Post your manga plot ideas... (529)

1 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-11 23:11 ID:OoTDdlRR This thread was merged from the former /manga/ board. You can view the archive here.

I'll start.

I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.

I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.

201 Name: Angel : 2009-09-07 02:52 ID:4iC4iVUw

Well here goes nothing my plot for the manga?story I want to create.

Name:Imperium
Genre:Shounen,Action,Comedy,Sci-fi,Fantasy

Before the planet Earth ever existed there was a planet filled with beings with unimaginable power. This planet was known as Imperium. Ok the plot goes like this. On earth there's a guy named Mitsukai Ametsuchi who lives a pretty average life. One day he has a weird dream in which he's royalty of some sort. In his dream he gets attacked by a person who looks exactly like him.

Next day at school he gets into a fight with the "dumbasses." He ends up getting really angry and somehow summons great strength and speed. He beats the cr%$#@ out of these guys and people panic and call the police. Amidst the chaos he tries to leave the school. Suddenly he's attacked by a figure in the sky. He confronts the figure and it turns out it's a person who looks just like him.

The figure introduces himself as Akumaru Ikijigoku. He tells him that he is actually an Imperian. A being from the planet Imperium the strongest planet in the universe. Akumaru fights Mitsukai and Mitsukai gets owned. Akumaru spares him feeling he's too weak. He decides to tell him that he's also really a prince form the planet and that the other princes and princesses are on earth as well. Akumaru tells him that he will wait until Mitsukai's Potestas develops more before he decides to kill him.

Now Mitsukai has to find a way to go Imperium and find out what it is, find out who that look alike it, find the other so called Princes and princesses, and find out who he really is...

Well that's only a slight summary there's much much more and I've got plenty more plot developed. If there are any artists willing to help me please do!!

202 Name: Kazikun15 : 2009-09-10 09:26 ID:tRHHdNvX

My story is about about a young man named Shin Toriyama. He is an above average student that goes to a school known as Tessho Acadamey. He's popular with the girls, One of the smartest in school and is Captain of the swim team. He thinks his life is boring and that nothing will change that. Until one day he sees this girl who's beauty to him is undefinable. He finds out that she goes to his school, but she isn't alone. When she gets there she is followed by a twin sister, which makes the story get better. As he thinks he's falling in love with the quiet, shy, and graceful one, he's slowly falling for the hyper, energetic and more chaotic one.

203 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2009-09-12 10:00 ID:MzvRkHSi

Taekwon V vs. Japanese Stereotypes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FZfgUDm7qRk&eurl=http%3A%2F%2Fkarapaia.livedoor.biz%2Farchives%2F51495721.html&feature=player_embedded

Is this mazinger Z?

The South Korean is a thief.
Shameful people.

204 Name: f33r th3 fun : 2009-09-14 03:59 ID:fCPey3vn

here is my idea hope its not bad

there is a boy named fai he is prounced cursed since a war happened the day he was born. umm he has the ability to unlock 95% of his mind givin him the ability to turn anything into a wepon

205 Name: f33r th3 fun : 2009-09-14 20:40 ID:fCPey3vn

here is another idea i had hope its good

it is a story about a box not just any box but its a magic box that holds the place called the event horizn. the wried thing about the story is the all powerfull box ends up in a mental instatuite for trouble teens.

if you want to add ideas i would be hounered
arts also apprecieted

   thanxz

206 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2009-09-16 00:41 ID:/ByV+WMM

>>205
plz tell us moar sounds so interesting have my cyber babies penis penis penis

207 Name: momochan123 : 2009-09-20 17:17 ID:RvaoAG/2

i like the first one by f33 th3 fun :D it sounds really cool luv to hear more ^^ and if you'd like i could try sketching some echaracters for your story too :3

208 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2009-09-27 22:21 ID:bvZkRgsr

>>201
This is pretty good. You say you have more of a plot can you write more of it down?? It looks interesting.

209 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2009-09-30 02:43 ID:HdJYo4q2

Do you even know what an event horizon is?

210 Name: Jeremy : 2009-10-03 11:49 ID:0lIA2Hf8

Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Halos”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called “The Jouzo 4” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Halos were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Halos and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Halos to reside called “Oozora ” they were to stay in Oozora until they were called upon by the Gods. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble and fight off evil spirits, this caused the people to believe the Halos had gone. After the people gave up on the Halos whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Halos keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Oozora and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Oozora throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Oozora , later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Halos are said to lose their powers after being on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Halo for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Halo sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Halo named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Oozora to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Halos to stop her, but in the fight with the halos Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four Jouzo powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.

211 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2009-10-05 03:09 ID:Heaven

>>210
Paragraphs, my friend.

212 Name: Kat : 2009-10-07 21:12 ID:OzXoSYNr

email me sweet kind manga ideas! PLZ!!! Kat0629@kidmail.net

213 Name: gah gah : 2009-10-09 21:48 ID:CYRxZQYl

>>212

wow someone sounds stupid and desperate

214 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2009-10-10 03:03 ID:94Pn6BAf

>>201
Hmm Im not too sure on this one but it does look like it has potential. If I could draw I'd give you a hand but I can't draw to save my life. Maybe some of my artistic friends may help. Anyway it does seem like it can go somewhere.

215 Name: KoganoHi : 2009-10-15 02:22 ID:0/gRZxzK

#149 sounds creepy!

216 Name: The Golden Man Denis!rnKFhHxNxU : 2009-11-05 02:20 ID:g6PwMO9f

Well, it's not exactly a manga plot idea, but I'm designing a RPG that will have a branching storyline and multiple routes/endings. So instead, I'll post the plot that I've come up with for my RPG.
Please note that this plot is still early in development, and many things are not yet clear or planned.

The main characters are going to be Linus Torvalds, and Victor Wooten.

The story is quite long and complicated, but the basic idea is that at the beginning, Linus, Victor, and Deven Gallo are fighting to stop government plans to use alien DNA to create an army of half-human, half alien soldiers, which would be used to gain total control of the earth. But unknown to Linus and Victor, Deven Gallo has his own agenda. His lust for power is stronger than even the most corrupted government officials - he wants to be all-powerful, but just commanding the earth isn't enough. He wants to obtain the alien DNA and research information so that he can transform himself into an ultimate being.
Shortly after the beginning of the game, Deven's true motives are revealed and he leaves the group, and you end up fighting him at various points in the game.
As the story progresses in the game, Deven, obsessed with obtaining ultimate strength, goes through several intermediate stages of transformation. Every time he transforms, his name changes.
He starts as 'Deven Gallo', then 'Slick Deven Gallo', then 'Deven Denis', then 'Slick Denis', then 'Slick Denis 4000', and at the end of the game (at least in some of the routes of the storyline), he reaches his ultimate form, 'The Golden Man Denis', where he is the game's final boss.

Some other twists in the story line is that some years before the events in the story occur, an alien comes to earth and has a child with a human woman. That child is Linus Torvalds - although he doesn't know it until somewhere half into the story. Of course, his alien heritage will give him special abilities that a normal human wouldn't have. And when the government people and Deven Gallo find out about it, they'll be interested in capturing him or stealing a DNA sample from him for study and analysis or something.

In one of the story routes, you'd play from the perspective of Victor Wooten. In that route, Linus will lose control of his evil side, and become a main badguy character. After turning evil, he fights and mortally wounds Victor, stealing his heart (in order to activate his latent alien abilties which require two hearts to use). Victor's dying body is discovered by the fantastic Doctor Penis, who takes him back to his laboratory. He's able to save Victor's life by replacing his heart with a new experimental unit, the X unit. It gives Victor new abilities and a higher HP/MP total, and stuff. Victor laments over 'no longer being human', and wants to get revenge over Linus (but at the very end of the game, forgives him). He goes to stop the government, Deven Gallo, and Linus, all by himself (with some help from various different characters along the way).
During key storyline events, the X unit would gain a level as it grows more attached to Victor's body. Each time this happens, you would gain a new class of abilities.

Continued in the next post...

217 Name: The Golden Man Denis!rnKFhHxNxU : 2009-11-05 02:21 ID:g6PwMO9f

(continued from previous post)
The characters I've got so far:

Linus Torvalds (a computer programmer who works for a government project. His curiosity in what he's been asked to work on gets the better of him, and he gains access to secret files on the project. What he finds horrifies him, and he begins to fight against the government to stop the project)

Victor Wooten (a bass player who hears rumors of a terrible government project. He tries to gain information, the government notice this and send him to jail, where he meets Linus and Deven Gallo. Together they break out and organize their fight against the government)

The fantastic Doctor Penis (a mad professor who tries to do the right thing, but often makes mistakes. After years of research, he has developed an experimental new kind of technology, X technology, which can enhance the abilities of living organisms. He knows about the government project, but is powerless to stop it, until he meets Victor Wooten...)

Deven Gallo (AKA Slick Deven Gallo, Deven Denis, Slick Denis, Slick Denis 4000, The Golden Man Denis) (a young man from America. He is a genius. At first he fights alongside you, but once his true motives are revealed he becomes the main villain of the game. He is obsessed with power, and wants to become an ultimate being. His goal is to obtain the alien DNA, which he would use to transform himself into an ultimate being. Until he obtains it, he can only augment his body using his own technology that he's developed.)

Good Deven Gallo (Deven Gallo from an alternate dimension. He has come to stop the government projects and the evil Deven Gallo, who could threaten all existence. He joins Victor and Linus at some point to fight. He's not as strong as evil Deven Gallo, but he has a special feature - when he was younger, his penis was injured and had to be replaced with a prosthetic penis. This penis works like a normal penis, but it absorbs energy. Whenever an enemy attacks Deven, his penis absorbs some of the energy of the attack, especially if it was an electric or special attack. Once the penis energy is maxed out, it's released in a special move, called 'Deven Gallo's penis'. As Deven's level increases, the amount of energy that his penis stores increases, but it also takes longer to charge up as well.)

The government officials (I haven't a clear idea yet, but probably someone like the president of the USA, prime minister of the UK, etc etc. Power hungry politicians who want to rule the world, and will do anything to gain control)

Prototype soldiers (prototype alien-human hybrids which Linus encounters when he begins spying into the project he's working on. This would probably be the first boss of the game or something.)

