I'll start.

I've had quite a few ideas for comics/manga in my time, but I've always been too lazy to do anything about them. These are free to use if you want to, and if you want I'll supply more plot/plans for any of them. For most of these I had fleshed them out more than just the summary.

I guess a few of these would also make good web comics.

i dont have autism but i have a friend who knows someone with autism and i guess thats kinda a compkiment right? being told you type like someone an age older than you. XD

The compliment was towards the writing age not autism, btw.oh great, now i sound even more wierd.

Title:None(I have an idea but im not sure about it)
genre: I was hoping to make it like a drame (first eva) but i failed and instead of making drama i came up with this and i have no idea what the genre for this is

In the future people in Japan(most mangas take place here) or America(also popular) are rude or mean. A highschool girl bumps into a little girl. The highschooler starts to be kind of nice to the girl. She thought the little girl was just someones little sister but shes actually a highschooler(little girl is like a small mousy kind of person) well the two become friends and on summer vacation the little girl says that she will not be coming back next year. She invites her friend to her house for vacation. She says yes. She thinks its just gonna be a condo or somethings, but she finds out its a medium sized cabin by a lake in a beautiful area that she had never known about before. Well during the stay she finds out the little girl is a kirin(ok so i origionally thought it should take place in japan but then i started having second thoughts and never changed it).
After summer vacation, the regular height highschool girl goes back to her old self before she met the little girl. She goes back to having no friends, but you see at the very end she is still friends with the little girl and her friends who are different creatures (ghost, tapir, demigod, etc.(

see horrible for a drama :P

my idea from 5th grade

• setting

futur earth has madde communication with 2 other planets and have dicided to mak alliances with both planets. NOT knowing that both planets were at war and after making alliances with one planet the second planet dicided that earth was a threat and attacked earth and cappturred some reppresentitives from earth as captives.
-main characters involvment
the main characters sister was the first one to go to the second planet and is know one of the captives. the main character feels its his fault and dicides to go rescue her forcing him to join the rescue divison of a speacial accadamy for space cadets ( he was originaly in the acadamy because it gave you free housing and food(him and hes sister were poor and orphanes))

• story

as he transfors to the rescue division he meets his room mate (roommate- idiot (very strong)) and meets a genius fighter (girl he falls in love with)where then he finds out that in three years the school will have an all out rade on the second planet. wondering how the girl knew that the main character come to realizethat the girls dad was the one who made the choice to send his sister to the second planet.

the story can kinda go any where you want from there
be it romance comedy action psychological

(sorry for the spelling mistakes im dislexic)

also this story will be a bit more mainstream because there are only a few astaunate manga and if you make this one youll finish befor there are to many

well i just figuered out that i really want to make a comic because i think it will be a good practice for me... but i suck at making stories the most so i searched it up and found this, i thought of one that will be more of my type of "art" and thought of this short story but i dont know how to finish or continue it i was wondering if maybe someone could help me think of more ideas for it so i could finish or continue the manga but either way here it goes...:
Title: Unknown (i cant think of a good title so i might need a little help with that)

Type: action romantic comedy kind of thing

summary: Skye the main character is a princess from bell island that gets attacked by the blackguns (ill probably change that later) which are people who dont want a ruler on the island her servant whom she known since children tries to save her as she just watched both her parents get killed by the blackguns she goes with him to a helicopter and go away together secretly to spain for protection and skye the princess has to go to an all boys school dressed as a boy so her loyal servant, whose name i have not thought of yet, can protect her and that is all i can think of and draw for the moment if anyone has more ideas or corrections for this please do tell... hope this was intresting

HAY! I want to use your idea!!! maybe we can work somthing out? LOOK AT MY YOUTUBE account! I can do good things as long as the thing im doing is good!!!

title: nero black(plzz tell me wht you think)

summary: 14yrs ago, nero was given a second chance to live by taken the heart of a shadow. dark hearted creature from the underworld. nero, now 14yrs old has been given a letter to travel to the land of magico to become a guardia, protectors of earth that fight against the shadows. will he decline this offer due to his heart? or will he accept it and hide his secret. he must follow his heart to begin his journey.

Battle system : blitz- guardia will be given a relic that reacts to their heart.powers may differ or be the same as someone to a certain extent or their rank.

            Royal guard- physical martial arts using magic space.
            trinity- some guardias are given a book of spells.

Hi im Indonesian/ and I'm making Indonesian comics with Japanese manga style and POV. I'm half dead searching story lately. hope some of you will give me some advice. more over we can together making the manga I will add your name as an author and I do the art. so please help.
BTW I'm not lookin for : mecha, and battle manga anything than that I will accept. email me : hamdan.shinoda@gmail.com

Hi im Indonesian/ and I'm making Indonesian comics with Japanese manga style and POV. I'm half dead searching story lately. hope some of you will give me some advice. more over we can together making the manga I will add your name as an author and I do the art. so please help.
BTW I'm not lookin for : mecha, and battle manga anything than that I will accept. email me : hamdan.shinoda@gmail.com

I'm writing a manga bout young assassin and I need some help on how to write so any ideas would be helpful.

^^ey i too am making a manga about assassins' although i have weak story telling skills i've been developing them over time, i even used this site as practice before. aanyway my short story will be a 19-21 page gag manga. The story uses the common theme of power struggle. the story plot: two assassins' proclaim the title of #1, challenged for the title each assassin is give 3 targets, the first two targets are said impossible to kill, and the last target subsequently is eachother.

my manga its about a 16 years old girl,she is cute and she fall for a boy in her high school.its comedy/romance/school life. i even right the story and ready to draw but....i dont know how to start it!!please help!any idea??

>>376
read this.
if you ever watched the american Anime 'Avatar: The last Air bender' then think back towards the end of book 1 some of the last chapters. The character warter tribe princess, (named Yui if rember closely) also had the moon spirit in her and she too passed when the spirit left her body, in a weird way although. I just feel like the idea became sorta like a spin off but with all these extra story mechanics that progress it giving it more insite and detail as why things happen.

>>390
well, i do enjoy giving input but theres simply not enough of the idea here as to give it a good start off idea in return. Although i can give you alittle something it may not be much help. i cant exactly give the beging of a story without the actual story, but some advice: as part of intro intro give insite to the enviroment as well as important characters and what roll the play at the school and other characters around them. some basic advice. best i can do with such genral info given, sorry.

Can yo u give ideas for antagonist and any ideas for high school character who are assassin thank you also I need a person who can draw real good..

>>393
Once again im left with little to no real insite on the subject. I could give ideas on the subject of a character being a highschool student and an assassin, but that could be anything. What ideas specificaly are you looking for? are you looking for ideas about a background story, or a persona, or a conflict, ect., what exactly?

see im stuck on character and conflicts and good weapon idea

>>395
It seems like your stuck on a heavy basis story wise to not have a clear conflict(s). As for weapons, just search the internet about weapons and im sure you can find at least one out of the thousands out there. going back to conflict, i'd feel better disscussing this as a close conversation, it'd be a chance for me to lend some of my more original ideas, if you feel comfortable please post a link so i can contact you some way in a more closed manner, like a facebook or a youtube channel.

