Post your manga plot ideas... (529)

1 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2006-11-11 23:11 ID:OoTDdlRR This thread was merged from the former /manga/ board. You can view the archive here.

I'll start.

I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.

I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.

280 Name: NO7A : 2010-08-14 15:18 ID:byEPFnyM

Hi there !

I have this idea :

genre : Action,Supernatural,Comedy,Zombies

the lemoned said : there is super zombie appears every 400 years from the Curse Graveyard , and there is an Organization who stand against the supernatural things like zombie , so their bosses send a strong team ( 2 girls and 2 boys ) to catch this zombie ,then they face up the zombie who seems naive , and try to catch him , however his naive movements saved him , suddenly his movements has change ; because his zombie's curse had broken , but he couldn't use it good , so he lost his power and Fell to the ground , and it was easy to them to take him now , later when he wake up the Organization tell him that " will you work for us against the evil or we will kill you" , he was afraid of course so he answered immediately : I WILL HELP YOU FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE !!!!! , then they make him the leader for the strong team which fought him before , this organization'bosses had noticed that there is an evil organization has a secret way to change human into zombies , so they give a mission to the super hero and his team to handle up with this organization , and from now on their travel has begin ....

I hope you understand my plot because my English is not good , sorry for that ...

281 Name: NO7A : 2010-08-14 15:19 ID:byEPFnyM

Hi there !

I have this idea :

genre : Action,Supernatural,Comedy,Zombies

the lemoned said : there is super zombie appears every 400 years from the Curse Graveyard , and there is an Organization who stand against the supernatural things like zombie , so their bosses send a strong team ( 2 girls and 2 boys ) to catch this zombie ,then they face up the zombie who seems naive , and try to catch him , however his naive movements saved him , suddenly his movements has change ; because his zombie's curse had broken , but he couldn't use it good , so he lost his power and Fell to the ground , and it was easy to them to take him now , later when he wake up the Organization tell him that " will you work for us against the evil or we will kill you" , he was afraid of course so he answered immediately : I WILL HELP YOU FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE !!!!! , then they make him the leader for the strong team which fought him before , this organization'bosses had noticed that there is an evil organization has a secret way to change human into zombies , so they give a mission to the super hero and his team to handle up with this organization , and from now on their travel has begin ....

I hope you understand my plot because my English is not good , sorry for that ...

282 Name: NO7A : 2010-08-14 15:21 ID:byEPFnyM

Hi there !

I have this idea :

genre : Action,Supernatural,Comedy,Zombies

the lemoned said : there is super zombie appears every 400 years from the Curse Graveyard , and there is an Organization who stand against the supernatural things like zombie , so their bosses send a strong team ( 2 girls and 2 boys ) to catch this zombie ,then they face up the zombie who seems naive , and try to catch him , however his naive movements saved him , suddenly his movements has change ; because his zombie's curse had broken , but he couldn't use it good , so he lost his power and Fell to the ground , and it was easy to them to take him now , later when he wake up the Organization tell him that " will you work for us against the evil or we will kill you" , he was afraid of course so he answered immediately : I WILL HELP YOU FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE !!!!! , then they make him the leader for the strong team which fought him before , this organization'bosses had noticed that there is an evil organization has a secret way to change human into zombies , so they give a mission to the super hero and his team to handle up with this organization , and from now on their travel has begin ....

I hope you understand my plot because my English is not good , sorry for that ...

283 Name: D_A : 2010-08-16 12:12 ID:RP3FG8ik

There are 2 worlds War world and Real world, one such as the world we live in now and another which was once like the world were living in except it has people with superior human abilities but ruined by war and segregated by the poor and rich. War world is run by a society called Iso 7 much like the government of today and it's in control of this world. Although everyone is bind to obey this society theres a rebelious group who plan to take down this society they're called freerunners. The freerunners are capable of things any human being would never be able to do for example there are 3 people who are top of the top in this group they're called John 'Lightening' Clues, Kevin 'Krypto' Climestone And Leader of the group Bella 'Bella' Living. Although all of these people in the group are very special there is something extremely different about Bella, and this is in when the real world comes in. Bella is shares her soul with a girl named Nina Kiruma from the real world, they share their soul as in when Nina sleeps Bella collapses. Being in the predicement shes in where shes about to participate in war this is a massive issue for bella !

The group come together and decide that the best way to solve the problem was to kill Nina in hope that bella will learn to live freely, so John and Kevin go to the real world in search of nina to kill her.

However whilst john and kevin are on the trip Bella gets word from an elder that if nina is killed bella shall also be killed in the process, so bella goes down to the real world herself to warn john and kevin of the consequences, but instead of meeting john and kevin bella somehow ecounters nina beforehand and something weird and incredible happens which changes the whole story!

As bella and nina share one soul when they met eachother they're soul bined into 1 and, Bellas body and skill became of ninas but nina still kept her memories, so when john and kevin finally found ninam nina fought back with persistance and overcame as she is the once known warrior 'bella'. when john and kevin went back to the war world to tell the story of nina being too strong bella wasnt they're for them to tell their story to.

Apart from one other person who was sister to bella by her father named Anneree but was a soldier bound to the army of iso 7 and she was seeking revenge over bella for giving her a scar to remember and simply just for being the evil one.

Annaree went down to the real world as she was the only one smart enough to assume that bella had formed into 1 with nina, and she went down there to kill nina herself. Nina also has flashbacks every now and then from memories of the war world so when annaree and nina, nina hadnt a clue who annaree was until she recived a flashback and defeats her but then looses her memories of it all and annaree goes back to the war world.

john and kevin result in holding hostage ninas best friend in the war world in hope nina will follow to help them win the war after they came to the conclusion that nina and bella formed into 1, as nina doesnt know about war world it takes some time for her to understand where she is and also nina is confused because her bestffriend was reported dead. sooner or later nina finds her way to the real world and fins her bestfriend and the freerunners, and after convincement she decides to help fight against the iso 7 and after the war was won nina returns home without her friend as she was killed by annaree, but when nina goes back to the real world she also got reported dead and resulted in living in the war world which was now turned into a world of peace.

284 Name: Nina's Story : 2010-08-16 12:16 ID:RP3FG8ik

There are 2 worlds War world and Real world, one such as the world we live in now and another which was once like the world were living in except it has people with superior human abilities but ruined by war and segregated by the poor and rich. War world is run by a society called Iso 7 much like the government of today and it's in control of this world. Although everyone is bind to obey this society theres a rebelious group who plan to take down this society they're called freerunners. The freerunners are capable of things any human being would never be able to do for example there are 3 people who are top of the top in this group they're called John 'Lightening' Clues, Kevin 'Krypto' Climestone And Leader of the group Bella 'Bella' Living. Although all of these people in the group are very special there is something extremely different about Bella, and this is in when the real world comes in. Bella is shares her soul with a girl named Nina Kiruma from the real world, they share their soul as in when Nina sleeps Bella collapses. Being in the predicement shes in where shes about to participate in war this is a massive issue for bella !

The group come together and decide that the best way to solve the problem was to kill Nina in hope that bella will learn to live freely, so John and Kevin go to the real world in search of nina to kill her.

However whilst john and kevin are on the trip Bella gets word from an elder that if nina is killed bella shall also be killed in the process, so bella goes down to the real world herself to warn john and kevin of the consequences, but instead of meeting john and kevin bella somehow ecounters nina beforehand and something weird and incredible happens which changes the whole story!

As bella and nina share one soul when they met eachother they're soul bined into 1 and, Bellas body and skill became of ninas but nina still kept her memories, so when john and kevin finally found ninam nina fought back with persistance and overcame as she is the once known warrior 'bella'. when john and kevin went back to the war world to tell the story of nina being too strong bella wasnt they're for them to tell their story to.

Apart from one other person who was sister to bella by her father named Anneree but was a soldier bound to the army of iso 7 and she was seeking revenge over bella for giving her a scar to remember and simply just for being the evil one.

Annaree went down to the real world as she was the only one smart enough to assume that bella had formed into 1 with nina, and she went down there to kill nina herself. Nina also has flashbacks every now and then from memories of the war world so when annaree and nina, nina hadnt a clue who annaree was until she recived a flashback and defeats her but then looses her memories of it all and annaree goes back to the war world.

john and kevin result in holding hostage ninas best friend in the war world in hope nina will follow to help them win the war after they came to the conclusion that nina and bella formed into 1, as nina doesnt know about war world it takes some time for her to understand where she is and also nina is confused because her bestffriend was reported dead. sooner or later nina finds her way to the real world and fins her bestfriend and the freerunners, and after convincement she decides to help fight against the iso 7 and after the war was won nina returns home without her friend as she was killed by annaree, but when nina goes back to the real world she also got reported dead and resulted in living in the war world which was now turned into a world of peace.

285 Name: Rooster93 : 2010-08-16 22:58 ID:rPbfr/Ah

Title: ?
Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy(hopefully), drama, minor romance?, shounen….

