I'll start.
I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.
I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.
Thanks and it sounnd good but I wanted this story to be really long and adventurou so more ideas please.
>>401
yeah,these are actualy story plots, these were ment to give you inspiration to form a story. Also, its possible to make an ongoing series with these plots as long as the story derived from them is well developed.
Well do you think it be good to make the main protagonists. Goal to become the world greatest gun fighter in the world but he needs to beat alot octopus rank gun fighter and beat the cavalry as well.
Oh and do you have some suggestions about cool character?
if your aiming to make a shonen manga, the protagonist commonly does overcomes the conflict no matter the odds. Shonen manga often give off an effect. A TIP TO ALL MANGAKA, the manga you make should make the reader feel. In the case of a shonen manga you want the reader to feel good and happy for the protagonist when overcoming odds and concerned for him when he is challenged by these odds. This is key when writting manga. Go with what's more interesting. >>403
>>404
So you'd like to know how to make a cool character? Well, it's said a main character is just an alter ego of the author. I feel that theres many ways to make a character cool. just when doing so keep in mind:
-attitude
-power/skill(how strong or skillful do you want him to be at first?, try leaving room for developement)
-what will set this character apart from all others?
think well about these things, if your character is well thought out then any characteristic should be aparent.
So you think I Gould use that goal then. Aldo you think this is a good idea for character to use that when they shoot them self they get a crazy abilities
I also had ideas for power they are called devilstones which containes special abilities. They way you get is what I'm trying to figure out but do it sound OK.
>>408
''devilstones are held only by elite gunslingers, inorder to obtain one you'd have defeat an elite for theirs.''
-Just a simple idea on how to get a devilstone
-as for my opinion on your ideas, i feel my opinion is not neccesarily needed, any idea can be good as long as the story itself incorperates it well, although i found shooting themselves unorthodox, i'd suggest something along the lines of artillery upgrades to grant special albilities, something like special bullets or something.
Well it alright to put mythical places and people to.
>>409
read the last part starting at ''as for my opinion...''
I get and thank you so much for your help I think I got the whole thing down.
So I'm stuck on ideas for a goal that the protagonist need to achieve but I want this goal to be a long adventurous. That take him and his friends to maany different place, new people, ect. And this goal is something that everyone wants to achieve but only one man did but anyway I just need ideas.
well...this is a story about two teens(a boy and a girl) who like to get into a lot of trouble together. one day,they decide to take mischief to the next level by crossing the national lawn which holds house to the ancient clock tower of the mage. they cross the lawn amd open the doors to the tower to find themselves falling throught the sky,smack dab into the middle of a parade in some other world about the Stars of the Nebula.this is a celebration that happens every 2000 years;the people of Cinnaga cleberate the 2 chosen people to join the stars in the sky.now the two friends must decide if they want to fulfill this weirdo destiny they have,or use all of this to their advantage and find a one way ticket back home to their mischief filled lives.
Does this sound good....
The story is about a 14 year old girl who loves magic and believes her mother is a wizard. Her goal is to live in a world of magic which happens when a 13 year old wizard and his fairy god mother drops into her backyard. And later meeting a man who hunting wizard she then becomes in love with. But anyway the boy ask her if she would come to the magic world and join the magic organization known as s.t.o.r.m to defend the world from evil wizards. The boy goals is to contain the beast inside after finding out that he is a half dragon and to become king of wizard. The girl is to become a wizard and find her missing mother. Sound great and please don't still just got it copyright to but any ideas would be help full zthanks
Hey guys my name is Joshua jerowsky
And I have been drawing manga for 8 years.
I am extremely talented (although I'm 16)
And do my work quite professionally. If anyone
Would like their ideas published I personally know
Many publishers that would gladly publish my work
Just give me some ideas and permission and I'll send
You some artwork- Jerowsky
If anyone is interested you can reach me
at my email josh.jerowsky@hotmail
someone post about romance please, and/or a romance story, good ones prefferably
detres-Romance story
who's that lady
a transfer student comes to a new school and sees Yifa the most popular girl there.The boy must join the football team then the basketball team joina a gang to impress her and then finds out she liked him the way he was before and they end up getting married and has kids and die in the same bed smiling
I'm writing a manga about a boy protect his world from alien and have 27 volume so far and 249 chapter but I need some character ideas like support,antagonist,and minor character.
I Just want to see more mangas where the guys are tryin to force the girls and instead of likeing it they get there penis bitten off or god forbid arrested or there ass kicked by a brother or that one charecter everyone knows is secretly a butch lesbian since she walks around school with more girlfriends then jesus
Would it be copying if use the power of stretching for the main protagonist though monkey d fluffy use?
Aloha brohas! Well, I came across this thread looking up manga plots. Though I'm a bit rusty at anime/manga, I pride myself in my artistic skills. I've been drawing since the age of 9 and am now at the sweet age of 20! Though I'm an inspiring cartoonist, I lack plots/ideas/direction... I'm interested in getting in contact with someone who has innate writing abilities and can help me with developing a great storyline!
hit me up @
daphneedawnedanzig@live.com
or
facebook/daphneedawnedanzig
please and thankies ;3
how about a manga for the economic crisis around the world?
will it be ok to do a manga about a modern day ninja trying to become Ninja King.. anyy help will be find
i have one. There is a boy that loses his parents in a fire accident and he moves to his uncle house . He and his cousin will get involved in a gang and then the cops will arrest them. They will spend 5 years in jail . They will return to their neighborhood only to find out that both his uncle and his aunt are dead because of a fire accident . They think that their death is related with the boy's parents death and they decide to search for clues They create a gang and after some ''jobs'' they start to gain some respect from the underwold bosses. They have on their side a young reporter , an agent , some guys from their previous gang and a college girl.
i used sims and made a manga series called blood money LOL
http://errakihree.deviantart.com/gallery/35234724
http://www.flickr.com/photos/75929519@N03/sets/72157629251007355/
So, I'm actually using this one but Its Called HIASOBI which means playing with fire and its a horror/sci-fi/action/romance...
its basically about a bunch of teeenagers ages 15-21 living and traveling together, because they all have some kind of ability and are hiding out from the government because the governmentmor really the military wants to use their abilities to take over europe and asia and they are refusing them because they dont want to become..welll to quote FMA "dogs of the military"
Does any want to share manga ideas
My email is westchrishawn@rocketmail.com
I have an Idea for a manga called Emblem where 100 people are placed on an island by seven mysterious silhouettes and are given things called emblems that draw out hidden powers based on things like personality or desires and the last one standing will have all their wishes come true. And now the main character has to survive against the other competitors while trying to figure out the mysteries behind the emblems and the silhouettes while fighting with his own past.
I currently have a few chapters done and most of the characters finished but unfortunately my art skills are below that of a drunk horse so I can't draw it. If anyone's interested send me a sample of your art along with your name (I don't mind a pen name)and age to 7startingmangaka7@gmail.com.
Whoever want to share manga idea's or need help cuz I do please contact me my email is westchrishawn@rocketmail.com
Thank yhu.
name: ... ( i am no good with names )
type: shounen , sci-fi , action (?) , romance (?) , comedy ...
personages : 1: jayck
2: eclaire
3: chad 4: luckas (jayck's brother )
5: rin et ran
6: ceji
7: eve
8: doc.stan et son apprenti mic ( michel )
9: la barman* et le toubib* ( never figured a name for them, i DO feel sorry for them ...) 10: there R others but i don't feel like introducing ...the general idea : the main caracter is suspected for beeing a menace to mother-earth, so he was sent into space to seartch for a way to clear his name ...
jayck ,16,sweeper* (*he catchs villans or beat the h*ll out'ta'm befor dellivring them to the police, 'n' not for free if i may say..) since 10, meets a good looking guy and a very very ... charismatic wome... girl ; chad and eclaire , 2 secretagents with a msg from the near futur (!?) ...
in this msg " in the night of his 19th birthday , the third son of the stones , living in XXXX-xxxx-XXX-XX-xxx, will be a menace for the human beings" !!! ... still 16 , the organisation gave jayck a chance to clear this accusation under the supper vison of chad and eclaire. the problem is ; to clear an accusation comming from the "near" futur ... the only thing they are sure of , is that this 'msg' was send to the base from a suicidal-vessal that was send 20 years ago.