>>395
It seems like your stuck on a heavy basis story wise to not have a clear conflict(s). As for weapons just search the internet for weapons, im sure you'll find one out of the thousands out there. back to conflict. i'd feel better to talk about this as a closed conversation, it'd give me a chance to lend my more original ideas. i feel comfortable, please give a link to contact you in a more closed manner, such as a Facebook or a youtube channel.

OK its westchrishawn@yahoo.com for my face and my email is chrishawn.west@yahoo.com

im making an manga about gunslinger and old west stuff but its a insperation of dragon ball z and one piece im stuck on characters and the plot so any ideas would be helpful thanks.

>>399
Although ive been pretty busy i enjoy helping others so heres a few basic plots that you can go off of that i thought were pretty suited for an old western setting.
-Bounty hunters: anything along the lines of the protaganist hunting for his greatest bounty(the protaganist), while also hunting other bounties.
-Vendetta: two opposing groups(any sort) shoot it out in a high action battle of supremecy.
-Avenger: main character seeks vengance on a lethal gang of robbers who took his familys' lives &stuff

Thanks and it sounnd good but I wanted this story to be really long and adventurou so more ideas please.

>>401
yeah,these are actualy story plots, these were ment to give you inspiration to form a story. Also, its possible to make an ongoing series with these plots as long as the story derived from them is well developed.

Well do you think it be good to make the main protagonists. Goal to become the world greatest gun fighter in the world but he needs to beat alot octopus rank gun fighter and beat the cavalry as well.

Oh and do you have some suggestions about cool character?

if your aiming to make a shonen manga, the protagonist commonly does overcomes the conflict no matter the odds. Shonen manga often give off an effect. A TIP TO ALL MANGAKA, the manga you make should make the reader feel. In the case of a shonen manga you want the reader to feel good and happy for the protagonist when overcoming odds and concerned for him when he is challenged by these odds. This is key when writting manga. Go with what's more interesting. >>403

>>404
So you'd like to know how to make a cool character? Well, it's said a main character is just an alter ego of the author. I feel that theres many ways to make a character cool. just when doing so keep in mind:
-attitude
-power/skill(how strong or skillful do you want him to be at first?, try leaving room for developement)
-what will set this character apart from all others?
think well about these things, if your character is well thought out then any characteristic should be aparent.

So you think I Gould use that goal then. Aldo you think this is a good idea for character to use that when they shoot them self they get a crazy abilities

I also had ideas for power they are called devilstones which containes special abilities. They way you get is what I'm trying to figure out but do it sound OK.

>>408
''devilstones are held only by elite gunslingers, inorder to obtain one you'd have defeat an elite for theirs.''
-Just a simple idea on how to get a devilstone
-as for my opinion on your ideas, i feel my opinion is not neccesarily needed, any idea can be good as long as the story itself incorperates it well, although i found shooting themselves unorthodox, i'd suggest something along the lines of artillery upgrades to grant special albilities, something like special bullets or something.

Well it alright to put mythical places and people to.

>>409
read the last part starting at ''as for my opinion...''

I get and thank you so much for your help I think I got the whole thing down.

So I'm stuck on ideas for a goal that the protagonist need to achieve but I want this goal to be a long adventurous. That take him and his friends to maany different place, new people, ect. And this goal is something that everyone wants to achieve but only one man did but anyway I just need ideas.

well...this is a story about two teens(a boy and a girl) who like to get into a lot of trouble together. one day,they decide to take mischief to the next level by crossing the national lawn which holds house to the ancient clock tower of the mage. they cross the lawn amd open the doors to the tower to find themselves falling throught the sky,smack dab into the middle of a parade in some other world about the Stars of the Nebula.this is a celebration that happens every 2000 years;the people of Cinnaga cleberate the 2 chosen people to join the stars in the sky.now the two friends must decide if they want to fulfill this weirdo destiny they have,or use all of this to their advantage and find a one way ticket back home to their mischief filled lives.

Does this sound good....
The story is about a 14 year old girl who loves magic and believes her mother is a wizard. Her goal is to live in a world of magic which happens when a 13 year old wizard and his fairy god mother drops into her backyard. And later meeting a man who hunting wizard she then becomes in love with. But anyway the boy ask her if she would come to the magic world and join the magic organization known as s.t.o.r.m to defend the world from evil wizards. The boy goals is to contain the beast inside after finding out that he is a half dragon and to become king of wizard. The girl is to become a wizard and find her missing mother. Sound great and please don't still just got it copyright to but any ideas would be help full zthanks

Hey guys my name is Joshua jerowsky
And I have been drawing manga for 8 years.
I am extremely talented (although I'm 16)
And do my work quite professionally. If anyone
Would like their ideas published I personally know
Many publishers that would gladly publish my work
Just give me some ideas and permission and I'll send
You some artwork- Jerowsky

If anyone is interested you can reach me
at my email josh.jerowsky@hotmail

someone post about romance please, and/or a romance story, good ones prefferably

detres-Romance story
who's that lady
a transfer student comes to a new school and sees Yifa the most popular girl there.The boy must join the football team then the basketball team joina a gang to impress her and then finds out she liked him the way he was before and they end up getting married and has kids and die in the same bed smiling

I'm writing a manga about a boy protect his world from alien and have 27 volume so far and 249 chapter but I need some character ideas like support,antagonist,and minor character.

I Just want to see more mangas where the guys are tryin to force the girls and instead of likeing it they get there penis bitten off or god forbid arrested or there ass kicked by a brother or that one charecter everyone knows is secretly a butch lesbian since she walks around school with more girlfriends then jesus

Would it be copying if use the power of stretching for the main protagonist though monkey d fluffy use?

Aloha brohas! Well, I came across this thread looking up manga plots. Though I'm a bit rusty at anime/manga, I pride myself in my artistic skills. I've been drawing since the age of 9 and am now at the sweet age of 20! Though I'm an inspiring cartoonist, I lack plots/ideas/direction... I'm interested in getting in contact with someone who has innate writing abilities and can help me with developing a great storyline!

hit me up @

daphneedawnedanzig@live.com
or
facebook/daphneedawnedanzig

please and thankies ;3

how about a manga for the economic crisis around the world?

will it be ok to do a manga about a modern day ninja trying to become Ninja King.. anyy help will be find

i have one. There is a boy that loses his parents in a fire accident and he moves to his uncle house . He and his cousin will get involved in a gang and then the cops will arrest them. They will spend 5 years in jail . They will return to their neighborhood only to find out that both his uncle and his aunt are dead because of a fire accident . They think that their death is related with the boy's parents death and they decide to search for clues They create a gang and after some ''jobs'' they start to gain some respect from the underwold bosses. They have on their side a young reporter , an agent , some guys from their previous gang and a college girl.

