couldent fight or anything he started going on a journey to practice different sorts of martial arts. After his journey he finds a lead for the man who killed his sister and he
finds him. But even after practicing all sorts of martial arts ıt still wasent enough to beat him. so he once again set on a journey to get his revenge.
thats it hope you like it
DDR & rainbow girls (thumbs up)
how bout some one shots i was thinking of something tragic where it ends in death of the main character and maybe a ride to the crazy home >:3 and since its a one shot it doesnt have much of a set up but i do have an idea of what it may be like
~genre: tagedy,angst,shounan ai (maybe),suspense,one shot
so far its about a kid who's very sick and is practically dying so his dad highers a house doctor to look after him (because the mom isnt to reliable hint-hint) and he and the doc have a fling or whatever and thats all i got but as u already know the kid dies but its very tragic how he dies (and its not from his illness either) X3
i havent really thought of their names yet i might just give them generic ones like bob or joe << >>
Ultimate HERO!
Written by: Jeremy Jackson
Plot: For millions of years the world was unable to prove life outside of Earth, but little did we know there is...and they are very aware of us. There are five different galaxies Earth is in the most distant, and we are also the weakest compared to the other galaxies. All five galaxies are attacked by evil, money hungry, murdering people known as “Space Pirates.” Space Pirates travel from galaxy to galaxy searching for valuable items. Space Pirates have special abilities and use Relics to enhance them, they search planets for more valuable ones and kill anyone who has them. There is a group who are assigned to protect the galaxies from these Pirates they are called the “Galactic Rangers”. Rangers have special abilities as well and use them to stop Space Pirates from destroying planets. Our story revolves around a Ranger in training his name is Kenji Tekeda. Kenji is a 12 year old GRIT(Galactic Ranger in Training) and is stuck in the shadow of his father Goro Tekeda who was the most famous and decorated Rangers in history. Kenji tries become a better Ranger than his father but is not a strong Ranger and is the only one on his planet with telekinesis which is said to be the weakest ability to have but Kenji is strong willed and does not give up easy and trains harder than anyone. Kenji begs his commanding officer to give him a protection job and is granted one, his planet to protect is Earth. Earth is the weakest planet going by special ability and Kenji is not very pleased with that but he is set to make the most of it and prove he is the best Ranger. After being sent to Earth he is set up to live in Japan with Yoko and Jiro Yamaguchi who are aware of the Rangers and Pirates, they show Kenji how to blend in with the children of Earth. Soon after Kenji makes two friends Shunsuke and Mika who live next door to the Yamaguchi family. One day after school Kenji and his friends are attacked by Space Pirates and Kenji must show his powers, but Kenji is no match for the Pirates and is defeated but is saved by a mysterious stranger with strong powers. The stranger says he was the former Galactic Ranger before Kenji and sends Kenji on a quest to become his student. Kenji is to find the “Sword of the Psychic” which holds special abilities for a Telekinetic user. Kenji finds the sword and finds the ultimate power in the galaxy, the sword transforms Kenji into a stronger, faster, smarter, and unmatched fighter. Kenji calls this his “Hero” form and uses it to become the strongest Ranger of all, but Pirates get wind of this new found power and now Kenji has every Space Pirate in the galaxies looking to take that sword from him,one of those Pirates is called Shinji and is said to be the strongest Pirate in the galaxies. Now Kenji must protect Earth, fight off evil Space Pirates, become the strongest Galactic Ranger to ever live and still have time to be a normal 12 year old kid in his life as the “Ultimate Hero”.
Ultimate HERO!
Written by: Jeremy Jackson
Plot: For millions of years the world was unable to prove life outside of Earth, but little did we know there is...and they are very aware of us. There are five different galaxies Earth is in the most distant, and we are also the weakest compared to the other galaxies. All five galaxies are attacked by evil, money hungry, murdering people known as “Space Pirates.” Space Pirates travel from galaxy to galaxy searching for valuable items. Space Pirates have special abilities and use Relics to enhance them, they search planets for more valuable ones and kill anyone who has them. There is a group who are assigned to protect the galaxies from these Pirates they are called the “Galactic Rangers”. Rangers have special abilities as well and use them to stop Space Pirates from destroying planets. Our story revolves around a Ranger in training his name is Kenji Tekeda. Kenji is a 12 year old GRIT(Galactic Ranger in Training) and is stuck in the shadow of his father Goro Tekeda who was the most famous and decorated Rangers in history. Kenji tries become a better Ranger than his father but is not a strong Ranger and is the only one on his planet with telekinesis which is said to be the weakest ability to have but Kenji is strong willed and does not give up easy and trains harder than anyone. Kenji begs his commanding officer to give him a protection job and is granted one, his planet to protect is Earth. Earth is the weakest planet going by special ability and Kenji is not very pleased with that but he is set to make the most of it and prove he is the best Ranger. After being sent to Earth he is set up to live in Japan with Yoko and Jiro Yamaguchi who are aware of the Rangers and Pirates, they show Kenji how to blend in with the children of Earth. Soon after Kenji makes two friends Shunsuke and Mika who live next door to the Yamaguchi family. One day after school Kenji and his friends are attacked by Space Pirates and Kenji must show his powers, but Kenji is no match for the Pirates and is defeated but is saved by a mysterious stranger with strong powers. The stranger says he was the former Galactic Ranger before Kenji and sends Kenji on a quest to become his student. Kenji is to find the “Sword of the Psychic” which holds special abilities for a Telekinetic user. Kenji finds the sword and finds the ultimate power in the galaxy, the sword transforms Kenji into a stronger, faster, smarter, and unmatched fighter. Kenji calls this his “Hero” form and uses it to become the strongest Ranger of all, but Pirates get wind of this new found power and now Kenji has every Space Pirate in the galaxies looking to take that sword from him,one of those Pirates is called Shinji and is said to be the strongest Pirate in the galaxies. Now Kenji must protect Earth, fight off evil Space Pirates, become the strongest Galactic Ranger to ever live and still have time to be a normal 12 year old kid in his life as the “Ultimate Hero”.
Hey I really like a lot of these ideas. If anyone's willing to try my art out for one please feel free to ask, and I'd gladly draw your characters for starters!!
sounds like a cool offer :3 i dont need help but id luv to see sum of ur art :D
I haven't put much on it lately, so don't judge too much of the work I have on there, but here's my deviantArt gallery:http://lheartcookies.deviantart.com/gallery/
I'm working on a few pictures, but I'd really like some challenges if anyone's interested.
coolness ill check em out :D
Title: Pandemic
Genre: Horror, Fighting, Shonen.
A mysterious virus is quickly spreading around the city that attacks the central nervous system of human beings. Basically it starts by rotting the flesh in order to weaken the immune system, then it moves into the nervous system in order to gain total control of the human body, thus having the body only function on primitive needs. Meaning that the only goal left is to just survive, and feed, and multiply (spread the disease.) The disease creates something similar to the effects of a zombie. Cities begin to fall as the pandemic quickly spreads. However there is hope: 2% of the Earth's population are not affected at all by this disease. It is unexplained.
In fact, those that are unaffected have the exact opposite effects. Ryan Mercer has always been strong. He was a hunter, who lived off the land with his wife. However his wife got very sick and succumbed to the disease, and the virus entered Ryan's body as well. He became sick with a fever, but overcame it the next day. The next morning he went to chop some firewood, when suddenly the tree began to fall on him. He tried to block his face, and noticed that the tree just sat on his elbows and he wasn't hurt. Not able to believe it, Ryan tried to test himself. Each time, he proved that he was in fact, slightly stronger. However, he didn't understand why. The next morning, Ryan decided to head down into the city to try to find supplies as well as others who weren't affected by the virus. Ryan stops into a store, and begins to wheel out a cart full of goods when suddenly a blur quickly moves in front of him, and items from his cart slowly begin to deplete. Ryan then reaches out to the blur, and stops it dead in its' tracks. It's just a highschool kid, wearing a track team T-shirt, with shorts.
