I'll start.
I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.
I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.
my idea is that well if your interested please reply
meh
he comes to the city. everythings different: although hes a country lad, somehow hes still perceived as 'smart' rather than 'a bogan'. expectations fail to materialise. he decides to turn a new leaf and try to be the best man he can. first day in his old flat. sees a girl from his new school, converses with her, pleasantly surprised at how different ciuty girls are to coountry girls. more intelligent. thery beocme mates. he decides to bury his porno magazine collection in the bakyard, and stumbles upon a jar of old japanese war memoir under the tree. he gets the girl (an exchange student) to translate it, but the script is cursive and difficult to translate. as the girl comes to his apartment everyday after school to translate more of the memoirs, they start to bond. as the passages reveal the past, they must make difficult decisions: reveal to public or no? stay loyal to a country or no?
pretty good set up, but there should be more of a point to why they are translating it, or rather, more of a personal connection between the translating and them, like it is documenting some love during the war.
that, and your spelling sucks XD
Nero selene (のソフトウェア セレネ) may look like you'r average sixteen year old, but underneath the apathetic and serious surface lies a dangerous force.Armed with the ability to summon up swords from thin air and a sadistic,yet phsychotic, personality.Nero has taken it upon himself to destroy everything mythical, from the most harmless pixie to the most bloodthirsty demon. To completely fullfill this, he has to find the four shards of the Akuma (あくま) and the blood of its protector.
Standing in his way are, the lord of the underworld kurayami (暗闇) and his demonic minions,enzeru (エンゼル) and his angelic warriors, werewolves, vampires, a pistol-wielding fifteen year old girl called Tenshi (天使), and EVEN the shinigami. With all these factions standing in the way of his dark vendetta, will he succeed or fall?
1 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-11 23:11 ID:OoTDdlRR
I'll start.
I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.
I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.
95 Name: hiiragi001948 : 2008-11-03 23:59 ID:SUP5UBtD
WAR OF DREAMS is my manga.
96 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-09 03:07 ID:N5MOwFkj
you have any idea how brilliant that is?
97 Name: 88 : 2008-11-09 11:11 ID:Heaven
>>96
No?
98 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-10 03:45 ID:eXjmDGSa
I meant as for a story thing, not as an actual pick up line XDDDDDDDDD
99 Name: poa : 2008-11-17 06:23 ID:58sAY0y9
there once was a boy that had the head of a fish
100 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-18 07:51 ID:/f+9zF6y
ACK! Merman mutant!!!
101 Name: ? : 2008-11-19 06:06 ID:btLdRnvA
my idea is that well if your interested please reply
102 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-23 09:22 ID:9Eqdj0au
meh
he comes to the city. everythings different: although hes a country lad, somehow hes still perceived as 'smart' rather than 'a bogan'. expectations fail to materialise. he decides to turn a new leaf and try to be the best man he can. first day in his old flat. sees a girl from his new school, converses with her, pleasantly surprised at how different ciuty girls are to coountry girls. more intelligent. thery beocme mates. he decides to bury his porno magazine collection in the bakyard, and stumbles upon a jar of old japanese war memoir under the tree. he gets the girl (an exchange student) to translate it, but the script is cursive and difficult to translate. as the girl comes to his apartment everyday after school to translate more of the memoirs, they start to bond. as the passages reveal the past, they must make difficult decisions: reveal to public or no? stay loyal to a country or no?
103 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2008-11-26 10:40 ID:/f+9zF6y
pretty good set up, but there should be more of a point to why they are translating it, or rather, more of a personal connection between the translating and them, like it is documenting some love during the war.
that, and your spelling sucks XD
104 Name: Flameinfernus : 2008-11-30 09:17 ID:1lBmjJMt
Nero selene (のソフトウェア セレネ) may look like you'r average sixteen year old, but underneath the apathetic and serious surface lies a dangerous force.Armed with the ability to summon up swords from thin air and a sadistic,yet phsychotic, personality.Nero has taken it upon himself to destroy everything mythical, from the most harmless pixie to the most bloodthirsty demon. To completely fullfill this, he has to find the four shards of the Akuma (あくま) and the blood of its protector.
Standing in his way are, the lord of the underworld kurayami (暗闇) and his demonic minions,enzeru (エンゼル) and his angelic warriors, werewolves, vampires, a pistol-wielding fifteen year old girl called Tenshi (天使), and EVEN the shinigami. With all these factions standing in the way of his dark vendetta, will he succeed or fall?
u guys have awesome stories o.o i heart them all the DDR one made me lmao omgz i have an idea but im not sure its good enough yet xb do u thnk u can help me out
Xb
Cute2 (The "2" will be above the "Cute" like in an exponent!)
A disillusioned teenage girl(I'm thinkin' Katsumi or Amaterasu...) wishes upon a star that she would be "cute" in the eyes of her classmates(She's got glasses, short hair, ect.) When she wakes up the next morning, she's cute after all, but not in the way she imagined, when she gets emotional her appearance changes and cat ears appear on her head and she gets a tail! What can she do? Also, she starts to see weird things that no one else can see. Who did this?
I plan to sketch the characters soon, tell me how it is! Thanks!!
Well if anyone cares i draw some manga. I work on miniature pages and drawing technuiqes but my story telling skills are really lacking. Anyone who wants can give me an idea and my brother can help with the writing...and on the very far off chance something comes of it I'll mention your help...if u want -_-
super cool idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a dark shadow comes out of hiding every night at 11:59 killing people who commit crimes in a vigalanty way but leaves no evidence or reason of death the only way people know "it" exists is from witnesses. The wierd thing is that it kills multiple people in multiple areas all in one minute. at first youd think that its not strange but he kills a man in england, a woman in brazil, and another man in india all in one minute.
the story revolves around a criminal who also works in the same way that the "shadower" does(as the media calls it). anyway he tries to find out what the shadowers about and where he came from the plot line goes something like this
1.introduction chapter: shows murders and introduces main protaganist
2.protaganist tries to find out more about shadower and meets a reporter that finds out he's a criminal so he kidnaps her and she helps him out.
3. they lure the shadower out and find out he's a man and talk to him for a small while and the man fades away
4. they go to the news station where the reporter turns on the protaganist getting him arrested.
5. the shadower breaks the protaganist out of prison and they get the reporter and leave to some building with blacked out windows and no clue as to where it is
6.they realize the shadower has a time machine that lets him go back in time for one minute which shows how he can be in different places at one time.
7. the shadower reveals himself and as a shock is a police man who's family was killed by a home invasion. so he decides to keep it from happening to anyone else but along the way becomes corrupted and goes mad.
8.he descrides to the protaganist and reporter about how he kills people with no trace. he uses a super powerful radiation
gun thing that sends thousands of radioactive waves through the body that kills the person almost instantly with no trace.
thats all i got so far and any suggestions would be nice I'd also like some comments to (^=^)
QwQ awesome ideas here guys!
i've always been the kina person to think up a story/manga that i could really get into yet... never finish it^^;
demo...i just wanna post some ideas myself now
see what anyone thinks
Title: Rainbow Girls {R.G}
Genre: Harem, ecchi, romance, comedy
Summary:
Hey there, i guess your wondering whos that poor guy carrying all those heavy yet colourful bags. Well, believe it or not, thats me. Handsome devil arent i?
And just so you know those bags arent mine. They belong to my employers, or should i say my OMEGA HAWT MODEL employers.
Lucky Bastard arent i?
-plonk-
"Oops, hehe my bad Shu-shu!!tehe!!!"
Well most of the time anyway.
Now you see that dark skinned devil girl? yea the one with the orange dress. That's Mikan, my personal tormentor and youngest member of the 'Rainbow Girls', a group of gor-g-e-o-u-s cover girls for my Uncle's big top secret company thing, which i am now working for. My most generous uncle -tch yea right- gave me a spot as the Rainbow Girls play thing...sorry assistant.
Please note i am being VERY sarcastic.
And for the record my name is Niji Shu! not Shu-shu!!...
Note to self: Murder Mikan when we get home.
"Gomen Shu-san are you ok?"