i used sims and made a manga series called blood money LOL
http://errakihree.deviantart.com/gallery/35234724

http://www.flickr.com/photos/75929519@N03/sets/72157629251007355/

So, I'm actually using this one but Its Called HIASOBI which means playing with fire and its a horror/sci-fi/action/romance...
its basically about a bunch of teeenagers ages 15-21 living and traveling together, because they all have some kind of ability and are hiding out from the government because the governmentmor really the military wants to use their abilities to take over europe and asia and they are refusing them because they dont want to become..welll to quote FMA "dogs of the military"

Does any want to share manga ideas

My email is westchrishawn@rocketmail.com

I have an Idea for a manga called Emblem where 100 people are placed on an island by seven mysterious silhouettes and are given things called emblems that draw out hidden powers based on things like personality or desires and the last one standing will have all their wishes come true. And now the main character has to survive against the other competitors while trying to figure out the mysteries behind the emblems and the silhouettes while fighting with his own past.
I currently have a few chapters done and most of the characters finished but unfortunately my art skills are below that of a drunk horse so I can't draw it. If anyone's interested send me a sample of your art along with your name (I don't mind a pen name)and age to 7startingmangaka7@gmail.com.

Whoever want to share manga idea's or need help cuz I do please contact me my email is westchrishawn@rocketmail.com
Thank yhu.

name: ... ( i am no good with names )
type: shounen , sci-fi , action (?) , romance (?) , comedy ...
personages : 1: jayck

         2: eclaire
         3: chad

         4: luckas (jayck's brother )
         
         5: rin et ran
         6: ceji
         7: eve
         8: doc.stan et son apprenti mic ( michel )
         
         9: la barman* et le toubib* ( never figured a name for them, i DO feel sorry for them ...)

         10: there R others but i don't feel like introducing ...

the general idea : the main caracter is suspected for beeing a menace to mother-earth, so he was sent into space to seartch for a way to clear his name ...

jayck ,16,sweeper* (*he catchs villans or beat the h*ll out'ta'm befor dellivring them to the police, 'n' not for free if i may say..) since 10, meets a good looking guy and a very very ... charismatic wome... girl ; chad and eclaire , 2 secretagents with a msg from the near futur (!?) ...
in this msg " in the night of his 19th birthday , the third son of the stones , living in XXXX-xxxx-XXX-XX-xxx, will be a menace for the human beings" !!! ... still 16 , the organisation gave jayck a chance to clear this accusation under the supper vison of chad and eclaire. the problem is ; to clear an accusation comming from the "near" futur ... the only thing they are sure of , is that this 'msg' was send to the base from a suicidal-vessal that was send 20 years ago.

(doc.stan, from the labortoir of this same organisation, went crazy after his wife died giving bearth to girltwins, he locked him self with his subordente michel and the twins in the laboratoir ... no one knows what happend to the four of them , but after two years the doc. requested a vessal , saying that his 'wife' , 'eve', is out of control..seeing the laboratoir beeing destroied by some unknown form the alowded him to get a vessal and quiclly send him with his 'wife' , two girls and his michel into space .. )

and so , to save his ass , jayck is ready to go to space with chad ( folowed by eclaire later because it was too stuped to send jayck under the super vision of an idiot and useless Chad, also because she got jealous seeing jayck charmed by RIN a girl living in a strange planet ) ...

Hi I'm doing a manga about Hitman ans I wanted it to be more fantasy and alot of excitement. With alot of character. But I'm a little stuck. So if anyone wants to share ideas with me it will be helpful. Also if you needed help to. Just post your email address and than you.

my manga : PLEASE don't steal it (begging face) i work really hard on it.

summary in it's most dumbed down form:
while the setting of this story, pyongyang, north korea, is using soldiers aged 11-30 to fight world war 7, in year 202012, a boy soldier with no memories searches for his past while he unknowingly lives under his family's killers rule as heir to the whole military.
( go figure all that's left for a hero to do is change the world....)

IN OTHER WORDS:
at age 6 riku nanaharas family was murdered in a freak, totally not coincidential, but unpredictable attack. when the gun was turned on him they thought he had died as well. but amongst all the soldiers in that house one was a liar. riku , miraculously, survived and not by accident but something went wrong and he lost all his memories, all of them before waking up in the hospital of the city that commissioned the attack, surrounded, unknowingly , by the people who "killed him"
riku is adopted into the care of the (horrible nasty ) dictator and put as heir to well....everything
she has no clue he is the boy she tried to kill and he doesn't know ANYTHING so it's pretty peaceful ( for world war 7)
10 years later, now 16 years old, and what he believes to be " no longer a naive child" riku is on the hunt for his heredity along with his two ( also unknowingly ) deeply involved friends sora, a GMO resulting from an experiment ( oh so long ago) in 2012, and tayuya, a tiny girl with alot of attitude, a bossy demeanor, and a nasty case of ESP. both who are very related to riku's past. the three vow to find out who riku really is. but they're in deeper water than they think. little do they know THEY ( even riku) are a part of the organization that did this: the army
with nothing but a scar and burnt off fingerprints to go off of, how far will riku go to uncover the secrets of his past, and how much the life he knows, will he sacrifice for the life he once knew?"
( that would be if he can even survive tomorrow, which in these times, is never a guarantee)

it's kind of choppy, and in progress but please no stealies :) thankyou :D

Dont steal... I just want judgement

Alright so I thought of this during school today, since we're doing a Grease play and Im playing Sonny...

Title: The list(tentative title)
Type: A shonen, Drama, and Romance in one
Genre: Drama, Action, Romance, Comedy (even though I suck at jokes :D)

Plot: Cole McIntyre, young man who isn't popular, but not that far down on the totem pole of the 'List' as the others of his school say. The list displays the popularity of the kids at school, and practically everyone wants to climb to the top. Escept for Cole and a few others who don't care what others think. He loves to act, so when a romantic play comes around, he goes for it. He tryouts, and being the awesome actor he had become, he nails the lead. But there is an upset...

The list... The rankings have changed, with Cole's success at taking the lead. 11th ranked, Cole is swarmed by three girls daily, always following trying to become popular. Even though they're cute and pretty, He pushes them away knowing they only want his fame. But why should he care? It's just a spot? But soon he enjoys the attention...

One day during class changes, a stage hand for the play is getting harassed by some idiots in the top ten spots. She says no and tries to leave, but the boys stop her and push her into the locker. She's cute and pretty, nice and kind hearted, and is number 23 on the list. The boys cant do better because of their attitude. Cole happens to witness this... He steps in. He went to karate and made it to orange belt in weeks for his street fighting capability. He quits, and took what knowledge he had grasped in those days. He slams his fist between them and her. The fall to the butts confused. They smile as they see its him.

"I see, mister 11 is coming in to stop us like the goody two shoes he is" One says smirking. Cole doesn't reply, knowing not to get angry at such vile. He turns to her.