Aaaaahh. can't finish, gotta get back to work. I'll write more later on.
lemme know what you think!
nice idea dude :D nuthen like a good ol-horror manga ^^ awesome setup for the story btw seems readable :3
There lies an apartment home in the heart of Tokyo; a lively place - one with warm, happy residents. At least, they were before the invasion and eventual dictatorship of Japan. The United States took complete control of the UN, and used the power granted to dictate every country in every continent. The response of those controlled was, of course, civil war. Japan was no different. People being shot dead every morning, afternoon, and night was commonplace; love couldn't exist. The cozy apartment home I mentioned before? Each resident was balancing upon a thin line of sanity, paranoia threatening to push them over the edge. Our hero and heroin - despite the state of extreme civil unrest - are in love.
This manga is based on that thin line finally snapping, and love's attempt at winning over insanity.
Bah, just made that up on the spot. Sucks, I know :/.
Hey all of my mangas need art work and I have already thought of how they all look just need the ability to draw. Would love help.
This is one I made up a long time ago my friends want to see it drawn but we all kinda suck at it.
It's called "The Killer Detective" name's not final but I like it. It's about a 15 year old boy named Hiroto Yamada nickname "Ace" because of his all around talent. He is a straight A student, star athlete pretty much perfect. His mom and dad both work in real estate and his brother works at a fast food place. Sounds normal right, not so, little does he know his mom, dad, and brother are 3 of the top assassins in the world. His whole life his parents have been training him to be a super assassin and he doesn't know it, he is enrolled in a private school but little do they know the school is for assassins , they teach only things assassins need to know. His two best friends are also future assassins, Yumi Matsumoto is almost as smart as Ace and is a master of of knife throwing, he and Yumi are in love but neither will admit it. His other friend is Mamoru Kobayashi, he is a whopper at 6'5" 320lbs and is just super strong, he isn't the sharpest tool in the shed but that's why he and Ace are friends. None of them suspect that their parents are molding them to be world class killers. Ace is like i said great at sports and has an IQ of 175 and he really loves detectives, he has dreams of being the best detective in the world for most of his life, to his parents dislike. Ace starts his own detective agency with his friends and tries to follow his dream. As if that wasn't enough the agency his family works for asks the family to assassinate a senators 2 day old daughter. The family refuses and the boss gets highly upset and orders the family do carry out this mission or they will be punished. Aces dads rival TAKESHI Fujimoto, who hates the family and want to see them dead, he has a son Nobu who is in the same school as Ace. Nobu shares the hatred and is always trying beat Ace at everything he does. He and his father accept the mission and succeeded and become the bosses new favorite assassins, and that leads the boss to question the loyalty of the family. The boss sees the family is not fully committed to the job so he plans to have them killed. Of course these being the best assassins in the world the kill the hitmen, the boss sends over 20 assassians they all fail. Takeshi successful in killing the mom, dad, and brother but Ace escapes only hours after figuring out his family's big secret, Ace and his friends combine their skill and form a plan to kill the people who did this.
The profiles for the family and Ace's friends would take a long time to explain so i'll just give you a sample.
The Father's code name is "Death Hand" he is the best hand to hand combat killer in the world.
Next the mother who's code name is "Silent Night" she is a Genius scientist who masters poisons and uses her good looks to lure her targets it to her trap.
The oldest son's code name is "Virus" he is the computer wiz and is one of the best marksmen in the world.
And last but not least Ace, what makes him so good is the fact that he has a almost mastered everyone in his family's abilities plus he has a great deductive ability.
That's my anime I would love to go into more detail but it's late. I believe in this manga/anime and my friends love it and i hope someone who can draw will contact me at greenranger504@yahoo.com . I NEED PICS!!!!!
>>172
Sorry, I have been busy at work guys! anyway, here's the last leg of the set up if you're still interested.
Pandemic Continuation:
Ryan then introduces himself, and tells the boy about his own special gifts. The kid, Troy Richards tells Ryan that he was a former state champ on the track team. he was a prospect for the Olympic track team as well. "I was walking in the city trying to find food, and if any of my friends made it. I seemed to have caught the attention of some infected, and they began to chase me. I started running, they were getting so close, and then all of a sudden I just ran faster and faster. Pretty soon I was already on the other side of the city." Ryan explained his story to the Troy, and they both began to realize that the virus really just enhances a persons own natural strengths. So now the Ryan and Troy set out together to find out if there are anymore survivors, or are they the only two left?
There you have it. My idea. Of course there's a whole lot more details and backstory. I've been working on this thing for like the past few months. I hope you guys think it's cool.
Four people meet up on a forum ( maybe even this one ) and after a long time chatting on the net, they decide to meet up. They decide they should get together at one of them and soon they meet in person. Each is expecting to have a great surprise on they day they meet, but soon, their hopes get crushed when they realize that what was online wasn't exactly real ( the truth, so to speak). They stick with it for about 2-3 days, trying to avoid any major conversation, until one of them cracks, and starts a fight with the other 3. The fight ends with everyone going home.
A week or two later, you can see them happily talking on the net again.
I'm not good with stories and i guess it's a bit hard to understand what i wanted to do with this story. You can copy it if you want, it's not like i'm a famous writer and i'll sew you :P
>>178
I sure hope you wont "sew" me, because that would hurt.
You meant "sue" right? lol
Flesh out your story a little more. You can always start by developing your characters, and letting their motives, and attitudes help shape how the story will progress.
Either than that, the premise of being internet buddies, and meeting up can be worked into something on a more.... larger scale?
>>178
That was a barebones basic idea for a story that could have easily been done thousands of times in thousands of different ways and still retain what you wrote. It's also obviously inspired by the Densha Otoko story, and would just be kept in its shadow if ever done. It's okay to do a quick summary of your idea(s), but the idea needs to be summarized enough so that it can't be easily reproduced without obvious copying - meaning it must be unique and with fairly good detail.
thank you for the comment,altough i'm not a writer your comment sorta helped me think things in a different way regarding my own work ( i'm a graphic artist but do not intend on being mangaka). Oh and Densha Otoko is the manga that got me on this forum, but i didn't really think of it when i wrote my own idea. What I wrote has inspiration in my personal life. ^_~
If I ever get a new idea, I hope mr. random manga otaku will comment on it again, even if it isn't manga :P
lol sorry for my english mistakes. I'm romanian and it's a bit hard for me to get the english spelling right. but thanks for pointing that out. ^_^
>>182
Hey, I'm glad to see you're open to critism; that's a good trait. I'm glad that it helped, and I'll definitely be around to comment on any piece of writing. I love reading/writing, so if you ever need critique or a beta, I'd be happy to do so. Sorry for being a bit redundant ;P.
This is one I made up a long time ago my friends want to see it drawn but we all kinda suck at it.
It's called "The Killer Detective" name's not final but I like it. It's about a 15 year old boy named Hiroto Yamada nickname "Ace" because of his all around talent. He is a straight A student, star athlete pretty much perfect. His mom and dad both work in real estate and his brother works at a fast food place. Sounds normal right, not so, little does he know his mom, dad, and brother are 3 of the top assassins in the world. His whole life his parents have been training him to be a super assassin and he doesn't know it, he is enrolled in a private school but little do they know the school is for assassins , they teach only things assassins need to know. His two best friends are also future assassins, Yumi Matsumoto is almost as smart as Ace and is a master of of knife throwing, he and Yumi are in love but neither will admit it. His other friend is Mamoru Kobayashi, he is a whopper at 6'5" 320lbs and is just super strong, he isn't the sharpest tool in the shed but that's why he and Ace are friends. None of them suspect that their parents are molding them to be world class killers. Ace is like i said great at sports and has an IQ of 175 and he really loves detectives, he has dreams of being the best detective in the world for most of his life, to his parents dislike. Ace starts his own detective agency with his friends and tries to follow his dream. As if that wasn't enough the agency his family works for asks the family to assassinate a senators 2 day old daughter. The family refuses and the boss gets highly upset and orders the family do carry out this mission or they will be punished. Aces dads rival TAKESHI Fujimoto, who hates the family and want to see them dead, he has a son Nobu who is in the same school as Ace. Nobu shares the hatred and is always trying beat Ace at everything he does. He and his father accept the mission and succeeded and become the bosses new favorite assassins, and that leads the boss to question the loyalty of the family. The boss sees the family is not fully committed to the job so he plans to have them killed. Of course these being the best assassins in the world the kill the hitmen, the boss sends over 20 assassians they all fail. Takeshi successful in killing the mom, dad, and brother but Ace escapes only hours after figuring out his family's big secret, Ace and his friends combine their skill and form a plan to kill the people who did this.