(doc.stan, from the labortoir of this same organisation, went crazy after his wife died giving bearth to girltwins, he locked him self with his subordente michel and the twins in the laboratoir ... no one knows what happend to the four of them , but after two years the doc. requested a vessal , saying that his 'wife' , 'eve', is out of control..seeing the laboratoir beeing destroied by some unknown form the alowded him to get a vessal and quiclly send him with his 'wife' , two girls and his michel into space .. )
and so , to save his ass , jayck is ready to go to space with chad ( folowed by eclaire later because it was too stuped to send jayck under the super vision of an idiot and useless Chad, also because she got jealous seeing jayck charmed by RIN a girl living in a strange planet ) ...
Hi I'm doing a manga about Hitman ans I wanted it to be more fantasy and alot of excitement. With alot of character. But I'm a little stuck. So if anyone wants to share ideas with me it will be helpful. Also if you needed help to. Just post your email address and than you.
my manga : PLEASE don't steal it (begging face) i work really hard on it.
summary in it's most dumbed down form:
while the setting of this story, pyongyang, north korea, is using soldiers aged 11-30 to fight world war 7, in year 202012, a boy soldier with no memories searches for his past while he unknowingly lives under his family's killers rule as heir to the whole military.
( go figure all that's left for a hero to do is change the world....)
IN OTHER WORDS:
at age 6 riku nanaharas family was murdered in a freak, totally not coincidential, but unpredictable attack. when the gun was turned on him they thought he had died as well. but amongst all the soldiers in that house one was a liar. riku , miraculously, survived and not by accident but something went wrong and he lost all his memories, all of them before waking up in the hospital of the city that commissioned the attack, surrounded, unknowingly , by the people who "killed him"
riku is adopted into the care of the (horrible nasty ) dictator and put as heir to well....everything
she has no clue he is the boy she tried to kill and he doesn't know ANYTHING so it's pretty peaceful ( for world war 7)
10 years later, now 16 years old, and what he believes to be " no longer a naive child" riku is on the hunt for his heredity along with his two ( also unknowingly ) deeply involved friends sora, a GMO resulting from an experiment ( oh so long ago) in 2012, and tayuya, a tiny girl with alot of attitude, a bossy demeanor, and a nasty case of ESP. both who are very related to riku's past. the three vow to find out who riku really is. but they're in deeper water than they think. little do they know THEY ( even riku) are a part of the organization that did this: the army
with nothing but a scar and burnt off fingerprints to go off of, how far will riku go to uncover the secrets of his past, and how much the life he knows, will he sacrifice for the life he once knew?"
( that would be if he can even survive tomorrow, which in these times, is never a guarantee)
it's kind of choppy, and in progress but please no stealies :) thankyou :D
Dont steal... I just want judgement
Alright so I thought of this during school today, since we're doing a Grease play and Im playing Sonny...
Title: The list(tentative title)
Type: A shonen, Drama, and Romance in one
Genre: Drama, Action, Romance, Comedy (even though I suck at jokes :D)
Plot: Cole McIntyre, young man who isn't popular, but not that far down on the totem pole of the 'List' as the others of his school say. The list displays the popularity of the kids at school, and practically everyone wants to climb to the top. Escept for Cole and a few others who don't care what others think. He loves to act, so when a romantic play comes around, he goes for it. He tryouts, and being the awesome actor he had become, he nails the lead. But there is an upset...
The list... The rankings have changed, with Cole's success at taking the lead. 11th ranked, Cole is swarmed by three girls daily, always following trying to become popular. Even though they're cute and pretty, He pushes them away knowing they only want his fame. But why should he care? It's just a spot? But soon he enjoys the attention...
One day during class changes, a stage hand for the play is getting harassed by some idiots in the top ten spots. She says no and tries to leave, but the boys stop her and push her into the locker. She's cute and pretty, nice and kind hearted, and is number 23 on the list. The boys cant do better because of their attitude. Cole happens to witness this... He steps in. He went to karate and made it to orange belt in weeks for his street fighting capability. He quits, and took what knowledge he had grasped in those days. He slams his fist between them and her. The fall to the butts confused. They smile as they see its him.
"I see, mister 11 is coming in to stop us like the goody two shoes he is" One says smirking. Cole doesn't reply, knowing not to get angry at such vile. He turns to her.
"You okay Effie?" He says. The first time in a long time, someone 25 or below hasn't been called by their number. Only teachers say their names, and half the time they don't respond for they've gotten use to their numbers. She blushes and nods and walks off.
"Let the bitch go huh? Well great, just fucking great asshole. We were just chatting... God she was a bitch, not even glancing at us, I mean thats cool. Im gonna fuck her up nex-" The other one says before being lifted off the ground by Cole.
"Run that by me one more time... Im not quite sure I heard right." He said, growling in his face. Cole's not one for starting fights, so he wished he would try a swing.
"Looking for a tussle big guy?" The other says pulling his friend from Cole. cole just pats his right cheek.
"Please..." Cole said smiling. The one just released swung a right hook that made Cole stagger. They chuckled as he hit the floor. Cole kept a straight face, the punch not hurting much. He was an actor for a reason. He had strenth from starting off as a stage hand, the brains to remember lines and ques, and the agility to pull off dances. He was fight for fighting. He immediatly ducks as the other a left hook. He gets in close and throws up a mean uppercut, then throwing his right elbow to the boys left face. He falls to the floor bleeding. His friend rushes Cole, but he ends up ducking low and grabbing his legs. He throws him over his back and let him land on his friend. Cole brushes off his shoulders and walks away.
Cole gets a suspension, and is almost thrown from the play. But the other actors petition this and he is allowed to continue. Another event accures... His rank is better. 7th. He stood up and clobbered number 7 and 8, and took 7's spot. Effie moves to 18th for being defended by Cole. He sees her daily, and she begins to like him. He doesn't notice her staring at him constantly. He starts to like her too, but is afraid to go out of his shell to ask her.
Thats all I have for now... Reply to it so I can figure out if this is good or not....
Dont steal... I just want judgement
Alright so I thought of this during school today, since we're doing a Grease play and Im playing Sonny...
Title: The list(tentative title)
Type: A shonen, Drama, and Romance in one
Genre: Drama, Action, Romance, Comedy (even though I suck at jokes :D)
Plot: Cole McIntyre, young man who isn't popular, but not that far down on the totem pole of the 'List' as the others of his school say. The list displays the popularity of the kids at school, and practically everyone wants to climb to the top. Escept for Cole and a few others who don't care what others think. He loves to act, so when a romantic play comes around, he goes for it. He tryouts, and being the awesome actor he had become, he nails the lead. But there is an upset...
The list... The rankings have changed, with Cole's success at taking the lead. 11th ranked, Cole is swarmed by three girls daily, always following trying to become popular. Even though they're cute and pretty, He pushes them away knowing they only want his fame. But why should he care? It's just a spot? But soon he enjoys the attention...
One day during class changes, a stage hand for the play is getting harassed by some idiots in the top ten spots. She says no and tries to leave, but the boys stop her and push her into the locker. She's cute and pretty, nice and kind hearted, and is number 23 on the list. The boys cant do better because of their attitude. Cole happens to witness this... He steps in. He went to karate and made it to orange belt in weeks for his street fighting capability. He quits, and took what knowledge he had grasped in those days. He slams his fist between them and her. The fall to the butts confused. They smile as they see its him.
"I see, mister 11 is coming in to stop us like the goody two shoes he is" One says smirking. Cole doesn't reply, knowing not to get angry at such vile. He turns to her.
"You okay Effie?" He says. The first time in a long time, someone 25 or below hasn't been called by their number. Only teachers say their names, and half the time they don't respond for they've gotten use to their numbers. She blushes and nods and walks off.
"Let the bitch go huh? Well great, just fucking great asshole. We were just chatting... God she was a bitch, not even glancing at us, I mean thats cool. Im gonna fuck her up nex-" The other one says before being lifted off the ground by Cole.