Ah, Ki Himawari-chan~ always so thoughtful! Honestly i swear this girl is the only sane member of the group. She's young and beautiful, with her soft silver locks and a sunny yellow dress, ahhh~ she always brightens my day.
"Mush-mush lazy bones! i wanna be at the Hot springs oh by, sometime this WEEK! JEEZ any SLOWER and the turtles will beat us there!!!"
That blonde loud-mouth in blue? That's Ao Sora, my personal pain in the ass, a bossy blonde with one massive mouth.
"ugh, can someone shut miss-whats-er-face up?!! some of us need some sleeep!"
The lazy moaner is Ai Kon, or Rainbow Indigo. But to me, she's my best friends girlfriend, her real name being Tsuyukusa Kohana. My boy Gin doesnt even know she's a famous model! Course i swore i wouldnt tell him. Kona would beat me crapless if i did!!
"Maybe if you werent such a party animal, you wouldnt be so tired"
Did Aka Bara just speak!? That chicks one hot ass lady in red but with a killer persona. Rarely speaks, rarely cares. Though her and Kona were two of the first rainbow girls so they have some history. Bara doesnt tolerate the rest as must as she does Kona.
"Oh Bara-saaaaan~ always so dominating!!! ehehe!!"
Midori Kusa, resident Rainbow Green and proud lesbian. Or Bi. Its real confusing sometimes. I tell you red's are very confusing. Well this one is anyway.
"Cock a foot in'it Kusa!"
"Go get drunk bitch!"
"Bite me"
"...mmmm now there's a thou-"
"Dont even Whore-face!"
"Eh c'mon girls! dont fight be happy! we're on HOL-E-DAYZ!!!!!"
Second Blonde rainbow girl and Dopey Violet as i refer to her, Sumire Ayame. How that girls always so happi i'll never know. Nothing phases her. 'Cept tying shoe laces. Then she needs my help.
"Yeah and poor me never gets a break"
"You arent being paid to take breaks, REMEMBER!!!"
"tch, i hardly get paid as it is"
"Feh, count yourself LUCKY you even have a job working for us!"
Actually i do, Cause my days are always more colourful with these girls.
And their about to get even worse.
-
So yea ^^; thats it a lil intro, oh and as for the names, i wrote them in traditional japanes, you know last name first.
Each girl represents a colour of the rainbow.
And each is NAMED after that colour
Ao Sora = Blue Sky
Aka Bara = Red Rose
Ki Himawari = Yellow Sunflower
Midori Kusa = Green Grass
Sumire Ayame = Violet Iris
Ai Kon = no full translation but it stands for Indigo
Mikan = is like orange i guess
and thats it
do you like?
Girl meets guy. Girl kills guy. Girl finds out guy is girl. Girl weeps at failed yuri potential.
my manga is soon to be transformed into an anime heh well here it goes ... i guess =/. My story takes place in modern day no setting yet and is about a 45 year old war veteran serving in the military as a general.Time passes and he sees that war is changing so rapidly and quickly that he starts to question his motives for war and thus escapes from a military base where he is currently living under the watchful eye of the government. All is not right in this world because as soon as he escapes the base everything goes crazy and the dawn of a new war is emerging. The government searches for the general as he tries to escape but he is eventually captured and held against his will. They force him into war and he leads his army into a war he hasn't even imagined... consisting of the typical Japanese mech suit robots but with a twist of betrayal among high powered government officials and secret assassination. He is now trying to escape his life of war and his efforts are futile until he gets ambushed and he and his men are claimed dead but he just barely escapes with wounds everywhere and wakes up in the base of a secret underground band of terrorists which are here to bring down the corrupt government and bring freedom to their country. but what do you have when a war veteran once loyal to the military has his doubts and questions his own morals and beliefs? There is more than meets the eye to this story as secret experiments and biological warfare are taking place... human experiments, lies, deception, FREEDOM! What will we have to pay to stop this war and why it rages on with more force than ever!. I REALLY WANNA WRITE THE STORY FOR THIS AND IF ANYONE HAS FEEDBACK CONTACT ME VIA AIM EMAIL OR MYSPACE: AIM-> XxrottingdeathxX. Email: XxrottingdeathxX@gmail.com Myspace:-> myspace.com/gabegrantsyoudeath
ehh srry myspace is wrong in my last post its actually myspace.com/deathisyouronlychoice
this guy and his friends smoke weed and get into a bunch of crazy shit based on my life experiences
how bout this
title : none yet
genre: sf, romance, drama
earth year 22xx, nothing has changed much except for the fact that all the world's digital devices are run by a single super-computer.
the world is thrown into chaos when the computer's "consciousness" goes missing
as it materializes in the body of a 15yr old girl as a result of it's creator's final command..
what happens when this runaway super-computer encounters a popular high-school idol who hates technology?
There's this boy who wants to be Gourmant King and he sails the sevens seas beating the Cook warlords one after one. After defeating Cocozal, the first cook warlord..he presented the boy a Angel donut. After eating it, he gained the hidden recipy of Coconut a la chand. SKip. Ending: he dies.
Ok, Im relly thinking of turning this into a real Manga, so no stealing! Kurenai is a normal 19 year old vet intern/collage student. Until she moves to Tokyo. There, she mets a boy named Ginta. Her and her new dormmate, Natura (i came up with the name at the last minute!) are curiuos about this "strange boy," and follow him one night. They accendently get sucked into another era, with no way out! There, they met a hot-temperd hottie named Dan. They quickley learn that they have "specail powers," and have to save the world! They meet, "Kimmiko, Kilala, Shika, Tamika and Tamiko twins, Hakku, Sabrina and Hakudoshi (hakudoshi is Sabrina's dog) and Kiba Kurenai's dog" Its kinnda lame. Im thinking of immproving it. Sorry if u think its a little stupid. (its not the best..)
Ok, Im relly thinking of turning this into a real Manga, so no stealing! Kurenai is a normal 19 year old vet intern/collage student. Until she moves to Tokyo. There, she mets a boy named Ginta. Her and her new dormmate, Natura (i came up with the name at the last minute!) are curiuos about this "strange boy," and follow him one night. They accendently get sucked into another era, with no way out! There, they met a hot-temperd hottie named Dan. They quickley learn that they have "specail powers," and have to save the world! They meet, "Kimmiko, Kilala, Shika, Tamika and Tamiko twins, Hakku, Sabrina and Hakudoshi (hakudoshi is Sabrina's dog) and Kiba Kurenai's dog" Its kinnda lame. Im thinking of immproving it. Sorry if u think its a little stupid. (its not the best..)
COPYRIGHT JOHN MCARK
Umm mines a shounen manga soz but its sort of generic, opens with a new exchange student whos split down the middle, black and white, actually hes white but hair and eyes you know. First chapters from the view pooint of a girl whos in a different class from him at first, divided by a wall. one day shes thinking about him when he comes flying through the wall followed by another student from he class. it cuts to black then she wakes up somewhere seinic and he tells her about himself, i'll revise the school issue later. hes half angel half demon, but demons and angels aren't good or evil, angels can heal demons can fight, the bad guys are angels or demons who have become tainted with one of the seven deadly sins they have to fight the bad guys, for the first few chapters. the first major arc would be where he meets a reverse-demon (last minute name, i'll revise it later) who is of the rarest kind, not sure which sin this'll be mind and at the end they have a grudging respect for each other
if you want to know more about characters plot etc. please contact me through my bebo...
soz this is the link http://www.bebo.com/jamesc07004
Those thinking about a DDR manga should just google the awesomeness that is The 10k Commotion. Featuring a cool story, and awesome art, not shitty devianTART fake-manga.
sit around to smoking weed and drink then pass out doesn't sound like a good idea
So far all of the ideas in this thread have made me cringe.
zomg i have an anime idea to its genre is -shonan ai,comedy
a boy named haruko, whos awesome at taking pics and stuff but has no other talents ect wants to go to this special magnet school to exspand his career in photography but harukos dad accidentally sends his application to an all boys modeling program instead. so he totally freaks out but he soon realizes the benifits in his dads dumbfoundary -(a great oppertunity to become a famousy hotty ,a phtographer who takes pics of the hotties or have a hot new bf with one of the other benifits before this one )any way on his stay at the school he meets a show offy male model named jakuri who totally mocks harukos abilities and makes him feel like crap. so they become rivals and what not and he also meets another guy named sota who befriends him in a way just so he can get into his pants(thinking out side the box) so throughout the whole anime haruko must over come these obsticals and survive the critacism just to accomplish his gooals to fame which wont be easy.
plz tell me what u think because im making the anime for my friends and i want random opinions too not just friendly ones tank u
oh n if u have ny questions or whatever just send me a message on my myspace -sierra mabry-night_rose_atone
>>128
I don't like it, and you spell like a year-old crap pile.
well sorry u didnt like it besides i was just thinking off the top of my head ^^ but u didnt half to insult me i know how to spell its just a website u dont half to spell propper or any thing
well sorry u didnt like it just thinking off the top of my head but i can spell and you didnt half to insult me you could've just pointed out that you found it distasteful or something minus the insults^^ not to be mean or any thing
well sorry u didnt like it just thinking off the top of my head but i can spell and you didnt half to insult me you could've just pointed out that you found it distasteful or something minus the insults^^ not to be mean or any thing
Meh, this'll be a one-shot.