After decades of colonial rule, the country of Aorbinn called for a Revolution under Charles Harper. Two years after the Revolution, Aorbinn was under a state of peace and in the process of rebuilt itself. Sadly, Charles became ill and quickly passed away. Charles death brought upon a new leader, young and fierce with different ideals. Surprisingly, the young leader was one of the many followers that help Harper organize the revolution. Many have wondered if he was to be the true successor of Charles, but at the time being Aorbinn is under a state of militaristic ideology. Bonds that were once tightly knitted are now being severed while just a strand of hope is lying within the country.
Since Charles death, a group of freedom fighter have risen within Aorbinn. Their leader is no one other than a once well trusted friend of Charles, until his name was soiled and dishonored. Today, Cedric Kane is the founder of the liberation army that occupies a small fraction of the country. The liberation army is the last hope Aorbinn has before is falls into a state of absolute tyranny.
At this time, Cedric has gained the resources adequate enough to start making his move. The story focuses on a small group of followers that execute varies mission to make the campaign a success. Like every one else, their main goal is to stripe the power of the current ruler and have Cedric rule Aorbinn.

Side note: I’m planning at the beginning of the story to have a kid (17-20 years old) that wants to join, but I’m not sure how. Any suggestions and ideas would be definitely welcomed. Also if it is possible to incorporate the kid, I’m hoping that a baby sister (8 years old) could be included but I’m not sure how. Like a reason as to where she is and how she’s not with her older brother.

286 Name: Rooster93 : 2010-08-16 23:01 ID:rPbfr/Ah

Title: ?
Genre: Action, Adventure, Comedy(hopefully), drama, minor romance?, shounen….

After decades of colonial rule, the country of Aorbinn called for a Revolution under Charles Harper. Two years after the Revolution, Aorbinn was under a state of peace and in the process of rebuilt itself. Sadly, Charles became ill and quickly passed away. Charles death brought upon a new leader, young and fierce with different ideals. Surprisingly, the young leader was one of the many followers that help Harper organize the revolution. Many have wondered if he was to be the true successor of Charles, but at the time being Aorbinn is under a state of militaristic ideology. Bonds that were once tightly knitted are now being severed while just a strand of hope is lying within the country.
Since Charles death, a group of freedom fighter have risen within Aorbinn. Their leader is no one other than a once well trusted friend of Charles, until his name was soiled and dishonored. Today, Cedric Kane is the founder of the liberation army that occupies a small fraction of the country. The liberation army is the last hope Aorbinn has before is falls into a state of absolute tyranny.
At this time, Cedric has gained the resources adequate enough to start making his move. The story focuses on a small group of followers that execute varies mission to make the campaign a success. Like every one else, their main goal is to stripe the power of the current ruler and have Cedric rule Aorbinn.

Side note: I’m planning at the beginning of the story to have a kid (17-20 years old) that wants to join, but I’m not sure how. Any suggestions and ideas would be definitely welcomed. Also if it is possible to incorporate the kid, I’m hoping that a baby sister (8 years old) could be included but I’m not sure how. Like a reason as to where she is and how she’s not with her older brother.

287 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-09-06 12:02 ID:Yr5lupg3

During the colonial era - Japan sends pilgrims further east to colonize the new world the same time as the pilgrims were.

I'm not creative enough to come up with what happens next. Maybe a bunch of fighting and shit.

288 Name: AmriSakura : 2010-10-02 19:35 ID:+K1S4Ce6

believe it or not this one is one i made up like four minutes ago while browsing through all of your idea's(man was it hard not to write that in slang^ ^)Tell me where i can improve on it
seeing that this one of my first shounen idea's since i usually do shoujo
Name:-E.M.B.E.R
Type Mecha,shounen,Drama,Comedy-(though might not have it)
Plot-Ember is a half human,half android that escaped the U.S Laboratory Base to a discreet part part of Japan hoping to fit in with the society that's around her.At first it worked out well but then she started to malfunction being an uncompleted project and she became the ultimate killing machine(at least to those she hates)And there is only one person who can stop her and he's a missionary assassin that is five times stronger than her.(That's as far as I've gotten and of course there's gonna be a twist after this in the middle and probably a few changes)

289 Name: chute : 2010-10-11 12:03 ID:AJTJQ9P+

title: unexpected

there has been a war between good and evil cults around the world, Napo joined the cult to restore the life of his parents and potential to lead the world of cult.Karim, the youngest leader of good side cult still live in a normal life with her younger sister Ashira, but one of the leader of the evil side named Napo will use his power to manipulate her sister against karim. As Ashira grows up Napo will hypnotize him to chased him. The cult of Karim will use some protectors against Napo.

1.The cult will choose Karim, explain her mission but still manage to grow up with a normal life
2.Karim will be one of the leader opposing evil in this world, Napo on the other hand also has a mission to eradicate Karim by using her little sister Ashira.
3.Ashira grows up and begins to chase Napo, but still some protectors to remove Napo's curse to Ashira will be there.
4.Finally in Ashira's side she finally win the heart of Napo but eventually Napo finally succeed, but KArim discover his palns and do everything to get rid of Napo.
5. Napo’s heart was drastically changing into better, and falls inlove with Ashira, he even forget his bad motive and decided to live his cult and change for the better but still his guilt decided to go away
6. Ashira left their country broken hearted and KArim is still cautious on Napo’s plan.
7.Still bunch of protectors around Ashira to swindler her attention with Napo but seems to have clue on everything and decided to move on continue study abroad.

290 Name: chute : 2010-10-11 12:05 ID:AJTJQ9P+

title: unexpected

there has been a war between good and evil cults around the world, Napo joined the cult to restore the life of his parents and potential to lead the world of cult.Karim, the youngest leader of good side cult still live in a normal life with her younger sister Ashira, but one of the leader of the evil side named Napo will use his power to manipulate her sister against karim. As Ashira grows up Napo will hypnotize him to chased him. The cult of Karim will use some protectors against Napo.

1.The cult will choose Karim, explain her mission but still manage to grow up with a normal life
2.Karim will be one of the leader opposing evil in this world, Napo on the other hand also has a mission to eradicate Karim by using her little sister Ashira.
3.Ashira grows up and begins to chase Napo, but still some protectors to remove Napo's curse to Ashira will be there.
4.Finally in Ashira's side she finally win the heart of Napo but eventually Napo finally succeed, but KArim discover his palns and do everything to get rid of Napo.
5. Napo’s heart was drastically changing into better, and falls inlove with Ashira, he even forget his bad motive and decided to live his cult and change for the better but still his guilt decided to go away
6. Ashira left their country broken hearted and KArim is still cautious on Napo’s plan.
7.Still bunch of protectors around Ashira to swindler her attention with Napo but seems to have clue on everything and decided to move on continue study abroad.

291 Name: radishtable : 2010-10-16 06:09 ID:iDt7P3M6

Bill Sanzen the richest man in the world, has nothing to do with his billion billion cash. so he decided to share his money.he called his butlers and they threw the money all over japan.It was raining with cash. All poor citizens in tokyo became rich,and tokyo became the richest city in the world.

but a secret organization of robbers wants to conquer tokyo and steal all the cash, and also fuck the bitchy tokyo girls.so One day the secret organization attacks Tokyo. they are all armed with guns and hostaged the tokyo people. but they didnt know the secret weapon of tokyo that the money was spent to. they made all people in tokyo a super human.a human that is 10x stronger than ordinary human.the robbers was captured.then tokyo became a place where people are scared.Bill became the emperor of tokyo. and fucked all the bitch tokyo girls.and they will soon rule the worls and fuck other bitch girls from other countries

292 Name: RMM : 2010-10-16 20:21 ID:I4KRCUVu

Tittle- Right the Wrongs

The main character was a victim of bullying ever since he was 7.
4 years later, the bullying stopped as a boy saved the MC from anymore bullying.

They became friends, best friends to be exact! 4 more years later, the friend got killed cause of bullying and the MC sweared that he will live his life for him(kinda gay, but well-meaning).

293 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-10-18 12:12 ID:3KqvAI25

A manga about motherfucking construction workers, full of manly tears and band-of-brothers-esque moments. Women appear rarely, and if they do its incidental.

294 Name: Adam7 : 2010-11-10 16:24 ID:k5gHd72/

okay, really worried about posting this one coz I cant afford to have this stolen by some narrow minded lazy prick. As a result of my unease as to post this or not im omitting nearly all of the story but I will say my anime/manga possesses 3 story arcs to date and the 'CHEM-ware tournament' arc is the 1st one. You all seem to be cool dudes with some impressive ideas so feedback would be great. Here goes:

Title: Platinum Trigger
Genre: Action, Sci-fi, Japanime

The year is 2051 (Goichi Suda referrence ftw!) and Japan is the setting for an epic saga of love, revenge, power, betrayal and some sick-ass killers stackin' up the bodies in a kill-or-be-killed tournament where the real enemy is never where the rain falls. Platinum Trigger is the story of Zander Chase, a proffesional asssassin turned prize fighter, as he ascends the ranks of the CHEM-ware Enterprises fighting tournament that pits the best killers from around the world against each other in a ranked elimination style tournament. In a future fuelled by war, land and power-politics countries and corporations can no longer sustain conflicts and PMC's in lieu of state armies thus tournaments such as this have gained notoriety across the globe as a way for countries and companies to sponsor fighters and still propagate their interests without wars and such. Although all fighters are sponsored, Zander remains unsponsored and unknown in 10th place even though his skills could claim him 1st place.