"Run that by me one more time... Im not quite sure I heard right." He said, growling in his face. Cole's not one for starting fights, so he wished he would try a swing.
"Looking for a tussle big guy?" The other says pulling his friend from Cole. cole just pats his right cheek.
"Please..." Cole said smiling. The one just released swung a right hook that made Cole stagger. They chuckled as he hit the floor. Cole kept a straight face, the punch not hurting much. He was an actor for a reason. He had strenth from starting off as a stage hand, the brains to remember lines and ques, and the agility to pull off dances. He was fight for fighting. He immediatly ducks as the other a left hook. He gets in close and throws up a mean uppercut, then throwing his right elbow to the boys left face. He falls to the floor bleeding. His friend rushes Cole, but he ends up ducking low and grabbing his legs. He throws him over his back and let him land on his friend. Cole brushes off his shoulders and walks away.
Cole gets a suspension, and is almost thrown from the play. But the other actors petition this and he is allowed to continue. Another event accures... His rank is better. 7th. He stood up and clobbered number 7 and 8, and took 7's spot. Effie moves to 18th for being defended by Cole. He sees her daily, and she begins to like him. He doesn't notice her staring at him constantly. He starts to like her too, but is afraid to go out of his shell to ask her.
Thats all I have for now... Reply to it so I can figure out if this is good or not....
your idea for the reapers manga is a really good idea the plotline is awesome and it the type of manga i love so with your permission
can i use this idea for my manga
Does any one need help with manga ideas because I do.
My Email is westchrishawn@rocketmail.com
I'm doing a manga nd I need some help alot of help.
Hi my name is Hacu and I have suffered a curse for a little over 1000 years.I look as if I am only 15 but that is just the power of the vampire curse.I have many friends but most of them just grow up and get away from me.
Only 3 of all these ideas caught my attention...
I think you guys should focus more on short one-shot paragraph ideas first before moving onto detail.
Most of these stories were also a bit too "western" for me. Cliches don't bother me so much, though. Everything is 'cliche' and there really can't be an 'original' story without a bit of cliched parts.
I have my own ideas (mainly school life shoujo, but do want to draw a shonen) and I can draw fairly well. I'm not amazing though but check out my DA anyway. (^o^)/
Contact me if you wanna collab on an idea. Like you give me your story & if I like it, i'll draw it. Plus I wanna have some story and character name control only IF I don't like it. And I want a pen name if we collab. Like PEACH-PIT & CLAMP do it.
Fuyuka, I messaged you on Deviantart... I would love to work with you. Your art is impressive sir.
I love the reaper idea this site really helps with manga! I am going to add a past character I made up called um..well I can't find a good enough name for her BUT she's a shinigami so if ya could can you help me with a name for her? oh and theres more characters just if your wondering!
from Annelise Van Nus :)
oh just adding that it's a reaper not a shinigami lol woops!
Is anybody sick of all these mangas that are taking place in high school,because I sure am! Why not make one that takes place in a middle school? There is plenty to write about. Lots of drama too, in real life. I myself go to a catholic school from nursery to 8th grade. One detail-- the 7th+8th grade uniforms have these wrap skirts that blow ALL the way up if there is enough wind. It doesn't take that much. I speak from experience as a 7th grade girl. You wouldn't believe the drama, either. I already said this, but, its true. I am really bored with all the high school drama. What about schoolyard drama? We are also let out free, we 7th and 8th graders, unlike the rest of the school, which has to wait to be picked up, unless you have a note. A boy can buy a girl something,too. There is almost always an ice cream truck or churro cart or cotton candy or icee cart. Or buy something out of school. Valentines day doesn't have anyone proclaiming their true love, and even though some people still give cards to the entire class, their are some personal gifts. Don't forget the horrible teachers.>>447
You broke the board width, you idiot.
>>448
How did he do that/does that happen?
>>442 really take this into consideration when posting. people like reading plots not a whole series detail for detail -_-
(plz dont take my idea)
But my manga plot takes place out of middle school, it still in development and still improving it, thought i am looking for help see it's about a couple of people, Minami, Irihi, Hiromi,Euen, Jin five people living to together under a roof its kinda making the a makeshift dysfunctional family, The main character irihi hes your typical average teen nothing special,at first he starts out a aggressive believing his he doing all the work around the place and that he'd be better off on his own, pretty much he doesnt need them around all there doing is holding him back from the world and that there not even really a family. eventually the chara gets into a fight with Hiromi arguing and then Minami kinda gets at him as he being a jerk, Euen interferes breaking up the fiasco as he does irihi pretty much leaves coldly telling them to leave him alone, as he walks out into night. he witness a trio of guys trying to hit on this gypsy, unfortunately she resist until they attempt to rape her, Irihi interferes trying to beat down the trio as it seems hes about to win, he kinda gets hit from behind knocking him out cold, as he was knocked out the trio of boys rob him off his wallet but leave young lady unharmed, he wakes up the rain he looks up weakly as checks on the lady he saved but finds out shes okay and then later see's his wallet his gone as he get up to leave, the gypsy offers him this glowing red in return, he refuses it at first but later takes it
or the alt
she later thanks him as he wakes up as he gets up to wonder if shes fine she walks away as he finds out at the last minute leaving the orb in his pocket, he heads home only to greet his dysfunctional family, they ask him what happened, only to shove it off as he reachs into his pocket pulling out the orb as he holds it up.
pretty much the orb activates giving from blue to a red ominious aura as hands pulls reach out and grab all of the characters pulling them into a white blinding light leaving the main chara in a stasis for over 2 years before reappear appearing in the lost grounds of the large infamous central city.
the plot is pretty much simple the main chara arrives in a unknown world as he put into things that have nothing to do with him, hes later cursed and branded by a deva devil, that slowly eats away at his humanity of his animus, only to allow the shadow/instinct to take over, as its triggered thorough intense emotion, when the brander is near and if . but the sad part is that the main chara has lost all of his friends plus none of the have no recollection of the other or even him, at the same time hes accompanied by a cursed god who forces him to work with him as devils dim to steal humans of there anima and animus to restore there gods who had fallen, Animus & Anima who are twins.
(plz dont take my idea)
But my manga plot takes place out of middle school, it still in development and still improving it, thought i am looking for help see it's about a couple of people, Minami, Irihi, Hiromi,Euen, Jin five people living to together under a roof its kinda making the a makeshift dysfunctional family, The main character irihi hes your typical average teen nothing special,at first he starts out a aggressive believing his he doing all the work around the place and that he'd be better off on his own, pretty much he doesnt need them around all there doing is holding him back from the world and that there not even really a family. eventually the chara gets into a fight with Hiromi arguing and then Minami kinda gets at him as he being a jerk, Euen interferes breaking up the fiasco as he does irihi pretty much leaves coldly telling them to leave him alone, as he walks out into night. he witness a trio of guys trying to hit on this gypsy, unfortunately she resist until they attempt to rape her, Irihi interferes trying to beat down the trio as it seems hes about to win, he kinda gets hit from behind knocking him out cold, as he was knocked out the trio of boys rob him off his wallet but leave young lady unharmed, he wakes up the rain he looks up weakly as checks on the lady he saved but finds out shes okay and then later see's his wallet his gone as he get up to leave, the gypsy offers him this glowing red in return, he refuses it at first but later takes it
or the alt
she later thanks him as he wakes up as he gets up to wonder if shes fine she walks away as he finds out at the last minute leaving the orb in his pocket, he heads home only to greet his dysfunctional family, they ask him what happened, only to shove it off as he reachs into his pocket pulling out the orb as he holds it up.
pretty much the orb activates giving from blue to a red ominious aura as hands pulls reach out and grab all of the characters pulling them into a white blinding light leaving the main chara in a stasis for over 2 years before reappear appearing in the lost grounds of the large infamous central city.
the plot is pretty much simple the main chara arrives in a unknown world as he put into things that have nothing to do with him, hes later cursed and branded by a deva devil, that slowly eats away at his humanity of his animus, only to allow the shadow/instinct to take over, as its triggered thorough intense emotion, when the brander is near and if . but the sad part is that the main chara has lost all of his friends plus none of the have no recollection of the other or even him, at the same time hes accompanied by a cursed god who forces him to work with him as devils dim to steal humans of there anima and animus to restore there gods who had fallen, Animus & Anima who are twins.