The profiles for the family and Ace's friends would take a long time to explain so i'll just give you a sample.
The Father's code name is "Death Hand" he is the best hand to hand combat killer in the world.
Next the mother who's code name is "Silent Night" she is a Genius scientist who masters poisons and uses her good looks to lure her targets it to her trap.
The oldest son's code name is "Virus" he is the computer wiz and is one of the best marksmen in the world.
And last but not least Ace, what makes him so good is the fact that he has a almost mastered everyone in his family's abilities plus he has a great deductive ability.
That's my anime I would love to go into more detail but it's late. I believe in this manga/anime and my friends love it and i hope someone who can draw will contact me at greenranger504@yahoo.com . I NEED PICS!!!!!
Hey all of my mangas need art work and I have already thought of how they all look just need the ability to draw. Would love help.
176 Name: Jeremy : 2009-08-04 07:08 ID:0lIA2Hf8 [Del]
This is one I made up a long time ago my friends want to see it drawn but we all kinda suck at it.
It's called "The Killer Detective" name's not final but I like it. It's about a 15 year old boy named Hiroto Yamada nickname "Ace" because of his all around talent. He is a straight A student, star athlete pretty much perfect. His mom and dad both work in real estate and his brother works at a fast food place. Sounds normal right, not so, little does he know his mom, dad, and brother are 3 of the top assassins in the world. His whole life his parents have been training him to be a super assassin and he doesn't know it, he is enrolled in a private school but little do they know the school is for assassins , they teach only things assassins need to know. His two best friends are also future assassins, Yumi Matsumoto is almost as smart as Ace and is a master of of knife throwing, he and Yumi are in love but neither will admit it. His other friend is Mamoru Kobayashi, he is a whopper at 6'5" 320lbs and is just super strong, he isn't the sharpest tool in the shed but that's why he and Ace are friends. None of them suspect that their parents are molding them to be world class killers. Ace is like i said great at sports and has an IQ of 175 and he really loves detectives, he has dreams of being the best detective in the world for most of his life, to his parents dislike. Ace starts his own detective agency with his friends and tries to follow his dream. As if that wasn't enough the agency his family works for asks the family to assassinate a senators 2 day old daughter. The family refuses and the boss gets highly upset and orders the family do carry out this mission or they will be punished. Aces dads rival TAKESHI Fujimoto, who hates the family and want to see them dead, he has a son Nobu who is in the same school as Ace. Nobu shares the hatred and is always trying beat Ace at everything he does. He and his father accept the mission and succeeded and become the bosses new favorite assassins, and that leads the boss to question the loyalty of the family. The boss sees the family is not fully committed to the job so he plans to have them killed. Of course these being the best assassins in the world the kill the hitmen, the boss sends over 20 assassians they all fail. Takeshi successful in killing the mom, dad, and brother but Ace escapes only hours after figuring out his family's big secret, Ace and his friends combine their skill and form a plan to kill the people who did this.
The profiles for the family and Ace's friends would take a long time to explain so i'll just give you a sample.
The Father's code name is "Death Hand" he is the best hand to hand combat killer in the world.
Next the mother who's code name is "Silent Night" she is a Genius scientist who masters poisons and uses her good looks to lure her targets it to her trap.
The oldest son's code name is "Virus" he is the computer wiz and is one of the best marksmen in the world.
And last but not least Ace, what makes him so good is the fact that he has a almost mastered everyone in his family's abilities plus he has a great deductive ability.
That's my anime I would love to go into more detail but it's late. I believe in this manga/anime and my friends love it and i hope someone who can draw will contact me at greenranger504@yahoo.com . I NEED PICS!!!!!
Hello xD, am Roxxie blah blah yeh xD I been drawing things/learning from myself to draw manag ever since i was 8 and read my first manga about YuGiOh (XDD) I started to draw about my manga for 1 year now and came to this site to post its plot :3 I love drawing x3 its whole story is in my lil red notebook e.o
Manga Name: DeathSoul
Genres: Violence, Mysterious,Comdey, Action
Theme: Fighting,school etc e.o
Epsiode(s):30 (i drew the epsiodes in my notebook with manga pages)
Plot Summary:
Aiko Amaya is a young girl, when her village gets raided by demons. She losses everything and lost herself. She then feels lonely and like she dosen't belong. While travleing she gets killed by demons that ambushed her. After then she died she lost everything. Yet she was still alive, a dark spirit comes to her dead body. Says that she will give her a new life to start again and forget the past. Unless she gives her soul away and works for her when needed. Aiko trapped in emotional problems then acepts. When Aiko woke up, a strange girl (Reika) comes and helps Aiko. But Aiko dosen't remeber, Reika then tells Aiko to join a fighting school near by that Reika also gose. Now Aiko lives with Reika, she grew to like her as a sister. While Aiko living with Reika she over hears about,that if you kill an undeaftable person who lives in the skies that he/she(?) grants you any wish, gold and power over the skies. Aiko then gets an headache and decide she has to go to free her soul, she dosen't remeber much but she hears something in her that she is not a living human.
Theres more but i just want to post the plot. xD so what you think? :3
Copyrights@ONSmanga (XD)
>>186
Generic plot #13085356. Also horrible writing skills.
sorry if my manga is horrible x.x and the reason why i didnt write so good waz because i randomly found this website and thought writting and stuff didn't matter but its okay ill just try to improve it abit e.o
thanks~
>>188
Don't put 'z' instead of 's'. And use a spellcheck.
>>186
I'm gonna rewrite your plot summary 'cause I'm bored. Warning: I have no experience writing plot summaries.
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Aiko Amaya is a girl who has just died. As she passes into the afterlife, she meets SPIRIT, who introduces himself as a spirit with regrets. He tells her that he needs her and that he will send an assistant to help her. Before Aiko can protest, SPIRIT embeds a piece of himself within her and returns her to the real world.
Aiko awakens next to a girl named Reika, who also has a portion of SPIRIT within her. She tells Aiko that SPIRIT is using their bodies as vessels so he can exact revenge on ANTAGONIST, who sealed his soul away. She continues to explain that SPIRIT can communicate with them and has granted them certain abilities at the cost of their sanity.
Right then, ANTAGONIST's minions attack them, forcing Reika to take Aiko to safety. Reika uses her powers to slow them down and after they escape, Aiko watches insanity take a hold upon Reika.
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Beware, this may also be a generic plot.
um.. thanks! :D sorry you didn't have to do that, but thanks now i can have a plot to bulid a story on. You said it better than me hehe.
>>190
Written like that, it's a LOT better.
Still will probably end up as generic shonen, but there is more potential. Also I could read it without gouging my eyes out afterwards.
>>191
I shortened Aiko's history to that of a girl who "just died" because I didn't see how the raid on her village and her death by the hand of demons had to do with the plot. I also avoided the fighting school concept because I felt that was a bit too generic.
Anyhow, you're welcome. I guess I'll stay here and rewrite plot summaries for shits and giggles.
>>192
Thank you. I'm glad to hear that my writing doesn't make people keel over and die.
These are all some good ideas.
Prologue: Power is the only concept in the world that is absolute. It doesn’t discriminate against anyone. There are those who have it and those who don’t. It exists in many forms and can be used in many different ways. The power to love, the power to save, the power to lead, and even the power to lie are all different forms. It can mean strength, or dominion over something. It is everywhere, within everyone and found in everything. However it has one law, one rule, one truth that can never be avoided. "Power may change but it never ever dies."