The truth is Zander stays away from the top spot in order to avoid Scarlet Ichida, the woman who Zander loves. Zander stays in a lowly position so as to protect her from upcoming killers and also to avoid the notice of the tournament officials. Zander's master, Dan Honomaru, teaches Zander the ways of battle with his trusty weapon, Quad-Sabre. Zander's weapon, the revolver Mononoke, is maintained by Zander's 14 year-old otaku 'technician' Chichke Rouro from Chichke's make-shift shop '51st Heaven'. All of Zander's ranked matches are delagated by his unscrupulous, money-hungry agent Emile Vander and as if that weren't enough Zander's childhood friend (who also has a secret love for Zander) Miritamie Fey mobs him with his fan-club, 'The Chase Appreciation Society' that Miritamie is the Chairman Vice-person of (a title of her own design).

And so Zander dwells in the lowley ranks until Scarlet Ichida appears on national television and declares that Zander Chase is responsible for her fathers death seven years ago and that anyone who can kill or capture him has an instant shot at the no.1 spot. Seeing that Scarlet has been sponsored anonymously even though anyone would be lucky to aquire her as an asset, Dan starts to suspect foul play. Sensing old enemies astir, Dan instructs Zander to climb the ranks and clear his name. Reluctant to do so, Zander and Mononoke begin their fight to the top with Scarlet Ichida-the deadliest woman in the world and the love of Zander's life-awaiting them at the end of their struggle...
... and thats as far as I can go due to my fear that this idea may be stolen. If the world were perfect then you would all be treated to Platinum Trigger in its full form: the essence of a Shakespearian tragedy within the body of a colourful, edgy battle-ridden bleachesque epic fit for modern anime. All comments appreciated: stealing of ideas not appreciated (wonder if i've made that clear enough?).

295 Name: Kietonsb : 2010-11-10 18:20 ID:Q8RksczI

The comment field is too long, by 2561 characters.

I think i am a good story teller sorry but that sentace says no lol

296 Name: Adam7 : 2010-11-11 01:17 ID:k5gHd72/

Sorry I didnt say this earlier but there are some inspired ideas here. Random Manga Otaku you are one crazy bastard!!! I liked the one about the forest girl and the one about the human race going genocidal in an attempt to kill every other species. Cant be arsed looking for them again: not out of disrespect to ths pieces but coz im on a Wii and it would take ages. Oh as for the issue of people asking to lend ideas and beginnings and stuff, such a possibility is out of the question regarding the work I posted. Dont wanna sound like an arsehole but thats the way it is.
Also, anyone posting on this site from Manchester, England eho would like to illustrate my manga please request to do so as there is LOADS more to it than what I have posted on this site! Im a top writer but I cant draw for shit so a talanted manga artist would be appreciated; that doesnt mean you need a degree or anything so dont worry!

297 Name: Winston Gabga : 2010-12-22 10:19 ID:9dg8QIZQ

Hi dear Mangas my name is Winston and i'm from Cameroon.I wish to have a helping hand in the Mangas industry cuz i have come out with a new cartoon which is called STRANGE BOYS.but the problem is i don't have the means to continue because i lack a computer,i mean the various things needed to make my cartoon alive. please i will need help from u guys because cartoons are my passion in life but because i lack his things it has made me to be discourage to continue drwaing but it does'nt mean i have given up. please i will stop hear for a while.To contact me my email address is wgabga@yahoo.com or u might as well contact me at Winstongabga@yahoo.com.

        THANKS FOR YOUR HELP

your faithful Mangas Viewer

   WINSTON

298 Name: Sharotto-kun : 2010-12-24 08:40 ID:3gMUegJc

Er....is this thing even active anymore?

299 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2010-12-26 07:12 ID:Heaven

>>298
You'd get your answer if you'd read the dates.

300 Post deleted.

301 Name: gandhi : 2011-01-09 01:36 ID:vs3P/Hei

oh ok i got me one. This is kinda sci-fi~ish and crap
well this takes place on Earth. A Top secret organization called the FAMISHED ONE, which ruled the entire earth, had sent 5 lucky people in an incubator said to open up in 215 days, into space to look for other sustaining Earth-like places. They were sent out because earth was known to have been depleted in all their resources which the one's they still had now would most likely only last less than 6 month's time, but in fact it was all a hoax, earth wasn't actually running out the FAMISHED ONE were telling a complete lie they had kept all their resources for themselves. They had sent those lucky five people because they were the one's against lying to public about not having enough resources, so the FAMISHED ONE had brain-washed the lucky five people into believing that they were running out, and had ordered them that if they did find other planets which had a good considerable amount of resources to tell the FAMISHED ONE where they're located so they could obliterate them and take over theirs. After the 215 days had passed the weak-minded ones who were brain-washed will be the one's believing this whole-bullshit story the FAMISHED ONE thought up and forgetting everything about themselves only thinking about their sole-mission, but the strong-willed ones who believed in what to do will be the one's to overcome it. So the story takes place with 2 strong-willed person who overcame the brain-washing who wakes up too late as they see the other 3 not-so-lucky-people communicating with the FAMISHED ONE about the earth-like planet they see a couple kilometers away. Will they be able to make it in time to that planet 1st to warn them about the FAMISHED ONE or will the famished ONE reach it 1st

302 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-01-13 11:30 ID:mc2irGbg

My idea is no humen story! 
The earth was atacked from aliens.
By the point,the story is hackneyed.
But,this story's main character is new species that we had never seen.
Completerly, new lefe.
This species was born in the earth after humen was destroyed.
they fight for the earth.

sorry my english is but

303 Name: Iname : 2011-01-16 18:10 ID:ftokdJ4+

That... That DDR Manga... Agh!! That sounds a lot more legit than my idea!!

I had an idea for a DDR manga too, and I'm in the process of drawing it. But seeing your DDR-themed-manga idea is starting to make me doubt mine... It's like...

This boy is really good at video games. He's just been naturally good at almost every video game he's come across, and spends most of his time playing games. That's practically the only thing he's good at. One day when school ends, he meets up with his friend, and then they bump into this jerk in school, who argues with him and ends up challenging him to a DDR competition. The main boy doesn't like getting active, and this is one of the games he hasn't tried yet, so his friend shows him that she has DDR mats and games at her house. She helps him practice for the competition, and after trial and error, he ends up getting good enough to compete against him. They go to the arcade, and compete against eachother. He manages to beat that jerk, but it was an actual COMPETITION for more than just those two, and he loses against one of his next opponents. He feels good that he beat the other boy, but not so good that he didn't win the entire contest. I didn't make up more than that, but I'm assuming he finds out that there's an even bigger contest that's going to have a few parts to it, and that the huge contest is starting next month and he has more time to prepare. He realizes that DDR is addicting, and wants to practice some more so he can win that new competition and from there his little journey begins.

OF COURSE... That doesn't sound as Shonen as yours, and yours just sounds more natural to everything. Gah...

That DDR manga of yours has some potential. Do something with it! ;D

304 Name: Luna : 2011-01-17 23:47 ID:W231nAYT

wow... you guys have a ot of ideas. i read them and none of then actualy sound anything like the manga i write. <--good thing but many many of the ideas are quite entertaining they would make good ideas. my favorite was the DDR manga though. ive never heard anything quite like it. =)

305 Name: VanFox : 2011-01-22 12:00 ID:+TwPlQEi

Wow i like this. i was wondering if there was others out there that was creating mangas or ideas. and i needed help on mine so reading all your thoughts defiantly helped a lot. ill be on here left and right from now on to see whats new and what not. although i dint read it all yet haha

306 Name: Zei : 2011-02-02 22:23 ID:nIj8ZSmR

Title- ASOUL
Genre- Action, School, Romance
This is a small story... one boy Dante, his sister Alagrai, and a lot of victims.
The plot goes like this....
Dante, a 14 year old is finally going to his sister's high school.
Kuro High.
Once he arrived he realizes the mysterious of his sister. his sister is the strongest, most beautiful, and the smartest girl in the school. Her physical abilities surpasses everyones. But ONE secret remains... How is she able to be so strong...
"DOES DEATH REALLY HAVE A MEANING OR IS MURDERING ITS MEANING???"
A-ASSASINS, S-SOUL,O-OVERVIEW, U- UNITED, L-LEAGUE...
OUR FATHER's JOB...
-TO BE CONTINUED...

307 Name: Zei : 2011-02-02 22:36 ID:nIj8ZSmR

TITLE- EL CAMPEON
GENRE-Sports, school
MAY 12 2013...
Location...BELO HORIZONTE, BRAZIL.
WELCOME TO OUR SCHOOL,MAXIMOS.
A young teen finally transfers to a school in a foreign country thanks to his soccer skills. His name is Tovie and he has admired Brazil since the age of 3. He has practiced soccer in Ny his whole life and has surpassed everyone in his school because of his father's training. You see, his father was the former # 10 for Barcelona, Real madrid, A.C Milan, Liverpool, and Cruzeiro.
When he chooses his clubs he encounters the soccer co-ed team. He submits his form and goes to see the club. The co-ed club had 5 members... Cassio, Amanda, Victor, Elizabeth, and Vramire. He soon notices that the soccer team has no talent and decides to gain 6 members and play in the brazilian jr. team as the #10 and captain.
Will he win????
LETS SEE ON 2014

-sorry for grammar mistakes.