Hey hey, I ahve thsi idea. Take the Naruto manga, except instead of making itall crap make it as good quality as the Zabuza arc
Here's my plot. English isn't my mother tongue so sorry for all the mistakes. Please don't steal my story, I already drew the five first pages.
Title : Optimization
MC is a normal student in random western country. One day he wins in a lottery a trip to Japan - in reality an exchange program with a high school. He doesn't speak japanese very well.
There, he meets his roommate and his childhood female friend, with whom MC falls in love. He also meets her dad who is a science teacher in the school and was talking with a strange man (an old friend of him).
But at the night, the two boys hear a body fall. They go to see what's happening : the dad lies on the ground, murdered with a knife. MC finds near the body some papers.
But another person saw those papers.
Together, they decide to find out what's on them.
I don't know what exactly will happen next, but instead of discovering the murderer’s identity, they find a time machine (the father was a former scientist). They will certainly go to the past (like China's Three Kingdoms or War of Independence) and find the murderer who also have a prototype of the time machine : it's the fathers friend.
By changing the past, they will also change the present and the future. So a second part would be their tough life in a post-apocalyptic world and their trials to restore the present, involving to kill again the father.
My story is very confusing, so please help me if you have an idea :)
If anyone want to see :
page 4-5 : http://bit.ly/JmCGS0
page 3 : http://bit.ly/HN4hwm
is there anyone who could come up a dark story, a really serious, non mainstream type with Mysterious organizations, dark plot, and the likes??
please help me? i can draw but i can't think of a good dark story, here's some ideas, i just don't have the talent to expand them to excellent plots:
.please help me..im trying to submit a serialization in our local magazine
>>456
The game of €100 billion reminds me of Liar Game...
>>456
The €100 billion game reminds me of Liar Game...
>>456
The €100 billion game reminds me of Liar Game...
In advance sorry fur bade splein, and, grramr
I had an idea for a manga, its like 3020 and it people are now born with nanobots, that can be used as weapons some people are born with cool powers like shooting fire, these people are the "gifted", people who's nanobots let them write fast are "regular" this 14-20ish year old kid who was (supposedly) born without nanobots grew up on the streets, and had to steal to survive, but he hates stealing so he goes to the local fight arena. There he starts to fight with a 3 year contract for a room food and $3000 a year,and he meets up with a man who's nanobots went wacky and made him into a half bear. The kid and the bear man train together, and the kid gets good REALLY fast like he sees a fighting style once and instantly masters it. So far the kid hasn't lost.(to lose you have to be 1 forced out of the arena or knocked out no killing) but then this masked fighter his age with a bow appears out of nowhere and Whups him this happens again and again. one day the kid steals a spear from an opponent, and likes it. he keeps it and trains with it day and night. the next time he fights the masked fighter they both lose each other in a massive cave system (note the arene changes it's terrain every battle using nanobots). The kid sees the fighter and rushes him the fighter is knocked out and out of curiosity the kid pulls of the fighter's mask and sees its a girl. The kid developed a crush on the girl and starts watching her fights, one day she loses to a ax using kid named otaku our hero fights otaku and is really pissed he blacks out 3 seconds into the fight and when he wakes up hes standing a foot away from otaku who is bloody and battered and everyone is silent. The story goes on with the kid (named sasu) finds out that the girl (named Yajirushi) is a slave and is forced to fight by her master. Sasu has money saved up because he has no need for it, buys a house, and buys Yajirushi from her master. They are now living together (most likely will end up dating or somthing) but have to fight each other on occasion in most cases sasu will fall on his head to knock himself out. Also sasu watches the tape of otaku and his fight and is shocked to watch him self. during the time he was "blacked out" sasu had grown wings claws sharp teeth and a tail (all dragon like) which he finds out are from his nano bots which are called dragon bots, these bots will allow sasu to live fore 10,000 years for which time he is near immortal and are stronger than all other bots besides the phoenix bots which are equal to the dragon bots. Sasu raises in the ranks and fights less often with Yajirushi, everything is going well untill in a fight Yajirushi is "killed" by being stabbed and having no pulse, She then wakes up and is fight except for one change her hair is now gold red, and she can shoot fold fire from her hands, Sasu asks bear-man who tells him that this is the that this is the trademark of Phoenix bots. the rest of the story is up to you
Just an idea that's been floating around in my head for awhile.
Title: [ Haven't thought of one, so suggestions would be nice.]
Type: Steampunk anime/manga
Genre: Action, Adventure and some Romance
Plot:
Set on the fictional continent of Terris, where various races live under the the control of the steam punks, also known as the Gears. They have established an empire across the land, with their cities being encased in large domes for protection. While most people have adapted to the new technology and ideas the steam punks brought, there are those who believe the land would be better off without them. These rebels are known as the Outsiders and have declared war on the steam punks. A war broke out between the two, known as the Great War, and resulted in a disastrous defeat for the Outsiders. Though they lost most of their forces, they retreated into hiding and have continued to exist in the shadows, having a "guerrilla" war with the steam punks.
(Ten years after the Great War) The story follows Zero, a young boy from a rural farming village a few days walk from Steam City, the steam punk capital. On his sixteenth birthday, his mother becomes bed-ridden due to an illness that befell her and passed away shortly thereafter. Her last dying wish was to see her son escape the dead end path he had in this small village and wanted him to make something for himself in the big city. With his father being dead for ten years and no other family left, he packed his things and set out for the Steam City.
Upon reaching the city, he meets a strange girl named Jade, who works in a clockshop in the Commoner's district. From there, he meets many more friends and enemies as he seeks out a way to end the dispute between the steam punks and Outsiders, while also trying to stop the twisted scheme of a msterious man known as The Engineer!
(Probably doesn't give a good idea of the story, but theres a lot more and I just can't type that much. ^^" So what do you think of it?It have potential?)
I enjoyed this story alot. I have this style of art in my head and i think i could portray this story well. I've been looking for a new project to do and I wish to draw to your story. give me some contact info so that i can reach you if your intrested please thank you.
by god... some of these ideas are pretty damn awesome. i would be totally interested in drawing some sketches and whatnot if someone would give me a chance? uh, my email is onicolehais@yahoo.com, and devart is hspneonorange.deviantart.com ~. let's see... well, my house is where the internet comes to die, so if anyone actually contacts me, it may take a little bit, but i shall respond! not that anyone cares... but i said HEYEYEYEY. HEYEYEYEY. I said hey. What's goin onnn?????
i just woke up and this one is a dream i just had. well two ideas actually.
1- is about the usual thing. a half demon kid, a princess, and a clockwork monster/gargoyle thing. now the thing is, all three are failures. the half demon is actually the son of lucifur, but he cant use his powers because they can only be controlled by demons language,and all the demons have been wiped out AGES ago. the girl WANTS an arranged marriage with a handsome priest, but her father is over protective/ is evil and doesnt want her to embaress him, because she is a tomboy. the clockwork monster doesnt,well, WORK.
2- another dream based on the same idea, in an alternate or a future world, the half demon and the princess is all grown up, the clockwork monster turns out to be a prince under acurse, and the kingdom is in danger from demons! the only one who could help is that same half demon who still hasent really learned the demon language, and is only good at tricking people
This is the first time i've done this but i really want to tell people my ideas i can't draw but i really like to come up with storys
This is one i thought up recently i don't have a title and i suck with names
Their are four major civilations they are the warriors, the magiacions, the mosters and the technological. what happens is that people from the technological one discover ancient robotic soldiers and the means to create more and with this they decide to take control of the world. the other civilations do work together but the technological ones haven't really fought before and they haven't focused on making weaponry and because of the long peace many magicaions haven't really had to fight the warriors and the monster are strong fighters but they are outnumbered adn they don't have a friendly history and they aren't able to cooperate well.
i also have thought about the leadership for all the civilations and about the main character and about the powers each of the civilations have but i don't know how much i should put on this
Fff
“Huff, huff, huff, get away from me!” yelled a little girl as some kind of worm demon chased her.