218 Name: James Timothy : 2009-11-17 19:06 ID:q243c6HH

I had a good one, but it turns out it was already done. It's called Welcome to the NHK.

219 Name: Kairou Watoshimi : 2009-11-18 01:01 ID:W9K+cf1J

I love how there are so many mean, mean people are here. Is it that hard tosay something nicely? Jeez...

220 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2009-11-18 11:38 ID:mprchryh

221 Name: Person u dont know : 2009-11-18 17:46 ID:P1Js9Co1

ok person this is my theme and dont copy it because i am currtelny making it
Name unknow to u ok?
Ok this girl (main Character) moved from a peaceful town somewhere in jappan then suddnely moves to tokoyo.
Its the first day of school she just moved into her new house and everything she doesnt know no one in toyoko at all to! So her first day of school is the worst day in her life she cant make a single friend for some reason? (i dont know im not going intill detail why!) Well the point is she goes home and she's a egg and her room on her bed (btw the room is finsih being done)
(The egg is a huge egg bout as big as soccer ball) She freaks out to then The egg moves around then boom it hatches into a cat. She screames scared the cat and the cat bite's her and runs out of her room. She faints and when she wakes up she's in a heroline custom she. She has special powers like a cat and for some reason she can talk to cats she deciede she will become a super hero just like the books but is it easy like she thought??? Well that's it so Far if i fine out u copyed my idea dont think i wont sue u cause i will watch me!!!

222 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2009-11-18 20:11 ID:q243c6HH

Why does everyone have a wapanese story? What's so hard about writing a western graphic novel, it's like you lived in Tokyo, or in rural Japan, it's not like you know how people live there everything you know is from what you've read in mangas.

223 Name: Person96 : 2009-11-19 17:06 ID:P1Js9Co1

what r u talking about i lived there for 4 years???
I know lots of things about it to and im asain bet that baka!

224 Name: Person 96 : 2009-11-19 17:41 ID:P1Js9Co1

o my b that is a good point and plus u can do reserach of what u dont know even some things about it to! :]
Sorry i didnt read that closely D:

225 Name: Otaku Manga Dreamer : 2009-11-21 03:01 ID:uZYm5Rbo

Hayoh this is a manga plot i had in a dreem i once had i havent finished it but its good here is the plot conversation i had with one of my best chatroom friends

Kinjagotoru Hituzowa, the antagonest
Nelseru Kudekade, the hero
Mituziga Hittero, the one everyone loves
Hinjero Nitokowa, booth, good and evil, but leaning more towards evil

unknown15 (11:10:32 PM): i suppose
nelseru (11:10:36 PM): well ok
nelseru (11:13:43 PM): nelseru grows up with Mituziga and is a dear friend to her well after a fre years someone visits their town the visitors name is Kinjagotoru Hituzowa (the bad guy) at the time he is 16 of age and he sees her and he instantly falls in love so he returns to his homeland where he later sends 1 of the war bosses after her to clame her as his
unknown15 (11:14:49 PM): ah..i see
unknown15 (11:15:00 PM): it truly is gonna be a love triangle then
unknown15 (11:15:06 PM): will the girl not like him though? or will she?
nelseru (11:16:28 PM): well nelseru dosent like thiss cause they tak her rather roughly killing people, so nelseru trys to stop him, defeats him with the sword his father gave him and rescues her he questions the war boss about who send him and by honer dictates him to tell nelseru the truth and he tells him that kinjagotoru sent him and that he wants her for som reason
nelseru (11:19:48 PM): nelseru takes it upon himself to be her bodygard but he soon thinks that is a mestake when Mituziga tells him that she wants to see kinjagotoru and give him a pice of her mind, nelseru has to fight many battles up to a point where he visits a town whuch was ramsacked by his 2nd warboss ( a berzerker)
unknown15 (11:20:31 PM): oh, i see continue, sounds rather good
unknown15 (11:20:43 PM): haha to be honest sounds like you could even make a video game out of this or something @.@
nelseru (11:20:59 PM): i got the idea with a dreem i had
Type below to start a chat with Unknown15 (idle for 4 mins).
nelseru (11:26:24 PM): wtf
nelseru (11:26:44 PM): i was tipeing and it all dissipeared
unknown15 (11:28:39 PM): haha, oh and sorry i was afk for a moment
unknown15 (11:30:21 PM): now then, will any characters die?
unknown15 (11:30:28 PM): besides like the bad guys pawns and whatever
unknown15 (11:30:34 PM): will like any good guys die?
nelseru (11:30:46 PM): the second war boss dies painfully
unknown15 (11:31:14 PM): oh i see
nelseru (11:31:17 PM): the third is blasted out of exsistance
unknown15 (11:31:19 PM): and how exactly does he die
unknown15 (11:31:31 PM): oh and are any of these war bosses gonna be female?
unknown15 (11:31:37 PM): id be nice to atleast have 1 female one
nelseru (11:31:43 PM): the last one
nelseru (11:32:02 PM): the strongest of teh warbosses considered the leader
nelseru (11:32:23 PM): sorta like the second to last boss in a game
unknown15 (11:33:01 PM): ah, i see
nelseru (11:33:10 PM): there is 2 girls and idk how many boys
nelseru (11:33:57 PM): Nelseru and his partner enter thiss town and see that everyone was dead and mangled he is shocked by how the bodys where placed in a manner whuch said that Nelseru and Mituziga are wanted, as soon as he finished reading thiss outloud a person laying beside a building presumed dead gits up and puts a sword to nelserus neck
nelseru (11:36:40 PM): he questions nelseru and finds out that he is not the derect cause of the massacure but was a cause the same and is deeply enraged (not derectly at nelseru but takes it out on nelseru by fighting him [nelseru lets him win])
unknown15 (11:37:27 PM): ah jake, this is getting really good honestly
unknown15 (11:37:30 PM): like DONT TELL ME ANYMORE
unknown15 (11:37:34 PM): ill just wait till the manga =_=
nelseru (11:37:37 PM): ok
unknown15 (11:37:42 PM): i dont wanna know everything before it all starts ~_~
unknown15 (11:37:49 PM): but that sounds really really really good so far though
nelseru (11:37:57 PM): ty

226 Name: Otaku Manga Dreamer : 2009-11-21 03:01 ID:uZYm5Rbo

Hayoh this is a manga plot i had in a dreem i once had i havent finished it but its good here is the plot conversation i had with one of my best chatroom friends

Kinjagotoru Hituzowa, the antagonest
Nelseru Kudekade, the hero
Mituziga Hittero, the one everyone loves
Hinjero Nitokowa, booth, good and evil, but leaning more towards evil

unknown15 (11:10:32 PM): i suppose
nelseru (11:10:36 PM): well ok
nelseru (11:13:43 PM): nelseru grows up with Mituziga and is a dear friend to her well after a fre years someone visits their town the visitors name is Kinjagotoru Hituzowa (the bad guy) at the time he is 16 of age and he sees her and he instantly falls in love so he returns to his homeland where he later sends 1 of the war bosses after her to clame her as his
unknown15 (11:14:49 PM): ah..i see
unknown15 (11:15:00 PM): it truly is gonna be a love triangle then
unknown15 (11:15:06 PM): will the girl not like him though? or will she?
nelseru (11:16:28 PM): well nelseru dosent like thiss cause they tak her rather roughly killing people, so nelseru trys to stop him, defeats him with the sword his father gave him and rescues her he questions the war boss about who send him and by honer dictates him to tell nelseru the truth and he tells him that kinjagotoru sent him and that he wants her for som reason
nelseru (11:19:48 PM): nelseru takes it upon himself to be her bodygard but he soon thinks that is a mestake when Mituziga tells him that she wants to see kinjagotoru and give him a pice of her mind, nelseru has to fight many battles up to a point where he visits a town whuch was ramsacked by his 2nd warboss ( a berzerker)
unknown15 (11:20:31 PM): oh, i see continue, sounds rather good
unknown15 (11:20:43 PM): haha to be honest sounds like you could even make a video game out of this or something @.@
nelseru (11:20:59 PM): i got the idea with a dreem i had
Type below to start a chat with Unknown15 (idle for 4 mins).
nelseru (11:26:24 PM): wtf
nelseru (11:26:44 PM): i was tipeing and it all dissipeared
unknown15 (11:28:39 PM): haha, oh and sorry i was afk for a moment
unknown15 (11:30:21 PM): now then, will any characters die?
unknown15 (11:30:28 PM): besides like the bad guys pawns and whatever
unknown15 (11:30:34 PM): will like any good guys die?
nelseru (11:30:46 PM): the second war boss dies painfully
unknown15 (11:31:14 PM): oh i see
nelseru (11:31:17 PM): the third is blasted out of exsistance
unknown15 (11:31:19 PM): and how exactly does he die
unknown15 (11:31:31 PM): oh and are any of these war bosses gonna be female?
unknown15 (11:31:37 PM): id be nice to atleast have 1 female one
nelseru (11:31:43 PM): the last one
nelseru (11:32:02 PM): the strongest of teh warbosses considered the leader
nelseru (11:32:23 PM): sorta like the second to last boss in a game
unknown15 (11:33:01 PM): ah, i see
nelseru (11:33:10 PM): there is 2 girls and idk how many boys
nelseru (11:33:57 PM): Nelseru and his partner enter thiss town and see that everyone was dead and mangled he is shocked by how the bodys where placed in a manner whuch said that Nelseru and Mituziga are wanted, as soon as he finished reading thiss outloud a person laying beside a building presumed dead gits up and puts a sword to nelserus neck
nelseru (11:36:40 PM): he questions nelseru and finds out that he is not the derect cause of the massacure but was a cause the same and is deeply enraged (not derectly at nelseru but takes it out on nelseru by fighting him [nelseru lets him win])
unknown15 (11:37:27 PM): ah jake, this is getting really good honestly
unknown15 (11:37:30 PM): like DONT TELL ME ANYMORE
unknown15 (11:37:34 PM): ill just wait till the manga =_=
nelseru (11:37:37 PM): ok
unknown15 (11:37:42 PM): i dont wanna know everything before it all starts ~_~
unknown15 (11:37:49 PM): but that sounds really really really good so far though
nelseru (11:37:57 PM): ty

227 Name: JUstSomeone : 2009-11-23 20:05 ID:ri8ZTmT1

i got some big ideas so far, but you want an advice?, if we take a look at famous things like harry potter, you will be surely asking yourself .....how shed came with that idea?, and the answer my friend is reading books, yeah its surely boring, but u will get more material and you can backup your ideas!, recently i came up with a sensational idea, of course i want that to transform into an anime. Well i should give my e-mail to someone who is interested but i cant, i dont have an alternative e-mail and i dont want to make one, until i see someone ask for it, clearly no one will do that, so i hope i helped and sorry if my english sux, my native language is spanish.

