I'll start.
I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.
I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.
If anyone like this let me know and I may give the plot to my story. Also since it's the first chapter I will be going back to it and doing some tweaking and corrections. Anyway I wrote it because I can't draw and Im actually looking for some artists. Well enjoy.
A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals. From the horizon a frantic gentleman rushes towards a young boy. “Your majesty it is urgent that you come to the meeting at once” he said. The boy turned around and looked perplexed. “Is it already time for such a thing?” he asked with a tone of incredulity. “Very well” he sighed, “If I must go then I shall go at once” he said. The hallway was exquisite made by an otherworldly material that resembled marble. The halls gave off a luxurious shine as if to haughtily show of their beauty. The young boy entered an enormous room filled to the rim with people. Everyone present gave off an aura of diligence and refinement. “Ahh the young prince has arrived, excellent most excellent.” An elderly man approached the boy with a look of excitement on his face. He had a great beard that reached up to his knees, and a smile that gave off the happiness of a fulfilled life. “Come now my young prince the meeting is about to begin” he said to the prince. “Tell me why everyone has gathered all of a sudden?” he asked the old man. “There has been rumor of an intruder amongst the senate and everyone is highly alarmed.” “Your father and the other rulers are all here as well my prince.” “My father is here as well!” the prince exclaimed. “Yes I can somewhat see him, darn I shouldn’t have arrived so late” said the prince. In the distance there was a table with a group of people sitting around it. The one the prince called father was standing and speaking to the entire audience. “I can’t quite see his face” the prince said. “You need not see his face in order to listen to what he has to say my prince” the old man said. “You are correct, ah he’s speaking” said the prince. The man took a glance at everyone present cleared his throat and with a booming voice began to speak.
>>196
First and foremost, it needs more paragraphs. I groan when I realize I have to read one huge chunk of words.
It seems that you're writing the beginning chapter of a short story instead of giving a brief overview of what happens in the plot, so I'll review your excerpt as if you were writing fiction.
> A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals.
The transition between the silence and the noise in the environment is confusing me. Dunno why you're using asterisks there, but maybe there's a better way you can segue into the plot. Also, since these are the first words of the story, make sure you hook your readers' attention during the first sentence. Okay fine, maybe that's difficult, but the point is that you should make sure that someone picking up this story won't drop it after reading the first paragraph.
> The hallway was exquisite made by an otherworldly material that resembled marble.
Now that I think about it, at this point I have no idea where the boy and the gentleman are. Well, I know the boy is sleeping, and guessing from how he appears to be part of royalty, he's probably sleeping in a fancy bedroom of some sort. However, one can't be so sure--after all, he could be a runaway prince or one who has been captured. The point is that you should introduce the setting to the reader so she has a basic understanding of what's going on.
Also, what hallway? Did you assume that the reader knew the characters were in a house or mansion?
> “Ahh the young prince has arrived, excellent most excellent.”
Mm. Floating quotations. I'm curious, who said this? The people in the room? Some disembodied voice?
> “There has been rumor of an intruder amongst the senate and everyone is highly alarmed.” “Your father and the other rulers are all here as well my prince.”
I believe the old man said both of these lines, so there is no need for his words to be placed between two sets of quotation marks, which could confuse the reader. However, they could be said by two different people, in which case you would need to show or make clear who said which line.
> “My father is here as well!” the prince exclaimed. “Yes I can somewhat see him, darn I shouldn’t have arrived so late” said the prince.
Minor point, but isn't mentioning twice that the prince is saying this redundant?
In general, it seems like an interesting idea so far, but make sure you separate events into paragraphs, add commas where appropriate, and ensure that the reader doesn't lose sight of the plot. Keep it up, mate.
i can draw realy well, if anyone wants to email me some script ideas ill draw it up, im kinda slow, i can pump out around a page a week. im still at school, but if the project catches my imagination then ill do the art.
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>>197 Your absolutely right about everything. First of all I just want to say that this isn't really the plot or anything. It's basically supposed to be the first chapter. I wrote most of it down. I understand that it's a bit confusing due to not making it into paragraphs but Ill explain.
A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals. Well basically here it doesn't explain much which I felt was kinda the point. Here a guy is sleeping and he's having a dream. In the real world it's all quiet while in his dream it's all loud. I know I should have organized it better.
Now that I think about it, at this point I have no idea where the boy and the gentleman are. Well, I know the boy is sleeping, and guessing from how he appears to be part of royalty, he's probably sleeping in a fancy bedroom of some sort. However, one can't be so sure--after all, he could be a runaway prince or one who has been captured. The point is that you should introduce the setting to the reader so she has a basic understanding of what's going on.
The boy/guy I was talking about is sleeping and having a dream. To put it simply he's dreaming that he's royalty. I didn't really go into detail about the surroundings because as I wrote this I was picturing everything. Of course I realize I should have explained more for the sake of the reader.