“Leave me alone, huff, huff, huff, HELP!” screamed the girl as she tripped and fell on her butt.
“Grrrr, Ahhh!” growled the vicious demon.
The demon bit down on the girl, but the was to fast and she began to run again. “Help me please, sniff, sniff!” cried the girl.
“Ahhh, ha!” yelled a man as he jumped down from a building with a sword in his hand.
“Ban-Budokai!” yelled the man as he pointed his sword straight at the demon.A huge energy blast shot out at the demon traveling right through its head. The demon’s body dissolved into ashes. “You should be more careful, where you walk.” said the man. “Huh.” said the man.
“Why are you crying, are you lost?” asked the man.
“Yes, sniff, sniff.” answered the girl. “I lost my mommy.” said the girl.
“I’ll take you home okay. Where do you live?” asked the man.
“I don’t know, sniff, sniff, sniff.” said the girl.
“Well, I’ll take you back to the office and find your address, okay.” said the man.
“O-Okay, sniff, sniff.” said the girl.
“Momma, can I have the last cookie?” asked Bryant.“No that’s for your father when he gets home. But you can finish your food.” said Bryant’s Mom.
“Hey D’Lyle, after this wanna go play retro shooters?” asked Bryant.
“Okay, but I get to be player 1.” said D’Lyle.
Suddenly someone opened the door and stepped in the house. “Hey, hope I didn’t scare anyone.” said Bryant’s Dad.
“Daddy!” exclaimed D’Lyle running into his arms.
“Hey there tiger, you’ve gotten strong. Have you’ve been working out?” asked Dad playfully. “Come on Bryant, no hug.” said Dad.
“Hey Dad, ha-ha!” Bryant said running into his arms laughing.
“So how was your day?” asked Mom.
“Horrible, did you know that they’re shutting down all Construction Sites until further notice.” Dad said.
“What’s so bad about that, you get some time off of work?” Bryant said.
“The bad thing is, if we don’t finish that gate by tomorrow all of East Okumono City will be destroyed by the demons.” said Dad.“Demons, like the ones off of our video game.” said D’Lyle.
“Worse, these demons are bloodthirsty killers and the worst part is you only have one life instead of millions.” said Dad.
“I’ll just hold them off with my Gen, if there is to many you can help me right.” said Bryant.
“Uh-huh, you are not going out there with those demons I refuse to let you go.” said Mom in an angry kind of voice.
My dad got up and put on his jacket. “Uh, where are you going?” asked Mom.
“Board up the house, I’m going to the store and pick up some groceries, here.” Dad said while tossing mom some high tech earpiece. “You put it in your ear I’ll call you on it, if I get into any trouble.” Dad said as he opened the door.
“Be careful dear.” Mom said as she shed a tear.
“Bye everyone, and Bryant no matter what happens stay strong and protect your family,” he said as he walked out the door.
He walked to the car opened the door an got in then started it up and left the house. While he was driving he was thinking of all good times we had as an family and began to smile and cry at those happy moments but then a dark figure appeared in front of the car and he slammed on the brakes and came to a fast stop. “What the hell!” Dad said as he got out the car with a gun in his hand and a pocketknife hidden in his jacket. “What are you doing out here demons are going to be coming in a few minutes, you need to go inside.” said Dad.“I’m not gonna go inside until my nephew comes out of that store with my medicine.” said the old lady.
To Be ContinuedAnd that was only half, Contact me at hmarion45@yahoo.com, im also looking for an illustrator and publisher.
if want to read the rest i can send it to you for $10.00
It's me again and this time im telling u about demon heart. The book above is just the beginning just wait until the morning and more will be made immediately keep looking.
Demon Heart is about two teenagers named Bryant Edwards and Dj Komodo, who gets their hearts ripped out by Armageddon, The Lord of the Underworld. The military sees something special in these boys so replace their hearts with a demon's. Soon the two become Secret Weapons in the military, they may be gen warriors but these demons aren't stopping until they destroy Earth.
I have an Idea for a manga called Emblem where 100 people are placed on an island by seven mysterious silhouettes and are given things called emblems that draw out hidden powers based on things like personality or desires and the last one standing will have all their wishes come true. And now the main character has to survive against the other competitors while trying to figure out the mysteries behind the emblems and the silhouettes while fighting with his own past.
I currently have a few chapters done and most of the characters finished but unfortunately my art skills are below that of a drunk horse so I can't draw it. If anyone's interested send me a sample of your art along with your name (I don't mind a pen name)and age to 7startingmangaka7@gmail.com.
i have an anime called:black protocal
genre:romance,ecchi,action, comedy
main character: zed orion a half demon thats good with guns
and his girlfriend diana kuroko
its about a teen that trys to bring back his own girlfriend that died because of him she was captured and got her throat slit they were both spies from the japan they were trying to find a proffessor who just found the life rejuvanation serum his name was zed and the last day of their job on the last day after the mission he was to tell her "will you marry me?" but it never happend.but will they survive the barrage of robot humans on the way.
this is about the one i wrote about earlier. Their world is a really big and old one and their are a lot of places that are still not completely known. The civilazations have been able to work together against the the scientist group and their ancient robotic soldiers but it reached a stalemate basically over quantity over quality and slowly but surely quality has started going down. the robotic soldiers don't need to eat, drink, sleep and new ones can be made easily while the Civilization's soldiers are getting tired and worn out and they are starting to lose ground and they need to find an edge.
The main character is from the technological civilization but he isn't that smart and the only thing he kind of well on was archaeology but because of the war archaeology wasn't an important subject so he decided to join the army because it was the only job he could do.
What happens is that the leaders of the civilizations decide that the key to winning is to get weapons from ancient civilizations like the robots.
What happens to the main character is that after a narrow escape from death he is told that he is going to the squad that saved his life and that are are going to be the ones who are going to get the ancient weapons from ruins of ancient civilizations and the squad he joins is the one that was made to show unity of the civilizations and a member from each civilization. all of the members are strong but they have mostly been given small missions like clean up remnants of the enemy force after the battle. i havent got all the small details down but the monster one is tall and doesn't talk much and keeps a straight face but isn't emotionless when he gets mad or happy he shows it. the one from the magician uses earth magic and gets along best with the other member. she is like the nice older sister of the group and she tries her best so the other members get along. the one from the technological is a genius and mostly fights from long to mid range using different weapons like sniper rifles and machine guns.
I can't draw at all so if someone is interested in drawing then message me with a sample of your art or if you want to talk about ideas to exshade57@gmail.com
BAsically, a demon gave up almost all his powers to come down into the human world. But now he wants it back. He succeeds, using the art of alchemy, But it goes wrong...He didn't get all his powers, as half of it was transferred, as he couldnt handle all of it, since he got so adjusted to it...so to his demise, he now has a creature with more power than him, and it turns out to be himself, except this ones independent against him. So Now the copy's trying to kill the original, to be the only one....
Title: Angel Squadron
Type: military.
Genre: war, scifi
This tale revolves around a Marine AH-1z Super cobra pilot, Captain Mike "Joker" Ruflin, stationed with Echo Battalion's Bulldog Squadron in Afghanistan. He's married to his college sweetheart, Ali, and lives back in a small town called Black Springs, in Georgia.
While on mission, Mike's helicopter is shot down by an unknown weapon in a great blast of light, killing his gunner. Alone, unreachable by para-rescue, and 150 miles inside hostile territory, Mike starts an arduous trek across the landscape of Afghanistan, armed with only a 9-mm. Beretta. Coming across a mortally wounded soldier named Diggs, Mike learns that Al-Qaeda has acquired a state of the art defense system. Before Diggs dies, he warns Mike that the Russians are involved.
After burying the soldier and taking up his M4, Mike continues. Over time he meets up with other marines and soldiers.
-SSgt. Wesley "Fat Cat" Irons, a heavy set African American with a friendly disposition. He lost his entire platoon in the wake of mysterious attack, hallmarked by a blinding flash of light. He becomes Mike's closest friend and confidant. He specializes in heavy weapons and demolitions.