228 Name: peter : 2010-01-02 07:34 ID:eQE1Xg2e

omg the ddr one is amazing

229 Name: ZodiacChan : 2010-01-06 23:20 ID:HZYjslSz

awesum stories!!!

230 Name: dani : 2010-01-08 07:54 ID:vv7C2dXc

I'm still developing this plot. I have no intention of publishing it, I just want it to help develop my writing/drawing skills.

The Title is Muniven.

1100 years before the story takes place, it starts up with a childlike man, who is more "god-like" then human because of his abnormal powers & extended life. After noticing he's not as youthful as he once was he decides to do something fun with his remaining power & life-force. He seals inside his dolls the powers to manipulate (exp. emotion, matter, elements & so on) After creating the mind-manipulator doll he realizes what a dangerous gift the next power is being the power to manipulate souls, or life itself. He chooses to seal it into a mortal child instead, knowing that the power will fade a way with death.

Present: The power has faded through the generations of the main characters (name being Aysha) family. Each one becoming more & more dull & life-less. It was supposed to have died off when Aysha was born, but instead has reawaken within her! Her parents are over-whelmed with the child so they dessert her at the age of 5. The King & Queen are really kind-hearted & think she's really cute! So they take her in to be their sons play-mate. Their son being 7 doesn't like the idea & always mistreats her, never wanting to grow close to something he finds so disgusting.

At the age of 11 Aysha walking past a watering bath area, sees a man bathing with two woman. Becoming embarrassed she starts to run off but he catches a glance of her eyes. He jumps up (with some clothes on) running over to the girl & knows immediately while staring in her eyes that she's the soul manipulator. This man is the water Manipulator, but he doesn't reveal this at this time. Him and his companion, Elixir (she's an enchantress) become maids at the castle to watch over her.

At the age of 19, The Prince, val realizes that he has feelings for Aysha. It's more like a lust or a jealousy of her friendship with the water manipulator. (don't got a name for him yet) On the night of the ball to celebrate the prince he demands that Aysha be his partner to it. On the same night though she began to show symptoms of her awakening. So Elixir & W.M. ask her to sneak off with them. Prince is sorely upset as the night progresses, but they fled off into the night to help Aysha out with what she might not be able to control.

Prince is not a main character throughout the story, but he does have a major role later on with some of the other manipulators.
Almost all of them have their back-stories & plots laid out for them. There's 11 manipulators & I have a few notebooks full on all of their stories so I don't want to write it all out here. sorry.

I really just have to figure out what I want the over-all message to be & the middle part of my main characters story. haha kind of a big deal, but after that I can start drawing names for it. ^_^

231 Name: trulte : 2010-01-19 17:10 ID:JnyuTC7m

i have had an manga/anime idea for a quite while its an horror/adventure/action one.

The title i havent found out yet because i feel like nothing fit right or it has been used before.

ten years in the future where a zombie apocalypse have hit the earth and demons who control them have sprung out of hell because it turns out that Hell exists. The two first years of the apocalypse the humans lost nearly evry town, but after the two years the army finally managed to group upp and charge town after town purging it for infected and demons, but not long after the army started to purge the infected from the town. The H.E.L.L organization started to help the infected killing of the army. This organization have a pact between the infected and demons who control them and they are a rebelling human orginazation.

The story takes around a young boy named Edwin who is surviving in one of the towns that got hit first by the infection. After a god three years of surviving he nearly dies in a attack from a horde of infected. he is saved by an mentally disurbed person who only call him self Psycho. Psycho and Edwin makes a deal that he will help Edwin out of the city since himself enjoy staying in the city killing infected all day long.

Edwin also has a book. From an unknown author. Wich describes an totally diffrent world where the hero of the book lose evrything he has ever loved due to a misunderstanding and corrupted minds. The hero then takes upp an crusade for his vendetta.

Hell is divided into 9 circels or worlds. Where the first seven are the ones populated. while the 8 is one giant prison world. and no one knows about the last one.

Have created alot more to this story and alot more characters, but i think i already have writed to much he he.

232 Name: Schawn : 2010-01-24 07:27 ID:eOUQg9eP

I've been working on this manga for a while. the details are on the site. If you're interested, you should also register.

233 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-01-29 08:05 ID:MmR3hf8x

its a slice of life/comedy i figured id post my idea since no one seems to want to a slice of life one.

its called blue robin.

the owner (havent figured out any names) owns a large apartment complex.

its only tenants are kids that have had a rough life, that ran away from home that ran into the owner somewhere.

the kids all have a story, some are rebellious, others have complete apathy, and some try to live their life in their new home.

so yeah its kind of a story that popped in my head one day, might start writing a book about someday, suppose to be a tear jerker. =P

234 Name: Schawn Lamode : 2010-01-31 19:21 ID:AzXm6pl/

I have been working on a Written/Scripted Manga with my friend, known as The Shadow Within. It has been developing for over a year and a half, and I was wondering if people would be willing to read it, and tell me what they think. We have had to scrap our pages so many times that we have almost quit. This time, we see potentila in our new pages, but we have to see what other people think. You can read it at www.Theshadowwithin.forumotion.com

Please leave feedback. Me and my friend plan on going pro at this, and we need to see if people like it, or not.

235 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-02-01 05:57 ID:nviIa2Pk

>>234
Locutions like "desertous", "hellacious", "tyrannic" and "potentila" do not qualify you to write anything except essays for a remedial English class.

Also, if you aren't an artist yourself (or have one as your sworn blood brother) your manga will never be made.

236 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-02-02 15:20 ID:OTMaaRsu

"Just one thing, magician!"
"........don't you even want to help Index?"
"You idiots, weren't you waiting for this?
A way not to wipe Index's memory, a way not to become her enemy,
an ending where anyone can laugh and eveyone longs for, the very best of the freaking happiest conclusion!"
"You were eating your hearts out over this kind of development!
It's not as if you're a placeholder until the hero comes! Neither are you a dilatory for the protagonist!
Not anybody else and not anything else! With your hand,
didn't you swear to save just one girl!?"
"You wanted and wanted to be the hero! Like in a picture-book, like in a movie,
you would risk your life to protect just one girl; this was the magician you wanted to be!
Then the match isn't over, not by a long shot!! It hasn't even started!!
forget about despairing over a prologue that's only slightly long!!"
".........you only need to extend your hand. For crying out loud, let's start this thing, magician!"

237 Name: IM TIRED : 2010-02-07 17:01 ID:OVaq2vYm

Seriously guys...nowadays the creativity is gone!!!
WTF!!!
I can create an excellent idea anytime I want to!
It's not difficult,It's so fucking easy!
All I see here is "17 years old japanese boy in high school,quiet,cute japanese girl who is also in high school..."
be more creative guys...I'm tired of creativityless mangas(sorry for my spelling...I'm not american)

238 Name: Zarana : 2010-02-13 00:02 ID:HFFeBgWq

Here is my idea, I have been working on this Manga for about 4-5 months now and have planned out quite alot.

It is based around a story of adventure, revenge and love. The theme is similar to Naruto and set around the same time period.

The story is about a world full of fighters who are all blessed with different ability's to control different elements and have different techniques.

Aeroex, the main charecter, is different to all the other citizens of his town. He was born without any natural ability to control any element or technique. However dispite this, his parents (who are both renound exceptional fighters) decide to send him to the local "Arts of fighting Dojo" where he competes with the other students his age to make into the "Platinum 4" (The platinum 4 is each town's top 4 fighters and are formed into a squad to compete in the World tournment championships).

There eventually comes a time where Aeroex feels he is inferior to all his fellow class mates, including Daora, (the best student from the dojo). His best friend "Max" attempts to cheer him up, however Aeroex feels even more inferior and walks out into the forest to think. However whilst in the forest Jenumbi approaches Aeroex. Jenumbi is what the manga calls an "Elite" and is exceptionally powerful fighter and is wanted by all the major cities and towns and is seen as a general "villan" (note that his element is fire). Jenumbi tells Aeroex that he has been watching from a distance and then minipulates Aeroex into believing he knows how Aeroex feels, Jenumbi then offers Aeroex part of his element (fire) in exchange for a deal that Aeroex will do one thing and will oblige into doing one favour for Jenumbi.

Being neglected and feeling inferior his whole life Aereox, then foolishly accepts the contract and is given the fire element. The story then builds up from here.

Summary,
Max (his best friend) uses the techique of "blade impulses" where he uses his duel blades to create impluses which smash "Gin" into his opponent. (Gin is a sense of energy such as Kai, Chi, Chakra etc.) Max is seen as the friendly cheerful guy and is generally a happy guy.

Next is Tayuya, Tayuya uses the element of "Life" and can summon plants and roots to strike her opponents. Tayuya is seen as the lonely female of the group and is in a sense the mother of the lot.

Daora, uses "Wind" to minupulate the battle into his favour and can launch devastating blows to his opponent. Daoara is seen as the "cool" guy in his party and is not to keen on being involved in any group activiteas, his child hood past is rather strange as both his parents are not talked about or seen until later in the adventure.

After, these 4 head with their sensei who is one of the most powerful fighters in the world and is seen as a threat to Jenumbi himself, to the world championships, at this tournament, our four fighters make powerful comrades aswell as powerful enemies such as Raiku (who uses deadly lightning techniques). Raiku then becomes a student of Jenumbi.

As soon as the tournament is finished Jenumbi appears to Aereox and commands Aeroex to betray and slay his sensei in his sleep. Aereox then refuses to do this and Jenumbi replies "Very well" and dissapeares. When Aereox returns home he finds outs his parents were murdered and home was set alight.