As for everything else that had issues well those were grammer errors and such. Like I said I pictured this to be like the first chapter of a manga so I didn't go into detail. Also this was just like a sloppy copy with me just trying to get an idea of what the first chapter for this story should be like. Anyway enough of me ranting, if you'd like I could put up the plot instead. It's just that I know from experience that ppl can and will steal ideas.
>>199
I see. It's sorta hard to tell since I'm not seeing pictures and that these notes are mostly for your benefit, but that makes sense. I expected something brief, like a paragraph or two about the first chapter, but whatever floats your boat.
It's up to you if you want to put the plot up, but the first chapter seems fine so far.
Well here goes nothing my plot for the manga?story I want to create.
Name:Imperium
Genre:Shounen,Action,Comedy,Sci-fi,Fantasy
Before the planet Earth ever existed there was a planet filled with beings with unimaginable power. This planet was known as Imperium. Ok the plot goes like this. On earth there's a guy named Mitsukai Ametsuchi who lives a pretty average life. One day he has a weird dream in which he's royalty of some sort. In his dream he gets attacked by a person who looks exactly like him.
Next day at school he gets into a fight with the "dumbasses." He ends up getting really angry and somehow summons great strength and speed. He beats the cr%$#@ out of these guys and people panic and call the police. Amidst the chaos he tries to leave the school. Suddenly he's attacked by a figure in the sky. He confronts the figure and it turns out it's a person who looks just like him.
The figure introduces himself as Akumaru Ikijigoku. He tells him that he is actually an Imperian. A being from the planet Imperium the strongest planet in the universe. Akumaru fights Mitsukai and Mitsukai gets owned. Akumaru spares him feeling he's too weak. He decides to tell him that he's also really a prince form the planet and that the other princes and princesses are on earth as well. Akumaru tells him that he will wait until Mitsukai's Potestas develops more before he decides to kill him.
Now Mitsukai has to find a way to go Imperium and find out what it is, find out who that look alike it, find the other so called Princes and princesses, and find out who he really is...
Well that's only a slight summary there's much much more and I've got plenty more plot developed. If there are any artists willing to help me please do!!
My story is about about a young man named Shin Toriyama. He is an above average student that goes to a school known as Tessho Acadamey. He's popular with the girls, One of the smartest in school and is Captain of the swim team. He thinks his life is boring and that nothing will change that. Until one day he sees this girl who's beauty to him is undefinable. He finds out that she goes to his school, but she isn't alone. When she gets there she is followed by a twin sister, which makes the story get better. As he thinks he's falling in love with the quiet, shy, and graceful one, he's slowly falling for the hyper, energetic and more chaotic one.
Taekwon V vs. Japanese Stereotypes
Is this mazinger Z?
The South Korean is a thief.
Shameful people.
here is my idea hope its not bad
there is a boy named fai he is prounced cursed since a war happened the day he was born. umm he has the ability to unlock 95% of his mind givin him the ability to turn anything into a wepon
here is another idea i had hope its good
it is a story about a box not just any box but its a magic box that holds the place called the event horizn. the wried thing about the story is the all powerfull box ends up in a mental instatuite for trouble teens.
if you want to add ideas i would be hounered
arts also apprecieted
thanxz>>205
plz tell us moar sounds so interesting have my cyber babies penis penis penis
i like the first one by f33 th3 fun :D it sounds really cool luv to hear more ^^ and if you'd like i could try sketching some echaracters for your story too :3
>>201
This is pretty good. You say you have more of a plot can you write more of it down?? It looks interesting.
Do you even know what an event horizon is?
Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Halos”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called “The Jouzo 4” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Halos were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Halos and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Halos to reside called “Oozora ” they were to stay in Oozora until they were called upon by the Gods. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble and fight off evil spirits, this caused the people to believe the Halos had gone. After the people gave up on the Halos whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Halos keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Oozora and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Oozora throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Oozora , later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Halos are said to lose their powers after being on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Halo for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Halo sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Halo named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Oozora to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Halos to stop her, but in the fight with the halos Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four Jouzo powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.
>>210
Paragraphs, my friend.
email me sweet kind manga ideas! PLZ!!! Kat0629@kidmail.net
>>201
Hmm Im not too sure on this one but it does look like it has potential. If I could draw I'd give you a hand but I can't draw to save my life. Maybe some of my artistic friends may help. Anyway it does seem like it can go somewhere.
#149 sounds creepy!
Well, it's not exactly a manga plot idea, but I'm designing a RPG that will have a branching storyline and multiple routes/endings. So instead, I'll post the plot that I've come up with for my RPG.
Please note that this plot is still early in development, and many things are not yet clear or planned.
The main characters are going to be Linus Torvalds, and Victor Wooten.