"You okay Effie?" He says. The first time in a long time, someone 25 or below hasn't been called by their number. Only teachers say their names, and half the time they don't respond for they've gotten use to their numbers. She blushes and nods and walks off.

"Let the bitch go huh? Well great, just fucking great asshole. We were just chatting... God she was a bitch, not even glancing at us, I mean thats cool. Im gonna fuck her up nex-" The other one says before being lifted off the ground by Cole.

"Run that by me one more time... Im not quite sure I heard right." He said, growling in his face. Cole's not one for starting fights, so he wished he would try a swing.

"Looking for a tussle big guy?" The other says pulling his friend from Cole. cole just pats his right cheek.

"Please..." Cole said smiling. The one just released swung a right hook that made Cole stagger. They chuckled as he hit the floor. Cole kept a straight face, the punch not hurting much. He was an actor for a reason. He had strenth from starting off as a stage hand, the brains to remember lines and ques, and the agility to pull off dances. He was fight for fighting. He immediatly ducks as the other a left hook. He gets in close and throws up a mean uppercut, then throwing his right elbow to the boys left face. He falls to the floor bleeding. His friend rushes Cole, but he ends up ducking low and grabbing his legs. He throws him over his back and let him land on his friend. Cole brushes off his shoulders and walks away.

Cole gets a suspension, and is almost thrown from the play. But the other actors petition this and he is allowed to continue. Another event accures... His rank is better. 7th. He stood up and clobbered number 7 and 8, and took 7's spot. Effie moves to 18th for being defended by Cole. He sees her daily, and she begins to like him. He doesn't notice her staring at him constantly. He starts to like her too, but is afraid to go out of his shell to ask her.

Thats all I have for now... Reply to it so I can figure out if this is good or not....

Dont steal... I just want judgement

Alright so I thought of this during school today, since we're doing a Grease play and Im playing Sonny...

Title: The list(tentative title)
Type: A shonen, Drama, and Romance in one
Genre: Drama, Action, Romance, Comedy (even though I suck at jokes :D)

Plot: Cole McIntyre, young man who isn't popular, but not that far down on the totem pole of the 'List' as the others of his school say. The list displays the popularity of the kids at school, and practically everyone wants to climb to the top. Escept for Cole and a few others who don't care what others think. He loves to act, so when a romantic play comes around, he goes for it. He tryouts, and being the awesome actor he had become, he nails the lead. But there is an upset...

The list... The rankings have changed, with Cole's success at taking the lead. 11th ranked, Cole is swarmed by three girls daily, always following trying to become popular. Even though they're cute and pretty, He pushes them away knowing they only want his fame. But why should he care? It's just a spot? But soon he enjoys the attention...

One day during class changes, a stage hand for the play is getting harassed by some idiots in the top ten spots. She says no and tries to leave, but the boys stop her and push her into the locker. She's cute and pretty, nice and kind hearted, and is number 23 on the list. The boys cant do better because of their attitude. Cole happens to witness this... He steps in. He went to karate and made it to orange belt in weeks for his street fighting capability. He quits, and took what knowledge he had grasped in those days. He slams his fist between them and her. The fall to the butts confused. They smile as they see its him.

"I see, mister 11 is coming in to stop us like the goody two shoes he is" One says smirking. Cole doesn't reply, knowing not to get angry at such vile. He turns to her.

"You okay Effie?" He says. The first time in a long time, someone 25 or below hasn't been called by their number. Only teachers say their names, and half the time they don't respond for they've gotten use to their numbers. She blushes and nods and walks off.

"Let the bitch go huh? Well great, just fucking great asshole. We were just chatting... God she was a bitch, not even glancing at us, I mean thats cool. Im gonna fuck her up nex-" The other one says before being lifted off the ground by Cole.

"Run that by me one more time... Im not quite sure I heard right." He said, growling in his face. Cole's not one for starting fights, so he wished he would try a swing.

"Looking for a tussle big guy?" The other says pulling his friend from Cole. cole just pats his right cheek.

"Please..." Cole said smiling. The one just released swung a right hook that made Cole stagger. They chuckled as he hit the floor. Cole kept a straight face, the punch not hurting much. He was an actor for a reason. He had strenth from starting off as a stage hand, the brains to remember lines and ques, and the agility to pull off dances. He was fight for fighting. He immediatly ducks as the other a left hook. He gets in close and throws up a mean uppercut, then throwing his right elbow to the boys left face. He falls to the floor bleeding. His friend rushes Cole, but he ends up ducking low and grabbing his legs. He throws him over his back and let him land on his friend. Cole brushes off his shoulders and walks away.

Cole gets a suspension, and is almost thrown from the play. But the other actors petition this and he is allowed to continue. Another event accures... His rank is better. 7th. He stood up and clobbered number 7 and 8, and took 7's spot. Effie moves to 18th for being defended by Cole. He sees her daily, and she begins to like him. He doesn't notice her staring at him constantly. He starts to like her too, but is afraid to go out of his shell to ask her.

Thats all I have for now... Reply to it so I can figure out if this is good or not....

your idea for the reapers manga is a really good idea the plotline is awesome and it the type of manga i love so with your permission
can i use this idea for my manga

Does any one need help with manga ideas because I do.

My Email is westchrishawn@rocketmail.com

>>46 dear diary my name is kenny

I'm doing a manga nd I need some help alot of help.

Hi my name is Hacu and I have suffered a curse for a little over 1000 years.I look as if I am only 15 but that is just the power of the vampire curse.I have many friends but most of them just grow up and get away from me.

Only 3 of all these ideas caught my attention...
I think you guys should focus more on short one-shot paragraph ideas first before moving onto detail.
Most of these stories were also a bit too "western" for me. Cliches don't bother me so much, though. Everything is 'cliche' and there really can't be an 'original' story without a bit of cliched parts.

I have my own ideas (mainly school life shoujo, but do want to draw a shonen) and I can draw fairly well. I'm not amazing though but check out my DA anyway. (^o^)/

Contact me if you wanna collab on an idea. Like you give me your story & if I like it, i'll draw it. Plus I wanna have some story and character name control only IF I don't like it. And I want a pen name if we collab. Like PEACH-PIT & CLAMP do it.

http://fuuroki.deviantart.com/

Fuyuka, I messaged you on Deviantart... I would love to work with you. Your art is impressive sir.

I love the reaper idea this site really helps with manga! I am going to add a past character I made up called um..well I can't find a good enough name for her BUT she's a shinigami so if ya could can you help me with a name for her? oh and theres more characters just if your wondering!

from Annelise Van Nus :)

oh just adding that it's a reaper not a shinigami lol woops!

@443: ええええ～　ありがとうございます！ ;///;
I'll do my best!