Aereox is then completely enraged and attempts to chase Jenumbi and get revenge. His comrades Max, Tayuya, Daora catch up to him and tag along with him. (Their sensei sent them).

However the twist is that Jenumbi planned this all out and attempts to ca-

I can't tell you the rest :P

239 Name: Nachi : 2010-02-13 15:06 ID:+erALm+L

...You see,im writing and drawing a future manga and i'm wondering if my manga plot is good...So please lend me a hand if you dont mind

Title:Learn To Live/Redemption
Genre:Horror,life,shonen,fantasy,supernatural,drama,friendship and a little romance

Well here goes:
Some says cops are bad and some says cops are good,well,to me i agree both of them...But the thing is,im not one of them.Im just doing my job.
Take place in the modern world,El Cardaz(Devil's Heart)*Juz a language i created) is a city that never sleeps and the crime rate is astonishing high,no matter where you go,you will always got rob,always.No place is safer,even the president house is full of what they call Cadozn(Faker).Trying to live her life as an inspector,Rleayan Lonpyie is known for her talent of using 3 six shooter at once.They said she is the only cop in the world that actually cared about being human,or does she?.
One night,while she was chasing a serial killer called 'The Masked'(from my other work),she was shot from behind and in the state of coma.And as if fate were playing with her,she was sent to the past but not the real past,it was just her fantasy realm.
As she lived in her fantasy body,forgeting the real her and learning the way of living,her real life is crushing bits by bit as many people are trying to kill her.Her only hope?Is her just her strange habits of shooting anyone near her even when asleep to stay alive while she learn to live in her fantasy world....

-I know,its hard to understand....But hey,im just 13

240 Name: Schawn Lamode : 2010-02-14 05:34 ID:/c30tglO

This is intended towards no. 235. I couldn't understand a single word you said. If you want to try to "humiliate" someone, at least give actual criticism or make it understandable......

241 Name: that guy : 2010-02-26 03:20 ID:KjrpEb+Z

 I came up with this idea just recently. The manga would be called Soul Eater and genre would be suspense/horror. It's long so bear with me please.

Okay...so there is this high school aged boy named Alexander, who has always been on very bad terms with his older brother Markus.

This is because when they were little Markus was always referred to as "special" and outcast by his family, but no-one (besides his mom and dad) knows why. Sibling rivalry ;)

Anyways, Alexander is invited to visit Markus (who has moved out), in order to re connect and do some brotherly bonding. Markus currently lives in a huge formerly abandoned mansion, of which he rents out so he can make money. (he doesn't have a job, the slacker)

But when Alex arrives he is in for quite a creepy visit. The mansion's other guests all seem to be mysteriously checking out one by one. Or so his brother says. Along with vivid nightmares of the living dead and scary surprises, he suddenly realizes that all his dreams are actually reality. That night he perilously tries to escape from the terrifying house, and the monster that lurks within. While protecting his soul from the 'thing' that is murdering the guests, will he ever find the key and make it out alive?

....He now knows why his brother REALLY invited him over. MWAHAHAHAHA

242 Name: Densha Otaku Search : 2010-02-28 04:15 ID:sZKELuay

I am looking for the FULL original densha otaku forum with no deleted comments....can anyone help?

243 Name: Until The Day I Die : 2010-03-01 04:57 ID:SaNF1Zkp

Im only 13 years oldd, so i dont know, im still thinkin. anyways, the year is set in the 1920s, where one night a boy is one day visited by an distorted demon, not saying a word, just simply standing at the boys height in the midddle of a street one night. The demons body is completey distorted, except for its face, which is concealed by a blank mask, and carrys 7 katanas on its back. He pulls one out, an simply lays it on the ground. He then lifts the mask to reveal the boys exact face, except in an older version, on a stronger body, literally. the face is sewn onto the head. Hes emotionless. He holds out his hand, and points his finger at him, mouthing the words "Until the day you die" and the boy suddenly shot by an unknown being. Before dying, the boy holds out his hand, covered with blood, and tries to key what the words mean. He looks down onto a puddle of blood, seeing his face. The boy looks up, seeing the demon is gone. He falls to the ground, and before his eyes shut, he sees his killer, a young child, about 14, holding the gun out at his head, with tears in his eyes, and a sulken face. As he loses himself, he hears a second gunshot.

244 Name: Rob : 2010-03-07 03:45 ID:uzsVOUWS

These are great ideas. I will try not to copy them but they are a great jumping off point
thanks

245 Name: Another Random Manga Otaku : 2010-03-16 03:38 ID:pVt50nff

Title: SwordBreak
Genre: Fantasy, Suspense, Comedy

"I never wanted this..."

This world was always tainted with chaos. Like a pyramid, Civilizations rose and crumbled. Deceit and slander was common. Kings and Lords fought for power and glory. In the darkness that the earth was engulfed to, 5 houses have stood up to illuminate the hearts of the people. Their gallant and valor efforts have garnered them the elements that make this world. The noble house of Garrelli in which they bore fire. The Salazar in which had the power to manipulate the currents and waters. The Von Haydn in which was given authority to command the tempests and tornadoes. The Monorovia in which the elements of the earth submit to their presence and lastly the Hojo in which was given the right to utilize and conjure the best of metals. With this, The 5 households stood unchallenged and unhindered. But as the metals turn into rust in the torrential rain, ambition and desire encroached and devoured their hearts of. Jealousy and Pride turned one's sword to another. Like a house of cards. The peace that the families created were swept away. The land was tainted with the dark color of war. But amidst the maddening corruption, the house of Garrelli, the bearer of fire, became the light that shone in the darkness. Lord Leandro and Lady Christina never asked for power. They just wanted their responsibility be fulfilled, But as corruption spreads from each house. Lord Leandro decided to end this. They joined the war for the purpose of awakening the other households of the responsibility they ruined. With full force, the noble house of Garrelli fought and vied for supremacy. But as the mightiest of sand castles falls in the current, the valiant Garrelli household was annihilated and their bloodline marked as same of the commoners for treachery. Now with a potential threat gone, 4 vied for the power. Civilizations went and gone, still the bout continues. Now in the modern times, the armies have vanished. The castles gone. And the Knights outdated. But still the 4 families continued to rage the flame of war through their heirs. The heir of the Garrelli, unknown to history lives a peaceful life only to be shaken by the events prepared for him...

246 Name: DafyddNZ : 2010-03-29 00:21 ID:c9fl2qAp

Title: Be careful what you wish for.

A lonely guy has a bad day at his new school and at home wishes he could be different and happy. That night his wish comes true he has been changed into a girl, he is definately not happy about this and tries to pretend it never happened. Some girls find out he is a girl but think he has always been a girl and is crossdressing, and they try to persude him to be more feminine. He is happy to have some friends though he wishes they would stop trying so hard.

247 Name: ninjad234 : 2010-03-31 00:39 ID:0HUmcazJ

I have an original manga story already written so if u guys wanna read it i will post the link; and its copyrighted for u guys that think u r slick xp

248 Name: Pointer : 2010-04-02 20:08 ID:FPhtUeMQ

>>241
Soul Eater is already a manga the anime is extremely good...until the last episode that is the worst anime episode i've seen out of all anime's...

249 Name: Arjun : 2010-04-05 04:24 ID:yzspYFGm

152... What a brilliant idea... No sarcasm here... Its really cool!!!

250 Name: Arjun : 2010-04-05 04:40 ID:yzspYFGm

can anyone write a story for me where the basic plot is that there is a guy who has to fight alongside his friends who are members of this organization (even he is a part of this organization) that aims to rid the world of the "things" which is a major threat to mankind. He and his friends are called "A"(just something i picked on the spot). The "things" are controlled by the "master thing". Can u write down the story in a better fashion and give really cool names for "things", "A" and "master thing"? Please contact me at arjunramesh1992@gmail.com.

251 Name: Arjun : 2010-04-05 04:50 ID:yzspYFGm

>>152

Hey Random Manga Otaku, are you sure that 152 is copywritten? I love the plot, if its ok wit u, can i use it? I will most probably make a manga out of it. Reply me at arjunramesh1992@gmail.com

252 Name: bbf : 2010-04-05 22:41 ID:KjrpEb+Z

@-246(DafyddNZ)

That idea sounds awesome. I think it would be super funny though if the guy(while in girl form) was chosen to be some sort of magical girl. And he totally doesn't want to.

Could be entertaining, no?

And his best friend starts crushing on him XP

So then he realizes his life was pretty good and somehow goes back to being a guy after doing all that prety, magical girly stuff.
Anyways..just a thought!

253 Name: bbf : 2010-04-05 22:42 ID:KjrpEb+Z

@-246(DafyddNZ)

That idea sounds awesome. I think it would be super funny though if the guy(while in girl form) was chosen to be some sort of magical girl. And he totally doesn't want to.

Could be entertaining, no?

And his best friend starts crushing on him XP

So then he realizes his life was pretty good and somehow goes back to being a guy after doing all that prety, magical girly stuff.
Anyways..just a thought!

254 Name: mr. K : 2010-04-07 01:52 ID:nG3a/LZB

ok it's like this

it starts out with a boy about 16 yrs old his name Kintaro he realizes all the crime and hatred this world has acumulated over the yrs he observz this by riding the train and wathing the news everyday. one day on the train he sees a man with a long black coat trying to kill another man and noyone else seems to notice but kintaro. the man thats about to be killed moves his hand across his chess in a swift motion and a katana is his hand wich he uses to try to strike down the man in the coat but the man in the coat chant some weird words while holding out his hand and blast the man into oblivian kintaro meets eyes with the man before he's blasted then he meeets eyes with the man in the coat. the man in the coat holds out his hands and begins to chant then kintaro wkes up in a sweat and in his room is the man that died in his dream. the man says that kintaro in great danger and they need to talk!

255 Name: Master.K : 2010-04-07 02:38 ID:nG3a/LZB

Life in the little town Histaku was pretty normal for 15 year old Michiro... that was until he met Tekai

this is the story of Mirai,A cyborg composed of Michiro and Tekai.Together they are one.