-Lt. Rodrick "Phantom" Xavier, a Marine sniper. Rodrick and Mike bash a lot because Mike is Catholic, while Rodrick is a fiery atheist. Over time, however, the two accept their differences, knowing they need each other to survive.
-Sgt. Nick "Toads" Harley, comms officer. His nickname is because of his pet desert toad, Pouches, that lives in his utility belt pocket.
-Cpl. Francis "Sunny" William, mechanic and driver. Francis is a tank driver and mechanic who lost his crew in the midst of a suicide bombing. He dual wields twin 9 mm. and is homosexual.
-Cpl. Chino "Checkers" Ramirez, support specialist. Chino is a Mexican immigrant who moved his family to escape the drug cartels. In the military, he fantasies that every enemy he brings down is a drug lord, as he lost his sister to cocaine.
The six form an inseparable team, code naming themselves Angel Squadron (Mike's AH-1 callsign was Angel-1) and embark on an epic trek back to friendly territory. Along the way, they assist locals in fighting off Al-Qaeda and gather intel on their mysterious weapon and its backer. He is revealed later on to be an ex-special forces named Packard McGrath, a Russian-American communist.
Packard wanted not only Russia to return to communism, but bring America into his beliefs as well. His weapon, a superconducting atomic laser, is the weapon that shot Mike out of the sky and destroyed Wesley's platoon. With his enormous wealth obtained through arms dealing, Packard means to coerce the American Government to step down in exchange for sparing billions of Americans from his weapons.
Knowing that moving the weapon could doom the American forces, Angel Squadron, against the demands of General Genning, deploys and successfully destroy the weapon. Packard, enraged that his plans have been stalled, ambushes and tries to kill Mike, but is foiled by Wesley, killing him instead. Packard escapes, but not before a furious fist fight with Mike. As Angel Squadron is airlifted out, Chino pulls the pins on Wesley's dropped grenade belt and throws it into Packard's Mi-24 Hind, presumably killing him.
Angel Squadron mourns Wesley's death and vow to never let each other down in their times of need. Mike returns home to Ali, on leave after his journey and meet in a tearful embrace. The manga/anime ends with Rodrick stating, "I've no belief in God, but after what we've been through, I do know there are angels. And there watching over us all..."
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i make this
please read :)
It seemed so cold and dark inside here… as if I'll never find the light again.
It seemed as though the room was closing in on me.
I felt as if I've been deaf for many years.
The only thing that could have saved me was the thing I feared most, death.
But there was no way I could die, because I couldn't feel a thing, unless I'm dead already? But don't they say death takes you to a great world full of goodness, truth and beauty? - That was not what I felt…
The only thing I could hold was- Myself, but I couldn't even feel…
All of my feeling were stuck in a black shaded bottle, and sent away in my tears which were forced to stay inside my stoned heart.
I moved my hand towards my chest, to feel my heart and know that I'm still living.
I felt it, I did. But it had been broken into pieces. Not just any pieces. Pieces of broken- glass, slashing my chest to bleed in the inside.
I tried closing my eyes, but I couldn't tell the difference…
It was no use at all! I felt I was doomed.
There's no way I could get out of here.
Must be the place that I was meant to be in forever,
Now the only thing left, was trying to convince myself that it's what's best.
I tried to get up, just lift myself a little closer to heaven.
I couldn't tell the difference when I moved and stayed.
I must just stay. In here, not anywhere else! I can't!
My heart broke into even smaller pieces when I kept on forcing myself to cry knowing the pain is for nothing.
You need strong feeling in order to cry, and without feeling at all, neither inside nor outside, I knew it was all for nothing.
Finally I was able to push myself out of there, (I have no idea how) and I began to remember…
I had no body to feel now, just air, just broken air.
It was worse than I'd thought.
I saw a picture of myself, as a normal kid, with my friends, watching a horror movie while cracking-up, on my blue couch at home.
Then, I never would have guessed it was real, or even a finger close to being real. But it all reveled to my eyes at once, so suddenly.
At last, I began understanding my disability to feel, though I preferred not understanding.
I was what everyone are absolutely convinced in it nonexistence, but still fear.
I slept with light just because I was so frightened by it. Now I am it………….
A ghost!
Does this mean I 'm never going to talk to a person again?!
On the other hand, maybe it's all just a silly dream, just another one of those haunted nightmares..? – Deep inside me I knew it wasn't.
What do I do now? Just stay in my place and suffer from "eternity"?
That's how it all begins...
A long journey of Yoake, a sixteen year old boy, in a world he has never been to, but on the other hand he has always been.
Yoake, after discovering that he is a ghost, and dead, gets out of his room at home and how no idea what's next, when he walks around his street. he realizes that no one is able to see him. Yoake keeps on walking to nowhere when suddenly he meets a strange gray ghost who wouldnt stop laughing at him for being a "beginner". eventually,he is caught into the mysterious world of the dead down here on earth where he ends up on an adventure to discover how he had died, though things just get more complicated when he realizes he cant take the same steps again, and unfortunately, this world has been waiting especially for him.
OOPS!!!
the Manga is called -blue moon... and Im pretty bad at summarizing it... :P
anyways.. PLEASE tell me what you think..
I already started it alittle.. well.. today..^_^
drew one pic of Yoake.. so.. again.. tell me what you think! thanks a ton!!! :) :) :)
This manga is titled: Crimson Midnight
Genre: Action,Mature,Harem,Ecchi,Horror,Mystery,Tragedy,School life
This is just the whole summary of this manga these characters are not copied I originally made them .....but I'm still working on it..
Summary:
Fuujiko Takeishi is a first year highschool student who secretly has a crush on Saike Momoto his classmate. He lives with his 2 younger sisters Fuuruya and Chiho Takeishi. One day their class and Chiho's class went on a field trip and passed through route 54. It has been said that route 54 is considered as the "Deadzone" where many people gets lost and have never been seen or heard from again. But the teachers and staff members of the school doesn't believe the rumors and without hesitation, they passed through route 54.After 2 hours of traveling, they noticed that they were going around circles and ran out of gas and before they know it two of their tires were flattened. The teachers tried to contact outside world but dosent find a signal. They've decided send 5 people to walk through the woods to find help but after hours of waiting they didn't come back. Since it's almost dark all of the teachers and students decided to all go through the woods together to find the missing group and at the same time find for help and later on leads them to an abandoned Facility. While they try to uncover the secrets of the abandoned facility, two of the students accidentally and simultaneously pressed something that caused an earthquake and a sleeping gas and all of them suddenly became unconscious. When Fuujiko and his friends woke up they noticed that they have fallen underground and have been separated by their classmates and teachers and later found out that something is killing them and murdering them one at a time and they sooned found out that there are 3 killers and they are in an abandoned huge underground laboratory........55 students, 5 teachers, 2 bus drivers and 3 killers....will Fuujiko and his friends find a way to escape alive?, will they be able to have a reunion of their other classmates and teachers?........Their Nightmare has just began.......
STAY TUNED.....There are important parts that I didn't include in my summary....oh well, what do you think should I keep working on this manga?? if you want to answer or give a suggestion just email me at Paulix_Troy@yahoo.com :-)
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Nero black
Summary - Nero and Alastor are twin brothers that has been skipping school to doing whatever they can to earn money to send their sick mother to the hospital. On a strange day, mad events happen to Nero and Alastor allowing dem to reach home very late. When arriving home, Nero notice a note at the front step saying,”darkness is comin soon, look for master koga and become a Guardia at Castle Oblivion . My days as your guardian are over, im sorry for lying but I am not your mother, Nero the fate of all dimension is on you” - sincerely mastumi. Before the boys could open the door, the note suck them into a world and a voice echo ” The black hearts”. Nero wakes up and Alastor is nowhere to be found. Nero quest to becoming an guardia has just begun. He will need to find his brother, and find the origin of his birth.