Is anybody sick of all these mangas that are taking place in high school,because I sure am!  Why not make one that takes place in a middle school?  There is plenty to write about.  Lots of drama too, in real life.  I myself go to a catholic school from nursery to 8th grade.  One detail-- the 7th+8th grade uniforms have these wrap skirts that blow ALL the way up if there is enough wind.  It doesn't take that much.  I speak from experience as a 7th grade girl.  You wouldn't believe the drama, either.  I already said this, but, its true. I am really bored with all the high school drama.  What about schoolyard drama?  We are also let out free, we 7th and 8th graders, unlike the rest of the school, which has to wait to be picked up, unless you have a note.  A boy can buy a girl something,too.  There is almost always an ice cream truck or churro cart or cotton candy or icee cart.  Or buy something out of school.  Valentines day doesn't have anyone proclaiming their true love, and even though some people still give cards to the entire class, their are some personal gifts.  Don't forget the horrible teachers.

>>447
You broke the board width, you idiot.

>>448
How did he do that/does that happen?

>>442 really take this into consideration when posting. people like reading plots not a whole series detail for detail -_-

(plz dont take my idea)

But my manga plot takes place out of middle school, it still in development and still improving it, thought i am looking for help see it's about a couple of people, Minami, Irihi, Hiromi,Euen, Jin five people living to together under a roof its kinda making the a makeshift dysfunctional family, The main character irihi hes your typical average teen nothing special,at first he starts out a aggressive believing his he doing all the work around the place and that he'd be better off on his own, pretty much he doesnt need them around all there doing is holding him back from the world and that there not even really a family. eventually the chara gets into a fight with Hiromi arguing and then Minami kinda gets at him as he being a jerk, Euen interferes breaking up the fiasco as he does irihi pretty much leaves coldly telling them to leave him alone, as he walks out into night. he witness a trio of guys trying to hit on this gypsy, unfortunately she resist until they attempt to rape her, Irihi interferes trying to beat down the trio as it seems hes about to win, he kinda gets hit from behind knocking him out cold, as he was knocked out the trio of boys rob him off his wallet but leave young lady unharmed, he wakes up the rain he looks up weakly as checks on the lady he saved but finds out shes okay and then later see's his wallet his gone as he get up to leave, the gypsy offers him this glowing red in return, he refuses it at first but later takes it

or the alt

she later thanks him as he wakes up as he gets up to wonder if shes fine she walks away as he finds out at the last minute leaving the orb in his pocket, he heads home only to greet his dysfunctional family, they ask him what happened, only to shove it off as he reachs into his pocket pulling out the orb as he holds it up.

pretty much the orb activates giving from blue to a red ominious aura as hands pulls reach out and grab all of the characters pulling them into a white blinding light leaving the main chara in a stasis for over 2 years before reappear appearing in the lost grounds of the large infamous central city.

the plot is pretty much simple the main chara arrives in a unknown world as he put into things that have nothing to do with him, hes later cursed and branded by a deva devil, that slowly eats away at his humanity of his animus, only to allow the shadow/instinct to take over, as its triggered thorough intense emotion, when the brander is near and if . but the sad part is that the main chara has lost all of his friends plus none of the have no recollection of the other or even him, at the same time hes accompanied by a cursed god who forces him to work with him as devils dim to steal humans of there anima and animus to restore there gods who had fallen, Animus & Anima who are twins.

(plz dont take my idea)

But my manga plot takes place out of middle school, it still in development and still improving it, thought i am looking for help see it's about a couple of people, Minami, Irihi, Hiromi,Euen, Jin five people living to together under a roof its kinda making the a makeshift dysfunctional family, The main character irihi hes your typical average teen nothing special,at first he starts out a aggressive believing his he doing all the work around the place and that he'd be better off on his own, pretty much he doesnt need them around all there doing is holding him back from the world and that there not even really a family. eventually the chara gets into a fight with Hiromi arguing and then Minami kinda gets at him as he being a jerk, Euen interferes breaking up the fiasco as he does irihi pretty much leaves coldly telling them to leave him alone, as he walks out into night. he witness a trio of guys trying to hit on this gypsy, unfortunately she resist until they attempt to rape her, Irihi interferes trying to beat down the trio as it seems hes about to win, he kinda gets hit from behind knocking him out cold, as he was knocked out the trio of boys rob him off his wallet but leave young lady unharmed, he wakes up the rain he looks up weakly as checks on the lady he saved but finds out shes okay and then later see's his wallet his gone as he get up to leave, the gypsy offers him this glowing red in return, he refuses it at first but later takes it

or the alt

she later thanks him as he wakes up as he gets up to wonder if shes fine she walks away as he finds out at the last minute leaving the orb in his pocket, he heads home only to greet his dysfunctional family, they ask him what happened, only to shove it off as he reachs into his pocket pulling out the orb as he holds it up.

pretty much the orb activates giving from blue to a red ominious aura as hands pulls reach out and grab all of the characters pulling them into a white blinding light leaving the main chara in a stasis for over 2 years before reappear appearing in the lost grounds of the large infamous central city.

the plot is pretty much simple the main chara arrives in a unknown world as he put into things that have nothing to do with him, hes later cursed and branded by a deva devil, that slowly eats away at his humanity of his animus, only to allow the shadow/instinct to take over, as its triggered thorough intense emotion, when the brander is near and if . but the sad part is that the main chara has lost all of his friends plus none of the have no recollection of the other or even him, at the same time hes accompanied by a cursed god who forces him to work with him as devils dim to steal humans of there anima and animus to restore there gods who had fallen, Animus & Anima who are twins.

Hey hey, I ahve thsi idea. Take the Naruto manga, except instead of making itall crap make it as good quality as the Zabuza arc

Here's my plot. English isn't my mother tongue so sorry for all the mistakes. Please don't steal my story, I already drew the five first pages.

Title : Optimization

MC is a normal student in random western country. One day he wins in a lottery a trip to Japan - in reality an exchange program with a high school. He doesn't speak japanese very well.
There, he meets his roommate and his childhood female friend, with whom MC falls in love. He also meets her dad who is a science teacher in the school and was talking with a strange man (an old friend of him).

But at the night, the two boys hear a body fall. They go to see what's happening : the dad lies on the ground, murdered with a knife. MC finds near the body some papers.
But another person saw those papers.

Together, they decide to find out what's on them.

I don't know what exactly will happen next, but instead of discovering the murderer’s identity, they find a time machine (the father was a former scientist). They will certainly go to the past (like China's Three Kingdoms or War of Independence) and find the murderer who also have a prototype of the time machine : it's the fathers friend.

By changing the past, they will also change the present and the future. So a second part would be their tough life in a post-apocalyptic world and their trials to restore the present, involving to kill again the father.