Michiro:A teen whos tired of his day in and day out average scheudle and feels he has nothing to live for. After pushing away everyone who loved and cared for him... suicide was his only option.

Tekai: An andriod who aquired its own persona and feelings. Being persued by an organization called Apollo which focus on taking control of the best andriods and robots to use for personal gain; Tekai is now #1 on ther list. thanks to the agressive tracking of Appollo, tekai crashes to earth in an atempt to escape.

The low down: As Michiro Jumps and falls(fom a bridge), Tekai crashes and falls(from space). Tekai hits and catches Michiro. There eyes meet as Apollo agents are coming after them Tekai opens his chest plate, in that moment a a thick wire reaches into Michiro chest,from there Michiro is consumed by Tekai's chest. They combine creating a anew creation, a cyborg called Mirai. Together they takedown the Apollo agents. (after defusing and getting to know eachother) Tekai and Michiro have agreed to help eachother, Michiro will give his aid against Apollo, and Tekai will give Michiro somthing to live for...

256 Name: Master.K : 2010-04-07 03:18 ID:nG3a/LZB

More insite to the story of "Mirai"(pernounced Me-r-i); if you havent read about Mirai... you should!!!

Michiro has a secret about himself... he dreams of of becoming a pro fighter. but that dream was shattered when his a leg was broken after bieng tripped in a kendo match.

Meeting Tekai has truly changed his life.NOw Michiro believes with the help of tekai he can have the rematch of his life, espesaily when the jerk who beat him has a rich irresponsible dad with the keys to a leading robotic-armor factory... things are getting interesting....

257 Name: f33r th3 fun : 2010-04-09 01:04 ID:fCPey3vn

yo its been along time and here is an idea that you might hate or love.
In this world there lie two others that intercede without ever toching. The world that swings to the right are filled with techno advance people with extreme intellgince and the world that swings to the left whos people do maggic and other arcane arts. one day a man known as Doctor relased a species that used magic and science to evole because it used powers from diffrent interceding dimensions they went beserk and attack all the humans on the middle earth (wich is just regular earth) there the monsters grow and feed .As away to combat the monsters a squad from both dimenson sent warriors but they ablites dont work as well on midlle earth untill they ment a boy with nothing to lose and dawns on the powers of both worlds giving him the sword called white demon and black angel also a summon named shrio.

258 Name: f33r th3 fun : 2010-04-09 01:04 ID:fCPey3vn

yo its been along time and here is an idea that you might hate or love.
In this world there lie two others that intercede without ever toching. The world that swings to the right are filled with techno advance people with extreme intellgince and the world that swings to the left whos people do maggic and other arcane arts. one day a man known as Doctor relased a species that used magic and science to evole because it used powers from diffrent interceding dimensions they went beserk and attack all the humans on the middle earth (wich is just regular earth) there the monsters grow and feed .As away to combat the monsters a squad from both dimenson sent warriors but they ablites dont work as well on midlle earth untill they ment a boy with nothing to lose and dawns on the powers of both worlds giving him the sword called white demon and black angel also a summon named shrio.

259 Name: DafyddNZ : 2010-04-13 02:40 ID:c9fl2qAp

Thanks bbf,

I just thought most of the Gender Benders I've read seem to have the character change their whole way of life after they change. I thought it would be different to have the character try to pretend as if nothing happened and, when they are caught, be totally misunderstood.

260 Name: stefan : 2010-04-19 08:50 ID:1yFI7HsQ

Hi.
I dreamed about a mange plot last night :o)

The humans lives om plans. One BIG building. Humanity has taken up all space on earth, and it is one bis buildings, with 1000 levels.

The most profit and Leaders are on the 10 top floors, and until 0, they get less important. The top 10 buttom floors is for poor peable, beggars and those who cant work.

Suddently monsters starting to appears, nightmare monsters. As the series grow, it starts to seem like someone controls these monsters, and the good guys has tha ability to use light swords, and mental powers (a little like sorceress), and a Battle is beginning to start.
The monsters appears everywhere, no specifik places, so who, or whom controlls these ?

The plot is, that the earth is trying to protect itself, and releases a onetime energy, and the monsters actely is trying to kill humanity, but not going after kills, but destroyng buildings/flooes. However the sideeffect is the humans deffendes allso gets these powers, however the goodside realy didnt know of these powers before the first mosnter attack.

Every floor is like a world. It hads houses, shops and is like a real world, so like 1000 worlds.

Thats what I dreamed.

I allo dreamed that a person dreamt she is flying and sees an island where a man and som children are trapped. Se puts all of them on her flyer and since it cant carry more, she stays at the island and program the plane to return after theyr back.
But she finds a magazine, and its a 1000years old, then she knows that those who have been her, has been here for 1000years. . .
The monsters gets in our world through a dream, but its a dream, dream of the planet, that opens the gab, where the planet makes a ebergy surge ant open some oeables mind for the new power.

sorry about my bad english
Stefan
Denmark

261 Name: stefab : 2010-04-19 08:51 ID:1yFI7HsQ

Hi.
I dreamed about a mange plot last night :o)

The humans lives om plans. One BIG building. Humanity has taken up all space on earth, and it is one bis buildings, with 1000 levels.

The most profit and Leaders are on the 10 top floors, and until 0, they get less important. The top 10 buttom floors is for poor peable, beggars and those who cant work.

Suddently monsters starting to appears, nightmare monsters. As the series grow, it starts to seem like someone controls these monsters, and the good guys has tha ability to use light swords, and mental powers (a little like sorceress), and a Battle is beginning to start.
The monsters appears everywhere, no specifik places, so who, or whom controlls these ?

The plot is, that the earth is trying to protect itself, and releases a onetime energy, and the monsters actely is trying to kill humanity, but not going after kills, but destroyng buildings/flooes. However the sideeffect is the humans deffendes allso gets these powers, however the goodside realy didnt know of these powers before the first mosnter attack.

Every floor is like a world. It hads houses, shops and is like a real world, so like 1000 worlds.

Thats what I dreamed.

I allo dreamed that a person dreamt she is flying and sees an island where a man and som children are trapped. Se puts all of them on her flyer and since it cant carry more, she stays at the island and program the plane to return after theyr back.
But she finds a magazine, and its a 1000years old, then she knows that those who have been her, has been here for 1000years. . .
The monsters gets in our world through a dream, but its a dream, dream of the planet, that opens the gab, where the planet makes a ebergy surge ant open some oeables mind for the new power.

sorry about my bad english
Stefan
Denmark

262 Name: Angel : 2010-04-21 18:52 ID:enL9H4Ey

My plot has been developed and Ive begun writing the story/manga. If there are any artists out there please let me know. For those interested my story is called Imperium. I posted the plot a while ago. I will give some of the characters and their names:

Alexander Caelius
Lucy Pompilius
Luna Superbus
Marisa Priscus
Zephyr Marcius
Aethon Hostilius
Demetri Tullius
Chrona Tatius

263 Name: hijikuani : 2010-05-09 15:42 ID:xwLBG8lD

Angel, I'm a comic, manga and anime storiline artist. I need ides, my buyers want somehing fresh and new. Any ideas?

264 Name: Angel : 2010-05-12 19:08 ID:mqfSSHnV

Well if what you are saying is true then I will need some sort of proof or verification that you are an artist. Also what do you mean by buyers? You just want ideas for artwork or do you want full plot details and ideas?? Please let me know because Im working on a story/manga

265 Name: Angel : 2010-05-12 19:11 ID:mqfSSHnV

@263 If what you are saying is true then I will need some sort of prrof or verification that you are indeed an artist. No offense is just that anyone can write anything down. Of course I also need to know what exactly you want from me and Ill give it. I want my story to be a manga so If you want to draw for me all I need is proof of your work and Ill give you the polt. If you like it great if not oh well that's life.

266 Name: leah perschke : 2010-06-02 02:54 ID:LGwe88ET

hi im leah and im makeing a manga i want it to be a cute romance but with originality thats where you come in eny advise!!!! ok so im hear for the wrong reasons but heres the the guy that i made up im makeing the story revolve around him and a girl but i need some sort of main like is one a vampire or is he a angle somthing intressting please ok heres his profile
ATOM DATE (atem)
Atom: profile
Eyes: light blue to green
Hight: 6’2
Skin: medium light
Eye shaped: flat striate
Hair: dirty blond
Blood type: AB
Race: white
Body type: athletic
Body shape: fit trim
IQ: 180
Atom has two personalities one is his mask. He puts on this mask when he is in front of other people. This personality was entirely made up by atom to protect himself. This personality is charming, nice, cool, quiet, collected, responsible, serious, mysterious, intelligent, calm, and can be like a robot. Well you get the picture just an average cool guy. But underneath is a man who is fun, sensitive, outgoing, loud, and caring. He is a person who gets embarrassed easily. He can be unintentionally a pervert, and is vary outrageously goofy. He loves music, to write and to have fun but due to his past he had to throw himself out to live up to expectations that people had for him. When he was only 5 years old his mom died of illness and since he was so poor they could not pay for a doctor or medicine. And at the age of 8 his father killed himself leaving atom alone and an orphan. When atom was 10 he was adopted by a rich family who only wanted atom so they could have a legacy. And if atom wanted to live nicely he would have to change if showed any weakness, love, or compassion for anything besides what his parents wanted him to love If he was not obedient he was severely punished.
Atom is a new transfer student at newel high school he’s a sophomore now. He transferred from America where he lived overseas for 2 years. About 3 months ago he came back to Japan his foster parents are on vacation and are traveling all around the world. They give atom weekly founds and let him stay at their estate. They want him to work for Delta Omega Company (the company his parents own) He doesn’t want to tough but he studies anyway because he believes that no matter what that there’s no way for his fate to change. Atom now living alone in a huge mansion wants to attend school even though he doesn’t need to. His parent say ok has long has you keep your grades which was amazing that they agreed they must have been in a good mood when he asked. But there was one thing though that he kept from his parents it was that the school he wanted to go to was a public school.
ok thats it please help D:

267 Name: leah perschke : 2010-06-02 03:00 ID:LGwe88ET

i have a person but no story please im trying to make a cool romance/comidy/phychological/ you know just a original romance so i was wondering if enyone could help or vote like should it be a vampireor angle or what ever im stuck so look at this profile and see what you want to addATOM DATE (atem)
Atom: profile
Eyes: light blue to green
Hight: 6’2
Skin: medium light
Eye shaped: flat striate
Hair: dirty blond
Blood type: AB
Race: white
Body type: athletic
Body shape: fit trim
IQ: 180
Atom has two personalities one is his mask. He puts on this mask when he is in front of other people. This personality was entirely made up by atom to protect himself. This personality is charming, nice, cool, quiet, collected, responsible, serious, mysterious, intelligent, calm, and can be like a robot. Well you get the picture just an average cool guy. But underneath is a man who is fun, sensitive, outgoing, loud, and caring. He is a person who gets embarrassed easily. He can be unintentionally a pervert, and is vary outrageously goofy. He loves music, to write and to have fun but due to his past he had to throw himself out to live up to expectations that people had for him. When he was only 5 years old his mom died of illness and since he was so poor they could not pay for a doctor or medicine. And at the age of 8 his father killed himself leaving atom alone and an orphan. When atom was 10 he was adopted by a rich family who only wanted atom so they could have a legacy. And if atom wanted to live nicely he would have to change if showed any weakness, love, or compassion for anything besides what his parents wanted him to love If he was not obedient he was severely punished.
Atom is a new transfer student at newel high school he’s a sophomore now. He transferred from America where he lived overseas for 2 years. About 3 months ago he came back to Japan his foster parents are on vacation and are traveling all around the world. They give atom weekly founds and let him stay at their estate. They want him to work for Delta Omega Company (the company his parents own) He doesn’t want to tough but he studies anyway because he believes that no matter what that there’s no way for his fate to change. Atom now living alone in a huge mansion wants to attend school even though he doesn’t need to. His parent say ok has long has you keep your grades which was amazing that they agreed they must have been in a good mood when he asked. But there was one thing though that he kept from his parents it was that the school he wanted to go to was a public school.

268 Name: Indeed : 2010-06-14 17:07 ID:PPdwxOzE

I like making plots xD Below are some I made up on the spot so obviously they're up for grabs. Personally I like to stray away from the "orphaned protagonist" stereotype and give my people parents. If the orphan streak keeps up, all of Japan will have serious psychological issues D:

Jane= Lead female character
John= Lead male character
Jane1/2/3/etc= extra females
John1/2/3/etc= extra males

(this way you can find your own original names)

  1. Jane hates school, and especially science and math, until one day in science class she’s partnered with the nerdy, school-obsessed John who shows her the wonders of the universe through a telescope.
  2. Jane has never believed in magic until one day she agrees to go into a Haunted House with her magic-believing friend, Jane2. Jane2 makes it out of the house okay, but somehow great magical forces make the house inescapable for Jane until she can learn the spell that will allow her to leave. Inside the house, she befriends vampires, ghosts, demons, and witches, all of whom help her to search for that one spell, but even if she finds it, will she even be able to make it work?
  3. Jane2 is the fashion idol of her school; so of course everyone is absolutely shocked when Jane, the fashion offender of the school who can barely even match her socks up, let alone clothes, is offered a high-paying modeling career. With a LOT of practice and through a lot of hilarious experiences, Jane one day finally surpasses Jane2’s fashion knowledge.
  4. Unknown to the current residence of the 100 year old home, a pile of old bones lay beneath the floor boards. When John accidentally scrapes his hand on a rusty nail and spills blood on the floor, the bones turn into an evil demon and haunts/kills anyone who takes even one step into the house.
  5. Jane can see into the future, and starts a journal of the things that are to happen to people in the near and far future. No one knows of her gift or her journal until John, her close friend, finds it and reads that he is due to die in 1 month from being hit by a car. Although the ancient sayings wisely claim that “future happenings usually occur due to the paths we take to avoid them”, the two friends are absolutely determined to prove the future wrong.

You can see my full list at http://inubasket.deviantart.com/#/d1hsvet

269 Name: kurobushou (dark sloth) : 2010-06-15 21:43 ID:IZhHbiJE

Title: Wolf Runners
Era: Some what technological but they have no guns only swords and older weapons.
Summary: In a world filled with literal darkness, where the only light for humans comes from flames/lanterns, there are creatures that prey on whatever they can. The humans only protection is small towns and cities with stone walls. They're so afraid of the dark that they won't even step foot outside their stone walls. The only saving grace is the wolf runners. What started as experiments on children to implant wolf eyes into them, has become much more. The original experiments didn't work so they started fusing wolf DNA with the DNA of young children. It worked, giving the soon to be called 'wolf runners', the eyes, ears (hearing, not literal ears), nose (smell not literal nose), and reflexes of wolves. So what happens when a town catches a fatal disease and has no vaccines or wolf runners to go get some? It falls on the youngest person of the town, Loup Canis, to try and become one. Key word is try, since Loup is 12, 10 years older then the oldest child the operation was successful on. The operation was a success, but Loup has abilities that no other wolf runner has. So join him on his quest to find the vaccine, find out why the operation was a success, and discover what his abilities can do.

270 Name: kurobushou (dark sloth) : 2010-06-15 21:47 ID:IZhHbiJE

if you use this for an idea please give me my credit. so give all credit to http://kurobushou.deviantart.com/

271 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-06-16 01:44 ID:sk/EQFC+

Come Japan! Im waiting for you.

272 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-06-27 08:13 ID:Wsfk8ktu

ok what if theres this really popular celebrity and goes to the main characters school but the main character really hates him. m.c has a best friend who really LOVES that popular person and the pop. person is the bestie's brother. (brother complex lol.) the bestie is rich? the pop. person and m.c are the best people in the school and are perfect but the m.c is n.2 and pop. person is n.1 and m.c is trying to beat him. then p.p starts hanging around m.c alot because hes grown an interest in m.c ever since she said she hates p.p because everyone loves him except for m.c then everyone thinks m.c and p.p are dating then the p.p fan club starts harrassing m.c because she's so close to p.p but bestie and p.p save the day. (woohoo) then m.c and p.p get together in the end. but i still havent decided how. and p.p is a wolf in a sheep's cover and only m.c knows his true smile and glare and stuff. p.p isnt the same with m.c. p.p is his real self with m.c. special a and kare kano reference lol. p.s genre is school life,romance, comedy and name is ... i dunno. m.c is called harriet and p.p is called max but stage name skander hill. p.p really hates being called his real name. bestie is marion. m.c and p.p are in year 6 nearly in high school and are in src and school captains. australian school theme. and coincidently yhey are in same high school, same class and same subjects and sit right next to each other in class and m.c goes ehhhhhhhhhh?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? just like in shoujo manga. hi. i like pai.

273 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-07-14 04:20 ID:/YOLfhxC

Paragraphs, people. It's not hard to press the enter key.

274 Name: engazio@gmail.com : 2010-07-17 17:00 ID:8gYOVl8g

if someone wants huge comics archive, pls let me know,, or send me email

275 Name: zachary_kolbe@yahoo.com : 2010-07-20 02:02 ID:I4iUFRwC

ok so im not good at making stories but i am good at drawing manga and would love to help people out with artwork just email me or add me on facebook

276 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-07-29 04:58 ID:i6X3f3oD

Clerk: "Do you have our royalty card?"
Me: "Uh?"
Clerk: "Would you happen to have our royalty card?"
Me: "What?"
Clerk: "Huh?"
Me: "Uh"
Clerk: "Not royal yet, eh? Well, just sign this form here..."
Me: "Huh"
Clerk: "Huh?"
Me: "So, er, it can change?"
Clerk: "What about?"
Me: "I... the card?"
Clerk: "Oh, if you keep using it the rank will go up,
     and the card will change, yes."
Me: "Oh that's cool"
Clerk: "Then, just fill in this form, it's free of charge."
Me: "Will I ever get demoted?"
Clerk: "Huh?"
Me: "Uh?"
Clerk: "Oh, about the expiration date, the points will expire after a year of non-usage"
Me: "What is that I don't even"
Clerk: "If you come often, the points will never expire."
Me: "This too what is this I don't even"
Clerk: "Huh?"
Me: "Uh"

277 Name: Just a person : 2010-07-29 16:13 ID:d0h56DPU

@ Random Manga Otaku

Mind if i use the beginning of ur DDR manga idea? The part bout going to the arcade and buying a mat- have some of my own ideas after that part C:

278 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-08-06 08:34 ID:Heaven

>>277
sure why not

279 Name: Ketseukimoon : 2010-08-14 07:52 ID:Xv13/+ne

hey everyone i have a manga idea

but i have a group on FB where u can read it
hope you enjoy it :)
http://www.facebook.com/?ref=home#!/group.php?gid=121196634570853&ref=ts

280 Name: NO7A : 2010-08-14 15:18 ID:byEPFnyM

Hi there !

I have this idea :

genre : Action,Supernatural,Comedy,Zombies

the lemoned said : there is super zombie appears every 400 years from the Curse Graveyard , and there is an Organization who stand against the supernatural things like zombie , so their bosses send a strong team ( 2 girls and 2 boys ) to catch this zombie ,then they face up the zombie who seems naive , and try to catch him , however his naive movements saved him , suddenly his movements has change ; because his zombie's curse had broken , but he couldn't use it good , so he lost his power and Fell to the ground , and it was easy to them to take him now , later when he wake up the Organization tell him that " will you work for us against the evil or we will kill you" , he was afraid of course so he answered immediately : I WILL HELP YOU FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE !!!!! , then they make him the leader for the strong team which fought him before , this organization'bosses had noticed that there is an evil organization has a secret way to change human into zombies , so they give a mission to the super hero and his team to handle up with this organization , and from now on their travel has begin ....

I hope you understand my plot because my English is not good , sorry for that ...

281 Name: NO7A : 2010-08-14 15:19 ID:byEPFnyM

Hi there !