The story is quite long and complicated, but the basic idea is that at the beginning, Linus, Victor, and Deven Gallo are fighting to stop government plans to use alien DNA to create an army of half-human, half alien soldiers, which would be used to gain total control of the earth. But unknown to Linus and Victor, Deven Gallo has his own agenda. His lust for power is stronger than even the most corrupted government officials - he wants to be all-powerful, but just commanding the earth isn't enough. He wants to obtain the alien DNA and research information so that he can transform himself into an ultimate being.
Shortly after the beginning of the game, Deven's true motives are revealed and he leaves the group, and you end up fighting him at various points in the game.
As the story progresses in the game, Deven, obsessed with obtaining ultimate strength, goes through several intermediate stages of transformation. Every time he transforms, his name changes.
He starts as 'Deven Gallo', then 'Slick Deven Gallo', then 'Deven Denis', then 'Slick Denis', then 'Slick Denis 4000', and at the end of the game (at least in some of the routes of the storyline), he reaches his ultimate form, 'The Golden Man Denis', where he is the game's final boss.
Some other twists in the story line is that some years before the events in the story occur, an alien comes to earth and has a child with a human woman. That child is Linus Torvalds - although he doesn't know it until somewhere half into the story. Of course, his alien heritage will give him special abilities that a normal human wouldn't have. And when the government people and Deven Gallo find out about it, they'll be interested in capturing him or stealing a DNA sample from him for study and analysis or something.
In one of the story routes, you'd play from the perspective of Victor Wooten. In that route, Linus will lose control of his evil side, and become a main badguy character. After turning evil, he fights and mortally wounds Victor, stealing his heart (in order to activate his latent alien abilties which require two hearts to use). Victor's dying body is discovered by the fantastic Doctor Penis, who takes him back to his laboratory. He's able to save Victor's life by replacing his heart with a new experimental unit, the X unit. It gives Victor new abilities and a higher HP/MP total, and stuff. Victor laments over 'no longer being human', and wants to get revenge over Linus (but at the very end of the game, forgives him). He goes to stop the government, Deven Gallo, and Linus, all by himself (with some help from various different characters along the way).
During key storyline events, the X unit would gain a level as it grows more attached to Victor's body. Each time this happens, you would gain a new class of abilities.
Continued in the next post...
(continued from previous post)
The characters I've got so far:
Linus Torvalds (a computer programmer who works for a government project. His curiosity in what he's been asked to work on gets the better of him, and he gains access to secret files on the project. What he finds horrifies him, and he begins to fight against the government to stop the project)
Victor Wooten (a bass player who hears rumors of a terrible government project. He tries to gain information, the government notice this and send him to jail, where he meets Linus and Deven Gallo. Together they break out and organize their fight against the government)
The fantastic Doctor Penis (a mad professor who tries to do the right thing, but often makes mistakes. After years of research, he has developed an experimental new kind of technology, X technology, which can enhance the abilities of living organisms. He knows about the government project, but is powerless to stop it, until he meets Victor Wooten...)
Deven Gallo (AKA Slick Deven Gallo, Deven Denis, Slick Denis, Slick Denis 4000, The Golden Man Denis) (a young man from America. He is a genius. At first he fights alongside you, but once his true motives are revealed he becomes the main villain of the game. He is obsessed with power, and wants to become an ultimate being. His goal is to obtain the alien DNA, which he would use to transform himself into an ultimate being. Until he obtains it, he can only augment his body using his own technology that he's developed.)
Good Deven Gallo (Deven Gallo from an alternate dimension. He has come to stop the government projects and the evil Deven Gallo, who could threaten all existence. He joins Victor and Linus at some point to fight. He's not as strong as evil Deven Gallo, but he has a special feature - when he was younger, his penis was injured and had to be replaced with a prosthetic penis. This penis works like a normal penis, but it absorbs energy. Whenever an enemy attacks Deven, his penis absorbs some of the energy of the attack, especially if it was an electric or special attack. Once the penis energy is maxed out, it's released in a special move, called 'Deven Gallo's penis'. As Deven's level increases, the amount of energy that his penis stores increases, but it also takes longer to charge up as well.)
The government officials (I haven't a clear idea yet, but probably someone like the president of the USA, prime minister of the UK, etc etc. Power hungry politicians who want to rule the world, and will do anything to gain control)
Prototype soldiers (prototype alien-human hybrids which Linus encounters when he begins spying into the project he's working on. This would probably be the first boss of the game or something.)
I had a good one, but it turns out it was already done. It's called Welcome to the NHK.
I love how there are so many mean, mean people are here. Is it that hard tosay something nicely? Jeez...
ok person this is my theme and dont copy it because i am currtelny making it
Name unknow to u ok?
Ok this girl (main Character) moved from a peaceful town somewhere in jappan then suddnely moves to tokoyo.
