Extreme DANNIS ☆ the nutloaders ☆ (4)

1 Name: Extreme DANNIS ☆ the nutloaders ☆ : 1993-09-5962 21:19

Alright lads, let's get cockin'. Here's part of a song that I've been trying to write for for solo bass guitar:

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G|-_-_9_-_-_-_9_-_-_-_9_-_-_-_9_-_|

D|-_-_11-_-_-_10-_-_-_9_-_-_-_8_-_|

A|-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_|

E|9_-_-_9_8_-_-_8_7_-_-_7_6_-_-_0_|

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G|-_-6-_-_-_-8-_-_-_-6-_-_-_898_-_|

D|-_-7-_-_-_-9-9-_-_-7-7-_-9-_-9-_|

A|-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_|

E|5_-_-_5_7_7_-_705_-_-_507_-_-_70|

What do you think of it so far?
Did I manage to write the tabs properly? (I've never tried writing a tab before now)

2 Name: ( ˃ ヮ˂) : 1993-09-6278 20:07

I am typing this for everyone that looks at it.
Hey, sir, are you looking?

3 Name: ( ˃ ヮ˂) : 1993-09-6935 16:10

     | \
     |Д`)   >>2, I see you.
     |⊂     But >>4 shall never see me!
     |

     ♪  ☆
   ♪   / \    RANTA TAN
      ヽ(´Д`;)ノ   RANTA TAN
         (  へ)    RANTA RANTA
          く       TAN

   ♪    ☆
     ♪ / \   RANTA RANTA
      ヽ(;´Д`)ノ  RANTA TAN
         (へ  )    RANTA TANTA
             >    TAN

4 Name: ( ˃ ヮ˂) : 1993-09-7189 14:07

>>3
BULLSHIT, I SEE YOU.

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