I have this idea :

genre : Action,Supernatural,Comedy,Zombies

the lemoned said : there is super zombie appears every 400 years from the Curse Graveyard , and there is an Organization who stand against the supernatural things like zombie , so their bosses send a strong team ( 2 girls and 2 boys ) to catch this zombie ,then they face up the zombie who seems naive , and try to catch him , however his naive movements saved him , suddenly his movements has change ; because his zombie's curse had broken , but he couldn't use it good , so he lost his power and Fell to the ground , and it was easy to them to take him now , later when he wake up the Organization tell him that " will you work for us against the evil or we will kill you" , he was afraid of course so he answered immediately : I WILL HELP YOU FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE !!!!! , then they make him the leader for the strong team which fought him before , this organization'bosses had noticed that there is an evil organization has a secret way to change human into zombies , so they give a mission to the super hero and his team to handle up with this organization , and from now on their travel has begin ....

I hope you understand my plot because my English is not good , sorry for that ...

282 Name: NO7A : 2010-08-14 15:21 ID:byEPFnyM

Hi there !

I have this idea :

genre : Action,Supernatural,Comedy,Zombies

the lemoned said : there is super zombie appears every 400 years from the Curse Graveyard , and there is an Organization who stand against the supernatural things like zombie , so their bosses send a strong team ( 2 girls and 2 boys ) to catch this zombie ,then they face up the zombie who seems naive , and try to catch him , however his naive movements saved him , suddenly his movements has change ; because his zombie's curse had broken , but he couldn't use it good , so he lost his power and Fell to the ground , and it was easy to them to take him now , later when he wake up the Organization tell him that " will you work for us against the evil or we will kill you" , he was afraid of course so he answered immediately : I WILL HELP YOU FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE !!!!! , then they make him the leader for the strong team which fought him before , this organization'bosses had noticed that there is an evil organization has a secret way to change human into zombies , so they give a mission to the super hero and his team to handle up with this organization , and from now on their travel has begin ....

I hope you understand my plot because my English is not good , sorry for that ...

283 Name: D_A : 2010-08-16 12:12 ID:RP3FG8ik

There are 2 worlds War world and Real world, one such as the world we live in now and another which was once like the world were living in except it has people with superior human abilities but ruined by war and segregated by the poor and rich. War world is run by a society called Iso 7 much like the government of today and it's in control of this world. Although everyone is bind to obey this society theres a rebelious group who plan to take down this society they're called freerunners. The freerunners are capable of things any human being would never be able to do for example there are 3 people who are top of the top in this group they're called John 'Lightening' Clues, Kevin 'Krypto' Climestone And Leader of the group Bella 'Bella' Living. Although all of these people in the group are very special there is something extremely different about Bella, and this is in when the real world comes in. Bella is shares her soul with a girl named Nina Kiruma from the real world, they share their soul as in when Nina sleeps Bella collapses. Being in the predicement shes in where shes about to participate in war this is a massive issue for bella !

The group come together and decide that the best way to solve the problem was to kill Nina in hope that bella will learn to live freely, so John and Kevin go to the real world in search of nina to kill her.

However whilst john and kevin are on the trip Bella gets word from an elder that if nina is killed bella shall also be killed in the process, so bella goes down to the real world herself to warn john and kevin of the consequences, but instead of meeting john and kevin bella somehow ecounters nina beforehand and something weird and incredible happens which changes the whole story!

As bella and nina share one soul when they met eachother they're soul bined into 1 and, Bellas body and skill became of ninas but nina still kept her memories, so when john and kevin finally found ninam nina fought back with persistance and overcame as she is the once known warrior 'bella'. when john and kevin went back to the war world to tell the story of nina being too strong bella wasnt they're for them to tell their story to.

Apart from one other person who was sister to bella by her father named Anneree but was a soldier bound to the army of iso 7 and she was seeking revenge over bella for giving her a scar to remember and simply just for being the evil one.

Annaree went down to the real world as she was the only one smart enough to assume that bella had formed into 1 with nina, and she went down there to kill nina herself. Nina also has flashbacks every now and then from memories of the war world so when annaree and nina, nina hadnt a clue who annaree was until she recived a flashback and defeats her but then looses her memories of it all and annaree goes back to the war world.

john and kevin result in holding hostage ninas best friend in the war world in hope nina will follow to help them win the war after they came to the conclusion that nina and bella formed into 1, as nina doesnt know about war world it takes some time for her to understand where she is and also nina is confused because her bestffriend was reported dead. sooner or later nina finds her way to the real world and fins her bestfriend and the freerunners, and after convincement she decides to help fight against the iso 7 and after the war was won nina returns home without her friend as she was killed by annaree, but when nina goes back to the real world she also got reported dead and resulted in living in the war world which was now turned into a world of peace.

284 Name: Nina's Story : 2010-08-16 12:16 ID:RP3FG8ik

There are 2 worlds War world and Real world, one such as the world we live in now and another which was once like the world were living in except it has people with superior human abilities but ruined by war and segregated by the poor and rich. War world is run by a society called Iso 7 much like the government of today and it's in control of this world. Although everyone is bind to obey this society theres a rebelious group who plan to take down this society they're called freerunners. The freerunners are capable of things any human being would never be able to do for example there are 3 people who are top of the top in this group they're called John 'Lightening' Clues, Kevin 'Krypto' Climestone And Leader of the group Bella 'Bella' Living. Although all of these people in the group are very special there is something extremely different about Bella, and this is in when the real world comes in. Bella is shares her soul with a girl named Nina Kiruma from the real world, they share their soul as in when Nina sleeps Bella collapses. Being in the predicement shes in where shes about to participate in war this is a massive issue for bella !

The group come together and decide that the best way to solve the problem was to kill Nina in hope that bella will learn to live freely, so John and Kevin go to the real world in search of nina to kill her.

However whilst john and kevin are on the trip Bella gets word from an elder that if nina is killed bella shall also be killed in the process, so bella goes down to the real world herself to warn john and kevin of the consequences, but instead of meeting john and kevin bella somehow ecounters nina beforehand and something weird and incredible happens which changes the whole story!

As bella and nina share one soul when they met eachother they're soul bined into 1 and, Bellas body and skill became of ninas but nina still kept her memories, so when john and kevin finally found ninam nina fought back with persistance and overcame as she is the once known warrior 'bella'. when john and kevin went back to the war world to tell the story of nina being too strong bella wasnt they're for them to tell their story to.

Apart from one other person who was sister to bella by her father named Anneree but was a soldier bound to the army of iso 7 and she was seeking revenge over bella for giving her a scar to remember and simply just for being the evil one.

Annaree went down to the real world as she was the only one smart enough to assume that bella had formed into 1 with nina, and she went down there to kill nina herself. Nina also has flashbacks every now and then from memories of the war world so when annaree and nina, nina hadnt a clue who annaree was until she recived a flashback and defeats her but then looses her memories of it all and annaree goes back to the war world.

john and kevin result in holding hostage ninas best friend in the war world in hope nina will follow to help them win the war after they came to the conclusion that nina and bella formed into 1, as nina doesnt know about war world it takes some time for her to understand where she is and also nina is confused because her bestffriend was reported dead. sooner or later nina finds her way to the real world and fins her bestfriend and the freerunners, and after convincement she decides to help fight against the iso 7 and after the war was won nina returns home without her friend as she was killed by annaree, but when nina goes back to the real world she also got reported dead and resulted in living in the war world which was now turned into a world of peace.

285 Name: Rooster93 : 2010-08-16 22:58 ID:rPbfr/Ah

Title: ?
Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy(hopefully), drama, minor romance?, shounen….

After decades of colonial rule, the country of Aorbinn called for a Revolution under Charles Harper. Two years after the Revolution, Aorbinn was under a state of peace and in the process of rebuilt itself. Sadly, Charles became ill and quickly passed away. Charles death brought upon a new leader, young and fierce with different ideals. Surprisingly, the young leader was one of the many followers that help Harper organize the revolution. Many have wondered if he was to be the true successor of Charles, but at the time being Aorbinn is under a state of militaristic ideology. Bonds that were once tightly knitted are now being severed while just a strand of hope is lying within the country.
Since Charles death, a group of freedom fighter have risen within Aorbinn. Their leader is no one other than a once well trusted friend of Charles, until his name was soiled and dishonored. Today, Cedric Kane is the founder of the liberation army that occupies a small fraction of the country. The liberation army is the last hope Aorbinn has before is falls into a state of absolute tyranny.
At this time, Cedric has gained the resources adequate enough to start making his move. The story focuses on a small group of followers that execute varies mission to make the campaign a success. Like every one else, their main goal is to stripe the power of the current ruler and have Cedric rule Aorbinn.

Side note: I’m planning at the beginning of the story to have a kid (17-20 years old) that wants to join, but I’m not sure how. Any suggestions and ideas would be definitely welcomed. Also if it is possible to incorporate the kid, I’m hoping that a baby sister (8 years old) could be included but I’m not sure how. Like a reason as to where she is and how she’s not with her older brother.

286 Name: Rooster93 : 2010-08-16 23:01 ID:rPbfr/Ah

Title: ?
Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy(hopefully), drama, minor romance?, shounen….

After decades of colonial rule, the country of Aorbinn called for a Revolution under Charles Harper. Two years after the Revolution, Aorbinn was under a state of peace and in the process of rebuilt itself. Sadly, Charles became ill and quickly passed away. Charles death brought upon a new leader, young and fierce with different ideals. Surprisingly, the young leader was one of the many followers that help Harper organize the revolution. Many have wondered if he was to be the true successor of Charles, but at the time being Aorbinn is under a state of militaristic ideology. Bonds that were once tightly knitted are now being severed while just a strand of hope is lying within the country.
Since Charles death, a group of freedom fighter have risen within Aorbinn. Their leader is no one other than a once well trusted friend of Charles, until his name was soiled and dishonored. Today, Cedric Kane is the founder of the liberation army that occupies a small fraction of the country. The liberation army is the last hope Aorbinn has before is falls into a state of absolute tyranny.
At this time, Cedric has gained the resources adequate enough to start making his move. The story focuses on a small group of followers that execute varies mission to make the campaign a success. Like every one else, their main goal is to stripe the power of the current ruler and have Cedric rule Aorbinn.

Side note: I’m planning at the beginning of the story to have a kid (17-20 years old) that wants to join, but I’m not sure how. Any suggestions and ideas would be definitely welcomed. Also if it is possible to incorporate the kid, I’m hoping that a baby sister (8 years old) could be included but I’m not sure how. Like a reason as to where she is and how she’s not with her older brother.