308 Name: Zei : 2011-02-02 22:47 ID:nIj8ZSmR

I have many manga/anime ideas but my friend William told me this so i just felt like using it for a story.I believe the movie Constantine is similar
Title: THE ETERNAL REST
GENRE- ACTION, and something else(DEATh)
THE STORY IS ABOUT A GUY IS AT THE VERGE OF DEATH AND CAN SENSE THE PRESENCE OF THE DEAD. HE MEETS A OLD MASTER AND IS FORCED INTO DOING THE ACTIONS THAT THE MASTER TELLS HIM TO AVOID BEING CONTROLLED BY THE GOV'T. HE KILLS, RUNS, SAVES AND ACTS UP IN SEVERAL MYSTERIOUS WAYS....
ETC... HOW DOES IT SOUND????

309 Name: Waffles : 2011-02-05 04:30 ID:SNyELK1o

I have an Idea for a manga i'm going to take a shot at.

Name:World's End
Genre: Sci-Fi
A girl named Halona has to find someone to live with in the ruins of Tokyo after she survives the Ending of the World. Her Parents and sister were killed in the damage. 90% of The world's population has died out and the other 10% have morphed into half animal. She has to avoid becoming food for other people and find food for herself. Is there anyone out there in the God-Forsaken Wasteland?

Ahahaha, Tell me what you think. ^^

310 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-02-12 10:28 ID:g5s6rOyI

>>309 sounds a bit like Kurogane Communication with more mutants and fewer robots.

311 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-02-12 14:23 ID:3KqvAI25

I'd make a Love Hina remake, with no men, Naru as the main character and Kanako with Naru being the OTP

312 Name: Arcanox : 2011-02-24 22:30 ID:c1b42P7j

Anyone wants to team up like them telling me story, I draw? xD, I Cant think bout a story but I can draw

313 Name: Ravenmage666 : 2011-02-26 05:05 ID:Th0oE9cz

Okay, this is my Idea for my manga tell me what you think about it..

Name - March of The Superiors
Genre - Supernatural, Action, Sci-Fi

Okay this story's plot is around a war fought between 4 Kingdoms each alliances with another one, these 4 kingdoms are Healing and spirit, Magic, Beast, and the Weapon kingdom. The Healing and magic kingoms faught against the beast and Weapon kingdom, but through all those years of fighting they decided to both have a royal child that would have the blood of all 4 kindoms and stop the fighting and bringing the Kingdoms together under a treaty creating a new united Kingdom. But The offspring for the Healing and magic named Amaya, and the offspring of the Beast and weapon Named Kargan, both did not except the fate that was given to them and fleed together, to Earth. While there Kargan and Amaya separted and witnessed the corrupt things that earth had, and chose to protect the innocent from those that abuse power. Thus created to of earth's most well known Fighting Teams, names Omen's Gentlemen and Heaven's Apex. Soon Earth became for equip and evil became more florished and thus both teams combined to create The Sentinel Alliance Earth's most skilled and well-known team. But as years went on conflicts caused the team to fight until it eventually got out of hand, causing a villianous squad to kill a pregnant amaya, who carried the child of the Kingdom alliance. A soon as Kargan returned and found out he unleashed a terrible pain and destruction on earth. and fleed to his realm. In utter sadness of Amaya and the baby that would end all fighting Kargan prayed for her to live once more. And a trickery god answered, bringing back Amaya with the cost of his baby's life. But what amaya didnt know was that the trickery god also offered him another choice he could bring the baby back but with the cost of his wife's soul. Kargan foolishly agreed and as his baby was brought back Kargan lost his will of life, thus the trickery god possessed him. With the present of the baby the 4 kingdoms stopped their fighting and created a new kingdom called the Makaanori Kingdom, with strong roots and a powerful army force, the possessed Kargan was made the first ruler. But as years went on the baby, Tsukiko, grew up and one day learned of her father's and mother's history on earth, and even his plans to evade earth and conquer it. A trustworthy Tsukiko fleed to earth to find the members of the disbanded Sentinel alliance only to find the superhuman children of the members help her out in her quest to stop her father. But it wont be easy earth after Kargan attacked it viewed every superhuman as a threat, and soon after developed a system of powerful androids that are well equipped to take down an superhuman. Along with the pressures of working together, training, and becoming strong, they all have to keep out of the sight of, The Makanori spy soldiers, The Black ribbon squad, privately owned super-humans, and the governments system of andriods called The White Sorority.

314 Name: T.J.Y : 2011-03-03 02:37 ID:L9YP7n9c

Ok, mines still in the thinking stage, but so far I've thought of this-
Theres a girl, named Minako (age 14), who was sent to Tokyo, Japan from Sapporo, Japan to live with her aunty in an apartment (Because her parents had died in a fire)they had seperate apartments next door to each other, Minako was being tutored personally by a woman named 'Kai' ,age 37, from 5:00 pm to 7:00 pm.

The only times Minako goes out is to buy food, clothes, ect. The first day she goes out to buy some food, a boy runs into her (He's wearing a gray hood on his head, covering his face, carrying a loaf of stolden bread), knocks her down, and runs away while a bread baker chases him with a dough roller.

Minako shops, goes home, and eats supper with her aunty. That first night Minako is playing on the computer (Which she bought with some of her parents money), a game called 'Armor Trigger' when the boy who had stolden that bread before jumps in through the window.
TB=The Boy

Minako is scared of TB, TB pulls out some sort of tracking device that looks like a walkie-talkie that he starts pointing around, it lands on her necklace (Which was a gift from her GREAT GREAT aunt) and demands it, calling it the 'Key to Life'.

Minako recovers from her fear and demands an explaination. TB explains that his name is 'Akira Ichiro', age 15 1/2, the first born son of his three other brothers. Akio says one late night he and his brothers were playing in the woods when a small flashing red thing fell from the sky, landing into the woods.

Akira and his brothers went to see what it was, and found it tangled in a low-lying tree, it looked like a red cresent moon, it was a necklace. Akira had picked it up when it suddenly glowed a light pink, Akira explained he had collapsed, the three other brother panicked and ran home, fearing their own lives.

Akira had woken up, dazed, looked around, Akira explained he was in a dark, silent dungen type room. There were three other men and one woman there, who explained to Akira that the necklace he had picked up was full of magic, and that it had fallen from heaven,dropped by the God Zeus.

Akira then explained that they had told him that the necklace had transported him here, and flown away, Akira was to find the necklace once again and stay with the necklace till it turned a dark pink, then return to the dungen with it.

Minako wondered why he would go through so much trouble for nothing, when Akira continued, saying, that the people in the dungen explained that they were Zeus's magic messangers from heaven.

They said that Akira was under the necklaces magic spell, The one who touches it first once it is in the human realm would forever stay the same and gain the ability fly, until the necklace is returned to its god once it turns dark pink.

Akira then said that he enjoyed staying the same age and flying for about 50 years, then, as people started getting older, he relized how sad living eternally could be after many of his old friends had died, and decided to get serious about returning the necklace.

For the next 10 years, Akira explained, he had been using a tracker to find it, searching town from town, until it started beeping, and he had found the necklace. copyright @TJY

Hows that? If you like it I'll add another part soon.

315 Post deleted.

316 Name: Waffles : 2011-03-09 00:14 ID:SNyELK1o

>>310 Hmm... I've never heard of "Kurogane Communication"... Let me google it...

>>314 For your Manga idea, What is the conflict exactly? Or is it more of laid-back See-what-happens manga?

317 Name: kelvin : 2011-03-13 00:20 ID:00OucjWa

name of manga:sukaro type:fanasty/romance/action plot:sukaro is a 13 year old boy how has a power he dosent no about he has demon powers as he meets other people how are just like him he joins the sagkno clan he soon figures out that there are five levels of the demon mode will he be able to control it.

318 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-03-14 06:51 ID:7/p6NnS8

319 Name: AznJackHX : 2011-03-15 18:59 ID:bgqtF86B

I kinda like the DDR one C:

320 Name: aznjackhx : 2011-03-15 19:01 ID:bgqtF86B

I like the DDR one C:

321 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-03-19 04:24 ID:1u3U2IiN

i have 2!