Dystopic future where people can't die.
Someone beats the odds and manages to kick he bucket.
Seriously, what's with the hyper-elaborate, epic, sweeping, yet kitschy, overblown and clichéd plots? And bad names...
wow it posted it three times o.o
Ive had a couple manga ideas but im not very good at drawing yet so im goin to wait a little while, and im not entirly sure that they are very good.
Maybe you guys should check out the manga Bakuman.
It's basically about two kids that want to make a popular manga and achieve there dreams. Not only is the manga interesting but it's also got some interesting manga ideas in it.
Check it out.
I love the idea of rainbow girls...that can work well!
Once, I made a 54 episode manga but then I got totally bored and now I have 4 other amazing ideas I hid my old manga away...I can't seem to find them...oh well I'll manage! I'll share ideas latr.Oyasumi!!!
Helpers:
Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Helpers”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called the “Sacred Powers” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Helpers were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Helpers and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Helpers to reside called “Cronos” they were to stay in Cronos until they were called upon by the heavens. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble, this caused the people to believe the Helpers had gone. After the people gave up on the Helpers whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Helpers keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Cronos and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Cronos throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Cronos, later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Helpers are said to lose their powers once on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Helper for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Helper sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Helper named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Cronos to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Helpers to stop her, but in the fight with the helpers Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four sacred powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.>>133
You should read Moorcock's End of Time sequence.
Ok...
In the near future, Mecha fight tournaments are the most popular entertainment sport. Usually the teams with the most resources dominate the game, but a group of underdogs managed to shine... by cheating. Sabotage, bribing, illegal tactics, anything you can name. And they are loved by the crowds because of that.
>>141
Antiheros? I like that.
Alright...
This is my first time and i'm trying to blend both american and japanese tradition. hope ya like it!
Title:Dreamt
Time:Both modern and ancient
The Main char(workin on some names)is a 15 yr old mercenary living a normal life that only he knows about and completing missions and such. what he doesn't know about was that when he was little a crazed scientist melded his body with one of the 8 scattered parts of a legendary demon inside him to see what the effects would be. Unfortunately, he is killed in the rage of the main char. He was told that his parents died in a mission to liberate a local town.However, they died fusing with one of the eight parts and ultimately destroying their own bodies. Time has passed and the town looks to the main character as someone who needs to be protected. Other enemies are looking to obtain the power within this child. For should they be able to obtain even one of the missing parts, they would have unbelievable power. In this manga, bounty hunters, killers , organizations and even allied towns will do whatever it takes to obtain the strongest part of the demon which lies in the main char, the Demon's soul. However the main char looks for peaceful solutions and can be persuaded each way. Who's idea of peace is right? Will peace be an opportunity to wage war, to live in happiness or perhaps.... the rebirth of the planet? Ultimately the fate of the world lies within him. It will be up to him to establish the true idea of peace.
BTW plz don't copy. i took a lot of time into this. hope you all liked it. thx!
>15 yr old mercenary
...yyyeah.
Other than that, sounds a bit (too much?) like Naruto.
>BTW plz don't copy
People who want to copy will. If you don't want to be copied, don't post stuff on the internet. Seriously. It's stupid.
You don't have to worry about people copying your manga idea because only you, you alone can make your manga because if someone were to steal, the people who read this already would know right now away that the person who will not try this cause it won’t work, didn't make it on his own and then you would find out about that, your fans of your idea, then you would re-claim your idea if anyone stole your manga idea, I hope this helps anyone, if anyone wants to contact me for anything like emailing my manga story to you that I been sending to over three-thousand people on internet which they all said was very good this month, so if I email my story, you try to steal it but the people who I send it to will know you didn't make it yourself and how would you make it yourself in more chapters of it if you didn't make it because I only and me alone can make more chapters of it today, tomorrow and any other day when I have time make it.
>>145
You have no idea how the real world works, do you?
My manga idea is about a female detective who works to bring down prostitution rings. She finds Johns by posting on CraigsList, upon meeting she decides wether or not to fuck them before busting them. When she brings them in for questioning she uses many perverse interrogation methods. Because she is screwing around with all of the chiefs of police and her captain she never get reprimanded for her actions. In the course of her work she finds her long lost sister, the killer of her parents, and the pedophile uncle that kidnaped her when she was 4. Who also molested her and made her the nympho that she is today.
Please don't steel my idea, :3
I'm working on a book series and a major motion picture which I'm pitching to Skinimax in the fall.
Here's my idea: A junior in highschool loves to jerk off. He does it about 3 to 4 times a day. One day his mom walks in to find him angrily masturbating to fat black chicks on the computer. He's astonished that his mom caught him. For a while things get really awkward around the 2 of them. He decides to run away and live the life of a squirrel, and just so happens to become a prostitute/ninja/detective/giant robot. During his journey of fucking old fat guys, killing japanese daimyos, solving crimes, and defeating other giant robots, he comes across Rob Schnieder(who just so happens to be a stapler). Rob influences him so much that he decides to become a stapler as well. Our protagonits sets off on another journey to become the best stapler ever. But little did he know........that bein a stapler........is harder than it looks. This manga will be called Derp dee Der. Tell me what you think plz :)
>>149
YOU FORGOT TO SAY DO NOT STEAL PLZ!
I AM SO GONNA STEAL THIS!
MUHOHAHAHAHAHAHA!
anyone want team up with me and make a comic book, BE mY WRITTER im a pertty good drawer
If u wanta team up with me e-mail me at
sakodi@yahoo.com
Heres my Story
The main character is a 16 old highschool student and is the son of a mastermind criminal that died for some reason (hes body wasnt found). The main character is a genius like his father but he is totaly different- he wants to do something grand with his life. The story starts when the main character is returning home he notices a creepy dude with tatoos on his face, a coat and a long magician hat geting out of his apartmant. When he calles out to him the guy ignores him... he runs after him and suddenly the guy stops and does something wierd with his hands and the main character fades. He wakes up in a room with the wierd guy and the guy tells him that he wants him to play chess with him (witch is the main characters strongest game) and the conditions are if the main character looses the wierd guy gives him his long living curse -> He has to kill a man every 12 hours. He looses the match and realises that hes pride has ruined him into his downfall... Now he ends up doing the same thing his father was and he geniusly figures how to kill them being unoticed and the police are after him(ofcoarse they dont know that its him). The main character becomes desperate and thats the first chapter :D
I alredy made this manga and copyrighted it but am looking for a publisher.
(c)Johnsonrights 2009
what do you think?
Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Helpers”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called the “Sacred Powers” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Helpers were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Helpers and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Helpers to reside called “Cronos” they were to stay in Cronos until they were called upon by the heavens. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble, this caused the people to believe the Helpers had gone. After the people gave up on the Helpers whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Helpers keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Cronos and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Cronos throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Cronos, later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Helpers are said to lose their powers once on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Helper for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Helper sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Helper named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Cronos to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Helpers to stop her, but in the fight with the helpers Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four sacred powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.