Chapter 1
DreamA deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals. From the horizon a frantic gentleman rushes towards a young boy. “Your majesty it is urgent that you come to the meeting at once” he said. The boy turned around and looked perplexed. “Is it already time for such a thing?” he asked with a tone of incredulity. “Very well” he sighed, “If I must go then I shall go at once” he said. The hallway was exquisite made by an otherworldly material that resembled marble. The halls gave off a luxurious shine as if to haughtily show of their beauty. The young boy entered an enormous room filled to the rim with people. Everyone present gave off an aura of diligence and refinement. “Ahh the young prince has arrived, excellent most excellent.” An elderly man approached the boy with a look of excitement on his face. He had a great beard that reached up to his knees, and a smile that gave off the happiness of a fulfilled life. “Come now my young prince the meeting is about to begin” he said to the prince. “Tell me why everyone has gathered all of a sudden?” he asked the old man. “There has been rumor of an intruder amongst the senate and everyone is highly alarmed.” “Your father and the other rulers are all here as well my prince.” “My father is here as well!” the prince exclaimed. “Yes I can somewhat see him, darn I shouldn’t have arrived so late” said the prince. In the distance there was a table with a group of people sitting around it. The one the prince called father was standing and speaking to the entire audience. “I can’t quite see his face” the prince said. “You need not see his face in order to listen to what he has to say my prince” the old man said. “You are correct, ah he’s speaking” said the prince. The man took a glance at everyone present cleared his throat and with a booming voice began to speak.
If anyone like this let me know and I may give the plot to my story. Also since it's the first chapter I will be going back to it and doing some tweaking and corrections. Anyway I wrote it because I can't draw and Im actually looking for some artists. Well enjoy.
A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals. From the horizon a frantic gentleman rushes towards a young boy. “Your majesty it is urgent that you come to the meeting at once” he said. The boy turned around and looked perplexed. “Is it already time for such a thing?” he asked with a tone of incredulity. “Very well” he sighed, “If I must go then I shall go at once” he said. The hallway was exquisite made by an otherworldly material that resembled marble. The halls gave off a luxurious shine as if to haughtily show of their beauty. The young boy entered an enormous room filled to the rim with people. Everyone present gave off an aura of diligence and refinement. “Ahh the young prince has arrived, excellent most excellent.” An elderly man approached the boy with a look of excitement on his face. He had a great beard that reached up to his knees, and a smile that gave off the happiness of a fulfilled life. “Come now my young prince the meeting is about to begin” he said to the prince. “Tell me why everyone has gathered all of a sudden?” he asked the old man. “There has been rumor of an intruder amongst the senate and everyone is highly alarmed.” “Your father and the other rulers are all here as well my prince.” “My father is here as well!” the prince exclaimed. “Yes I can somewhat see him, darn I shouldn’t have arrived so late” said the prince. In the distance there was a table with a group of people sitting around it. The one the prince called father was standing and speaking to the entire audience. “I can’t quite see his face” the prince said. “You need not see his face in order to listen to what he has to say my prince” the old man said. “You are correct, ah he’s speaking” said the prince. The man took a glance at everyone present cleared his throat and with a booming voice began to speak.
>>196
First and foremost, it needs more paragraphs. I groan when I realize I have to read one huge chunk of words.
It seems that you're writing the beginning chapter of a short story instead of giving a brief overview of what happens in the plot, so I'll review your excerpt as if you were writing fiction.
> A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals.
The transition between the silence and the noise in the environment is confusing me. Dunno why you're using asterisks there, but maybe there's a better way you can segue into the plot. Also, since these are the first words of the story, make sure you hook your readers' attention during the first sentence. Okay fine, maybe that's difficult, but the point is that you should make sure that someone picking up this story won't drop it after reading the first paragraph.
> The hallway was exquisite made by an otherworldly material that resembled marble.
Now that I think about it, at this point I have no idea where the boy and the gentleman are. Well, I know the boy is sleeping, and guessing from how he appears to be part of royalty, he's probably sleeping in a fancy bedroom of some sort. However, one can't be so sure--after all, he could be a runaway prince or one who has been captured. The point is that you should introduce the setting to the reader so she has a basic understanding of what's going on.
Also, what hallway? Did you assume that the reader knew the characters were in a house or mansion?
> “Ahh the young prince has arrived, excellent most excellent.”
Mm. Floating quotations. I'm curious, who said this? The people in the room? Some disembodied voice?
> “There has been rumor of an intruder amongst the senate and everyone is highly alarmed.” “Your father and the other rulers are all here as well my prince.”
I believe the old man said both of these lines, so there is no need for his words to be placed between two sets of quotation marks, which could confuse the reader. However, they could be said by two different people, in which case you would need to show or make clear who said which line.
> “My father is here as well!” the prince exclaimed. “Yes I can somewhat see him, darn I shouldn’t have arrived so late” said the prince.
Minor point, but isn't mentioning twice that the prince is saying this redundant?
In general, it seems like an interesting idea so far, but make sure you separate events into paragraphs, add commas where appropriate, and ensure that the reader doesn't lose sight of the plot. Keep it up, mate.
i can draw realy well, if anyone wants to email me some script ideas ill draw it up, im kinda slow, i can pump out around a page a week. im still at school, but if the project catches my imagination then ill do the art.
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>>197 Your absolutely right about everything. First of all I just want to say that this isn't really the plot or anything. It's basically supposed to be the first chapter. I wrote most of it down. I understand that it's a bit confusing due to not making it into paragraphs but Ill explain.
A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals. Well basically here it doesn't explain much which I felt was kinda the point. Here a guy is sleeping and he's having a dream. In the real world it's all quiet while in his dream it's all loud. I know I should have organized it better.
Now that I think about it, at this point I have no idea where the boy and the gentleman are. Well, I know the boy is sleeping, and guessing from how he appears to be part of royalty, he's probably sleeping in a fancy bedroom of some sort. However, one can't be so sure--after all, he could be a runaway prince or one who has been captured. The point is that you should introduce the setting to the reader so she has a basic understanding of what's going on.
The boy/guy I was talking about is sleeping and having a dream. To put it simply he's dreaming that he's royalty. I didn't really go into detail about the surroundings because as I wrote this I was picturing everything. Of course I realize I should have explained more for the sake of the reader.
As for everything else that had issues well those were grammer errors and such. Like I said I pictured this to be like the first chapter of a manga so I didn't go into detail. Also this was just like a sloppy copy with me just trying to get an idea of what the first chapter for this story should be like. Anyway enough of me ranting, if you'd like I could put up the plot instead. It's just that I know from experience that ppl can and will steal ideas.
>>199
I see. It's sorta hard to tell since I'm not seeing pictures and that these notes are mostly for your benefit, but that makes sense. I expected something brief, like a paragraph or two about the first chapter, but whatever floats your boat.
It's up to you if you want to put the plot up, but the first chapter seems fine so far.
Well here goes nothing my plot for the manga?story I want to create.
Name:Imperium
Genre:Shounen,Action,Comedy,Sci-fi,Fantasy
Before the planet Earth ever existed there was a planet filled with beings with unimaginable power. This planet was known as Imperium. Ok the plot goes like this. On earth there's a guy named Mitsukai Ametsuchi who lives a pretty average life. One day he has a weird dream in which he's royalty of some sort. In his dream he gets attacked by a person who looks exactly like him.
Next day at school he gets into a fight with the "dumbasses." He ends up getting really angry and somehow summons great strength and speed. He beats the cr%$#@ out of these guys and people panic and call the police. Amidst the chaos he tries to leave the school. Suddenly he's attacked by a figure in the sky. He confronts the figure and it turns out it's a person who looks just like him.