My story is very confusing, so please help me if you have an idea :)

If anyone want to see :
page 4-5 : http://bit.ly/JmCGS0
page 3 : http://bit.ly/HN4hwm

is there anyone who could come up a dark story, a really serious, non mainstream type with Mysterious organizations, dark plot, and the likes??

please help me? i can draw but i can't think of a good dark story, here's some ideas, i just don't have the talent to expand them to excellent plots:

1. a nopperabo (faceless ghost) detective ( a la sherlock holes) who calls fort the the spirit of a dead victim, copies its face and memories and makes a way to capture the killer of the victim
2. an ex-assassin code named SILVER works for an organization, he's doing his job diligently until he was double-crossed ( i don't know the reason, please think of a logical one) then the fight for his life follows (pls expand)
3. thirteen people (well, at least 13 will do) received e mails, mails, text messages, or any confirmations that they were included in a game that would let them win $ 100 billion, but unknown to them, the game is deadly. The protagonist is a top student who uses his intellectual skills to finished each stage in the game (i do not know yet what stages it is, but i'm thinking of an amazing race style of game where they will go to another country and each stage is held in diff locations around the world)..and the game is till death, if you fail, even if youre alive, you'll be killed..(pls expand it)

.please help me..im trying to submit a serialization in our local magazine

>>456
The game of €100 billion reminds me of Liar Game...

>>456
The €100 billion game reminds me of Liar Game...

>>456
The €100 billion game reminds me of Liar Game...

In advance sorry fur bade splein, and, grramr

I had an idea for a manga, its like 3020 and it people are now born with nanobots, that can be used as weapons some people are born with cool powers like shooting fire, these people are the "gifted", people who's nanobots let them write fast are "regular" this 14-20ish year old kid who was (supposedly) born without nanobots grew up on the streets, and had to steal to survive, but he hates stealing so he goes to the local fight arena. There he starts to fight with a 3 year contract for a room food and $3000 a year,and he meets up with a man who's nanobots went wacky and made him into a half bear. The kid and the bear man train together, and the kid gets good REALLY fast like he sees a fighting style once and instantly masters it. So far the kid hasn't lost.(to lose you have to be 1 forced out of the arena or knocked out no killing) but then this masked fighter his age with a bow appears out of nowhere and Whups him this happens again and again. one day the kid steals a spear from an opponent, and likes it. he keeps it and trains with it day and night. the next time he fights the masked fighter they both lose each other in a massive cave system (note the arene changes it's terrain every battle using nanobots). The kid sees the fighter and rushes him the fighter is knocked out and out of curiosity the kid pulls of the fighter's mask and sees its a girl. The kid developed a crush on the girl and starts watching her fights, one day she loses to a ax using kid named otaku our hero fights otaku and is really pissed he blacks out 3 seconds into the fight and when he wakes up hes standing a foot away from otaku who is bloody and battered and everyone is silent. The story goes on with the kid (named sasu) finds out that the girl (named Yajirushi) is a slave and is forced to fight by her master. Sasu has money saved up because he has no need for it, buys a house, and buys Yajirushi from her master. They are now living together (most likely will end up dating or somthing) but have to fight each other on occasion in most cases sasu will fall on his head to knock himself out. Also sasu watches the tape of otaku and his fight and is shocked to watch him self. during the time he was "blacked out" sasu had grown wings claws sharp teeth and a tail (all dragon like) which he finds out are from his nano bots which are called dragon bots, these bots will allow sasu to live fore 10,000 years for which time he is near immortal and are stronger than all other bots besides the phoenix bots which are equal to the dragon bots. Sasu raises in the ranks and fights less often with Yajirushi, everything is going well untill in a fight Yajirushi is "killed" by being stabbed and having no pulse, She then wakes up and is fight except for one change her hair is now gold red, and she can shoot fold fire from her hands, Sasu asks bear-man who tells him that this is the that this is the trademark of Phoenix bots. the rest of the story is up to you

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KdZkYrY5DKk&feature=plcp&context=C42d74c5VDvjVQa1PpcFNJ3DkxHXcWl9HkoluY2EK0QFPCwkWOZ48%3D

Just an idea that's been floating around in my head for awhile.

Title: [ Haven't thought of one, so suggestions would be nice.]
Type: Steampunk anime/manga
Genre: Action, Adventure and some Romance

Plot:

Set on the fictional continent of Terris, where various races live under the the control of the steam punks, also known as the Gears. They have established an empire across the land, with their cities being encased in large domes for protection. While most people have adapted to the new technology and ideas the steam punks brought, there are those who believe the land would be better off without them. These rebels are known as the Outsiders and have declared war on the steam punks. A war broke out between the two, known as the Great War, and resulted in a disastrous defeat for the Outsiders. Though they lost most of their forces, they retreated into hiding and have continued to exist in the shadows, having a "guerrilla" war with the steam punks.

(Ten years after the Great War) The story follows Zero, a young boy from a rural farming village a few days walk from Steam City, the steam punk capital. On his sixteenth birthday, his mother becomes bed-ridden due to an illness that befell her and passed away shortly thereafter. Her last dying wish was to see her son escape the dead end path he had in this small village and wanted him to make something for himself in the big city. With his father being dead for ten years and no other family left, he packed his things and set out for the Steam City.

Upon reaching the city, he meets a strange girl named Jade, who works in a clockshop in the Commoner's district. From there, he meets many more friends and enemies as he seeks out a way to end the dispute between the steam punks and Outsiders, while also trying to stop the twisted scheme of a msterious man known as The Engineer!

(Probably doesn't give a good idea of the story, but theres a lot more and I just can't type that much. ^^" So what do you think of it?It have potential?)

I enjoyed this story alot. I have this style of art in my head and i think i could portray this story well. I've been looking for a new project to do and I wish to draw to your story. give me some contact info so that i can reach you if your intrested please thank you.

>>462>>463

by god... some of these ideas are pretty damn awesome. i would be totally interested in drawing some sketches and whatnot if someone would give me a chance? uh, my email is onicolehais@yahoo.com, and devart is hspneonorange.deviantart.com ~. let's see... well, my house is where the internet comes to die, so if anyone actually contacts me, it may take a little bit, but i shall respond! not that anyone cares... but i said HEYEYEYEY. HEYEYEYEY. I said hey. What's goin onnn?????

i just woke up and this one is a dream i just had. well two ideas actually.
1- is about the usual thing. a half demon kid, a princess, and a clockwork monster/gargoyle thing. now the thing is, all three are failures. the half demon is actually the son of lucifur, but he cant use his powers because they can only be controlled by demons language,and all the demons have been wiped out AGES ago. the girl WANTS an arranged marriage with a handsome priest, but her father is over protective/ is evil and doesnt want her to embaress him, because she is a tomboy. the clockwork monster doesnt,well, WORK.