Summary:
Long ago the world was a place of terror, violence, and war; many people stole, raped, and killed for their own personal gain. There was no sign of hope until the heavens blessed a group of people with special powers they were called “Helpers”, four of these people were given four very unique powers called the “Sacred Powers” they consist of wind, water, lightning, and fire. The Helpers were told to protect the world from itself before it was destroyed, but soon people came to expect help all the time from the Helpers and some even began to try to capture them to steal their powers. Then the heavens made a place for the Helpers to reside called “Cronos” they were to stay in Cronos until they were called upon by the heavens. They were told to help the people only under extreme conditions and not every time a person was in trouble, this caused the people to believe the Helpers had gone. After the people gave up on the Helpers whenever a miracle happens they think it is an act of God or Angles when really it’s the Helpers keeping the world safe. Thousands of years passed and Titan was the ruler of Cronos and had a son named Taro, Taro was to be the rightful heir to the Cronos throne. Until a vision was foretold of Taro’s rise to power and the enslavement of all humans. Titan forbade Taro from becoming ruler of Cronos, later Titan had another son named Daisuke, he was said to be the rightful heir to the throne. Taro plotted to get rid of his brother and take back the throne; Taro stole Daiskue and sent him to the earth. Helpers are said to lose their powers once on earth for more than a month at a time, Titan could not find Daiskue in time, and Taro framed another Helper for the crime and took back his place as the heir. Now thirteen years later Daiskue (now raised by a teacher named Kazuki), is named Ren Takahashi a high school bad boy who skips school and picks fights. Ren has always been an outcast because of his red hair and red eyes, but one day his life was turned upside down when he is being chased by his childhood friend Asami Shimizu. Ren is attacked by a lower class Helper sent by his brother in an attempt to kill him off once and for all. Titan was aware of Ren being alive due to a lower class Helper named Katsumi, she is sent to retrieve Ren and bring him back to Cronos to reclaim his throne. Taro gets wind of this and sends two lower class Helpers to stop her, but in the fight with the helpers Ren shows his powers and not only that he has a special gift that has never been seen. Ren possesses all four sacred powers and tries to make sense of his life while fighting off his brother and keeping two girls that love him from killing each other and him in the process.Ok it's just an idea but here you go.
People all over the world are dissapearing, not just any people, high class people, ones who have big names and are famous for their wealth and "Hospitality". A young boy, one day, actually happens to see someone vanish, shocked and overwhelmed, he calls the police. Nothing... No traces, no leads, no clues. Five days later the boy see another vanishment. This time he knows he's not just at the wrong place at the right time. Someone, whoever's doing this, wants him to see. Or so he thinks. At last the boy himself vanishes, when he reappears no one can see, hear, or touch him, because he isn't really there. He is now in the "dream world". As the story progresses we come to find that the mastermind behind it all is a 15 year-old boy. The main character's ancester. the ancester tells our hero that people were so cruel, as they still are, when he was alive. The ancester was famous, and held with high honor. but everyone around him planned to use him and dispose of him. He was sad and lonely, desperate to have someone, anyone, care about him. in his washed out state of mind he accidently created this dream like place, where time stood still, and the ancestor could never die. he then tells that he decided to use this "other world" to take the people who were planning on using him, and then he decided to take ALL the people he declared "Wrong for the world" Here. The main character finally understands what's been going on. He comes to the sad conclusion that his ancestor must die. because he has been passing judgement on the world. so at the end of the tale the main character lures his ancestor out of the Dream world, and with tears flowing he kills his ancestor. broken and ashamed our hero leaves his home (since everyone thinks him dead now) and sets off to a sweeter gentler life
The EndErm, well, I guess I can try my hand on the manga plot I was developing since 2007. Well hope I do well. Here I go.
Name: Zakuyaga Kai: A Triganian Epic (Zakuyaga Kai or ZK for short)
Type: Like a average manga? shrugs
Genre: Shonen, Action/Spiritual/Fantasy, Romance, Comedy
On the planet Trigan, which is approximately 753 light years away from Earth, a fierce war has engulfed the planet. Over 142.4 million Triganians have lost their lives during the bloody war. The war has been dragging on with continuous violence for more than 30 years. The war has been waged for many reasons, but the main reason is a Triganian by the name of Xetsu Yagami. Xetsu is a Zakuyaga or Triganian for 'Warrior of the enhanced soul'. He is known as the strongest Zakuyaga alive and is the leader of the powerful nation which is tearing the world apart in war. His nation is very powerful and very persuasive. This war has spawned many smaller civil wars all over Trigan. So far, only three nations are powerful enough to take the threat of Xetsu: the kingdom-republic of Satoriharu, the republic of the Independent States of Uzaki, and the warrior kingdom of Galla. Though these 3 nations are capable of fighting Xetsu, they are bitter enemies with one another, relying on quick-written treaties to have a shaky peace. Also, at the tremendous battle-win ratio of Xetsu's army, few are even certain that all three nations combined can defeat Xetsu. Hope is dying and there is nothing to keep it from doing so...
Meanwhile, on Earth, a Japanese boy named Kai Inoue is in the same state as Trigan. Known as the 'Great Loser of Karisawa High', Kai's reputation is based on his dark and pugnacious attitude, low test scores despite a high I.Q., and having the guts to take on a powerful school clique. Kai's life gets worse day by day, but he has a reason why his life is going to hell.
As Kai walks through a city park one regular afternoon, Kai ponders about his hellish life so far. Then, he is forced to fight again, but this time, not for himself. This sets off a chain reaction of events which soon turns Kai's life around. Kai is soon forced to become something he isn't in order to keep a world he doesn't care about, and himself, from ending. And as he fights against many foes, Kai eventually pieces together a puzzle that ties his, Earth's, and Trigan's past together....
So, eh, pretty okay huh? ^^ Thanks for reading. You can check out this project on Ariko-Syrus.deviantart.com and zengoraentertainment.deviantart.com.
Also, if you want to help with art and story planning, head to the links above. It will be well appreciated. ^^
Zakuyaga Kai (c)2009 Zengora Entertainment
Story by Marcus Zengora, Christopher Paige
All rights reserved
Name- Forest Child
Genre- Fantasy (maybe im not sure)
If your wondering about the name of the manga the main characters name is Moriko which means forset child.
This story is about 14 year old Moriko who lives out in the country. There is a forest near her home where she spends most of her time. Everything is great until a fire burns down the forest, destroys her house, and kills both of her parents. She is then sent to live with her aunt (who doesn’t live very far away so she can still walk back to where her house was), but is so upset about losing everything that she won’t to talk to anyone and stays locked in her room. When Moriko finally summons the courage to go back to her old home she meets a kitsune (Japanese fox spirit) in the ruined woods. It asks her to help rebuild the forest. She also meets other forest spirits that ask the same thing. At first she refuses saying that she has suffered from the fire too and has no reason to help them. Then she meets the spirit of a boy who died in the forest and he finally convinces her to agree with the kitsune’s request. She is then given the power to bring things to life. The rest of the story will be about how they rebuid the forest. They might also have to deal with other evil spirits left from the fire that want the woods to remain as a pile of ashes.
Im still working out the details. Sorry if is sucked. But if you did like it please don’t steal my idea.
DUDE OMG THAT IS SO WEIRD!!!! okay my name is Madison and I live in the country right next to a forest where I spend most of my time....
112: that sounds really cute! i would totally watch that!! ^^
Name - None
Genre - Shonen, Action, Comedy
Plot
An american, college professor, Evan Wilson, spends most of his spare time working on a project that has been ridiculed by many of his colleagues. Wilson believes that everyone in the world has a spiritual counterpart that shares a similar frequency of life. Unfortunately for him, no one else agrees. After researching and developing a machine used to measure the frequency of a person's soul he finally succeeds and measure's the frequency of his own soul's energy, 245.6733458. Now all he has to do is find the person that shares his spiritual energy. Using his spirit radar, he hones the frequency to a man in Hiroshima, Japan, named Takahashi Kodama.
Here's where the adventure begins...