Name: Forbidden Minds
Type: action/mecha?/adventure

Plot: 3000 years into the future, the council of the Nexyion galaxy, keeps a forceful control of the knowledge of people. in this sadistic society, students at age 10, are required to take a test they call, "Infinitus", which is said to have a 100% accuracy in generating the pupils IQ.

the ones that are deemed to smart and too stupid are sent to slave houses, where they are brutally torchured as pleasure slaves or just killed.

a high IQ (of 372) student, named Allen Hoshifuru?, escapes and goes on an adventure and attempts to stop the brutal massacre of knowledge though out the galaxy.

rating: 16 - adult?

and another:

Name: The secrecy of Bakachan and Bakasan

Type: Romance/Action

Masaki Yosora(Bakasan)? meets a girl, Aiko Minatsu(Bakachan)? in an online 3D chat game. after realizing that they spend nearly 10 hours talking to each other in the game, they decide to meet up in real life. after meeting with each other, they have an instantaneous connection and fall in love.

it's not long before Aiko and Masaki's parents find out and they separate them. they still decide to be in a relationship, and have to meet up in secret until they turn 18.

along their journey, they'll have to face many obstacles, including a few people who threaten to tell others of their relationship.

rating: 16+

note names of characters will be changed, cause i'm not good at Japanese names.

322 Name: Please make title :D : 2011-03-21 21:48 ID:O5w29TEZ

Here what I got at the moment,

Name: Not thought of, hoping that someone might make a good title.

Genre:Action,Fantasy,Adventure and Supernatural.

Kurou

323 Name: Please make title :D : 2011-03-21 22:00 ID:O5w29TEZ

Here what I got at the moment,

Name: Not thought of, hoping that someone might make a good title.

Genre:Action,Fantasy,Adventure and Supernatural.

Kurou (havent thought of last name yet) is a highschool student able to use a power called Inner Soul. He is a soul saver, a counterpart to a soul Keeper. Soul Savers are people who fight using a inner strength pulled out from the soul, a soul keeper is someone who uses a unique personal object to open their inner soul and unlock a weapon e.g. a sword or a gun etc. The Soul keepers and savers both join together in teams of 9. The teams fight lost souls called exiles (creatures with no care about life, those who have given up in love, joy and happiness) with their powers. As Kurou finds about exiles and ends up battling one by being in the middle of a crossfire between a team and a exile, he finds out that he has the power to unlock his soul and use his eyes to kill the exile.

Ill put up the whole summary later because that is just a brief beginning of the story.

It sounds like a copy of bleach and soul eater, but its very unique if you see the summary.
Please put ideas on the title please :D

324 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-03-22 21:47 ID:whaO6xN2

>>323
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325 Name: Kirin34 : 2011-03-23 22:05 ID:jMJ7BciD

Here's what I got at the moment

Name:Shattered Elements of Destruction

Genre:Action,Comedy,Fantasy and Adventure

This is the story of Katashi Hiromasa,the legendary bounty hunter.Specializing in swordsmanship and an extrodinary marksman.He's someone to be reckoned with.A freak accident caused him to gain the powers of different elements.Armed like that,he's unstoppable! A couple of his many features are Katashi's jaw-length spiky black hair framing either side of his face.Also,has green eyes that turn into slits when he gets really excited.He wears a leather black hoodie,jeans and canvas sneakers.

326 Name: rnd : 2011-03-31 01:23 ID:3JPxoz38

My idea:
Title: Ruffles!

I came up with when I was eating potato chips and thought it was hilarious

Stupid idea but what if a potatochip company created special chips that give
People special abilities(maybe having something to do with the flavors. ie, B.B.Q
= fire) idk but anyway they make 1 bag of each special chip disguised as regular bags of chips and randomly distribute them throughout america and see what happens. Just for giggles!

P.S.: the powers are temporary so you have to eat another chip to get the power again.

You could have all kinds of nutty characters!

Anyway I don't care who the hell uses this idea because it's not my best and anyone who uses it can probably do better than me.

327 Name: Tempjob : 2011-04-15 15:29 ID:CvBjsDK/

I think a mutitude of Mangas have characters that seems unstoppable, but not as a main characters. Instead they are villains and drive the main character(s) to get better so they can defeat then.

328 Name: akio urushihara : 2011-04-17 19:38 ID:gL9sSIhU

hi im 12 yrs old anyway my manga idea is like this: 20 years ago in a city called unicity there were a band of warriors called the moon guardians. anyway the hero of the warriors, tenji urushihara stop the demons called vixens from causing everlasting darkness to the world. he sacrificed his life to save mankind. 20 yrs later the warriors son akio urushihara age 15, doesnt no this. one day one of the vixens attack him. fights the vixens with his martial arts abilities but doesnt work. so the vixen almost lands a attack on him but akio mysteriously summons a magical gun that only destroys vixens. from then on he and his friends xix and akari must destroy the vixens and discover their lineage

329 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-04-19 13:09 ID:fJh4WMsL

I am Japanese

The force required to protect the lives of the world world
Please help! There is little time remaining

Nuclear power plant in Fukushima, Japan is highly toxic plutonium around the world, strontium, iodine, threatened the health of people scattered cesium

Despite the radioactive material is scattered around the globe with just a single point of meltdown in the region of Japan

Japan, now lets spread radioactive material world of dark debris caked all over again in all 47 locations across the country!

Thank you, the government and the press

330 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-04-22 23:07 ID:hIGOZMKI

The world slowly coming to its demise (or other settings) told from the point of view of a single/various animal/insect which will not be sentient.

Could possibly have recurring characters.

331 Name: Bright Manga Ideas : 2011-04-29 06:55 ID:atvcPJBS

my manga is called Perverted reverse tho its not that perverted it a reverse harem manga about a girl named Saiyuki and her perverted brother Toriyaki. She works as a fortune teller and looks like a guy but is a really cute girl at home. But one day 3 random guys come to get they're fortune told while Toriyaki is sexually harrassing herethen they tell her that they're her brothers that Toriyaki and Saiyuki's mom and dad had before they died. 1 is tall and is carrying a stuffed bear and looks emo but when he see's Toriyaki sexually harassing Saiyuki he goes "What the hell are you doing!" and knocks out toriyaki with one punch. The other 2 just sit there then they introduce themselves

The one carrying the stuffed bear is named:Kentarou or they call him Ken
One that looks rich and refined but is actually a playboy is called Torishima Tori for short
And the one with a badass attitude is called Kishima. When Ken is done punching Toriyaki they announce thay 6 other brothers will be coming that have been had by they're mom and dad's perverted relationships with other men and women in total it makes a 1 girl 10 guy reverse harem gender gender all living together mang.

332 Name: RibaXD : 2011-05-18 02:39 ID:5TwY12L5

Title: The Seven Swords
Plot: During the time of Sengoku period a war taken place between Nobunaga, Shingen, and Uesugi but their war will change when the gate of Asura was destroyed by a cannon during the war breaking the seal within it causing to release Demon Lord Asura and his army... an ancient entity who once deceived the gods causing him to be sealed by a clan in the name of Onikiri who were forgotten in the dawn of time... the last member was a child taken by Lord Shingen and was treated as his own son and named him Kazuo Ryu... when he was found by his soldiers in the forest of Yokai where the child was trained to fight demons and communicate with spirits, seeing the potential of the boy he was trained by Shingen to be the greatest warrior of Japan... Since his bloodline was belonged to Momotarō the oni slayer, he left to find and protect the scroll of humanity containing emotions of man with each different power and purpose... Willpower, Fear, Rage, Hope, Death, Life, and Love, this emotions unlock the swords sealed within the scroll... there he goes his quest to unite the warlords and defeat a threat even the gods fear, 2 years after he ran away from Shingen's army and posed as a doctor to prevent his destiny as the key to stop corruption but he's life as travelling doctor was over when he was spotted by a kunoichi named Akiko and discovers that his skills were beyond from a samurai and a ninja and decides to capture him for Nobunaga... afraid to go in war once again, before he can he ran away he meets two Oni's and attacks Akiko for food with no choice Kazuo unlocks the sword fear killing the two oni's without breaking a sweat... Akiko now realized that Kazuo was the Fear of Death... his reputation and bounty was huge due to the many murders he made only learning that killing rings guilt at the deathbed and promised to himself he will use the sword only to help the people in need, enemy or ally,also now he knows that the fate of Japan and the world itself lies in his hands to protect and re-seal the Asura once more....

Characters:
Kazuo Ryu - Last member of the Onikiri and he disguises as a doctor from a village who is actually master of the art of the sword... he is compassionate about people and likes spirits from the forest since they are calm which he adapted making.... but he is always clueless to women

Akiko Junko- a female ninja/Kunoichi who vowed to secretly bring Kazuo to Nobunaga without Kazuo knowing but as they travel together she realizes her faults and wrong doings in her life as an assasin, she is smart and reliable in combat and skilled with small weapons such as sai's

Aya Mutsumi- a female Samurai from Uesugi with a large bust size she is clumsy and clueless and also always trips on her feet but her skills with the sword is a huge match against Akiko and she likes strawberries...

Hanzo Washi - a monk with skills in fighting demons unlike Kazuo he is always nervous and a real pervert... Kazuo always teach Hanzo to be calm and be a gentleman but in exchange he teaches Kazuo to be a pervert but he's not understanding anything since he is clueless about women..

333 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-05-20 00:46 ID:g6PwMO9f

>>216

Did anyone ever read this guy's idea? What did you think of it?

334 Name: Somekid99 : 2011-06-15 00:51 ID:6uOQjHDz

Title: Drops of our Lives.
Genre: Comedy, Romance, Harem, School Life, Drama.