The figure introduces himself as Akumaru Ikijigoku. He tells him that he is actually an Imperian. A being from the planet Imperium the strongest planet in the universe. Akumaru fights Mitsukai and Mitsukai gets owned. Akumaru spares him feeling he's too weak. He decides to tell him that he's also really a prince form the planet and that the other princes and princesses are on earth as well. Akumaru tells him that he will wait until Mitsukai's Potestas develops more before he decides to kill him.
Now Mitsukai has to find a way to go Imperium and find out what it is, find out who that look alike it, find the other so called Princes and princesses, and find out who he really is...
Well that's only a slight summary there's much much more and I've got plenty more plot developed. If there are any artists willing to help me please do!!
My story is about about a young man named Shin Toriyama. He is an above average student that goes to a school known as Tessho Acadamey. He's popular with the girls, One of the smartest in school and is Captain of the swim team. He thinks his life is boring and that nothing will change that. Until one day he sees this girl who's beauty to him is undefinable. He finds out that she goes to his school, but she isn't alone. When she gets there she is followed by a twin sister, which makes the story get better. As he thinks he's falling in love with the quiet, shy, and graceful one, he's slowly falling for the hyper, energetic and more chaotic one.
Taekwon V vs. Japanese Stereotypes
Is this mazinger Z?
The South Korean is a thief.
Shameful people.
here is my idea hope its not bad
there is a boy named fai he is prounced cursed since a war happened the day he was born. umm he has the ability to unlock 95% of his mind givin him the ability to turn anything into a wepon
here is another idea i had hope its good
it is a story about a box not just any box but its a magic box that holds the place called the event horizn. the wried thing about the story is the all powerfull box ends up in a mental instatuite for trouble teens.
if you want to add ideas i would be hounered
arts also apprecieted
thanxz>>205
plz tell us moar sounds so interesting have my cyber babies penis penis penis
i like the first one by f33 th3 fun :D it sounds really cool luv to hear more ^^ and if you'd like i could try sketching some echaracters for your story too :3
>>201
This is pretty good. You say you have more of a plot can you write more of it down?? It looks interesting.
Do you even know what an event horizon is?
Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Halos”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called “The Jouzo 4” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Halos were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Halos and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Halos to reside called “Oozora ” they were to stay in Oozora until they were called upon by the Gods. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble and fight off evil spirits, this caused the people to believe the Halos had gone. After the people gave up on the Halos whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Halos keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Oozora and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Oozora throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Oozora , later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Halos are said to lose their powers after being on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Halo for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Halo sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Halo named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Oozora to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Halos to stop her, but in the fight with the halos Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four Jouzo powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.
>>210
Paragraphs, my friend.
email me sweet kind manga ideas! PLZ!!! Kat0629@kidmail.net
>>201
Hmm Im not too sure on this one but it does look like it has potential. If I could draw I'd give you a hand but I can't draw to save my life. Maybe some of my artistic friends may help. Anyway it does seem like it can go somewhere.
#149 sounds creepy!
Well, it's not exactly a manga plot idea, but I'm designing a RPG that will have a branching storyline and multiple routes/endings. So instead, I'll post the plot that I've come up with for my RPG.
Please note that this plot is still early in development, and many things are not yet clear or planned.
The main characters are going to be Linus Torvalds, and Victor Wooten.
The story is quite long and complicated, but the basic idea is that at the beginning, Linus, Victor, and Deven Gallo are fighting to stop government plans to use alien DNA to create an army of half-human, half alien soldiers, which would be used to gain total control of the earth. But unknown to Linus and Victor, Deven Gallo has his own agenda. His lust for power is stronger than even the most corrupted government officials - he wants to be all-powerful, but just commanding the earth isn't enough. He wants to obtain the alien DNA and research information so that he can transform himself into an ultimate being.
Shortly after the beginning of the game, Deven's true motives are revealed and he leaves the group, and you end up fighting him at various points in the game.
As the story progresses in the game, Deven, obsessed with obtaining ultimate strength, goes through several intermediate stages of transformation. Every time he transforms, his name changes.
He starts as 'Deven Gallo', then 'Slick Deven Gallo', then 'Deven Denis', then 'Slick Denis', then 'Slick Denis 4000', and at the end of the game (at least in some of the routes of the storyline), he reaches his ultimate form, 'The Golden Man Denis', where he is the game's final boss.
Some other twists in the story line is that some years before the events in the story occur, an alien comes to earth and has a child with a human woman. That child is Linus Torvalds - although he doesn't know it until somewhere half into the story. Of course, his alien heritage will give him special abilities that a normal human wouldn't have. And when the government people and Deven Gallo find out about it, they'll be interested in capturing him or stealing a DNA sample from him for study and analysis or something.
In one of the story routes, you'd play from the perspective of Victor Wooten. In that route, Linus will lose control of his evil side, and become a main badguy character. After turning evil, he fights and mortally wounds Victor, stealing his heart (in order to activate his latent alien abilties which require two hearts to use). Victor's dying body is discovered by the fantastic Doctor Penis, who takes him back to his laboratory. He's able to save Victor's life by replacing his heart with a new experimental unit, the X unit. It gives Victor new abilities and a higher HP/MP total, and stuff. Victor laments over 'no longer being human', and wants to get revenge over Linus (but at the very end of the game, forgives him). He goes to stop the government, Deven Gallo, and Linus, all by himself (with some help from various different characters along the way).
During key storyline events, the X unit would gain a level as it grows more attached to Victor's body. Each time this happens, you would gain a new class of abilities.
Continued in the next post...
(continued from previous post)
The characters I've got so far:
Linus Torvalds (a computer programmer who works for a government project. His curiosity in what he's been asked to work on gets the better of him, and he gains access to secret files on the project. What he finds horrifies him, and he begins to fight against the government to stop the project)
Victor Wooten (a bass player who hears rumors of a terrible government project. He tries to gain information, the government notice this and send him to jail, where he meets Linus and Deven Gallo. Together they break out and organize their fight against the government)
The fantastic Doctor Penis (a mad professor who tries to do the right thing, but often makes mistakes. After years of research, he has developed an experimental new kind of technology, X technology, which can enhance the abilities of living organisms. He knows about the government project, but is powerless to stop it, until he meets Victor Wooten...)
Deven Gallo (AKA Slick Deven Gallo, Deven Denis, Slick Denis, Slick Denis 4000, The Golden Man Denis) (a young man from America. He is a genius. At first he fights alongside you, but once his true motives are revealed he becomes the main villain of the game. He is obsessed with power, and wants to become an ultimate being. His goal is to obtain the alien DNA, which he would use to transform himself into an ultimate being. Until he obtains it, he can only augment his body using his own technology that he's developed.)
Good Deven Gallo (Deven Gallo from an alternate dimension. He has come to stop the government projects and the evil Deven Gallo, who could threaten all existence. He joins Victor and Linus at some point to fight. He's not as strong as evil Deven Gallo, but he has a special feature - when he was younger, his penis was injured and had to be replaced with a prosthetic penis. This penis works like a normal penis, but it absorbs energy. Whenever an enemy attacks Deven, his penis absorbs some of the energy of the attack, especially if it was an electric or special attack. Once the penis energy is maxed out, it's released in a special move, called 'Deven Gallo's penis'. As Deven's level increases, the amount of energy that his penis stores increases, but it also takes longer to charge up as well.)
The government officials (I haven't a clear idea yet, but probably someone like the president of the USA, prime minister of the UK, etc etc. Power hungry politicians who want to rule the world, and will do anything to gain control)
Prototype soldiers (prototype alien-human hybrids which Linus encounters when he begins spying into the project he's working on. This would probably be the first boss of the game or something.)
I had a good one, but it turns out it was already done. It's called Welcome to the NHK.
I love how there are so many mean, mean people are here. Is it that hard tosay something nicely? Jeez...
ok person this is my theme and dont copy it because i am currtelny making it
Name unknow to u ok?
Ok this girl (main Character) moved from a peaceful town somewhere in jappan then suddnely moves to tokoyo.