After finally arriving in Japan, he uses the portable radar to locate the man, Takahasi. He enters the room, only to find that his soul partner is about to be murdered by a gang of thugs. Fearing that if his partner who shares his soul frequency is killed, he would die as a result, he panics, giving Takahashi the opportunity to attack and kill all of the thugs. Much to Wilson's dismay, Takahashi is a resident tough-guy and national spy, wanted by the Yakuza and many Japanese officials. Wilson explains the situation and an odd partnership is born.
The rest of the manga follows the adventures of Evan Wilson and Takahashi Kodama as Wilson feels pressured to tag along on Takahashi's criminal activities and tries to change his outlook on life.
Thanks for reading!!
man, that sounds like a funny read wakai
you should get someone to draw it up for you.
Im an ok drawer and i dont mind drawing one of these i just cant choose which one to draw cause i like a couple of them like the DDR, Blake rose, and rainbow girls. OH and reaper but yea so people vite and i will draw
ok here is mine. iam not that confident in it so pls tell me what you think of it. and if you can pls give a suggestion for the title
Name: havent thought of it yet
genre: somewhere along Adventure, Action, Shounen,
There was a high school kid named Daichi who was a very bright man
with a great future he liked to study and dident care that much of
fighting and all that stuff but that all changed when his older sister was killed. He wanted revenge but dident know where to find him but since he couldent fight or anything he started going on a journey to practice different sorts of martial arts. After his journey he finds a lead for the man who killed his sister and he
finds him. But even after practicing all sorts of martial arts ıt still wasent enough to beat him. so he once again set on a journey to get his revenge.
thats it hope you like it
DDR & rainbow girls (thumbs up)
how bout some one shots i was thinking of something tragic where it ends in death of the main character and maybe a ride to the crazy home >:3 and since its a one shot it doesnt have much of a set up but i do have an idea of what it may be like
~genre: tagedy,angst,shounan ai (maybe),suspense,one shot
so far its about a kid who's very sick and is practically dying so his dad highers a house doctor to look after him (because the mom isnt to reliable hint-hint) and he and the doc have a fling or whatever and thats all i got but as u already know the kid dies but its very tragic how he dies (and its not from his illness either) X3
i havent really thought of their names yet i might just give them generic ones like bob or joe << >>
Ultimate HERO!
Written by: Jeremy Jackson
Plot: For millions of years the world was unable to prove life outside of Earth, but little did we know there is...and they are very aware of us. There are five different galaxies Earth is in the most distant, and we are also the weakest compared to the other galaxies. All five galaxies are attacked by evil, money hungry, murdering people known as “Space Pirates.” Space Pirates travel from galaxy to galaxy searching for valuable items. Space Pirates have special abilities and use Relics to enhance them, they search planets for more valuable ones and kill anyone who has them. There is a group who are assigned to protect the galaxies from these Pirates they are called the “Galactic Rangers”. Rangers have special abilities as well and use them to stop Space Pirates from destroying planets. Our story revolves around a Ranger in training his name is Kenji Tekeda. Kenji is a 12 year old GRIT(Galactic Ranger in Training) and is stuck in the shadow of his father Goro Tekeda who was the most famous and decorated Rangers in history. Kenji tries become a better Ranger than his father but is not a strong Ranger and is the only one on his planet with telekinesis which is said to be the weakest ability to have but Kenji is strong willed and does not give up easy and trains harder than anyone. Kenji begs his commanding officer to give him a protection job and is granted one, his planet to protect is Earth. Earth is the weakest planet going by special ability and Kenji is not very pleased with that but he is set to make the most of it and prove he is the best Ranger. After being sent to Earth he is set up to live in Japan with Yoko and Jiro Yamaguchi who are aware of the Rangers and Pirates, they show Kenji how to blend in with the children of Earth. Soon after Kenji makes two friends Shunsuke and Mika who live next door to the Yamaguchi family. One day after school Kenji and his friends are attacked by Space Pirates and Kenji must show his powers, but Kenji is no match for the Pirates and is defeated but is saved by a mysterious stranger with strong powers. The stranger says he was the former Galactic Ranger before Kenji and sends Kenji on a quest to become his student. Kenji is to find the “Sword of the Psychic” which holds special abilities for a Telekinetic user. Kenji finds the sword and finds the ultimate power in the galaxy, the sword transforms Kenji into a stronger, faster, smarter, and unmatched fighter. Kenji calls this his “Hero” form and uses it to become the strongest Ranger of all, but Pirates get wind of this new found power and now Kenji has every Space Pirate in the galaxies looking to take that sword from him,one of those Pirates is called Shinji and is said to be the strongest Pirate in the galaxies. Now Kenji must protect Earth, fight off evil Space Pirates, become the strongest Galactic Ranger to ever live and still have time to be a normal 12 year old kid in his life as the “Ultimate Hero”.
Ultimate HERO!
Written by: Jeremy Jackson
Plot: For millions of years the world was unable to prove life outside of Earth, but little did we know there is...and they are very aware of us. There are five different galaxies Earth is in the most distant, and we are also the weakest compared to the other galaxies. All five galaxies are attacked by evil, money hungry, murdering people known as “Space Pirates.” Space Pirates travel from galaxy to galaxy searching for valuable items. Space Pirates have special abilities and use Relics to enhance them, they search planets for more valuable ones and kill anyone who has them. There is a group who are assigned to protect the galaxies from these Pirates they are called the “Galactic Rangers”. Rangers have special abilities as well and use them to stop Space Pirates from destroying planets. Our story revolves around a Ranger in training his name is Kenji Tekeda. Kenji is a 12 year old GRIT(Galactic Ranger in Training) and is stuck in the shadow of his father Goro Tekeda who was the most famous and decorated Rangers in history. Kenji tries become a better Ranger than his father but is not a strong Ranger and is the only one on his planet with telekinesis which is said to be the weakest ability to have but Kenji is strong willed and does not give up easy and trains harder than anyone. Kenji begs his commanding officer to give him a protection job and is granted one, his planet to protect is Earth. Earth is the weakest planet going by special ability and Kenji is not very pleased with that but he is set to make the most of it and prove he is the best Ranger. After being sent to Earth he is set up to live in Japan with Yoko and Jiro Yamaguchi who are aware of the Rangers and Pirates, they show Kenji how to blend in with the children of Earth. Soon after Kenji makes two friends Shunsuke and Mika who live next door to the Yamaguchi family. One day after school Kenji and his friends are attacked by Space Pirates and Kenji must show his powers, but Kenji is no match for the Pirates and is defeated but is saved by a mysterious stranger with strong powers. The stranger says he was the former Galactic Ranger before Kenji and sends Kenji on a quest to become his student. Kenji is to find the “Sword of the Psychic” which holds special abilities for a Telekinetic user. Kenji finds the sword and finds the ultimate power in the galaxy, the sword transforms Kenji into a stronger, faster, smarter, and unmatched fighter. Kenji calls this his “Hero” form and uses it to become the strongest Ranger of all, but Pirates get wind of this new found power and now Kenji has every Space Pirate in the galaxies looking to take that sword from him,one of those Pirates is called Shinji and is said to be the strongest Pirate in the galaxies. Now Kenji must protect Earth, fight off evil Space Pirates, become the strongest Galactic Ranger to ever live and still have time to be a normal 12 year old kid in his life as the “Ultimate Hero”.
Hey I really like a lot of these ideas. If anyone's willing to try my art out for one please feel free to ask, and I'd gladly draw your characters for starters!!
sounds like a cool offer :3 i dont need help but id luv to see sum of ur art :D
I haven't put much on it lately, so don't judge too much of the work I have on there, but here's my deviantArt gallery:http://lheartcookies.deviantart.com/gallery/
I'm working on a few pictures, but I'd really like some challenges if anyone's interested.
coolness ill check em out :D
Title: Pandemic
Genre: Horror, Fighting, Shonen.