Its the first day of school she just moved into her new house and everything she doesnt know no one in toyoko at all to! So her first day of school is the worst day in her life she cant make a single friend for some reason? (i dont know im not going intill detail why!) Well the point is she goes home and she's a egg and her room on her bed (btw the room is finsih being done)
(The egg is a huge egg bout as big as soccer ball) She freaks out to then The egg moves around then boom it hatches into a cat. She screames scared the cat and the cat bite's her and runs out of her room. She faints and when she wakes up she's in a heroline custom she. She has special powers like a cat and for some reason she can talk to cats she deciede she will become a super hero just like the books but is it easy like she thought??? Well that's it so Far if i fine out u copyed my idea dont think i wont sue u cause i will watch me!!!
Why does everyone have a wapanese story? What's so hard about writing a western graphic novel, it's like you lived in Tokyo, or in rural Japan, it's not like you know how people live there everything you know is from what you've read in mangas.
what r u talking about i lived there for 4 years???
I know lots of things about it to and im asain bet that baka!
o my b that is a good point and plus u can do reserach of what u dont know even some things about it to! :]
Sorry i didnt read that closely D:
Hayoh this is a manga plot i had in a dreem i once had i havent finished it but its good here is the plot conversation i had with one of my best chatroom friends
Kinjagotoru Hituzowa, the antagonest
Nelseru Kudekade, the hero
Mituziga Hittero, the one everyone loves
Hinjero Nitokowa, booth, good and evil, but leaning more towards evil
unknown15 (11:10:32 PM): i suppose
nelseru (11:10:36 PM): well ok
nelseru (11:13:43 PM): nelseru grows up with Mituziga and is a dear friend to her well after a fre years someone visits their town the visitors name is Kinjagotoru Hituzowa (the bad guy) at the time he is 16 of age and he sees her and he instantly falls in love so he returns to his homeland where he later sends 1 of the war bosses after her to clame her as his
unknown15 (11:14:49 PM): ah..i see
unknown15 (11:15:00 PM): it truly is gonna be a love triangle then
unknown15 (11:15:06 PM): will the girl not like him though? or will she?
nelseru (11:16:28 PM): well nelseru dosent like thiss cause they tak her rather roughly killing people, so nelseru trys to stop him, defeats him with the sword his father gave him and rescues her he questions the war boss about who send him and by honer dictates him to tell nelseru the truth and he tells him that kinjagotoru sent him and that he wants her for som reason
nelseru (11:19:48 PM): nelseru takes it upon himself to be her bodygard but he soon thinks that is a mestake when Mituziga tells him that she wants to see kinjagotoru and give him a pice of her mind, nelseru has to fight many battles up to a point where he visits a town whuch was ramsacked by his 2nd warboss ( a berzerker)
unknown15 (11:20:31 PM): oh, i see continue, sounds rather good
unknown15 (11:20:43 PM): haha to be honest sounds like you could even make a video game out of this or something @.@
nelseru (11:20:59 PM): i got the idea with a dreem i had
Type below to start a chat with Unknown15 (idle for 4 mins).
nelseru (11:26:24 PM): wtf
nelseru (11:26:44 PM): i was tipeing and it all dissipeared
unknown15 (11:28:39 PM): haha, oh and sorry i was afk for a moment
unknown15 (11:30:21 PM): now then, will any characters die?
unknown15 (11:30:28 PM): besides like the bad guys pawns and whatever
unknown15 (11:30:34 PM): will like any good guys die?
nelseru (11:30:46 PM): the second war boss dies painfully
unknown15 (11:31:14 PM): oh i see
nelseru (11:31:17 PM): the third is blasted out of exsistance
unknown15 (11:31:19 PM): and how exactly does he die
unknown15 (11:31:31 PM): oh and are any of these war bosses gonna be female?