“Kale!” someone shouted in my ear.

I slowly turned my head to see Hayley Parker, one of the five student councilmen for the sophomores, staring at me with fire in her eyes. She was six foot, with curly blonde hair, and sky blue eyes. She has a very stuck up personality, then again she had to represent the entire sophomore class so I couldn’t blame her for being a bitch sometimes. She was wearing the school uniform, a blue skirt with a tan long sleeve jacket. She had on a red necktie which symbolized that she was a sophomore at our school.

“What?” I answered in a low and boring tone.

“You were late again, and it’s only the second week of school.”

“So?”

“Do you know how badly that reflects this class? This is the only sophomore level class that hasn’t had perfect attendance, because you…” she put a lot of emphasis on the word you, “can’t show up on time. Damn it Kale, when are you going to get your act together.”

“Would you rather have me not show up?”

“No that wouldn’t solve anything.”

“Then I don’t see the problem.” I quickly replied looking back out the window.

She started tapping her foot now. She had a habit of doing that whenever she was starting to get angry or annoyed with a situation.

“You…” she growled at me and I heard the tapping of her high heels as she walked away.

I couldn’t blame her for being a bitch, but that doesn’t mean that I have to be nice to her either. She should be happy that I even show up, after all it was my decision whether or not I went to school. Someone like her wouldn’t understand though, so there was no point in obsessing over it.

The bell rang marking the end of our fifteen minute break. I yawned and put my head down as the rest of the class returned to their seats. As my teacher, Ms. Conway, began her lecture I slowly drifted off to sleep.

“Bro,” someone began nudging my shoulders, “wake up, schools over.”

I lazily lifted my head and looked up at my best friend Derek Callahan.

He was six foot, slim build, with short messy chestnut hair, and brown eyes to match it. He was wearing his uniform as well, a tan jacket with a white undershirt, blue pants and a red tie. He was a sophomore in my class, and just as lazy as me. At least I had a good reason though.

I got up and walked out the door with Derek following close behind.

“Man today was lame! Some idiot totally got caught using my peep hole into the chick’s locker room,” he said shoving his hands in his pockets.

“Sucks for you.” I answered back still half asleep.

“Would it kill you to at least act like you care?”

“Probably.”

“You’re hopeless.”

I shrugged.

We made it to the end of the hallway and went downstairs to the first floor. When we made it too the bottom Derek and I exited the building and went our separate ways.

“Later Kale,” he said walking towards the dorm buildings.

“Later,” I replied as I turned towards the schools gate and began walking.

Side Note: I actually have about 200+ pages written in microsoft word xD lol This is my first time posting so i thought i would just post the first three pages, the harem characters get added in within the first chapters and if you want to get the rest of the story or have me post more on this website please tell me at cw9otaku@yahoo.com

335 Name: Somekid99 : 2011-06-15 00:52 ID:6uOQjHDz

Title: Drops of our Lives.
Genre: Comedy, Romance, Harem, School Life, Drama.

“Kale!” someone shouted in my ear.

I slowly turned my head to see Hayley Parker, one of the five student councilmen for the sophomores, staring at me with fire in her eyes. She was six foot, with curly blonde hair, and sky blue eyes. She has a very stuck up personality, then again she had to represent the entire sophomore class so I couldn’t blame her for being a bitch sometimes. She was wearing the school uniform, a blue skirt with a tan long sleeve jacket. She had on a red necktie which symbolized that she was a sophomore at our school.

“What?” I answered in a low and boring tone.

“You were late again, and it’s only the second week of school.”

“So?”

“Do you know how badly that reflects this class? This is the only sophomore level class that hasn’t had perfect attendance, because you…” she put a lot of emphasis on the word you, “can’t show up on time. Damn it Kale, when are you going to get your act together.”

“Would you rather have me not show up?”

“No that wouldn’t solve anything.”

“Then I don’t see the problem.” I quickly replied looking back out the window.

She started tapping her foot now. She had a habit of doing that whenever she was starting to get angry or annoyed with a situation.

“You…” she growled at me and I heard the tapping of her high heels as she walked away.

I couldn’t blame her for being a bitch, but that doesn’t mean that I have to be nice to her either. She should be happy that I even show up, after all it was my decision whether or not I went to school. Someone like her wouldn’t understand though, so there was no point in obsessing over it.

The bell rang marking the end of our fifteen minute break. I yawned and put my head down as the rest of the class returned to their seats. As my teacher, Ms. Conway, began her lecture I slowly drifted off to sleep.

“Bro,” someone began nudging my shoulders, “wake up, schools over.”

I lazily lifted my head and looked up at my best friend Derek Callahan.

He was six foot, slim build, with short messy chestnut hair, and brown eyes to match it. He was wearing his uniform as well, a tan jacket with a white undershirt, blue pants and a red tie. He was a sophomore in my class, and just as lazy as me. At least I had a good reason though.

I got up and walked out the door with Derek following close behind.

“Man today was lame! Some idiot totally got caught using my peep hole into the chick’s locker room,” he said shoving his hands in his pockets.

“Sucks for you.” I answered back still half asleep.

“Would it kill you to at least act like you care?”

“Probably.”

“You’re hopeless.”

I shrugged.

We made it to the end of the hallway and went downstairs to the first floor. When we made it too the bottom Derek and I exited the building and went our separate ways.

“Later Kale,” he said walking towards the dorm buildings.

“Later,” I replied as I turned towards the schools gate and began walking.

Side Note: I actually have about 200+ pages written in microsoft word xD lol This is my first time posting so i thought i would just post the first three pages, the harem characters get added in within the first chapters and if you want to get the rest of the story or have me post more on this website please tell me at cw9otaku@yahoo.com

336 Name: Barry Eysman : 2011-06-20 14:07 ID:bVwhsTd3

my first manga yaoi story $.99 at Amazon. and also at manga yaoi prose. I'd really like to know how I did. I do not mean this to be a spam. If you think it is, tell me and I will delete. Thanks, Barry

337 Name: Cowgomoo : 2011-06-29 00:00 ID:s2GQzbUl

Ok, this is a series you can steal, because I screwed up the plot of the manga in the process of drawing it anyway. Please don't get mad at my writing skills, I'm only 12.

Name: Dried Tears
Genre: Drama, Fantasy(?), Adventure

Jennelle Fangmon is a vampire from underground(where they live). She works as a hard miner, hoping to create a tunnel deep enough to lead to the Human World. She has a friend named Ashley, who is pregnant at 37 weeks. One day,Jennelle finds a baby badgermole, and follows it to the secret underground tunnel, which leads to the Human World. She informs Ashley about it, so she asks if she can come on her journey with her. Ashley replies with a no, for the sake of the baby. Then, Jennelle gets into a fight about their future life, but Ashley still refuses. Stubbornly, Jennelle starts to wander off into the excitement of a new life, while exploring the secret tunnel. She had one candle with her, but suddenly hears a lot of creepy noises, as if it were ghp

338 Name: ToraBear : 2011-07-04 22:41 ID:kh/m0AP2

Not good at explaing
Name:?
Type:?
The main character is a girl originally from another world. She escapes to our world after being a slave for the royal sorceress for 15 years. Once in this world she tries to persue a normal teenage life but she is being tracked down for a reward to return to HER world. When a boy transfers into her school hoping to catch her he falls in love but if he doesn't return her he is to be killed...(to be continued)

339 Name: Waffles : 2011-07-09 17:29 ID:SNyELK1o

>>338

Maybe It's just me but I've read some manga that are similar to that, not in the slave part, but the escaping away from her world and meeting a boy but is tracked down at the same time.

340 Name: Tora!8NBuQ4l6uQ : 2011-07-12 02:45 ID:gVaWrYM0

Soooo....i was thinking of an idea.
The main characters are english. It sets probally in the early 1800's or so.
Character name Elisebeth (short is Elise.) Augustine
Age:14
Hair colour: Blonde
Eye colour: Blue or yellow?
Sex: Female
Character name: Christoper Seriouse
Age:14
Hair colour: white
Eye colour: Red
Sex: boy
Elise has a family curse set on her by Demons. The first born must die. Her parents are nobles and just had there second child and don't want it to be associated with a cursed girl so they kick her out. She is to be killed but learned how to defend her self in sword fighting. She runs into Chris who is a demon but is also being hunted by demons so they stick together. They fight demons and people after them together. Eventually Chris decides to try to trick a powerful demon by faking to take Elises soul and kill her when really he binds their souls together so that they become [in a way] soul mates. Elise is a fighter who won't give into weakness while still being charming and Christopher is hard working and polite.

341 Name: redpeppers14 : 2011-07-16 07:00 ID:7YQyoaPp

well i was thinking of things, because i have lots of ideas that just come to my mind! title: (none established lolz) genre: bl, comedy, action(?), adventure, fantasy Gen Abe is a type of person called a link, which keeps earth and a world called shikina from connecting. but when his best friend (jomai honshu) who he is also in love with is captured by shikina's queen, he's forced to embark on a journey to get him back. the problem is that since he's a link, if he leaves the earth to go to shikina, then earth will be invaded by the shikinians! he wonders to shikina will a very beautiful exorcist (her name can be akira or something) to get him back! i'm kinda a sucky writer so meh lolz

342 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-07-22 22:42 ID:Heaven

These all sound terribly generic. None even sound remotely readable.