Battle system: Drive- when a Guardia use the burst stored in 2 heart slots(magical and physical)
Execute-When a guardia use the burst stored in all 3 heart slots(magical, spiritual, and physical)Shadow- dark creature that lurk at night, they have black hearts. Grade X-D(strong to weakest)
Witches- Holy gods who became dark and stronger thru the dark fountain. Known to have Brown skin, Dark black hair and Yellow eyes. Most powerful beings in all dimension. Said to be extinct. they created shadows.
Guardia- Special magical solders that fight against the shadows
King- strongest Guardia in the Capital.
Nero-main protagonist, he is the younger twin brother. He is less calm but more cocky than his brother. White, Gray hair to shoulder with black eyes with red pupil. has an black glove he can't take off. he will be a freshman at Magic hearts. he will meet Ryu and and esther. In due time, you will find out why he's different and his drive weapon will be a gun.
yakuza- main protagonist, he is the older twin brother of kasuya. He is more calm and describe to be a bit sinister. White, gray hair(tied up thought like Ken from SF), black eyes with red pupil. Carries a katana he can't shield. can summon magical swords. He will be protecting a family from shadows and view life differently from his brother.
Influence-naruto, psyren,bleach and of course Devil May Cry.
Name: God Of Evil
Type: Supernatural fantasy, religious fiction,mythology,shonen/seinen
Plot: In a world where God is evil and the ultimate power. All the universes are in fear of him.
In a Universe where everybody has the power to destroy galaxies.
The story features on One Migahashi and Yuri Hentai and their friends on the quest to defeat an omnipotent god.
In there journey they encounter many spiritual,religious,scientific entities which they must defeat in order to save the omniverse and face God.
Name: I always win
Type: Martial arts, ...
Story: Boy grows up in dojo as his father owns it and his father says i always win, hence title, as he always beats son in fight ... story goes on boy grows up gets a family and his father falls ill with cancer, doctors give him surgery which prolongs death but dad falls ill again. Son says "Dad i thought you always win" dad replies "I did, i got to see you grow up" X
ok so i just thought of this story... i dont have a title yet. So its like shonen and shoujo :D its a love story action comedy about a funny vampire and an innocent angel who meet each other 1 day. This takes place in the distant future (2084). They pose as humans and they are i guess sole mates. After a while there clans find out about their love so the vampire is sent to a strict prison in heaven while the angel is sent to a very nightmarish cell in hell. They unleash there true power and fight back while find a couple immortal friends along the way and stop their clans. After a great war aginst their clans, the angel is killed and the vampire unleashes a powerful demonic rage and whips out both clans.the vampire is able to bring her back 2 life (somehow) but his mate is very different...
So ya. here's a story from me. haha. i'll write it in points. plz tell me how to improve it. thanks.
*main character--split personality(bad at night..gud at morning kind of stuff)
*bad is aware of good and good isn't aware of bad.
*bad makes a computer program..psychosis. hides it pretty well on comp. so dat d gud 1 can't locate it. <k..i'll call gud 1 G and bad 1 B XD>
*Psychosis: kills ppl thru terrifying hallucinations(victims of psychosis pre-planned by B)
*so this psychosis can hack into ppl's minds..drive them crazy and torture dem 2 death.
the manga begins wid B staring at his comp and smiling slyly (XD)and says *all done..then it shows various kinds of killings. the ppl all ovr world are baffled by this. thn they hear a computerized voice in their hands..yes everyone! XD
*the voice is psychosis's(already implanted into it by B last night)
*so psychosis reveals that the killings were due 2 him. and dat d killings were demonstrations to show d world his power. he wishes to create a new world wid only d strongest and wittiest. about 1000 from each country of d world..and he (B) will be their god.
*so to achieve this he has planned a series of "games" in which only the ppl who are capable (strong and intelligent) will survive.
*apparently..at d timee, japan's (ooh..i forgot to mention dat it's based on japan cz i plan to do it as a one shot in shonen jump) police have contacted G (the good one..who is a sort of child consultant detective XD).
*G and the entire world is baffled by this and don't know what they should do. the police leave G alone to let him do his thinking. G tries to think of a way to trick psychosis. (i need u tell me dis trick..please..!!!!!! and fast..please!!)
*satisfied (although still in doubt) he lays back on his chair and falls asleep..
*so after about 10 hours he wakes up as B. he smiles and says..let the games begin..that wud be a pretty gud trigger for the audience right? i mean..it's all suspenseful and all..rit? cz d audience didn't know about the split personality thing.
*oh..and i improvised a little. instead of broadcasting his message to everyone..psychosis will only restrict it to ppl in japan..that way it'll be easier to explain..he'll first conquer japan..den d rest of d world wid his games.
so that's all..plz help!!
oh..and here's my drawings..i have improved somewhat now..bt nevertheless..plz feel free to look at dem wn u hv time..thanks!
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I have a cliche short manga about a girl named Hana whose mother passed away from an illness. She now stays with her dad whose a flourist, her step mom and little sister. Shes a lot of a tom boy, pretty cool in school, head strong and can have a temper on her. The manga starts showing a girl imbedded in a tree asking her 3 Gardenian knights to find the flower maiden as she is dying and their world is in danger from weeds(creatures bent on destruction).
Hana is part of the gardening committee and is organizing an event for her class for the following evening. Shes hanging with a group of girls when she sees her crush playing soccer on the field. Shes admires his play but her bitchy classmate notes he likes girly girls. She gets mad but the bitchy girl sees it as unladylike and unattractive. On the way home shes bummed out cause she knows the bitch is probably right... As she continues she finds a wilting flower shielded from the sun under a pile of rubbish, she removes it and pours some of her bottled water and heads home. The flower meanwhile glows. The girl returns to the crazy antics of her family and heads to her room. Her step mom asks her about her day but she treats her coldly. (misses her mom) She then heads to her room and wishes to her mom in heaven all the luck that her crush will notice her and that she will 'bloom' into a more girly character that he'd appreciate and so she can love herself more ( despite her popularity).
-meanwhile- a little boy with pink hair and eyes(looks like a girl) in another world runs to the other two knights and says hes found her. They ask him how he knows and claims she was was warm and nice.
The next day the girl is getting ready once again acting coldly to her step mom. her dads talks to her about getting over her mom but she just leaves offended on the way to school she checks on the flower she took care of and is happy to see it radiating, she sobs over missing her mom and not being as girly as everyone else, a tear drops on the flower and the pink little boy grabs her and says "I knew we'd find you maiden!" and she finds herself falling and lands painfully into a world habituated by little chibi flower people who are easily frightened and other weird plant like beings. she freaks out thinking its a dream or maybe the flower she touched was actually a hallucinogen. she presses on to find a way out, she looks up to only see a faded multi-coloured sky.
after a few havoc with the things habituating the land Hana is rescued by a guy in purple, with purple eyes and purple medium curly hair. A guy with blue long hair and a blue robe then comes and asks " how could you have lost her on the way here" the pink little boy sobs claiming he got too excited and didn't mean to...
the purple guy introduces himself as violet and kisses her hand. The blue one is Blue and the pink one is lili.
They tell her shes the flower maiden destined to protect there land from the weeds, horrifying creatures that feed on the life essence of nature, which all life needs to survive even humans. she freaks out thinking she must be dreaming, she demands to wake up. The boys confused assume she just wants to be back in her world and Lili jumps on her and kisses her cheek " see you soon flower maiden' she finds herself back where she was with the flower gone. She heads off to school shaking off her recent experience. While in school her friends are shocked shes late always being on time usually.
she tells them it was a weird morning she had... they continue preparations for the garden party. As she does she sees 3 colorful flowers with a moth and eyes waving at her " :3 HAI FLOWER MAIDEN!" Hana freaks out and yells at them. Her friends are weird-ed out, her crush sees this and asks if shes Okay with a weird-ed out expression. Hana embarrassed runs inside, excusing herself that she needs the bathroom. While inside she hears screams, she runs out to find roots springing out from the ground that form a monstrous creature. It spouts out toxic pollen. everyone collapses in the school as the roots engulf everything absorbing the life energy of the students. Hana is freaking out as she begins to feel faint the roots grab her. She suddenly hears 'blue petal rush', ' violet vine samba, 'lili sunburst serenade!' and she falls from the monster and into the arms of violet.