unknown15 (11:31:37 PM): id be nice to atleast have 1 female one
nelseru (11:31:43 PM): the last one
nelseru (11:32:02 PM): the strongest of teh warbosses considered the leader
nelseru (11:32:23 PM): sorta like the second to last boss in a game
unknown15 (11:33:01 PM): ah, i see
nelseru (11:33:10 PM): there is 2 girls and idk how many boys
nelseru (11:33:57 PM): Nelseru and his partner enter thiss town and see that everyone was dead and mangled he is shocked by how the bodys where placed in a manner whuch said that Nelseru and Mituziga are wanted, as soon as he finished reading thiss outloud a person laying beside a building presumed dead gits up and puts a sword to nelserus neck
nelseru (11:36:40 PM): he questions nelseru and finds out that he is not the derect cause of the massacure but was a cause the same and is deeply enraged (not derectly at nelseru but takes it out on nelseru by fighting him [nelseru lets him win])
unknown15 (11:37:27 PM): ah jake, this is getting really good honestly
unknown15 (11:37:30 PM): like DONT TELL ME ANYMORE
unknown15 (11:37:34 PM): ill just wait till the manga =_=
nelseru (11:37:37 PM): ok
unknown15 (11:37:42 PM): i dont wanna know everything before it all starts ~_~
unknown15 (11:37:49 PM): but that sounds really really really good so far though
nelseru (11:37:57 PM): ty
Hayoh this is a manga plot i had in a dreem i once had i havent finished it but its good here is the plot conversation i had with one of my best chatroom friends
Kinjagotoru Hituzowa, the antagonest
Nelseru Kudekade, the hero
Mituziga Hittero, the one everyone loves
Hinjero Nitokowa, booth, good and evil, but leaning more towards evil
unknown15 (11:10:32 PM): i suppose
nelseru (11:10:36 PM): well ok
nelseru (11:13:43 PM): nelseru grows up with Mituziga and is a dear friend to her well after a fre years someone visits their town the visitors name is Kinjagotoru Hituzowa (the bad guy) at the time he is 16 of age and he sees her and he instantly falls in love so he returns to his homeland where he later sends 1 of the war bosses after her to clame her as his
unknown15 (11:14:49 PM): ah..i see
unknown15 (11:15:00 PM): it truly is gonna be a love triangle then
unknown15 (11:15:06 PM): will the girl not like him though? or will she?
nelseru (11:16:28 PM): well nelseru dosent like thiss cause they tak her rather roughly killing people, so nelseru trys to stop him, defeats him with the sword his father gave him and rescues her he questions the war boss about who send him and by honer dictates him to tell nelseru the truth and he tells him that kinjagotoru sent him and that he wants her for som reason
nelseru (11:19:48 PM): nelseru takes it upon himself to be her bodygard but he soon thinks that is a mestake when Mituziga tells him that she wants to see kinjagotoru and give him a pice of her mind, nelseru has to fight many battles up to a point where he visits a town whuch was ramsacked by his 2nd warboss ( a berzerker)
unknown15 (11:20:31 PM): oh, i see continue, sounds rather good
unknown15 (11:20:43 PM): haha to be honest sounds like you could even make a video game out of this or something @.@
nelseru (11:20:59 PM): i got the idea with a dreem i had
Type below to start a chat with Unknown15 (idle for 4 mins).
nelseru (11:26:24 PM): wtf
nelseru (11:26:44 PM): i was tipeing and it all dissipeared
unknown15 (11:28:39 PM): haha, oh and sorry i was afk for a moment
unknown15 (11:30:21 PM): now then, will any characters die?
unknown15 (11:30:28 PM): besides like the bad guys pawns and whatever
unknown15 (11:30:34 PM): will like any good guys die?
nelseru (11:30:46 PM): the second war boss dies painfully
unknown15 (11:31:14 PM): oh i see
nelseru (11:31:17 PM): the third is blasted out of exsistance
unknown15 (11:31:19 PM): and how exactly does he die
unknown15 (11:31:31 PM): oh and are any of these war bosses gonna be female?
unknown15 (11:31:37 PM): id be nice to atleast have 1 female one
nelseru (11:31:43 PM): the last one
nelseru (11:32:02 PM): the strongest of teh warbosses considered the leader
nelseru (11:32:23 PM): sorta like the second to last boss in a game
unknown15 (11:33:01 PM): ah, i see
nelseru (11:33:10 PM): there is 2 girls and idk how many boys
nelseru (11:33:57 PM): Nelseru and his partner enter thiss town and see that everyone was dead and mangled he is shocked by how the bodys where placed in a manner whuch said that Nelseru and Mituziga are wanted, as soon as he finished reading thiss outloud a person laying beside a building presumed dead gits up and puts a sword to nelserus neck
nelseru (11:36:40 PM): he questions nelseru and finds out that he is not the derect cause of the massacure but was a cause the same and is deeply enraged (not derectly at nelseru but takes it out on nelseru by fighting him [nelseru lets him win])
unknown15 (11:37:27 PM): ah jake, this is getting really good honestly
unknown15 (11:37:30 PM): like DONT TELL ME ANYMORE
unknown15 (11:37:34 PM): ill just wait till the manga =_=
nelseru (11:37:37 PM): ok
unknown15 (11:37:42 PM): i dont wanna know everything before it all starts ~_~
unknown15 (11:37:49 PM): but that sounds really really really good so far though
nelseru (11:37:57 PM): ty
i got some big ideas so far, but you want an advice?, if we take a look at famous things like harry potter, you will be surely asking yourself .....how shed came with that idea?, and the answer my friend is reading books, yeah its surely boring, but u will get more material and you can backup your ideas!, recently i came up with a sensational idea, of course i want that to transform into an anime. Well i should give my e-mail to someone who is interested but i cant, i dont have an alternative e-mail and i dont want to make one, until i see someone ask for it, clearly no one will do that, so i hope i helped and sorry if my english sux, my native language is spanish.
omg the ddr one is amazing
awesum stories!!!