A mysterious virus is quickly spreading around the city that attacks the central nervous system of human beings. Basically it starts by rotting the flesh in order to weaken the immune system, then it moves into the nervous system in order to gain total control of the human body, thus having the body only function on primitive needs. Meaning that the only goal left is to just survive, and feed, and multiply (spread the disease.) The disease creates something similar to the effects of a zombie. Cities begin to fall as the pandemic quickly spreads. However there is hope: 2% of the Earth's population are not affected at all by this disease. It is unexplained.
In fact, those that are unaffected have the exact opposite effects. Ryan Mercer has always been strong. He was a hunter, who lived off the land with his wife. However his wife got very sick and succumbed to the disease, and the virus entered Ryan's body as well. He became sick with a fever, but overcame it the next day. The next morning he went to chop some firewood, when suddenly the tree began to fall on him. He tried to block his face, and noticed that the tree just sat on his elbows and he wasn't hurt. Not able to believe it, Ryan tried to test himself. Each time, he proved that he was in fact, slightly stronger. However, he didn't understand why. The next morning, Ryan decided to head down into the city to try to find supplies as well as others who weren't affected by the virus. Ryan stops into a store, and begins to wheel out a cart full of goods when suddenly a blur quickly moves in front of him, and items from his cart slowly begin to deplete. Ryan then reaches out to the blur, and stops it dead in its' tracks. It's just a highschool kid, wearing a track team T-shirt, with shorts.
Aaaaahh. can't finish, gotta get back to work. I'll write more later on.
lemme know what you think!
nice idea dude :D nuthen like a good ol-horror manga ^^ awesome setup for the story btw seems readable :3
There lies an apartment home in the heart of Tokyo; a lively place - one with warm, happy residents. At least, they were before the invasion and eventual dictatorship of Japan. The United States took complete control of the UN, and used the power granted to dictate every country in every continent. The response of those controlled was, of course, civil war. Japan was no different. People being shot dead every morning, afternoon, and night was commonplace; love couldn't exist. The cozy apartment home I mentioned before? Each resident was balancing upon a thin line of sanity, paranoia threatening to push them over the edge. Our hero and heroin - despite the state of extreme civil unrest - are in love.
This manga is based on that thin line finally snapping, and love's attempt at winning over insanity.
Bah, just made that up on the spot. Sucks, I know :/.
Hey all of my mangas need art work and I have already thought of how they all look just need the ability to draw. Would love help.
This is one I made up a long time ago my friends want to see it drawn but we all kinda suck at it.
It's called "The Killer Detective" name's not final but I like it. It's about a 15 year old boy named Hiroto Yamada nickname "Ace" because of his all around talent. He is a straight A student, star athlete pretty much perfect. His mom and dad both work in real estate and his brother works at a fast food place. Sounds normal right, not so, little does he know his mom, dad, and brother are 3 of the top assassins in the world. His whole life his parents have been training him to be a super assassin and he doesn't know it, he is enrolled in a private school but little do they know the school is for assassins , they teach only things assassins need to know. His two best friends are also future assassins, Yumi Matsumoto is almost as smart as Ace and is a master of of knife throwing, he and Yumi are in love but neither will admit it. His other friend is Mamoru Kobayashi, he is a whopper at 6'5" 320lbs and is just super strong, he isn't the sharpest tool in the shed but that's why he and Ace are friends. None of them suspect that their parents are molding them to be world class killers. Ace is like i said great at sports and has an IQ of 175 and he really loves detectives, he has dreams of being the best detective in the world for most of his life, to his parents dislike. Ace starts his own detective agency with his friends and tries to follow his dream. As if that wasn't enough the agency his family works for asks the family to assassinate a senators 2 day old daughter. The family refuses and the boss gets highly upset and orders the family do carry out this mission or they will be punished. Aces dads rival TAKESHI Fujimoto, who hates the family and want to see them dead, he has a son Nobu who is in the same school as Ace. Nobu shares the hatred and is always trying beat Ace at everything he does. He and his father accept the mission and succeeded and become the bosses new favorite assassins, and that leads the boss to question the loyalty of the family. The boss sees the family is not fully committed to the job so he plans to have them killed. Of course these being the best assassins in the world the kill the hitmen, the boss sends over 20 assassians they all fail. Takeshi successful in killing the mom, dad, and brother but Ace escapes only hours after figuring out his family's big secret, Ace and his friends combine their skill and form a plan to kill the people who did this.
The profiles for the family and Ace's friends would take a long time to explain so i'll just give you a sample.
The Father's code name is "Death Hand" he is the best hand to hand combat killer in the world.
Next the mother who's code name is "Silent Night" she is a Genius scientist who masters poisons and uses her good looks to lure her targets it to her trap.
The oldest son's code name is "Virus" he is the computer wiz and is one of the best marksmen in the world.
And last but not least Ace, what makes him so good is the fact that he has a almost mastered everyone in his family's abilities plus he has a great deductive ability.
That's my anime I would love to go into more detail but it's late. I believe in this manga/anime and my friends love it and i hope someone who can draw will contact me at greenranger504@yahoo.com . I NEED PICS!!!!!
>>172
Sorry, I have been busy at work guys! anyway, here's the last leg of the set up if you're still interested.
Pandemic Continuation:
Ryan then introduces himself, and tells the boy about his own special gifts. The kid, Troy Richards tells Ryan that he was a former state champ on the track team. he was a prospect for the Olympic track team as well. "I was walking in the city trying to find food, and if any of my friends made it. I seemed to have caught the attention of some infected, and they began to chase me. I started running, they were getting so close, and then all of a sudden I just ran faster and faster. Pretty soon I was already on the other side of the city." Ryan explained his story to the Troy, and they both began to realize that the virus really just enhances a persons own natural strengths. So now the Ryan and Troy set out together to find out if there are anymore survivors, or are they the only two left?
There you have it. My idea. Of course there's a whole lot more details and backstory. I've been working on this thing for like the past few months. I hope you guys think it's cool.
Four people meet up on a forum ( maybe even this one ) and after a long time chatting on the net, they decide to meet up. They decide they should get together at one of them and soon they meet in person. Each is expecting to have a great surprise on they day they meet, but soon, their hopes get crushed when they realize that what was online wasn't exactly real ( the truth, so to speak). They stick with it for about 2-3 days, trying to avoid any major conversation, until one of them cracks, and starts a fight with the other 3. The fight ends with everyone going home.
A week or two later, you can see them happily talking on the net again.
I'm not good with stories and i guess it's a bit hard to understand what i wanted to do with this story. You can copy it if you want, it's not like i'm a famous writer and i'll sew you :P
>>178
I sure hope you wont "sew" me, because that would hurt.
You meant "sue" right? lol
Flesh out your story a little more. You can always start by developing your characters, and letting their motives, and attitudes help shape how the story will progress.
Either than that, the premise of being internet buddies, and meeting up can be worked into something on a more.... larger scale?
>>178
That was a barebones basic idea for a story that could have easily been done thousands of times in thousands of different ways and still retain what you wrote. It's also obviously inspired by the Densha Otoko story, and would just be kept in its shadow if ever done. It's okay to do a quick summary of your idea(s), but the idea needs to be summarized enough so that it can't be easily reproduced without obvious copying - meaning it must be unique and with fairly good detail.
thank you for the comment,altough i'm not a writer your comment sorta helped me think things in a different way regarding my own work ( i'm a graphic artist but do not intend on being mangaka). Oh and Densha Otoko is the manga that got me on this forum, but i didn't really think of it when i wrote my own idea. What I wrote has inspiration in my personal life. ^_~
If I ever get a new idea, I hope mr. random manga otaku will comment on it again, even if it isn't manga :P
lol sorry for my english mistakes. I'm romanian and it's a bit hard for me to get the english spelling right. but thanks for pointing that out. ^_^
>>182
Hey, I'm glad to see you're open to critism; that's a good trait. I'm glad that it helped, and I'll definitely be around to comment on any piece of writing. I love reading/writing, so if you ever need critique or a beta, I'd be happy to do so. Sorry for being a bit redundant ;P.
This is one I made up a long time ago my friends want to see it drawn but we all kinda suck at it.