287 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-09-06 12:02 ID:Yr5lupg3

During the colonial era - Japan sends pilgrims further east to colonize the new world the same time as the pilgrims were.

I'm not creative enough to come up with what happens next. Maybe a bunch of fighting and shit.

288 Name: AmriSakura : 2010-10-02 19:35 ID:+K1S4Ce6

believe it or not this one is one i made up like four minutes ago while browsing through all of your idea's(man was it hard not to write that in slang^ ^)Tell me where i can improve on it
seeing that this one of my first shounen idea's since i usually do shoujo
Name:-E.M.B.E.R
Type Mecha,shounen,Drama,Comedy-(though might not have it)
Plot-Ember is a half human,half android that escaped the U.S Laboratory Base to a discreet part part of Japan hoping to fit in with the society that's around her.At first it worked out well but then she started to malfunction being an uncompleted project and she became the ultimate killing machine(at least to those she hates)And there is only one person who can stop her and he's a missionary assassin that is five times stronger than her.(That's as far as I've gotten and of course there's gonna be a twist after this in the middle and probably a few changes)

289 Name: chute : 2010-10-11 12:03 ID:AJTJQ9P+

title: unexpected

there has been a war between good and evil cults around the world, Napo joined the cult to restore the life of his parents and potential to lead the world of cult.Karim, the youngest leader of good side cult still live in a normal life with her younger sister Ashira, but one of the leader of the evil side named Napo will use his power to manipulate her sister against karim. As Ashira grows up Napo will hypnotize him to chased him. The cult of Karim will use some protectors against Napo.

1.The cult will choose Karim, explain her mission but still manage to grow up with a normal life
2.Karim will be one of the leader opposing evil in this world, Napo on the other hand also has a mission to eradicate Karim by using her little sister Ashira.
3.Ashira grows up and begins to chase Napo, but still some protectors to remove Napo's curse to Ashira will be there.
4.Finally in Ashira's side she finally win the heart of Napo but eventually Napo finally succeed, but KArim discover his palns and do everything to get rid of Napo.
5. Napo’s heart was drastically changing into better, and falls inlove with Ashira, he even forget his bad motive and decided to live his cult and change for the better but still his guilt decided to go away
6. Ashira left their country broken hearted and KArim is still cautious on Napo’s plan.
7.Still bunch of protectors around Ashira to swindler her attention with Napo but seems to have clue on everything and decided to move on continue study abroad.

290 Name: chute : 2010-10-11 12:05 ID:AJTJQ9P+

title: unexpected

there has been a war between good and evil cults around the world, Napo joined the cult to restore the life of his parents and potential to lead the world of cult.Karim, the youngest leader of good side cult still live in a normal life with her younger sister Ashira, but one of the leader of the evil side named Napo will use his power to manipulate her sister against karim. As Ashira grows up Napo will hypnotize him to chased him. The cult of Karim will use some protectors against Napo.

1.The cult will choose Karim, explain her mission but still manage to grow up with a normal life
2.Karim will be one of the leader opposing evil in this world, Napo on the other hand also has a mission to eradicate Karim by using her little sister Ashira.
3.Ashira grows up and begins to chase Napo, but still some protectors to remove Napo's curse to Ashira will be there.
4.Finally in Ashira's side she finally win the heart of Napo but eventually Napo finally succeed, but KArim discover his palns and do everything to get rid of Napo.
5. Napo’s heart was drastically changing into better, and falls inlove with Ashira, he even forget his bad motive and decided to live his cult and change for the better but still his guilt decided to go away
6. Ashira left their country broken hearted and KArim is still cautious on Napo’s plan.
7.Still bunch of protectors around Ashira to swindler her attention with Napo but seems to have clue on everything and decided to move on continue study abroad.

291 Name: radishtable : 2010-10-16 06:09 ID:iDt7P3M6

Bill Sanzen the richest man in the world, has nothing to do with his billion billion cash. so he decided to share his money.he called his butlers and they threw the money all over japan.It was raining with cash. All poor citizens in tokyo became rich,and tokyo became the richest city in the world.

but a secret organization of robbers wants to conquer tokyo and steal all the cash, and also fuck the bitchy tokyo girls.so One day the secret organization attacks Tokyo. they are all armed with guns and hostaged the tokyo people. but they didnt know the secret weapon of tokyo that the money was spent to. they made all people in tokyo a super human.a human that is 10x stronger than ordinary human.the robbers was captured.then tokyo became a place where people are scared.Bill became the emperor of tokyo. and fucked all the bitch tokyo girls.and they will soon rule the worls and fuck other bitch girls from other countries

292 Name: RMM : 2010-10-16 20:21 ID:I4KRCUVu

Tittle- Right the Wrongs

The main character was a victim of bullying ever since he was 7.
4 years later, the bullying stopped as a boy saved the MC from anymore bullying.

They became friends, best friends to be exact! 4 more years later, the friend got killed cause of bullying and the MC sweared that he will live his life for him(kinda gay, but well-meaning).

293 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-10-18 12:12 ID:3KqvAI25

A manga about motherfucking construction workers, full of manly tears and band-of-brothers-esque moments. Women appear rarely, and if they do its incidental.

294 Name: Adam7 : 2010-11-10 16:24 ID:k5gHd72/

okay, really worried about posting this one coz I cant afford to have this stolen by some narrow minded lazy prick. As a result of my unease as to post this or not im omitting nearly all of the story but I will say my anime/manga possesses 3 story arcs to date and the 'CHEM-ware tournament' arc is the 1st one. You all seem to be cool dudes with some impressive ideas so feedback would be great. Here goes:

Title: Platinum Trigger
Genre: Action, Sci-fi, Japanime

The year is 2051 (Goichi Suda referrence ftw!) and Japan is the setting for an epic saga of love, revenge, power, betrayal and some sick-ass killers stackin' up the bodies in a kill-or-be-killed tournament where the real enemy is never where the rain falls. Platinum Trigger is the story of Zander Chase, a proffesional asssassin turned prize fighter, as he ascends the ranks of the CHEM-ware Enterprises fighting tournament that pits the best killers from around the world against each other in a ranked elimination style tournament. In a future fuelled by war, land and power-politics countries and corporations can no longer sustain conflicts and PMC's in lieu of state armies thus tournaments such as this have gained notoriety across the globe as a way for countries and companies to sponsor fighters and still propagate their interests without wars and such. Although all fighters are sponsored, Zander remains unsponsored and unknown in 10th place even though his skills could claim him 1st place.

The truth is Zander stays away from the top spot in order to avoid Scarlet Ichida, the woman who Zander loves. Zander stays in a lowly position so as to protect her from upcoming killers and also to avoid the notice of the tournament officials. Zander's master, Dan Honomaru, teaches Zander the ways of battle with his trusty weapon, Quad-Sabre. Zander's weapon, the revolver Mononoke, is maintained by Zander's 14 year-old otaku 'technician' Chichke Rouro from Chichke's make-shift shop '51st Heaven'. All of Zander's ranked matches are delagated by his unscrupulous, money-hungry agent Emile Vander and as if that weren't enough Zander's childhood friend (who also has a secret love for Zander) Miritamie Fey mobs him with his fan-club, 'The Chase Appreciation Society' that Miritamie is the Chairman Vice-person of (a title of her own design).

And so Zander dwells in the lowley ranks until Scarlet Ichida appears on national television and declares that Zander Chase is responsible for her fathers death seven years ago and that anyone who can kill or capture him has an instant shot at the no.1 spot. Seeing that Scarlet has been sponsored anonymously even though anyone would be lucky to aquire her as an asset, Dan starts to suspect foul play. Sensing old enemies astir, Dan instructs Zander to climb the ranks and clear his name. Reluctant to do so, Zander and Mononoke begin their fight to the top with Scarlet Ichida-the deadliest woman in the world and the love of Zander's life-awaiting them at the end of their struggle...
... and thats as far as I can go due to my fear that this idea may be stolen. If the world were perfect then you would all be treated to Platinum Trigger in its full form: the essence of a Shakespearian tragedy within the body of a colourful, edgy battle-ridden bleachesque epic fit for modern anime. All comments appreciated: stealing of ideas not appreciated (wonder if i've made that clear enough?).

295 Name: Kietonsb : 2010-11-10 18:20 ID:Q8RksczI

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I think i am a good story teller sorry but that sentace says no lol

296 Name: Adam7 : 2010-11-11 01:17 ID:k5gHd72/

Sorry I didnt say this earlier but there are some inspired ideas here. Random Manga Otaku you are one crazy bastard!!! I liked the one about the forest girl and the one about the human race going genocidal in an attempt to kill every other species. Cant be arsed looking for them again: not out of disrespect to ths pieces but coz im on a Wii and it would take ages. Oh as for the issue of people asking to lend ideas and beginnings and stuff, such a possibility is out of the question regarding the work I posted. Dont wanna sound like an arsehole but thats the way it is.
Also, anyone posting on this site from Manchester, England eho would like to illustrate my manga please request to do so as there is LOADS more to it than what I have posted on this site! Im a top writer but I cant draw for shit so a talanted manga artist would be appreciated; that doesnt mean you need a degree or anything so dont worry!

297 Name: Winston Gabga : 2010-12-22 10:19 ID:9dg8QIZQ

Hi dear Mangas my name is Winston and i'm from Cameroon.I wish to have a helping hand in the Mangas industry cuz i have come out with a new cartoon which is called STRANGE BOYS.but the problem is i don't have the means to continue because i lack a computer,i mean the various things needed to make my cartoon alive. please i will need help from u guys because cartoons are my passion in life but because i lack his things it has made me to be discourage to continue drwaing but it does'nt mean i have given up. please i will stop hear for a while.To contact me my email address is wgabga@yahoo.com or u might as well contact me at Winstongabga@yahoo.com.

        THANKS FOR YOUR HELP

your faithful Mangas Viewer

   WINSTON

298 Name: Sharotto-kun : 2010-12-24 08:40 ID:3gMUegJc

Er....is this thing even active anymore?

299 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-12-26 07:12 ID:Heaven

>>298
You'd get your answer if you'd read the dates.

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