I'm still developing this plot. I have no intention of publishing it, I just want it to help develop my writing/drawing skills.
The Title is Muniven.
1100 years before the story takes place, it starts up with a childlike man, who is more "god-like" then human because of his abnormal powers & extended life. After noticing he's not as youthful as he once was he decides to do something fun with his remaining power & life-force. He seals inside his dolls the powers to manipulate (exp. emotion, matter, elements & so on) After creating the mind-manipulator doll he realizes what a dangerous gift the next power is being the power to manipulate souls, or life itself. He chooses to seal it into a mortal child instead, knowing that the power will fade a way with death.
Present: The power has faded through the generations of the main characters (name being Aysha) family. Each one becoming more & more dull & life-less. It was supposed to have died off when Aysha was born, but instead has reawaken within her! Her parents are over-whelmed with the child so they dessert her at the age of 5. The King & Queen are really kind-hearted & think she's really cute! So they take her in to be their sons play-mate. Their son being 7 doesn't like the idea & always mistreats her, never wanting to grow close to something he finds so disgusting.
At the age of 11 Aysha walking past a watering bath area, sees a man bathing with two woman. Becoming embarrassed she starts to run off but he catches a glance of her eyes. He jumps up (with some clothes on) running over to the girl & knows immediately while staring in her eyes that she's the soul manipulator. This man is the water Manipulator, but he doesn't reveal this at this time. Him and his companion, Elixir (she's an enchantress) become maids at the castle to watch over her.
At the age of 19, The Prince, val realizes that he has feelings for Aysha. It's more like a lust or a jealousy of her friendship with the water manipulator. (don't got a name for him yet) On the night of the ball to celebrate the prince he demands that Aysha be his partner to it. On the same night though she began to show symptoms of her awakening. So Elixir & W.M. ask her to sneak off with them. Prince is sorely upset as the night progresses, but they fled off into the night to help Aysha out with what she might not be able to control.
Prince is not a main character throughout the story, but he does have a major role later on with some of the other manipulators.
Almost all of them have their back-stories & plots laid out for them. There's 11 manipulators & I have a few notebooks full on all of their stories so I don't want to write it all out here. sorry.
I really just have to figure out what I want the over-all message to be & the middle part of my main characters story. haha kind of a big deal, but after that I can start drawing names for it. ^_^
i have had an manga/anime idea for a quite while its an horror/adventure/action one.
The title i havent found out yet because i feel like nothing fit right or it has been used before.
ten years in the future where a zombie apocalypse have hit the earth and demons who control them have sprung out of hell because it turns out that Hell exists. The two first years of the apocalypse the humans lost nearly evry town, but after the two years the army finally managed to group upp and charge town after town purging it for infected and demons, but not long after the army started to purge the infected from the town. The H.E.L.L organization started to help the infected killing of the army. This organization have a pact between the infected and demons who control them and they are a rebelling human orginazation.
The story takes around a young boy named Edwin who is surviving in one of the towns that got hit first by the infection. After a god three years of surviving he nearly dies in a attack from a horde of infected. he is saved by an mentally disurbed person who only call him self Psycho. Psycho and Edwin makes a deal that he will help Edwin out of the city since himself enjoy staying in the city killing infected all day long.
Edwin also has a book. From an unknown author. Wich describes an totally diffrent world where the hero of the book lose evrything he has ever loved due to a misunderstanding and corrupted minds. The hero then takes upp an crusade for his vendetta.
Hell is divided into 9 circels or worlds. Where the first seven are the ones populated. while the 8 is one giant prison world. and no one knows about the last one.
Have created alot more to this story and alot more characters, but i think i already have writed to much he he.
I've been working on this manga for a while. the details are on the site. If you're interested, you should also register.
its a slice of life/comedy i figured id post my idea since no one seems to want to a slice of life one.
its called blue robin.
the owner (havent figured out any names) owns a large apartment complex.
its only tenants are kids that have had a rough life, that ran away from home that ran into the owner somewhere.
the kids all have a story, some are rebellious, others have complete apathy, and some try to live their life in their new home.
so yeah its kind of a story that popped in my head one day, might start writing a book about someday, suppose to be a tear jerker. =P
I have been working on a Written/Scripted Manga with my friend, known as The Shadow Within. It has been developing for over a year and a half, and I was wondering if people would be willing to read it, and tell me what they think. We have had to scrap our pages so many times that we have almost quit. This time, we see potentila in our new pages, but we have to see what other people think. You can read it at www.Theshadowwithin.forumotion.com
Please leave feedback. Me and my friend plan on going pro at this, and we need to see if people like it, or not.
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Locutions like "desertous", "hellacious", "tyrannic" and "potentila" do not qualify you to write anything except essays for a remedial English class.
Also, if you aren't an artist yourself (or have one as your sworn blood brother) your manga will never be made.
"Just one thing, magician!"