It's called "The Killer Detective" name's not final but I like it. It's about a 15 year old boy named Hiroto Yamada nickname "Ace" because of his all around talent. He is a straight A student, star athlete pretty much perfect. His mom and dad both work in real estate and his brother works at a fast food place. Sounds normal right, not so, little does he know his mom, dad, and brother are 3 of the top assassins in the world. His whole life his parents have been training him to be a super assassin and he doesn't know it, he is enrolled in a private school but little do they know the school is for assassins , they teach only things assassins need to know. His two best friends are also future assassins, Yumi Matsumoto is almost as smart as Ace and is a master of of knife throwing, he and Yumi are in love but neither will admit it. His other friend is Mamoru Kobayashi, he is a whopper at 6'5" 320lbs and is just super strong, he isn't the sharpest tool in the shed but that's why he and Ace are friends. None of them suspect that their parents are molding them to be world class killers. Ace is like i said great at sports and has an IQ of 175 and he really loves detectives, he has dreams of being the best detective in the world for most of his life, to his parents dislike. Ace starts his own detective agency with his friends and tries to follow his dream. As if that wasn't enough the agency his family works for asks the family to assassinate a senators 2 day old daughter. The family refuses and the boss gets highly upset and orders the family do carry out this mission or they will be punished. Aces dads rival TAKESHI Fujimoto, who hates the family and want to see them dead, he has a son Nobu who is in the same school as Ace. Nobu shares the hatred and is always trying beat Ace at everything he does. He and his father accept the mission and succeeded and become the bosses new favorite assassins, and that leads the boss to question the loyalty of the family. The boss sees the family is not fully committed to the job so he plans to have them killed. Of course these being the best assassins in the world the kill the hitmen, the boss sends over 20 assassians they all fail. Takeshi successful in killing the mom, dad, and brother but Ace escapes only hours after figuring out his family's big secret, Ace and his friends combine their skill and form a plan to kill the people who did this.
The profiles for the family and Ace's friends would take a long time to explain so i'll just give you a sample.
The Father's code name is "Death Hand" he is the best hand to hand combat killer in the world.
Next the mother who's code name is "Silent Night" she is a Genius scientist who masters poisons and uses her good looks to lure her targets it to her trap.
The oldest son's code name is "Virus" he is the computer wiz and is one of the best marksmen in the world.
And last but not least Ace, what makes him so good is the fact that he has a almost mastered everyone in his family's abilities plus he has a great deductive ability.
That's my anime I would love to go into more detail but it's late. I believe in this manga/anime and my friends love it and i hope someone who can draw will contact me at greenranger504@yahoo.com . I NEED PICS!!!!!
Hey all of my mangas need art work and I have already thought of how they all look just need the ability to draw. Would love help.
176 Name: Jeremy : 2009-08-04 07:08 ID:0lIA2Hf8 [Del]
This is one I made up a long time ago my friends want to see it drawn but we all kinda suck at it.
It's called "The Killer Detective" name's not final but I like it. It's about a 15 year old boy named Hiroto Yamada nickname "Ace" because of his all around talent. He is a straight A student, star athlete pretty much perfect. His mom and dad both work in real estate and his brother works at a fast food place. Sounds normal right, not so, little does he know his mom, dad, and brother are 3 of the top assassins in the world. His whole life his parents have been training him to be a super assassin and he doesn't know it, he is enrolled in a private school but little do they know the school is for assassins , they teach only things assassins need to know. His two best friends are also future assassins, Yumi Matsumoto is almost as smart as Ace and is a master of of knife throwing, he and Yumi are in love but neither will admit it. His other friend is Mamoru Kobayashi, he is a whopper at 6'5" 320lbs and is just super strong, he isn't the sharpest tool in the shed but that's why he and Ace are friends. None of them suspect that their parents are molding them to be world class killers. Ace is like i said great at sports and has an IQ of 175 and he really loves detectives, he has dreams of being the best detective in the world for most of his life, to his parents dislike. Ace starts his own detective agency with his friends and tries to follow his dream. As if that wasn't enough the agency his family works for asks the family to assassinate a senators 2 day old daughter. The family refuses and the boss gets highly upset and orders the family do carry out this mission or they will be punished. Aces dads rival TAKESHI Fujimoto, who hates the family and want to see them dead, he has a son Nobu who is in the same school as Ace. Nobu shares the hatred and is always trying beat Ace at everything he does. He and his father accept the mission and succeeded and become the bosses new favorite assassins, and that leads the boss to question the loyalty of the family. The boss sees the family is not fully committed to the job so he plans to have them killed. Of course these being the best assassins in the world the kill the hitmen, the boss sends over 20 assassians they all fail. Takeshi successful in killing the mom, dad, and brother but Ace escapes only hours after figuring out his family's big secret, Ace and his friends combine their skill and form a plan to kill the people who did this.
The profiles for the family and Ace's friends would take a long time to explain so i'll just give you a sample.
The Father's code name is "Death Hand" he is the best hand to hand combat killer in the world.
Next the mother who's code name is "Silent Night" she is a Genius scientist who masters poisons and uses her good looks to lure her targets it to her trap.
The oldest son's code name is "Virus" he is the computer wiz and is one of the best marksmen in the world.
And last but not least Ace, what makes him so good is the fact that he has a almost mastered everyone in his family's abilities plus he has a great deductive ability.
That's my anime I would love to go into more detail but it's late. I believe in this manga/anime and my friends love it and i hope someone who can draw will contact me at greenranger504@yahoo.com . I NEED PICS!!!!!
Hello xD, am Roxxie blah blah yeh xD I been drawing things/learning from myself to draw manag ever since i was 8 and read my first manga about YuGiOh (XDD) I started to draw about my manga for 1 year now and came to this site to post its plot :3 I love drawing x3 its whole story is in my lil red notebook e.o
Manga Name: DeathSoul
Genres: Violence, Mysterious,Comdey, Action
Theme: Fighting,school etc e.o
Epsiode(s):30 (i drew the epsiodes in my notebook with manga pages)
Plot Summary:
Aiko Amaya is a young girl, when her village gets raided by demons. She losses everything and lost herself. She then feels lonely and like she dosen't belong. While travleing she gets killed by demons that ambushed her. After then she died she lost everything. Yet she was still alive, a dark spirit comes to her dead body. Says that she will give her a new life to start again and forget the past. Unless she gives her soul away and works for her when needed. Aiko trapped in emotional problems then acepts. When Aiko woke up, a strange girl (Reika) comes and helps Aiko. But Aiko dosen't remeber, Reika then tells Aiko to join a fighting school near by that Reika also gose. Now Aiko lives with Reika, she grew to like her as a sister. While Aiko living with Reika she over hears about,that if you kill an undeaftable person who lives in the skies that he/she(?) grants you any wish, gold and power over the skies. Aiko then gets an headache and decide she has to go to free her soul, she dosen't remeber much but she hears something in her that she is not a living human.
Theres more but i just want to post the plot. xD so what you think? :3
Copyrights@ONSmanga (XD)
>>186
Generic plot #13085356. Also horrible writing skills.
sorry if my manga is horrible x.x and the reason why i didnt write so good waz because i randomly found this website and thought writting and stuff didn't matter but its okay ill just try to improve it abit e.o
thanks~
>>188
Don't put 'z' instead of 's'. And use a spellcheck.
>>186
I'm gonna rewrite your plot summary 'cause I'm bored. Warning: I have no experience writing plot summaries.
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Aiko Amaya is a girl who has just died. As she passes into the afterlife, she meets SPIRIT, who introduces himself as a spirit with regrets. He tells her that he needs her and that he will send an assistant to help her. Before Aiko can protest, SPIRIT embeds a piece of himself within her and returns her to the real world.
Aiko awakens next to a girl named Reika, who also has a portion of SPIRIT within her. She tells Aiko that SPIRIT is using their bodies as vessels so he can exact revenge on ANTAGONIST, who sealed his soul away. She continues to explain that SPIRIT can communicate with them and has granted them certain abilities at the cost of their sanity.
Right then, ANTAGONIST's minions attack them, forcing Reika to take Aiko to safety. Reika uses her powers to slow them down and after they escape, Aiko watches insanity take a hold upon Reika.
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Beware, this may also be a generic plot.
um.. thanks! :D sorry you didn't have to do that, but thanks now i can have a plot to bulid a story on. You said it better than me hehe.