He tells her she can save the school but to accept her role as maiden, the girl will do anything to save her friends and then violet kisses her hand again, and in an awesome transformation sequence, she finds herself in a charming purple dress. She hears violet in her heart and tells her to fight and do/say what feels natural. Shes uncomfortable with being in such a cute girly dress but reaches inside and says " Vine tesser!" and a feather duster type items appear in her hands, she uses a move called ' violet vine samba' she points her hand in the hair and the weapon extends multiple vines that disperse energy thorns, penetrating the beast, The beast is weakened she then uses 'round up' and purple bubbles appear from her body and dissolve the roots and everything's back to normal. everyone wakes up. Hana finds herself carrying a flower pot with 3 flowers in it. They begin to talk to her " as expected from the maiden," violets exhausted. she freaks out with a " noway! did all that really just happen. No one seems to remember a thing, but continue to decorate the garden for the up coming event, her friends state the flowers are beautiful and would make a beautiful center piece. Hana is dirty so goes to get ready into her t shirt and jeans. Violet not impressed snaps his ( leaf hands? ) and she finds herself in a beautiful purple gown, everyone would never expect her to dress in such a way but her school crush tells her its cute, and shes mega embarrassed. she yells at violet though for being so impulsive.
in the next ep/chapter summed up she is told about the girl imbedded in the tree who is dying. and how if their world dies so will earth as they are connected by the life energy that flows between them,
the flowers join the school. they are pretty boys so everyone fan girls over them. Hana desperately aims to avoid them a lot with no prevail, till they start doing miracles in her life.
little notes, lili dresses in women's clothing and seems to have some sort of slight shonen ai relationship with violet, though its not directly shown, they're just really close, like lili falls over and hurts his knee and ruins his skirt, violet kisses his knee and lili claims his finger is hurt too, so violet licks it and the girls fan girl. the main Chara is just like =_____=.
personality of the flowers would he:
violet: romantic prince like chara, but also a bit clueless
lili: child like, girly cheerful chara
blue: cold/cool chara whose attractiveness comes from his elegance and long mane~
While Hana helps them out they aim to help her 'bloom' into the person she is inside.
sorry its so long ^ ^ what do you think? keep in mind i know how cliche it is XD; I have another main fantasy manga which is more gothic and dark. ( cause i like pain and angst) >_> and tortured ocs...
ok guys here's a story from my old otaku self
the story is set when the world is dominated by demons.the demon kingdom is ruled by lucifer himself.the tyrany lasted so long that the humans grow tried of it.they form an alliance lead by a girl/knight named rolysa hartnet along with her 3 other companion leshel a witch,zem a gunslinger,and celty a sphere wielder.desperate situation calls for desperate move the group sieze the kingdom and come face to face with lucifer,the 4 of them combined was not enough to defeat him and when demonlord is about to stab rolysa the witch cast a spell transporting them in the present time,here the met our protagonist m(holy crap!!!! theres a huge spider crawling on my screen, sis can you get it of my screen thanks!!)sorry about that.......)continue,,,
the protagonist named mak greenfield a nice guys who offered them food and shelter.everything was going smoothly and just when the 4 of them starting to fall in love to mak they found out that our protagonist is one of the powerful demon a scyth wielder and worst a direct decendant of lucifer,obviously they tried to rip his head off and after suffering a harsh defeat from the hands of our protagonist they realize that this world is so much deferent.(the end )..hell no..what if lucifer finds a way our girls this is where the action adventure starts and the epic battle between genaration of demons.....
ok hope you guys bother reading it
time to hunt that stupid spider.....
yeah to Adam7 thats a really great plot and storyline. im in the process of creating my own manga, but I'd rather keep it on the low until its fully developed and polished. But yeah, just keep going on dude. I can see high hopes for Platinum Trigger when you finish it.
I think we should make one about a girl who controls fire and has always been bullied about it in her past. now she has met a person that controls earth one that controls water and one that controls air/sky/wind. now they are looking for a stone which could balance the world. but the main character always has tantrums and her fire keeps blowing up stuff. so she has to learn to keep it under control. oh yeah, and she doesn't really get along with the guy that controls water so there's always tension. could be funny
that sounds awesome~! maybe whenever they get riled up they form a natural disaster so~ fire girl gets angry, stuff blows up/ catches alight. earth person causes earthquake when nervous. water guy for some reason causes it to rain when hes happy or flood when hes overly excited and windy person causes tornado/hurricane when w/e XD; shutsup
Everyone, please try to do in their spare time
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KYOAA9C6kEo
Here is a short one...
Tin of Phoenix
Summary: Verdun, 1916. General Falkenhayn intends to bleed the French Army white in a battle of ferocious attrition. The French high command, caught off guard by this furious German offensive, rushes in men and material to hold the city of Verdun. The battle cry "They shall not pass!" personifies the French resolve. But France's soldiers hang by thinnest thread imaginable as the "Meuse Mill" continues to grind and crush regiment after regiment. Yet the French hold fast. The German commanders, meanwhile, feel the pressure to take Verdun as soon as possible to stop the ceaseless bleeding of their own troops. To that end, they unleash a hellish new weapon capable harnessing the power of fire in the palm of a soldier's hands: the flamethrower.
Claus Fleischer is a young, idealistic, yet naive recruit, popular with the ladies for his looks back in his small town in Germany. Annoyed by the soft living of country life and idle gossip, he joins the Army to take part in the grander purpose of making Germany a great country and to do "real man's work" by fighting at the front.
Ever Idealistic and determined, he vows to come home a hero, telling stories of glorious sacrifice and bravery. Little does he know of the hell that awaits him in Verdun. When he arrives at the front, his company holds a lottery for the man who will wield the new flamethrower, nicknamed "Old Sweat" for its cumbersome heaviness. He is chosen.
Now, he will witness the true face of war in all its ugliness and harshness as he is force to carry one of man's most infamous weapons into in the moonscape of Verdun. Will the "Mincer" grind him into the mud, or will his sanity be minced away before his body is destroyed. Only the battle will tell...
Here's an idea or whatever. I'll be drawing it soon. Name: Akuma-chan! (Dunno exactly yet) so here it is: starts out with a young male highschooler who is darting through the city at night. He has a crowbar and leaps into the air, throwing it as if it is a shurikin at another boy who has long, golden hair, fangs, and eleven ears. The other boy dodges it at inhuman speed, then throws a kunai knife in retaliation, other to have it snatched from midair by a loud, bossy female who jumps out of a manhole between them. Turns out that she is a demon keeper who watches over the two. The initial character is a boy who was normal until he ran into this woman and attacked by her cat. The cats passes on an infusion of demon blod into him, which induces strange side-effects. Eventually, his life is sought after many bounty hunters after his new-found powers prove to be to much to handle. But the girl ones back and offers to be his guardian, because it was her cats fault that he was going to be killed. At her house, he meets another demon named --- who hates him because he is weak and a pain. The have a rivalry that endures the length of the series, while the hero is trying to find a way to redeem himself by becoming a) the worlds strongest demon or b) cleansing himself of his curse. Falling in love with a human girl doesn't help either... this story will be a comedy/ action/ gore/ fantasy and will take place in I dunno yet. Btw the boy lives on his own up till he meets the demon keeper in a small apartment.
AUGHHHH nobody told me my title was taken already TT^TT oh well, back to the drawing boards... -.-
OK guys...heres the deal. Im a student in the 11th grade and i have to submit in an art project on ANYTHING. I decidet to do a manga. My drawing skills are pritty good, according to me and i should be able to pull most things off.. BUT i suck at thinking up realistic plots.... SO i was wondering if you guys could help me out with the plot . FYI it only needs to be like 4 to 6 A3 size sheets...SOOO yeah.
I was thinking of it being a alternate timeline / appoclyptic(I suck at spellings) manga ,Something along the lines of shingenki no kyojin(not a copy though, it should be original) . It dosnt need to end in the no. of given pages...but i would like to make the last page make the reader/examiner want to read more of it ...SO please give me a little help here :P