"........don't you even want to help Index?"
"You idiots, weren't you waiting for this?
A way not to wipe Index's memory, a way not to become her enemy,
an ending where anyone can laugh and eveyone longs for, the very best of the freaking happiest conclusion!"
"You were eating your hearts out over this kind of development!
It's not as if you're a placeholder until the hero comes! Neither are you a dilatory for the protagonist!
Not anybody else and not anything else! With your hand,
didn't you swear to save just one girl!?"
"You wanted and wanted to be the hero! Like in a picture-book, like in a movie,
you would risk your life to protect just one girl; this was the magician you wanted to be!
Then the match isn't over, not by a long shot!! It hasn't even started!!
forget about despairing over a prologue that's only slightly long!!"
".........you only need to extend your hand. For crying out loud, let's start this thing, magician!"
Seriously guys...nowadays the creativity is gone!!!
WTF!!!
I can create an excellent idea anytime I want to!
It's not difficult,It's so fucking easy!
All I see here is "17 years old japanese boy in high school,quiet,cute japanese girl who is also in high school..."
be more creative guys...I'm tired of creativityless mangas(sorry for my spelling...I'm not american)
Here is my idea, I have been working on this Manga for about 4-5 months now and have planned out quite alot.
It is based around a story of adventure, revenge and love. The theme is similar to Naruto and set around the same time period.
The story is about a world full of fighters who are all blessed with different ability's to control different elements and have different techniques.
Aeroex, the main charecter, is different to all the other citizens of his town. He was born without any natural ability to control any element or technique. However dispite this, his parents (who are both renound exceptional fighters) decide to send him to the local "Arts of fighting Dojo" where he competes with the other students his age to make into the "Platinum 4" (The platinum 4 is each town's top 4 fighters and are formed into a squad to compete in the World tournment championships).
There eventually comes a time where Aeroex feels he is inferior to all his fellow class mates, including Daora, (the best student from the dojo). His best friend "Max" attempts to cheer him up, however Aeroex feels even more inferior and walks out into the forest to think. However whilst in the forest Jenumbi approaches Aeroex. Jenumbi is what the manga calls an "Elite" and is exceptionally powerful fighter and is wanted by all the major cities and towns and is seen as a general "villan" (note that his element is fire). Jenumbi tells Aeroex that he has been watching from a distance and then minipulates Aeroex into believing he knows how Aeroex feels, Jenumbi then offers Aeroex part of his element (fire) in exchange for a deal that Aeroex will do one thing and will oblige into doing one favour for Jenumbi.
Being neglected and feeling inferior his whole life Aereox, then foolishly accepts the contract and is given the fire element. The story then builds up from here.
Summary,
Max (his best friend) uses the techique of "blade impulses" where he uses his duel blades to create impluses which smash "Gin" into his opponent. (Gin is a sense of energy such as Kai, Chi, Chakra etc.) Max is seen as the friendly cheerful guy and is generally a happy guy.
Next is Tayuya, Tayuya uses the element of "Life" and can summon plants and roots to strike her opponents. Tayuya is seen as the lonely female of the group and is in a sense the mother of the lot.
Daora, uses "Wind" to minupulate the battle into his favour and can launch devastating blows to his opponent. Daoara is seen as the "cool" guy in his party and is not to keen on being involved in any group activiteas, his child hood past is rather strange as both his parents are not talked about or seen until later in the adventure.
After, these 4 head with their sensei who is one of the most powerful fighters in the world and is seen as a threat to Jenumbi himself, to the world championships, at this tournament, our four fighters make powerful comrades aswell as powerful enemies such as Raiku (who uses deadly lightning techniques). Raiku then becomes a student of Jenumbi.
As soon as the tournament is finished Jenumbi appears to Aereox and commands Aeroex to betray and slay his sensei in his sleep. Aereox then refuses to do this and Jenumbi replies "Very well" and dissapeares. When Aereox returns home he finds outs his parents were murdered and home was set alight.
Aereox is then completely enraged and attempts to chase Jenumbi and get revenge. His comrades Max, Tayuya, Daora catch up to him and tag along with him. (Their sensei sent them).
However the twist is that Jenumbi planned this all out and attempts to ca-
I can't tell you the rest :P
...You see,im writing and drawing a future manga and i'm wondering if my manga plot is good...So please lend me a hand if you dont mind
Title:Learn To Live/Redemption
Genre:Horror,life,shonen,fantasy,supernatural,drama,friendship and a little romance
Well here goes:
Some says cops are bad and some says cops are good,well,to me i agree both of them...But the thing is,im not one of them.Im just doing my job.
Take place in the modern world,El Cardaz(Devil's Heart)*Juz a language i created) is a city that never sleeps and the crime rate is astonishing high,no matter where you go,you will always got rob,always.No place is safer,even the president house is full of what they call Cadozn(Faker).Trying to live her life as an inspector,Rleayan Lonpyie is known for her talent of using 3 six shooter at once.They said she is the only cop in the world that actually cared about being human,or does she?.
