Please correct my English sentence.
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I'm Japanese which began English study recently.
It's difficult to compose an English sentence and to pronounce "R" and "th". However, I can enjoy it.

It's a pity this board is desolate.

I'm sorry. I think these English sentence has many mistake. Would you correct it？
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文頭の『Please』は、英語圏出身者に傲慢な印象を与えてしまうだろうか。
誰かいたら教えて(つд｀)