Its the first day of school she just moved into her new house and everything she doesnt know no one in toyoko at all to! So her first day of school is the worst day in her life she cant make a single friend for some reason? (i dont know im not going intill detail why!) Well the point is she goes home and she's a egg and her room on her bed (btw the room is finsih being done)
(The egg is a huge egg bout as big as soccer ball) She freaks out to then The egg moves around then boom it hatches into a cat. She screames scared the cat and the cat bite's her and runs out of her room. She faints and when she wakes up she's in a heroline custom she. She has special powers like a cat and for some reason she can talk to cats she deciede she will become a super hero just like the books but is it easy like she thought??? Well that's it so Far if i fine out u copyed my idea dont think i wont sue u cause i will watch me!!!
Why does everyone have a wapanese story? What's so hard about writing a western graphic novel, it's like you lived in Tokyo, or in rural Japan, it's not like you know how people live there everything you know is from what you've read in mangas.
what r u talking about i lived there for 4 years???
I know lots of things about it to and im asain bet that baka!
o my b that is a good point and plus u can do reserach of what u dont know even some things about it to! :]
Sorry i didnt read that closely D:
Hayoh this is a manga plot i had in a dreem i once had i havent finished it but its good here is the plot conversation i had with one of my best chatroom friends
Kinjagotoru Hituzowa, the antagonest
Nelseru Kudekade, the hero
Mituziga Hittero, the one everyone loves
Hinjero Nitokowa, booth, good and evil, but leaning more towards evil
unknown15 (11:10:32 PM): i suppose
nelseru (11:10:36 PM): well ok
nelseru (11:13:43 PM): nelseru grows up with Mituziga and is a dear friend to her well after a fre years someone visits their town the visitors name is Kinjagotoru Hituzowa (the bad guy) at the time he is 16 of age and he sees her and he instantly falls in love so he returns to his homeland where he later sends 1 of the war bosses after her to clame her as his
unknown15 (11:14:49 PM): ah..i see
unknown15 (11:15:00 PM): it truly is gonna be a love triangle then
unknown15 (11:15:06 PM): will the girl not like him though? or will she?
nelseru (11:16:28 PM): well nelseru dosent like thiss cause they tak her rather roughly killing people, so nelseru trys to stop him, defeats him with the sword his father gave him and rescues her he questions the war boss about who send him and by honer dictates him to tell nelseru the truth and he tells him that kinjagotoru sent him and that he wants her for som reason
nelseru (11:19:48 PM): nelseru takes it upon himself to be her bodygard but he soon thinks that is a mestake when Mituziga tells him that she wants to see kinjagotoru and give him a pice of her mind, nelseru has to fight many battles up to a point where he visits a town whuch was ramsacked by his 2nd warboss ( a berzerker)
unknown15 (11:20:31 PM): oh, i see continue, sounds rather good
unknown15 (11:20:43 PM): haha to be honest sounds like you could even make a video game out of this or something @.@
nelseru (11:20:59 PM): i got the idea with a dreem i had
Type below to start a chat with Unknown15 (idle for 4 mins).
nelseru (11:26:24 PM): wtf
nelseru (11:26:44 PM): i was tipeing and it all dissipeared
unknown15 (11:28:39 PM): haha, oh and sorry i was afk for a moment
unknown15 (11:30:21 PM): now then, will any characters die?
unknown15 (11:30:28 PM): besides like the bad guys pawns and whatever
unknown15 (11:30:34 PM): will like any good guys die?
nelseru (11:30:46 PM): the second war boss dies painfully
unknown15 (11:31:14 PM): oh i see
nelseru (11:31:17 PM): the third is blasted out of exsistance
unknown15 (11:31:19 PM): and how exactly does he die
unknown15 (11:31:31 PM): oh and are any of these war bosses gonna be female?
unknown15 (11:31:37 PM): id be nice to atleast have 1 female one
nelseru (11:31:43 PM): the last one
nelseru (11:32:02 PM): the strongest of teh warbosses considered the leader
nelseru (11:32:23 PM): sorta like the second to last boss in a game
unknown15 (11:33:01 PM): ah, i see
nelseru (11:33:10 PM): there is 2 girls and idk how many boys
nelseru (11:33:57 PM): Nelseru and his partner enter thiss town and see that everyone was dead and mangled he is shocked by how the bodys where placed in a manner whuch said that Nelseru and Mituziga are wanted, as soon as he finished reading thiss outloud a person laying beside a building presumed dead gits up and puts a sword to nelserus neck
nelseru (11:36:40 PM): he questions nelseru and finds out that he is not the derect cause of the massacure but was a cause the same and is deeply enraged (not derectly at nelseru but takes it out on nelseru by fighting him [nelseru lets him win])
unknown15 (11:37:27 PM): ah jake, this is getting really good honestly
unknown15 (11:37:30 PM): like DONT TELL ME ANYMORE
unknown15 (11:37:34 PM): ill just wait till the manga =_=
nelseru (11:37:37 PM): ok
unknown15 (11:37:42 PM): i dont wanna know everything before it all starts ~_~
unknown15 (11:37:49 PM): but that sounds really really really good so far though
nelseru (11:37:57 PM): ty
Hayoh this is a manga plot i had in a dreem i once had i havent finished it but its good here is the plot conversation i had with one of my best chatroom friends
Kinjagotoru Hituzowa, the antagonest
Nelseru Kudekade, the hero
Mituziga Hittero, the one everyone loves
Hinjero Nitokowa, booth, good and evil, but leaning more towards evil
unknown15 (11:10:32 PM): i suppose
nelseru (11:10:36 PM): well ok
nelseru (11:13:43 PM): nelseru grows up with Mituziga and is a dear friend to her well after a fre years someone visits their town the visitors name is Kinjagotoru Hituzowa (the bad guy) at the time he is 16 of age and he sees her and he instantly falls in love so he returns to his homeland where he later sends 1 of the war bosses after her to clame her as his
unknown15 (11:14:49 PM): ah..i see
unknown15 (11:15:00 PM): it truly is gonna be a love triangle then
unknown15 (11:15:06 PM): will the girl not like him though? or will she?
nelseru (11:16:28 PM): well nelseru dosent like thiss cause they tak her rather roughly killing people, so nelseru trys to stop him, defeats him with the sword his father gave him and rescues her he questions the war boss about who send him and by honer dictates him to tell nelseru the truth and he tells him that kinjagotoru sent him and that he wants her for som reason
nelseru (11:19:48 PM): nelseru takes it upon himself to be her bodygard but he soon thinks that is a mestake when Mituziga tells him that she wants to see kinjagotoru and give him a pice of her mind, nelseru has to fight many battles up to a point where he visits a town whuch was ramsacked by his 2nd warboss ( a berzerker)
unknown15 (11:20:31 PM): oh, i see continue, sounds rather good
unknown15 (11:20:43 PM): haha to be honest sounds like you could even make a video game out of this or something @.@
nelseru (11:20:59 PM): i got the idea with a dreem i had
Type below to start a chat with Unknown15 (idle for 4 mins).
nelseru (11:26:24 PM): wtf
nelseru (11:26:44 PM): i was tipeing and it all dissipeared
unknown15 (11:28:39 PM): haha, oh and sorry i was afk for a moment
unknown15 (11:30:21 PM): now then, will any characters die?
unknown15 (11:30:28 PM): besides like the bad guys pawns and whatever
unknown15 (11:30:34 PM): will like any good guys die?
nelseru (11:30:46 PM): the second war boss dies painfully
unknown15 (11:31:14 PM): oh i see
nelseru (11:31:17 PM): the third is blasted out of exsistance
unknown15 (11:31:19 PM): and how exactly does he die
unknown15 (11:31:31 PM): oh and are any of these war bosses gonna be female?