2- another dream based on the same idea, in an alternate or a future world, the half demon and the princess is all grown up, the clockwork monster turns out to be a prince under acurse, and the kingdom is in danger from demons! the only one who could help is that same half demon who still hasent really learned the demon language, and is only good at tricking people

This is the first time i've done this but i really want to tell people my ideas i can't draw but i really like to come up with storys

This is one i thought up recently i don't have a title and i suck with names

Their are four major civilations they are the warriors, the magiacions, the mosters and the technological. what happens is that people from the technological one discover ancient robotic soldiers and the means to create more and with this they decide to take control of the world. the other civilations do work together but the technological ones haven't really fought before and they haven't focused on making weaponry and because of the long peace many magicaions haven't really had to fight the warriors and the monster are strong fighters but they are outnumbered adn they don't have a friendly history and they aren't able to cooperate well.
i also have thought about the leadership for all the civilations and about the main character and about the powers each of the civilations have but i don't know how much i should put on this

Fff

“Huff, huff, huff, get away from me!” yelled a little girl as some kind of worm demon chased her.
“Leave me alone, huff, huff, huff, HELP!” screamed the girl as she tripped and fell on her butt.
“Grrrr, Ahhh!” growled the vicious demon.
The demon bit down on the girl, but the was to fast and she began to run again. “Help me please, sniff, sniff!” cried the girl.
“Ahhh, ha!” yelled a man as he jumped down from a building with a sword in his hand.

  “Ban-Budokai!” yelled the man as he pointed his sword straight at the demon.

A huge energy blast shot out at the demon traveling right through its head. The demon’s body dissolved into ashes. “You should be more careful, where you walk.” said the man. “Huh.” said the man.
“Why are you crying, are you lost?” asked the man.
“Yes, sniff, sniff.” answered the girl. “I lost my mommy.” said the girl.
“I’ll take you home okay. Where do you live?” asked the man.
“I don’t know, sniff, sniff, sniff.” said the girl.
“Well, I’ll take you back to the office and find your address, okay.” said the man.
“O-Okay, sniff, sniff.” said the girl.

  “Momma, can I have the last cookie?” asked Bryant.

“No that’s for your father when he gets home. But you can finish your food.” said Bryant’s Mom.
“Hey D’Lyle, after this wanna go play retro shooters?” asked Bryant.
“Okay, but I get to be player 1.” said D’Lyle.
Suddenly someone opened the door and stepped in the house. “Hey, hope I didn’t scare anyone.” said Bryant’s Dad.
“Daddy!” exclaimed D’Lyle running into his arms.
“Hey there tiger, you’ve gotten strong. Have you’ve been working out?” asked Dad playfully. “Come on Bryant, no hug.” said Dad.
“Hey Dad, ha-ha!” Bryant said running into his arms laughing.
“So how was your day?” asked Mom.
“Horrible, did you know that they’re shutting down all Construction Sites until further notice.” Dad said.
“What’s so bad about that, you get some time off of work?” Bryant said.

  “The bad thing is, if we don’t finish that gate by tomorrow all of  East Okumono City will be destroyed by the demons.” said Dad.

“Demons, like the ones off of our video game.” said D’Lyle.
“Worse, these demons are bloodthirsty killers and the worst part is you only have one life instead of millions.” said Dad.
“I’ll just hold them off with my Gen, if there is to many you can help me right.” said Bryant.
“Uh-huh, you are not going out there with those demons I refuse to let you go.” said Mom in an angry kind of voice.
My dad got up and put on his jacket. “Uh, where are you going?” asked Mom.
“Board up the house, I’m going to the store and pick up some groceries, here.” Dad said while tossing mom some high tech earpiece. “You put it in your ear I’ll call you on it, if I get into any trouble.” Dad said as he opened the door.
“Be careful dear.” Mom said as she shed a tear.
“Bye everyone, and Bryant no matter what happens stay strong and protect your family,” he said as he walked out the door.

  He walked to the car opened the door an got in then started it up and left the house. While he was driving he was thinking of all good times we had as an family and began to smile and cry at those happy moments but then a dark figure appeared in front of the car and he slammed on the brakes and came to a fast stop.  “What the hell!” Dad said as he got out the car with a gun in his hand and a pocketknife hidden in his jacket.  “What are you doing out here demons are going to be coming in a few minutes, you need to go inside.” said Dad.

“I’m not gonna go inside until my nephew comes out of that store with my medicine.” said the old lady.

                 To Be Continued

And that was only half, Contact me at hmarion45@yahoo.com, im also looking for an illustrator and publisher.
if want to read the rest i can send it to you for $10.00

It's me again and this time im telling u about demon heart. The book above is just the beginning just wait until the morning and more will be made immediately keep looking.

Demon Heart is about two teenagers named Bryant Edwards and Dj Komodo, who gets their hearts ripped out by Armageddon, The Lord of the Underworld. The military sees something special in these boys so replace their hearts with a demon's. Soon the two become Secret Weapons in the military, they may be gen warriors but these demons aren't stopping until they destroy Earth.

I have an Idea for a manga called Emblem where 100 people are placed on an island by seven mysterious silhouettes and are given things called emblems that draw out hidden powers based on things like personality or desires and the last one standing will have all their wishes come true. And now the main character has to survive against the other competitors while trying to figure out the mysteries behind the emblems and the silhouettes while fighting with his own past.
I currently have a few chapters done and most of the characters finished but unfortunately my art skills are below that of a drunk horse so I can't draw it. If anyone's interested send me a sample of your art along with your name (I don't mind a pen name)and age to 7startingmangaka7@gmail.com.

http://www.youtube.com/user/nozanozanozanoza

i have an anime called:black protocal
genre:romance,ecchi,action, comedy
main character: zed orion a half demon thats good with guns
and his girlfriend diana kuroko

its about a teen that trys to bring back his own girlfriend that died because of him she was captured and got her throat slit they were both spies from the japan they were trying to find a proffessor who just found the life rejuvanation serum his name was zed and the last day of their job on the last day after the mission he was to tell her "will you marry me?" but it never happend.but will they survive the barrage of robot humans on the way.

this is about the one i wrote about earlier. Their world is a really big and old one and their are a lot of places that are still not completely known. The civilazations have been able to work together against the the scientist group and their ancient robotic soldiers but it reached a stalemate basically over quantity over quality and slowly but surely quality has started going down. the robotic soldiers don't need to eat, drink, sleep and new ones can be made easily while the Civilization's soldiers are getting tired and worn out and they are starting to lose ground and they need to find an edge.

The main character is from the technological civilization but he isn't that smart and the only thing he kind of well on was archaeology but because of the war archaeology wasn't an important subject so he decided to join the army because it was the only job he could do.
What happens is that the leaders of the civilizations decide that the key to winning is to get weapons from ancient civilizations like the robots.
What happens to the main character is that after a narrow escape from death he is told that he is going to the squad that saved his life and that are are going to be the ones who are going to get the ancient weapons from ruins of ancient civilizations and the squad he joins is the one that was made to show unity of the civilizations and a member from each civilization. all of the members are strong but they have mostly been given small missions like clean up remnants of the enemy force after the battle. i havent got all the small details down but the monster one is tall and doesn't talk much and keeps a straight face but isn't emotionless when he gets mad or happy he shows it. the one from the magician uses earth magic and gets along best with the other member. she is like the nice older sister of the group and she tries her best so the other members get along. the one from the technological is a genius and mostly fights from long to mid range using different weapons like sniper rifles and machine guns.
I can't draw at all so if someone is interested in drawing then message me with a sample of your art or if you want to talk about ideas to exshade57@gmail.com

BAsically, a demon gave up almost all his powers to come down into the human world. But now he wants it back. He succeeds, using the art of alchemy, But it goes wrong...He didn't get all his powers, as half of it was transferred, as he couldnt handle all of it, since he got so adjusted to it...so to his demise, he now has a creature with more power than him, and it turns out to be himself, except this ones independent against him. So Now the copy's trying to kill the original, to be the only one....