343 Name: Pen name not given : 2011-08-05 04:03 ID:Xvntp7Ow

unlike the person above me, i dissagree, i found some of these ideas had potential for series. but to be honest in my current carreer these stories should be more short term. i believe a oneshot comes first then expands into a series. thats why these stories seem very dragged out to me, but some of them do spark intrest. SO KEEP WRITTING TO HEARTS CONTENT!! i hope to be fasinated by a story one day, where'll i'll almost beg for you to continue it! -good luck :D

344 Name: Pen name not given : 2011-08-05 04:24 ID:Xvntp7Ow

can someone write a very interesting short story for a mainstream battle manga? -PLEASE TRY, I'D APPRECIATE IT

345 Name: Read it plz(can't draw but if someone famous take this n turns into a manga ill be glad) lol.comment : 2011-08-06 03:42 ID:4R1BcvsY

Summary - Kasuya and Yakuza is twin brothers that has been skipping school to doing whatever they can to earn money to send their sick mother to the hospital. On a strange day, mad events happen to yakuza and kasuya allowing dem to reach home very late. When arriving home, they notice a note at the front step saying,”darkness is comin soon, look for master koga and become great hunta. My days as your guardian are over, im sorry for lying but I am not your mother” - sincerely mastumi. Before the boys could open the door, the note suck them into a world and a voice echo ” follow your heart”. The quest for the them begin as they meet friends, enemies, and the trial their heart will face.Little do they know they both share the blood of the War.One of the "Four Fathers" of evil.

Battle system: Drive- when a hunter use the burst stored in his/her heart to generate their powers.

Kasuya-main protagonist, he is the younger twin brother. He is less calm but more cocky than his brother. He loses himself when angered due to his cursed blood.Because he died at birth,War gave him his heart so he can live giving him more shawdow powers than yakuza.His gloves seal his shawdow powers. His drive creates a bright ring around his arm. His power manipulate shape and size of anything.

yakuza- main protagonist, he is the older twin brother of kasuya. He is more calm and describe to be a bit sininster due to his cursed blood. his drive allows to create swords of any shape or size. War sealed his shawdow powers in a katana.

346 Name: Read it plz(can't draw but if someone famous take this n turns into a manga ill be glad) lol.comment : 2011-08-06 03:44 ID:4R1BcvsY

Summary - Kasuya and Yakuza is twin brothers that has been skipping school to doing whatever they can to earn money to send their sick mother to the hospital. On a strange day, mad events happen to yakuza and kasuya allowing dem to reach home very late. When arriving home, they notice a note at the front step saying,”darkness is comin soon, look for master koga and become great hunta. My days as your guardian are over, im sorry for lying but I am not your mother” - sincerely mastumi. Before the boys could open the door, the note suck them into a world and a voice echo ” follow your heart”. The quest for the them begin as they meet friends, enemies, and the trial their heart will face.Little do they know they both share the blood of War.One of the "Four Fathers" of evil.

Battle system: Drive- when a hunter use the burst stored in his/her heart to generate their powers.

Kasuya-main protagonist, he is the younger twin brother. He is less calm but more cocky than his brother. He loses himself when angered due to his cursed blood.Because he died at birth,War gave him his heart so he can live giving him more shawdow powers than yakuza.His gloves seal his shawdow powers. His drive creates a bright ring around his arm. His power manipulate shape and size of anything.

yakuza- main protagonist, he is the older twin brother of kasuya. He is more calm and describe to be a bit sininster due to his cursed blood. his drive allows to create swords of any shape or size. War sealed his shawdow powers in a katana.

347 Name: ye : 2011-08-06 10:18 ID:v60aYJDt

Arisa, a highschool student who love to cosplay, one day she saw a wierd cosplay costume store,owned by a perverted old man. the store has so many cool costumes and the owner told arisa that the costumes are free for arisa,so arisa took many costumes.the costumes has a power to copy the abilities of the one that you are cosplaying.(example you cosplay Robin from onepiece, you will have robin's power.)

but one day the owner of the shop told arisa that she has to pay the costumes. In order to pay it Arisa must be the old man's sex slave, arisa accepts it because of her love in cosplaying. after a many days and nights of non stop blowjob, fingering, titfucking, fucking in the pussy and ass, kissing and licking her body, drinking the old man's cum.The costumes are paid and the old man disappeared.

348 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-08-07 00:54 ID:G0Jz+pPb

>>347

I would not be surprised if this has already been done.

349 Name: master.K : 2011-08-08 21:29 ID:Xvntp7Ow

its been awhile since ive done a story,so heres a plot for an east meets west battle manga.
enjoy.
A young black man by the named Daniel Brown who lives in the ghetto finds his way through life by hustling on the streets through gambling. But one night he hustles a crime lord and is then pursed. He hides on a ship since he lives near the docks. The crime lords goons swarm the docks in search of Dan(short for Daniel).The ship he's on begins to depart, now he's forced to stay on it or die...

350 Name: master.K : 2011-08-08 21:43 ID:Xvntp7Ow

...(continued from where i left off) Dan is spotted by a ship worker. the worker theatens to call athoritys, but Dan offers a bet through dice roll. worker agrees. the dice are rolled. on the line is (for the worker) Dan's big shiny chain wich got him spotted by its shine and also (for Dan) Dan's allowence to remain on ship. the next day Dan arrives at forign docks smiling, saying "you can never go wrong with fixed dice". He smoothly gets off and away...

351 Name: master.K : 2011-08-08 22:23 ID:Xvntp7Ow

...(continued from where i left off) down at the docks he comes across an old man who asks about Dan. Glad to find someone who understands him in this easten forign land, he tells of his dilema. the old man offers to help, for the old man too is in the same deadly situation becuase when he was younger he was also a con artist who conned a dangerous man, after that the old man has been in hiding ever since. The old man agrees to instruct Dan in forbidden martial arts...

352 Name: master.K : 2011-08-08 22:35 ID:Xvntp7Ow

...(continued from where i left off) The old man in turn wants Dan to kill off every one after the old man. months later Dan has aquired the skill needed to complete the old mans task. he's given a credit card with money from the old mans con profits on it and daggers and protective assasin gear but also a list of the old mans pursuers with info of everyone on it.
-From there the storys about assinating everyone on the list and in the end Daniel goes home to assinate his own pursuers. END

353 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-08-09 15:13 ID:NZfrjsK9

comment 346

354 Name: master.K : 2011-08-10 17:56 ID:Xvntp7Ow

>>346
this sounds good for a short series. I doesn't sound as mainstream, wich is good. if the manga had a dark feel to it in most aspects, i'd say it would be a hit. Dark heroes are popular and not done as often. Great job overall. I'd draw to it.

355 Name: Izzy : 2011-08-15 19:47 ID:3yxEtoS3

Alright I'm just going to come out and say that I'm an aspiring artist and I have been so freaking blocked lately!!! I've been trying really hard to find a writer in my area to do a manga with. But there isnt anyone here that is good or that doenst think manga is totaly lame and weird. DX sad i know. But I read through most of these and I loooooooved Russki-kun's Reapers. I love drawing Sci-Fi manga just cuz its not typical mainstream manga, but it does have action which makes it interesting. I had a similar idea but this ones way better. I totaly suck at writting and making story boards but if someone could make story boards of this, I think it would be a really good online comic. If you want to contact me go to my deviantart account!

356 Name: Izzy : 2011-08-15 19:49 ID:3yxEtoS3

Sorry I didnt put my DA name XP silly me. its: artsy552.deviantart.com
If anyone has some good story boards please let me take a look!

357 Name: Izzy : 2011-08-15 19:53 ID:3yxEtoS3

I keep forgetting stuff sorry! The Reapers story was in comment 5.

358 Name: Curtis : 2011-08-22 17:55 ID:2rR+805z

Mkay. Came up with this yesterday whilst I was in the car. It's a story revolving around the idea of time paradoxes.

A young teenager, aged roughly 15, was born with prophetic powers (able to see into the future). Only few are aware of this, including several members of the police department.

It is the year 2132, March 29th. The boy foresees the most horrific act of terrorism, to occur in exactly three years. The leader of the terrorist attack is identified, a man currently aged 20, before the event even happened.

In hopes of preventing the catastrophe, the would-be terrorist is framed for a serial murder by the police. All 'murder victims' were in fact forged; their identities were never revealed. The man is sentenced to jail for life.

July 17th, 2133, the man is found missing from the highest security jail. After a year of solitude and confinement, seeks for the truth and ventures to find the person responsible whilst on the run from the police.

This is the story of the young prophet, and the most wanted man alive, their encounters, and their journey towards the fated day.