One night,while she was chasing a serial killer called 'The Masked'(from my other work),she was shot from behind and in the state of coma.And as if fate were playing with her,she was sent to the past but not the real past,it was just her fantasy realm.
As she lived in her fantasy body,forgeting the real her and learning the way of living,her real life is crushing bits by bit as many people are trying to kill her.Her only hope?Is her just her strange habits of shooting anyone near her even when asleep to stay alive while she learn to live in her fantasy world....
-I know,its hard to understand....But hey,im just 13
This is intended towards no. 235. I couldn't understand a single word you said. If you want to try to "humiliate" someone, at least give actual criticism or make it understandable......
I came up with this idea just recently. The manga would be called Soul Eater and genre would be suspense/horror. It's long so bear with me please.
Okay...so there is this high school aged boy named Alexander, who has always been on very bad terms with his older brother Markus. This is because when they were little Markus was always referred to as "special" and outcast by his family, but no-one (besides his mom and dad) knows why. Sibling rivalry ;)
Anyways, Alexander is invited to visit Markus (who has moved out), in order to re connect and do some brotherly bonding. Markus currently lives in a huge formerly abandoned mansion, of which he rents out so he can make money. (he doesn't have a job, the slacker)
But when Alex arrives he is in for quite a creepy visit. The mansion's other guests all seem to be mysteriously checking out one by one. Or so his brother says. Along with vivid nightmares of the living dead and scary surprises, he suddenly realizes that all his dreams are actually reality. That night he perilously tries to escape from the terrifying house, and the monster that lurks within. While protecting his soul from the 'thing' that is murdering the guests, will he ever find the key and make it out alive?
....He now knows why his brother REALLY invited him over. MWAHAHAHAHA
I am looking for the FULL original densha otaku forum with no deleted comments....can anyone help?
Im only 13 years oldd, so i dont know, im still thinkin. anyways, the year is set in the 1920s, where one night a boy is one day visited by an distorted demon, not saying a word, just simply standing at the boys height in the midddle of a street one night. The demons body is completey distorted, except for its face, which is concealed by a blank mask, and carrys 7 katanas on its back. He pulls one out, an simply lays it on the ground. He then lifts the mask to reveal the boys exact face, except in an older version, on a stronger body, literally. the face is sewn onto the head. Hes emotionless. He holds out his hand, and points his finger at him, mouthing the words "Until the day you die" and the boy suddenly shot by an unknown being. Before dying, the boy holds out his hand, covered with blood, and tries to key what the words mean. He looks down onto a puddle of blood, seeing his face. The boy looks up, seeing the demon is gone. He falls to the ground, and before his eyes shut, he sees his killer, a young child, about 14, holding the gun out at his head, with tears in his eyes, and a sulken face. As he loses himself, he hears a second gunshot.
These are great ideas. I will try not to copy them but they are a great jumping off point
thanks
Title: SwordBreak
Genre: Fantasy, Suspense, Comedy
"I never wanted this..."
This world was always tainted with chaos. Like a pyramid, Civilizations rose and crumbled. Deceit and slander was common. Kings and Lords fought for power and glory. In the darkness that the earth was engulfed to, 5 houses have stood up to illuminate the hearts of the people. Their gallant and valor efforts have garnered them the elements that make this world. The noble house of Garrelli in which they bore fire. The Salazar in which had the power to manipulate the currents and waters. The Von Haydn in which was given authority to command the tempests and tornadoes. The Monorovia in which the elements of the earth submit to their presence and lastly the Hojo in which was given the right to utilize and conjure the best of metals. With this, The 5 households stood unchallenged and unhindered. But as the metals turn into rust in the torrential rain, ambition and desire encroached and devoured their hearts of. Jealousy and Pride turned one's sword to another. Like a house of cards. The peace that the families created were swept away. The land was tainted with the dark color of war. But amidst the maddening corruption, the house of Garrelli, the bearer of fire, became the light that shone in the darkness. Lord Leandro and Lady Christina never asked for power. They just wanted their responsibility be fulfilled, But as corruption spreads from each house. Lord Leandro decided to end this. They joined the war for the purpose of awakening the other households of the responsibility they ruined. With full force, the noble house of Garrelli fought and vied for supremacy. But as the mightiest of sand castles falls in the current, the valiant Garrelli household was annihilated and their bloodline marked as same of the commoners for treachery. Now with a potential threat gone, 4 vied for the power. Civilizations went and gone, still the bout continues. Now in the modern times, the armies have vanished. The castles gone. And the Knights outdated. But still the 4 families continued to rage the flame of war through their heirs. The heir of the Garrelli, unknown to history lives a peaceful life only to be shaken by the events prepared for him...