Title: Angel Squadron

Type: military.

Genre: war, scifi

This tale revolves around a Marine AH-1z Super cobra pilot, Captain Mike "Joker" Ruflin, stationed with Echo Battalion's Bulldog Squadron in Afghanistan. He's married to his college sweetheart, Ali, and lives back in a small town called Black Springs, in Georgia.

While on mission, Mike's helicopter is shot down by an unknown weapon in a great blast of light, killing his gunner. Alone, unreachable by para-rescue, and 150 miles inside hostile territory, Mike starts an arduous trek across the landscape of Afghanistan, armed with only a 9-mm. Beretta. Coming across a mortally wounded soldier named Diggs, Mike learns that Al-Qaeda has acquired a state of the art defense system. Before Diggs dies, he warns Mike that the Russians are involved.

After burying the soldier and taking up his M4, Mike continues. Over time he meets up with other marines and soldiers.

-SSgt. Wesley "Fat Cat" Irons, a heavy set African American with a friendly disposition. He lost his entire platoon in the wake of mysterious attack, hallmarked by a blinding flash of light. He becomes Mike's closest friend and confidant. He specializes in heavy weapons and demolitions.

-Lt. Rodrick "Phantom" Xavier, a Marine sniper. Rodrick and Mike bash a lot because Mike is Catholic, while Rodrick is a fiery atheist. Over time, however, the two accept their differences, knowing they need each other to survive.

-Sgt. Nick "Toads" Harley, comms officer. His nickname is because of his pet desert toad, Pouches, that lives in his utility belt pocket.

-Cpl. Francis "Sunny" William, mechanic and driver. Francis is a tank driver and mechanic who lost his crew in the midst of a suicide bombing. He dual wields twin 9 mm. and is homosexual.

-Cpl. Chino "Checkers" Ramirez, support specialist. Chino is a Mexican immigrant who moved his family to escape the drug cartels. In the military, he fantasies that every enemy he brings down is a drug lord, as he lost his sister to cocaine.

The six form an inseparable team, code naming themselves Angel Squadron (Mike's AH-1 callsign was Angel-1) and embark on an epic trek back to friendly territory. Along the way, they assist locals in fighting off Al-Qaeda and gather intel on their mysterious weapon and its backer. He is revealed later on to be an ex-special forces named Packard McGrath, a Russian-American communist.

Packard wanted not only Russia to return to communism, but bring America into his beliefs as well. His weapon, a superconducting atomic laser, is the weapon that shot Mike out of the sky and destroyed Wesley's platoon. With his enormous wealth obtained through arms dealing, Packard means to coerce the American Government to step down in exchange for sparing billions of Americans from his weapons.

Knowing that moving the weapon could doom the American forces, Angel Squadron, against the demands of General Genning, deploys and successfully destroy the weapon. Packard, enraged that his plans have been stalled, ambushes and tries to kill Mike, but is foiled by Wesley, killing him instead. Packard escapes, but not before a furious fist fight with Mike. As Angel Squadron is airlifted out, Chino pulls the pins on Wesley's dropped grenade belt and throws it into Packard's Mi-24 Hind, presumably killing him.

Angel Squadron mourns Wesley's death and vow to never let each other down in their times of need. Mike returns home to Ali, on leave after his journey and meet in a tearful embrace. The manga/anime ends with Rodrick stating, "I've no belief in God, but after what we've been through, I do know there are angels. And there watching over us all..."

http://www.hideki-kobayashi.sakura.ne.jp/

i make this
please read :)

It seemed so cold and dark inside here… as if I'll never find the light again.
It seemed as though the room was closing in on me.
I felt as if I've been deaf for many years.
The only thing that could have saved me was the thing I feared most, death.
But there was no way I could die, because I couldn't feel a thing, unless I'm dead already? But don't they say death takes you to a great world full of goodness, truth and beauty? - That was not what I felt…
The only thing I could hold was- Myself, but I couldn't even feel…
All of my feeling were stuck in a black shaded bottle, and sent away in my tears which were forced to stay inside my stoned heart.
I moved my hand towards my chest, to feel my heart and know that I'm still living.
I felt it, I did. But it had been broken into pieces. Not just any pieces. Pieces of broken- glass, slashing my chest to bleed in the inside.
I tried closing my eyes, but I couldn't tell the difference…
It was no use at all! I felt I was doomed.
There's no way I could get out of here.
Must be the place that I was meant to be in forever,
Now the only thing left, was trying to convince myself that it's what's best.
I tried to get up, just lift myself a little closer to heaven.
I couldn't tell the difference when I moved and stayed.
I must just stay. In here, not anywhere else! I can't!
My heart broke into even smaller pieces when I kept on forcing myself to cry knowing the pain is for nothing.
You need strong feeling in order to cry, and without feeling at all, neither inside nor outside, I knew it was all for nothing.

Finally I was able to push myself out of there, (I have no idea how) and I began to remember…
I had no body to feel now, just air, just broken air.
It was worse than I'd thought.
I saw a picture of myself, as a normal kid, with my friends, watching a horror movie while cracking-up, on my blue couch at home.
Then, I never would have guessed it was real, or even a finger close to being real. But it all reveled to my eyes at once, so suddenly.
At last, I began understanding my disability to feel, though I preferred not understanding.
I was what everyone are absolutely convinced in it nonexistence, but still fear.
I slept with light just because I was so frightened by it. Now I am it………….

A ghost!

Does this mean I 'm never going to talk to a person again?!
On the other hand, maybe it's all just a silly dream, just another one of those haunted nightmares..? – Deep inside me I knew it wasn't.
What do I do now? Just stay in my place and suffer from "eternity"?

That's how it all begins...
A long journey of Yoake, a sixteen year old boy, in a world he has never been to, but on the other hand he has always been.
Yoake, after discovering that he is a ghost, and dead, gets out of his room at home and how no idea what's next, when he walks around his street. he realizes that no one is able to see him. Yoake keeps on walking to nowhere when suddenly he meets a strange gray ghost who wouldnt stop laughing at him for being a "beginner". eventually,he is caught into the mysterious world of the dead down here on earth where he ends up on an adventure to discover how he had died, though things just get more complicated when he realizes he cant take the same steps again, and unfortunately, this world has been waiting especially for him.

OOPS!!!

the Manga is called -blue moon... and Im pretty bad at summarizing it... :P
anyways.. PLEASE tell me what you think..

I already started it alittle.. well.. today..^_^
drew one pic of Yoake.. so.. again.. tell me what you think! thanks a ton!!! :) :) :)