I think this is really interesting, sorry if it's not. If you don't really understand it, the main story is about how a person is framed for something they are predicted to do, escapes, and the whole fiasco about him being jailed becomes the reason why he commits the terrorism. :)
If anyone really likes this and wants to do anything with it, please email me first. I would love to see it happen.
curtis99877@gmail.com

359 Name: Curtis : 2011-08-22 17:57 ID:5IEyL6gY

To be honest, there's probably something already similar to what I just posted but, it's still interesting (in my opinion). If anyone knows a manga that's kind of like that, send me a link? I'd love to read it. :D

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362 Name: don't mind me ahaha : 2011-09-04 18:31 ID:/y2eotUe

this sorta reminds me of the Dollars in a way
-If you ever watched or read DURARARA!!!
i'm just sayn its sorta cool to be apart of this ^_^

363 Name: master.K : 2011-09-04 18:43 ID:/y2eotUe

well Shitoru Masturame graduated recently. So i heard they went out to celbrate in that park, you know the one your not supposed to be in after dark. so anyway Torijiro being irresponsible as always added alchahol to the drinks. then everyone there was drunk! I guess nobody notice the moon... sorta scary if you ask me, ...the fact they all went missing...

364 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-09-07 00:54 ID:vxtKlCqr

pretty baby diggs nose.

365 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-09-07 00:55 ID:vxtKlCqr

366 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-09-21 12:28 ID:5AGaCL6r

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そうすれば14日後好きな人から告白されるわ宝くじは当たるわ
出世しまくるわ体の悪い所全部治るわでえらい事です

367 Name: Random Manga Otaku-killer : 2011-09-26 11:35 ID:CBqBY1vK

Hi bitch! You owe me from last time and I know where you are and what you are doing right now so stay put... Wait for me after _2 days... prepare yourself asshole.

368 Name: kara : 2011-09-27 03:36 ID:WWa2Z0ia

i have a idea im turning into real

369 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-10-01 10:12 ID:3HaxG+hv

370 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-10-05 16:48 ID:hWEwhgsD

371 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-10-05 16:51 ID:hWEwhgsD

372 Name: Dragon Knights : 2011-10-10 21:24 ID:I5o2yKJk

All characters start off at the school (training), when they leave they have a ceremony where they are given a dragon egg, to hatch it they must put the element in capsules that are in a special arm brace, when the capsules have the elements in, the tamer can use the element themselves with other objects e.g fire arrow, lightning knife, earth axe. When the eggs hatch, the dragon is already matured and are able to be ridden, the new tamers have to train and connect with their dragons.

Extra Info: The dragons can be combined to make other elements e.g fire + lightening = Explosion. You can combine as many dragons together e.g water + wind + lightening = storm. when all 5 elements are combined you can use ELEMENT BLAST

373 Name: The 3rd Kind : 2011-10-14 11:27 ID:B8vgYZxx

Hello people,

well heres my idea

The protaganist is a kid working in a farm because his mother passed away and he doesnt know his father.
One day a bunch of knights comes to the farm and announces his the new king of the land.
And of course he was shocked,he later came back to his senses and wakens in the lap of a female knight.Which happens to be the head knight.And later after entering the gate which he was greeted by his servants (all of them are female,the old king which was his father is a perverted but kind hearted king.)After which he was shocked to find his best friend(a girl)to be a maid in the castle.And so he will face tons of chalenges from enemies to romance.

The Theme of this is Harem,Ecchi,Comedy,Action,Sci-fi

The protaganist has black hair with blue-sky eyes which only the royals have.His kind,shy,smart and cool.

The head knight is a blonde tsundere which soon falls for him.

The best friend also inlove with him for a long time has brown hair.

And so thank you.

Contact me in Facebook
Elise Rulona

374 Name: IdiotiqueM3 : 2011-10-29 07:32 ID:z+bFEEMN

Here's my manga idea...
well i hoped it will work out
Title = The Days(change it, i dont mind)
Genre = comedy, action, school life(optional), martial arts, supernatural

The Main Character is a junior high school student who cant do anything right. He's really kind, hopeless on love. But one day, A Man said that he, the main character is the next generation of the guardian of saturday. His life changed drastically, he met with other guardian one by one(and he still cant do anything right). His power comes to the surface when he was dying to protect his friends and the world.

I already have a sketch for the guardians, but not fore the man. If you want to see it add me on facebook, http://www.facebook.com/FiammaVolta

Guardian weapons =
Monday = Lance
Tuesday = Paint brush(magic)
Wednesday = Stunner and 4 Floating Shield
Thursday = Dual Schyte
Friday = Throwing Disc with Sharp Wire
Saturday = kicking, punching, slapping, grabbing + power of freezing stuffs
Sunday = Dual dagger

Thanks

375 Name: IdiotiqueM3 : 2011-10-29 07:35 ID:z+bFEEMN

Here's my manga idea...
well i hoped it will work out
Title = The Days(change it, i dont mind)
Genre = comedy, action, school life(optional), martial arts, supernatural

The Main Character is a junior high school student who cant do anything right. He's really kind, hopeless on love. But one day, A Man said that he, the main character is the next generation of the guardian of saturday. His life changed drastically, he met with other guardian one by one(and he still cant do anything right). His power comes to the surface when he was dying to protect his friends and the world.

I already have a sketch for the guardians, but not fore the man. If you want to see it add me on facebook, http://www.facebook.com/FiammaVolta

Guardian weapons =
Monday = Lance
Tuesday = Paint brush(magic)
Wednesday = Stunner and 4 Floating Shield
Thursday = Dual Schyte
Friday = Throwing Disc with Sharp Wire
Saturday = kicking, punching, slapping, grabbing + power of freezing stuffs
Sunday = Dual dagger

Thanks

376 Name: SilentSmilez : 2011-11-28 06:12 ID:4fsaZD/x

I've Had This Idea For Over A Year Now.. I've Already Started On The First Few Chapters...I'll Only Say A Little Bit Cos' I REALLY Don't Want Anyone Using It......
Title: Luna
Genere: Run-away, Love, Comedy,...maybe action...

:::///... Far Up Above The Surface Of The Earth There Lies A World For The Goddeses.. There Are Many,Many Gods, And Every Year On The Winter Solstice, A God Or Goddes Is Said To Come Doown And Posses One Newborn Child, In Order To Watch Over The Surface In Secrecy. And On The Winter Solstice Of 2011, The Moon Spirit, "Luna" Is Chosen To Come Down And Posses The Body Of A Newborn Baby Girl. Although The Child Or Parents Don't Know Of It, The Moon Spirit Lives Inside The Baby Girl, Now Named "Luna"... But Every Spirit Shall Only Stay Within The Host For A Certain Window Of Time, (That Window Is Chosen By The Leaders Of The Spirit World), Then The Spirit Must Return To The Heavens, And Once The Spirit Leaves The Host, The Host Dies, And Luna's Time-Slot Ends At The Age Of Six.....

The Main Charicter, "Miku" Is A 16 Year Old High-schooler, He Is VERY Shy And Isn't Good Around Girls Or Anyone For That Matter, (He Greatly Resembles Me!! :D  )...I SHOULDN'T OF WRITTEN THAT MUCH!!! OMFG I'M SCREWED!!! -Goes And Huddles In A Corner-... (Also...I WROTE ALL OF THIS ON A NINTENDO 3DS!!! FTW!!!  :D   )

Plz Say What You Think.. Is It Original Enough??

377 Name: sasuke27 : 2011-12-01 01:19 ID:trEoeRhj

I had a idea a while ago thought I should share it. I can't draw or do long stories so I'm glad I found this site.

Title: 48?
genre: horror, mystery

A middle aged man wakes in a hospital with amnesia after a car accident to find out he was in a coma for a year. While he and a nurse fall in love. When he gets released they marry and live happily for about a year until he comes home to find her murdered.
The blood he sees triggers his memories that he is a serial killer
and has killed 48 people. Now he must solve the mystery of who they were and why he killed them to hopefully solve his wives murder.

378 Name: NeonNinja : 2011-12-09 07:13 ID:TI7nGJXB

Ok like i am oobers(funny word horrible) at names and memory. Maybe i should change it later. who knows. well i usually am too lazy or there is an error on my comp to make things but i just want to share my ideas. i definatley am going to use them. go self-imployment! haha.

Title: None(btw thats not the name of the title lolz)
genre:i guess maybe comedy depending on your sense of humor and i cant really think of many

A highschool boy in a big familly lives a boring everyday life. He doesnt really know or care about what he wants in his life. Well maybe he gets transporten there or i don't know how he arrives at this place but he does. This land is full of different territories and adventures and the only inhabitants there are these beautiful women. The thing is that for some reson they are all trying to kill him. He meets up with a mysterious person on a motorcycle who says they want to help him. Its up to him if he will trust the person and/or get back to his own world/land/dimension/whatever other thing e.g.(that means like clarification, right?) multiverse, etc.

That's my first. Most of my daydreams are fanfics. I must admit I am a fangirl towards certian anime characters. I'll try to write more later but its late and it will so not be beans when im running late ( i just started using those words oobers and beans. and might i say, they are totoally beans!that means cool)

379 Name: Random Manga Otaku : 2011-12-09 07:50 ID:sPR36FYw

>>378
You type like you are either 14 or have autism.

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