unknown15 (11:31:37 PM): id be nice to atleast have 1 female one
nelseru (11:31:43 PM): the last one
nelseru (11:32:02 PM): the strongest of teh warbosses considered the leader
nelseru (11:32:23 PM): sorta like the second to last boss in a game
unknown15 (11:33:01 PM): ah, i see
nelseru (11:33:10 PM): there is 2 girls and idk how many boys
nelseru (11:33:57 PM): Nelseru and his partner enter thiss town and see that everyone was dead and mangled he is shocked by how the bodys where placed in a manner whuch said that Nelseru and Mituziga are wanted, as soon as he finished reading thiss outloud a person laying beside a building presumed dead gits up and puts a sword to nelserus neck
nelseru (11:36:40 PM): he questions nelseru and finds out that he is not the derect cause of the massacure but was a cause the same and is deeply enraged (not derectly at nelseru but takes it out on nelseru by fighting him [nelseru lets him win])
unknown15 (11:37:27 PM): ah jake, this is getting really good honestly
unknown15 (11:37:30 PM): like DONT TELL ME ANYMORE
unknown15 (11:37:34 PM): ill just wait till the manga =_=
nelseru (11:37:37 PM): ok
unknown15 (11:37:42 PM): i dont wanna know everything before it all starts ~_~
unknown15 (11:37:49 PM): but that sounds really really really good so far though
nelseru (11:37:57 PM): ty
i got some big ideas so far, but you want an advice?, if we take a look at famous things like harry potter, you will be surely asking yourself .....how shed came with that idea?, and the answer my friend is reading books, yeah its surely boring, but u will get more material and you can backup your ideas!, recently i came up with a sensational idea, of course i want that to transform into an anime. Well i should give my e-mail to someone who is interested but i cant, i dont have an alternative e-mail and i dont want to make one, until i see someone ask for it, clearly no one will do that, so i hope i helped and sorry if my english sux, my native language is spanish.
omg the ddr one is amazing
awesum stories!!!
I'm still developing this plot. I have no intention of publishing it, I just want it to help develop my writing/drawing skills.
The Title is Muniven.
1100 years before the story takes place, it starts up with a childlike man, who is more "god-like" then human because of his abnormal powers & extended life. After noticing he's not as youthful as he once was he decides to do something fun with his remaining power & life-force. He seals inside his dolls the powers to manipulate (exp. emotion, matter, elements & so on) After creating the mind-manipulator doll he realizes what a dangerous gift the next power is being the power to manipulate souls, or life itself. He chooses to seal it into a mortal child instead, knowing that the power will fade a way with death.
Present: The power has faded through the generations of the main characters (name being Aysha) family. Each one becoming more & more dull & life-less. It was supposed to have died off when Aysha was born, but instead has reawaken within her! Her parents are over-whelmed with the child so they dessert her at the age of 5. The King & Queen are really kind-hearted & think she's really cute! So they take her in to be their sons play-mate. Their son being 7 doesn't like the idea & always mistreats her, never wanting to grow close to something he finds so disgusting.
At the age of 11 Aysha walking past a watering bath area, sees a man bathing with two woman. Becoming embarrassed she starts to run off but he catches a glance of her eyes. He jumps up (with some clothes on) running over to the girl & knows immediately while staring in her eyes that she's the soul manipulator. This man is the water Manipulator, but he doesn't reveal this at this time. Him and his companion, Elixir (she's an enchantress) become maids at the castle to watch over her.
At the age of 19, The Prince, val realizes that he has feelings for Aysha. It's more like a lust or a jealousy of her friendship with the water manipulator. (don't got a name for him yet) On the night of the ball to celebrate the prince he demands that Aysha be his partner to it. On the same night though she began to show symptoms of her awakening. So Elixir & W.M. ask her to sneak off with them. Prince is sorely upset as the night progresses, but they fled off into the night to help Aysha out with what she might not be able to control.
Prince is not a main character throughout the story, but he does have a major role later on with some of the other manipulators.
Almost all of them have their back-stories & plots laid out for them. There's 11 manipulators & I have a few notebooks full on all of their stories so I don't want to write it all out here. sorry.
I really just have to figure out what I want the over-all message to be & the middle part of my main characters story. haha kind of a big deal, but after that I can start drawing names for it. ^_^
i have had an manga/anime idea for a quite while its an horror/adventure/action one.
The title i havent found out yet because i feel like nothing fit right or it has been used before.
ten years in the future where a zombie apocalypse have hit the earth and demons who control them have sprung out of hell because it turns out that Hell exists. The two first years of the apocalypse the humans lost nearly evry town, but after the two years the army finally managed to group upp and charge town after town purging it for infected and demons, but not long after the army started to purge the infected from the town. The H.E.L.L organization started to help the infected killing of the army. This organization have a pact between the infected and demons who control them and they are a rebelling human orginazation.
The story takes around a young boy named Edwin who is surviving in one of the towns that got hit first by the infection. After a god three years of surviving he nearly dies in a attack from a horde of infected. he is saved by an mentally disurbed person who only call him self Psycho. Psycho and Edwin makes a deal that he will help Edwin out of the city since himself enjoy staying in the city killing infected all day long.
Edwin also has a book. From an unknown author. Wich describes an totally diffrent world where the hero of the book lose evrything he has ever loved due to a misunderstanding and corrupted minds. The hero then takes upp an crusade for his vendetta.
Hell is divided into 9 circels or worlds. Where the first seven are the ones populated. while the 8 is one giant prison world. and no one knows about the last one.
Have created alot more to this story and alot more characters, but i think i already have writed to much he he.
I've been working on this manga for a while. the details are on the site. If you're interested, you should also register.
its a slice of life/comedy i figured id post my idea since no one seems to want to a slice of life one.
its called blue robin.
the owner (havent figured out any names) owns a large apartment complex.
its only tenants are kids that have had a rough life, that ran away from home that ran into the owner somewhere.
the kids all have a story, some are rebellious, others have complete apathy, and some try to live their life in their new home.
so yeah its kind of a story that popped in my head one day, might start writing a book about someday, suppose to be a tear jerker. =P
I have been working on a Written/Scripted Manga with my friend, known as The Shadow Within. It has been developing for over a year and a half, and I was wondering if people would be willing to read it, and tell me what they think. We have had to scrap our pages so many times that we have almost quit. This time, we see potentila in our new pages, but we have to see what other people think. You can read it at www.Theshadowwithin.forumotion.com
Please leave feedback. Me and my friend plan on going pro at this, and we need to see if people like it, or not.
>>234
Locutions like "desertous", "hellacious", "tyrannic" and "potentila" do not qualify you to write anything except essays for a remedial English class.
Also, if you aren't an artist yourself (or have one as your sworn blood brother) your manga will never be made.
"Just one thing, magician!"
"........don't you even want to help Index?"
"You idiots, weren't you waiting for this?
A way not to wipe Index's memory, a way not to become her enemy,
an ending where anyone can laugh and eveyone longs for, the very best of the freaking happiest conclusion!"
"You were eating your hearts out over this kind of development!
It's not as if you're a placeholder until the hero comes! Neither are you a dilatory for the protagonist!
Not anybody else and not anything else! With your hand,
didn't you swear to save just one girl!?"
"You wanted and wanted to be the hero! Like in a picture-book, like in a movie,
you would risk your life to protect just one girl; this was the magician you wanted to be!
Then the match isn't over, not by a long shot!! It hasn't even started!!
forget about despairing over a prologue that's only slightly long!!"
".........you only need to extend your hand. For crying out loud, let's start this thing, magician!"
Seriously guys...nowadays the creativity is gone!!!
WTF!!!
I can create an excellent idea anytime I want to!
It's not difficult,It's so fucking easy!
All I see here is "17 years old japanese boy in high school,quiet,cute japanese girl who is also in high school..."
be more creative guys...I'm tired of creativityless mangas(sorry for my spelling...I'm not american)
Here is my idea, I have been working on this Manga for about 4-5 months now and have planned out quite alot.
It is based around a story of adventure, revenge and love. The theme is similar to Naruto and set around the same time period.
The story is about a world full of fighters who are all blessed with different ability's to control different elements and have different techniques.