>>190
Written like that, it's a LOT better.
Still will probably end up as generic shonen, but there is more potential. Also I could read it without gouging my eyes out afterwards.
>>191
I shortened Aiko's history to that of a girl who "just died" because I didn't see how the raid on her village and her death by the hand of demons had to do with the plot. I also avoided the fighting school concept because I felt that was a bit too generic.
Anyhow, you're welcome. I guess I'll stay here and rewrite plot summaries for shits and giggles.
>>192
Thank you. I'm glad to hear that my writing doesn't make people keel over and die.
These are all some good ideas.
Prologue: Power is the only concept in the world that is absolute. It doesn’t discriminate against anyone. There are those who have it and those who don’t. It exists in many forms and can be used in many different ways. The power to love, the power to save, the power to lead, and even the power to lie are all different forms. It can mean strength, or dominion over something. It is everywhere, within everyone and found in everything. However it has one law, one rule, one truth that can never be avoided. "Power may change but it never ever dies."
Chapter 1
DreamA deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals. From the horizon a frantic gentleman rushes towards a young boy. “Your majesty it is urgent that you come to the meeting at once” he said. The boy turned around and looked perplexed. “Is it already time for such a thing?” he asked with a tone of incredulity. “Very well” he sighed, “If I must go then I shall go at once” he said. The hallway was exquisite made by an otherworldly material that resembled marble. The halls gave off a luxurious shine as if to haughtily show of their beauty. The young boy entered an enormous room filled to the rim with people. Everyone present gave off an aura of diligence and refinement. “Ahh the young prince has arrived, excellent most excellent.” An elderly man approached the boy with a look of excitement on his face. He had a great beard that reached up to his knees, and a smile that gave off the happiness of a fulfilled life. “Come now my young prince the meeting is about to begin” he said to the prince. “Tell me why everyone has gathered all of a sudden?” he asked the old man. “There has been rumor of an intruder amongst the senate and everyone is highly alarmed.” “Your father and the other rulers are all here as well my prince.” “My father is here as well!” the prince exclaimed. “Yes I can somewhat see him, darn I shouldn’t have arrived so late” said the prince. In the distance there was a table with a group of people sitting around it. The one the prince called father was standing and speaking to the entire audience. “I can’t quite see his face” the prince said. “You need not see his face in order to listen to what he has to say my prince” the old man said. “You are correct, ah he’s speaking” said the prince. The man took a glance at everyone present cleared his throat and with a booming voice began to speak.
If anyone like this let me know and I may give the plot to my story. Also since it's the first chapter I will be going back to it and doing some tweaking and corrections. Anyway I wrote it because I can't draw and Im actually looking for some artists. Well enjoy.
A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals. From the horizon a frantic gentleman rushes towards a young boy. “Your majesty it is urgent that you come to the meeting at once” he said. The boy turned around and looked perplexed. “Is it already time for such a thing?” he asked with a tone of incredulity. “Very well” he sighed, “If I must go then I shall go at once” he said. The hallway was exquisite made by an otherworldly material that resembled marble. The halls gave off a luxurious shine as if to haughtily show of their beauty. The young boy entered an enormous room filled to the rim with people. Everyone present gave off an aura of diligence and refinement. “Ahh the young prince has arrived, excellent most excellent.” An elderly man approached the boy with a look of excitement on his face. He had a great beard that reached up to his knees, and a smile that gave off the happiness of a fulfilled life. “Come now my young prince the meeting is about to begin” he said to the prince. “Tell me why everyone has gathered all of a sudden?” he asked the old man. “There has been rumor of an intruder amongst the senate and everyone is highly alarmed.” “Your father and the other rulers are all here as well my prince.” “My father is here as well!” the prince exclaimed. “Yes I can somewhat see him, darn I shouldn’t have arrived so late” said the prince. In the distance there was a table with a group of people sitting around it. The one the prince called father was standing and speaking to the entire audience. “I can’t quite see his face” the prince said. “You need not see his face in order to listen to what he has to say my prince” the old man said. “You are correct, ah he’s speaking” said the prince. The man took a glance at everyone present cleared his throat and with a booming voice began to speak.
>>196
First and foremost, it needs more paragraphs. I groan when I realize I have to read one huge chunk of words.
It seems that you're writing the beginning chapter of a short story instead of giving a brief overview of what happens in the plot, so I'll review your excerpt as if you were writing fiction.
> A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals.
The transition between the silence and the noise in the environment is confusing me. Dunno why you're using asterisks there, but maybe there's a better way you can segue into the plot. Also, since these are the first words of the story, make sure you hook your readers' attention during the first sentence. Okay fine, maybe that's difficult, but the point is that you should make sure that someone picking up this story won't drop it after reading the first paragraph.
> The hallway was exquisite made by an otherworldly material that resembled marble.
Now that I think about it, at this point I have no idea where the boy and the gentleman are. Well, I know the boy is sleeping, and guessing from how he appears to be part of royalty, he's probably sleeping in a fancy bedroom of some sort. However, one can't be so sure--after all, he could be a runaway prince or one who has been captured. The point is that you should introduce the setting to the reader so she has a basic understanding of what's going on.
Also, what hallway? Did you assume that the reader knew the characters were in a house or mansion?
> “Ahh the young prince has arrived, excellent most excellent.”
Mm. Floating quotations. I'm curious, who said this? The people in the room? Some disembodied voice?
> “There has been rumor of an intruder amongst the senate and everyone is highly alarmed.” “Your father and the other rulers are all here as well my prince.”
I believe the old man said both of these lines, so there is no need for his words to be placed between two sets of quotation marks, which could confuse the reader. However, they could be said by two different people, in which case you would need to show or make clear who said which line.
> “My father is here as well!” the prince exclaimed. “Yes I can somewhat see him, darn I shouldn’t have arrived so late” said the prince.
Minor point, but isn't mentioning twice that the prince is saying this redundant?
In general, it seems like an interesting idea so far, but make sure you separate events into paragraphs, add commas where appropriate, and ensure that the reader doesn't lose sight of the plot. Keep it up, mate.
i can draw realy well, if anyone wants to email me some script ideas ill draw it up, im kinda slow, i can pump out around a page a week. im still at school, but if the project catches my imagination then ill do the art.
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>>197 Your absolutely right about everything. First of all I just want to say that this isn't really the plot or anything. It's basically supposed to be the first chapter. I wrote most of it down. I understand that it's a bit confusing due to not making it into paragraphs but Ill explain.
A deafening silence filled the streets, as not even strays were to be seen wandering about. A young boy tosses around in his sleep blissfully unaware of the outside world.*** Loud noises can be heard everywhere. There were the sounds of people and of animals. Well basically here it doesn't explain much which I felt was kinda the point. Here a guy is sleeping and he's having a dream. In the real world it's all quiet while in his dream it's all loud. I know I should have organized it better.
Now that I think about it, at this point I have no idea where the boy and the gentleman are. Well, I know the boy is sleeping, and guessing from how he appears to be part of royalty, he's probably sleeping in a fancy bedroom of some sort. However, one can't be so sure--after all, he could be a runaway prince or one who has been captured. The point is that you should introduce the setting to the reader so she has a basic understanding of what's going on.
The boy/guy I was talking about is sleeping and having a dream. To put it simply he's dreaming that he's royalty. I didn't really go into detail about the surroundings because as I wrote this I was picturing everything. Of course I realize I should have explained more for the sake of the reader.
As for everything else that had issues well those were grammer errors and such. Like I said I pictured this to be like the first chapter of a manga so I didn't go into detail. Also this was just like a sloppy copy with me just trying to get an idea of what the first chapter for this story should be like. Anyway enough of me ranting, if you'd like I could put up the plot instead. It's just that I know from experience that ppl can and will steal ideas.
>>199
I see. It's sorta hard to tell since I'm not seeing pictures and that these notes are mostly for your benefit, but that makes sense. I expected something brief, like a paragraph or two about the first chapter, but whatever floats your boat.
It's up to you if you want to put the plot up, but the first chapter seems fine so far.