Aeroex, the main charecter, is different to all the other citizens of his town. He was born without any natural ability to control any element or technique. However dispite this, his parents (who are both renound exceptional fighters) decide to send him to the local "Arts of fighting Dojo" where he competes with the other students his age to make into the "Platinum 4" (The platinum 4 is each town's top 4 fighters and are formed into a squad to compete in the World tournment championships).
There eventually comes a time where Aeroex feels he is inferior to all his fellow class mates, including Daora, (the best student from the dojo). His best friend "Max" attempts to cheer him up, however Aeroex feels even more inferior and walks out into the forest to think. However whilst in the forest Jenumbi approaches Aeroex. Jenumbi is what the manga calls an "Elite" and is exceptionally powerful fighter and is wanted by all the major cities and towns and is seen as a general "villan" (note that his element is fire). Jenumbi tells Aeroex that he has been watching from a distance and then minipulates Aeroex into believing he knows how Aeroex feels, Jenumbi then offers Aeroex part of his element (fire) in exchange for a deal that Aeroex will do one thing and will oblige into doing one favour for Jenumbi.
Being neglected and feeling inferior his whole life Aereox, then foolishly accepts the contract and is given the fire element. The story then builds up from here.
Summary,
Max (his best friend) uses the techique of "blade impulses" where he uses his duel blades to create impluses which smash "Gin" into his opponent. (Gin is a sense of energy such as Kai, Chi, Chakra etc.) Max is seen as the friendly cheerful guy and is generally a happy guy.
Next is Tayuya, Tayuya uses the element of "Life" and can summon plants and roots to strike her opponents. Tayuya is seen as the lonely female of the group and is in a sense the mother of the lot.
Daora, uses "Wind" to minupulate the battle into his favour and can launch devastating blows to his opponent. Daoara is seen as the "cool" guy in his party and is not to keen on being involved in any group activiteas, his child hood past is rather strange as both his parents are not talked about or seen until later in the adventure.
After, these 4 head with their sensei who is one of the most powerful fighters in the world and is seen as a threat to Jenumbi himself, to the world championships, at this tournament, our four fighters make powerful comrades aswell as powerful enemies such as Raiku (who uses deadly lightning techniques). Raiku then becomes a student of Jenumbi.
As soon as the tournament is finished Jenumbi appears to Aereox and commands Aeroex to betray and slay his sensei in his sleep. Aereox then refuses to do this and Jenumbi replies "Very well" and dissapeares. When Aereox returns home he finds outs his parents were murdered and home was set alight.
Aereox is then completely enraged and attempts to chase Jenumbi and get revenge. His comrades Max, Tayuya, Daora catch up to him and tag along with him. (Their sensei sent them).
However the twist is that Jenumbi planned this all out and attempts to ca-
I can't tell you the rest :P
...You see,im writing and drawing a future manga and i'm wondering if my manga plot is good...So please lend me a hand if you dont mind
Title:Learn To Live/Redemption
Genre:Horror,life,shonen,fantasy,supernatural,drama,friendship and a little romance
Well here goes:
Some says cops are bad and some says cops are good,well,to me i agree both of them...But the thing is,im not one of them.Im just doing my job.
Take place in the modern world,El Cardaz(Devil's Heart)*Juz a language i created) is a city that never sleeps and the crime rate is astonishing high,no matter where you go,you will always got rob,always.No place is safer,even the president house is full of what they call Cadozn(Faker).Trying to live her life as an inspector,Rleayan Lonpyie is known for her talent of using 3 six shooter at once.They said she is the only cop in the world that actually cared about being human,or does she?.
One night,while she was chasing a serial killer called 'The Masked'(from my other work),she was shot from behind and in the state of coma.And as if fate were playing with her,she was sent to the past but not the real past,it was just her fantasy realm.
As she lived in her fantasy body,forgeting the real her and learning the way of living,her real life is crushing bits by bit as many people are trying to kill her.Her only hope?Is her just her strange habits of shooting anyone near her even when asleep to stay alive while she learn to live in her fantasy world....
-I know,its hard to understand....But hey,im just 13
This is intended towards no. 235. I couldn't understand a single word you said. If you want to try to "humiliate" someone, at least give actual criticism or make it understandable......
I came up with this idea just recently. The manga would be called Soul Eater and genre would be suspense/horror. It's long so bear with me please.
Okay...so there is this high school aged boy named Alexander, who has always been on very bad terms with his older brother Markus. This is because when they were little Markus was always referred to as "special" and outcast by his family, but no-one (besides his mom and dad) knows why. Sibling rivalry ;)
Anyways, Alexander is invited to visit Markus (who has moved out), in order to re connect and do some brotherly bonding. Markus currently lives in a huge formerly abandoned mansion, of which he rents out so he can make money. (he doesn't have a job, the slacker)
But when Alex arrives he is in for quite a creepy visit. The mansion's other guests all seem to be mysteriously checking out one by one. Or so his brother says. Along with vivid nightmares of the living dead and scary surprises, he suddenly realizes that all his dreams are actually reality. That night he perilously tries to escape from the terrifying house, and the monster that lurks within. While protecting his soul from the 'thing' that is murdering the guests, will he ever find the key and make it out alive?
....He now knows why his brother REALLY invited him over. MWAHAHAHAHA
I am looking for the FULL original densha otaku forum with no deleted comments....can anyone help?
Im only 13 years oldd, so i dont know, im still thinkin. anyways, the year is set in the 1920s, where one night a boy is one day visited by an distorted demon, not saying a word, just simply standing at the boys height in the midddle of a street one night. The demons body is completey distorted, except for its face, which is concealed by a blank mask, and carrys 7 katanas on its back. He pulls one out, an simply lays it on the ground. He then lifts the mask to reveal the boys exact face, except in an older version, on a stronger body, literally. the face is sewn onto the head. Hes emotionless. He holds out his hand, and points his finger at him, mouthing the words "Until the day you die" and the boy suddenly shot by an unknown being. Before dying, the boy holds out his hand, covered with blood, and tries to key what the words mean. He looks down onto a puddle of blood, seeing his face. The boy looks up, seeing the demon is gone. He falls to the ground, and before his eyes shut, he sees his killer, a young child, about 14, holding the gun out at his head, with tears in his eyes, and a sulken face. As he loses himself, he hears a second gunshot.
These are great ideas. I will try not to copy them but they are a great jumping off point
thanks
Title: SwordBreak
Genre: Fantasy, Suspense, Comedy
"I never wanted this..."
This world was always tainted with chaos. Like a pyramid, Civilizations rose and crumbled. Deceit and slander was common. Kings and Lords fought for power and glory. In the darkness that the earth was engulfed to, 5 houses have stood up to illuminate the hearts of the people. Their gallant and valor efforts have garnered them the elements that make this world. The noble house of Garrelli in which they bore fire. The Salazar in which had the power to manipulate the currents and waters. The Von Haydn in which was given authority to command the tempests and tornadoes. The Monorovia in which the elements of the earth submit to their presence and lastly the Hojo in which was given the right to utilize and conjure the best of metals. With this, The 5 households stood unchallenged and unhindered. But as the metals turn into rust in the torrential rain, ambition and desire encroached and devoured their hearts of. Jealousy and Pride turned one's sword to another. Like a house of cards. The peace that the families created were swept away. The land was tainted with the dark color of war. But amidst the maddening corruption, the house of Garrelli, the bearer of fire, became the light that shone in the darkness. Lord Leandro and Lady Christina never asked for power. They just wanted their responsibility be fulfilled, But as corruption spreads from each house. Lord Leandro decided to end this. They joined the war for the purpose of awakening the other households of the responsibility they ruined. With full force, the noble house of Garrelli fought and vied for supremacy. But as the mightiest of sand castles falls in the current, the valiant Garrelli household was annihilated and their bloodline marked as same of the commoners for treachery. Now with a potential threat gone, 4 vied for the power. Civilizations went and gone, still the bout continues. Now in the modern times, the armies have vanished. The castles gone. And the Knights outdated. But still the 4 families continued to rage the flame of war through their heirs. The heir of the Garrelli, unknown to history lives a peaceful life only to be shaken by the events prepared for him...